I read this book because I am a great fan of the Hand of Mars series and what could go wrong with pirates in space. But in the end Brad‘s story wasn’t as interesting to me as Damian‘s, despite the fact that the battles on a smaller scale are actually preferable.
Here a brief summary of the plot. Brad is a teenager working for his uncle’s freighter company. He uncle raised him after his parents’ death. After a pirate attack on his uncle‘s ship, he gets thrown into space and picked up by a fleet vessel. Because he wants revenge against the pirate responsible, the Terror, he refuses employment with fleet and becomes a ward of the state, whether due to age or amnesia remains unclear. Brad then flees and books passage on another ship that gets attacked by slavers (at this point I started calling him unsinkable Sam after the WW II cat that survived 3 shipwrecks). He defends that ship and in recompense is awarded a pirate vessel, which he then uses to start his own mercenary company, for which he recruits a bunch of misfits. His quest for revenge can begin.
What bothered me?
1. Brad is a kid. Yes, they never say his age, but teenager implies under 20. Think about any TV show with actual kids in them (not actors in their 20s or 30s pretending to be teens). Especially with boys you can always tell that their not adult. Even if he did have a sensei, it doesn’t explain how became so accomplished at basically everything from fighting to commanding a vessel. And why does everybody treat him as if he were a decorated war veteran of 30?
2. Everything is handed to him on a silver platter. People go out of their way to help him. One of them basically hands him a multimillion credit ship, another gives him an absurd loan, even if he wants something in return, and a worried governor hires his unproven mercenary company to protect her son. And not one of them checks his credentials, because Brad‘s way of establishing a false identity was giving a false name when boarding the second ship. So finding his true age and experience wouldn’t exactly be rocket science. Borderline ridiculous.
3. The crew is put together in a way that is supposed to make them likable. The womanizing pilot, the cantankerous engineer, the outspoken mercenary and the couple in coms and something else. And they would be, if they were given more time. But aside from a few conversations mostly in the second half, the book is so focused in Brad that they barely feature. However, there is some real potential there.
Overall I found the book underwhelming. I would, however, read a second book, because I want to know the answer to the question raised at the end: Why was Brad‘s vessel attacked?