“Perhaps it’s worth noting the obvious: that this isn’t the story of a vulnerable girl and an older man. It’s the story of a girl and a woman, of a girl becoming a woman over time, and in moments, of a woman becoming a girl. The power differential is not always clear. Hart’s prose is terse, but like Munro’s, is alleviated by unexpected moments of beauty. At dinner, when the woman can tell the girl is ashamed to be seen in public together, Hart writes that 'her despondency, usually kept hidden, blew across the table like a draft.'” - Halimah Marcus
About the Author: Michelle Hart received her M.F.A. from Rutgers University–Newark. Her fiction has appeared or is forthcoming in Electric Literature, One Teen Story, and Joyland. She has written nonfiction for The Millions, The Rumpus, and The New Yorker.
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What is it about sad/bittersweet sapphic stories? I don't know what it is about "The woman" but the way Michelle Hart writes her is so breath taking. She gives you glimpses into this character then takes the lens away before you get too involved, leaving you "curiouser and curiouser". ✨ This short piece in particular reminded me a lot of The price of Salt or Carol. I hope Hart writes more books, I will blindly pick up anything she writes for sure. 🖤