Ricky Valian always dreaded the Juvenile Home in the city of Applia. Killing a member of the Council of Notables is enough to sentence him for a stay. The lord’s widow is anxious for revenge and Ricky has to scramble to stay ahead of people out seeking his life. While there are strange things going on at the Home that will put him in peril, he finds a priceless treasure long forgotten at the Home. Can he stay alive long enough to save it?
I write action/adventure fiction with a definite proclivity towards Sword & Sorcery. I like magicians, but I'm less partial to unicorns, dragons, elves and dwarves. But give me a hero with a magic sword and I'll make him sing... Wait, I already have!
I've published a number of works under the CasiePress imprint and there are more to come.
I'm an older guy (Guy!), married and all my kids have grown up and given me grandkids to dote over. I've read thousands of books and found that in most cases, I'd rather write than read.
Guy has a really good storyline concept, if only he could get the flow right. you can see where he is thinking, and can fill in the gaps, but the "ebb and flow" of the story is more of a "fits and starts", which marries with the first book of the series.
Many concepts, especially sorcerous, are quickly acquired by the central character (who is CONSTANTLY telling people his nickname when introduced) and are too neatly tailored to his requirements through the story.
Daily life, in this case in an institution, isn't built up, rather it's stated, and doesn't feel cohesive.
Allowing for the setting I thought the rampant sadistic tendencies were well overstated. Constant discussion about flagellation wounds, healers required, and towards the end the backside whippings really didn't add to the story effectively. It made the protagonists more one-dimensional than they already were.
Finally, the near casual way that the central character, at 15yrs old, finds killing is of concern. I'm not looking for Harry Potter here (though there are clear parallels), but the emotional depth of the character's action/reaction sequence is lacking in the narrative, though lightly touched on.
I'm continuing the series mainly in the hope that the writing style matures along with the character and plot development - definitely not a hard read if you can manage connecting dots in the narrative that are sometimes barely there, at other times non existent.
Dear Guy, I just finished your second book in the series and enjoyed reading even more than book 1, if that's possible. I just can't put down your story once begun. To all you who's out there, give Guy's stories a try you won't be disappointed. I have read many of his stories and loved them all. I highly recommend reading this series to anyone interested in reading great stories I promise you won't be disappointed. Thanks for hours of entertainment.
I like the MCs. Our hero is a teenager pecked from chancy beginnings. He ends up in a school where he discovers more about his sorcery as well as reading, writing and arithmetic. He also gains determined enemies when he fights back against some bullies. He ends up sentenced to a "home" for juvenile delinquents. Where more plots and adventures unfold. It's a great story; it's fairly well-written; but, has a few grammar and editing errors. It's book 2 in a multi book series. I'm re-reading it-I enjoyed it the 1st time I read it too.
This second book has more action and expands on magic, characters, and world politics. The editing is excellent, the story is solid, and Ricky grows in wisdom and power, but at a cost of freedom, pain, and betrayal - especially from some closest allies.
A great read; highly recommended. Very interested in what will happen next.
I have enjoyed the series so far. It's clean, no profanity. It definitely kept my interest. However after reading some of the negative reviews for book three I'm not real motivated to continue. Some of the things that bothered those negative reviewers would also bother me too. That's not to say I won't change my mind but for right now I'm moving on to a different book series.
I liked the book and the challenges faced in the boys institution were well done. The mc seems to take betrayal a little too easily but overall a good story that moves the series along nicely.
Another book where Ricky gets shafted by the nobility. The ending was surprising. Though the rest of the book follows the same line as the first. Hard to believe that a kid gets treated the way Ricky does and still has a good heart.
He learns/does something great, then gets punished/attacked, then greatly hurt, then gets healed Do this over and over again throughout the book Oh, and every girl betrays him Travel that oval, bumps, crashes, and pits
I could not stop reading book 2 of A Sorcerer Imprisoned Song of Sorcery Book 2!! What an ending!! Lots of action and leaving you wanting more! Thanks for the story and now I am buying book 3
I'm liking this saga more& more. A resourceful, courageous & cunning youth who proceeds advances with unsentimental tactics. It's compelling * satisfying drama Bob B Tsawwassen BC
Antibes. In the introduction to this second volume, suggested the storyline wasn't even set before he started writing. Having completed reading it this second time, I'll say it is amazing that is true. The tale is fluid throughout and completely absorbs the reader to the end. Good clean and moral characters. Highly recommended.
Awesome! Another winner from Guy Antibes. For anyone who loves Sword and Sorcery tales with young men learning and growing amidst continual trials and tribulation, full of adventure, betrayal surprises and more.......this is the series for you. Highly recommended for any fantasy lover.