I read these books because of Jet, so it’s nice to meet her early in the book, not chapter six.
I don’t mind the author setting the scene, but he does this five times with different groups of people and different locations. It starts with a diamond smuggler, then an Israeli press conference, an African crime lord, a village medical crisis and finally a Nairobi dinner party. By now I was ready to give up.
When Jet did appear, she was just told she had a job and then she didn’t appear again for another five chapters, this is now a quarter of the book and I was really fed up. Unfortunately this pattern continues with Jet just making quick guest appearances, to make matters worse the author has decided, for some unknown reason, to make her incompetent. At this point I did give up.