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Halven Rising #1
Fates Divided
Elena must save the very beings who would kill her if given the chance…
Tall and insanely beautiful, the Fae are not the angels they appear.
Suddenly susceptible to a deadly disease, the Fae believe Elena--a mere half-breed--can cure them. And they'll harm the last of Elena's loved ones unless she helps them by using the magical ability she inherited from a mother she never knew.
Her only shot at pulling that off? Enlisting the help of her brooding, though brilliant, chemist neighbor Derek, who rivals the Fae in masculine beauty.
Derek has seen the Viking-looking man following his neighbor's every move. When Elena comes to him for help, he hesitates. Derek has secrets of his own, and this business Elena’s involved in could ruin everything.
But when Elena and Derek get together, more than chemicals spark fire. They soon discover how complicated physical attraction can get when they find themselves on the other side of the portal, enemies by birthright, and fighting for survival.
Fates Divided is a captivating twist on forbidden love, with unique world building, seductive romance, and a deadly war among Fae that will make your heart pound.
*Each Halven Rising book is a standalone romance with an overarching story that connects the series.
Fates Altered (Halven Rising, Prequel) -- Alex & Theda
Fates Divided (Halven Rising, Book 1) -- Derek & Elena
Fates Entwined (Halven Rising, Book 2) -- Keen & Reese
Fates Fulfilled (Halven Rising, Book 3) -- Garrin & Lex
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Jules Barnard
27 books1,219 followersJules Barnard is a USA Today bestselling author of romantic comedy and romantic fantasy. Her rom-com series include the All’s Fair, Never Date, and Cade Brothers series. She also writes romantic fantasy under J. Barnard in the Halven Rising series Library Journal calls ''...an exciting new fantasy adventure.'' Whether she’s writing about sexy men in Lake Tahoe or a Fae world embedded in a college campus, Jules spins addictive stories filled with heart and humor.
When Jules isn’t in her sweatpants writing and rewarding herself with chocolate, she spends her time with her husband and two children in their small hometown in the Pacific Northwest. She credits herself with the ability to read while running on the treadmill or burning dinner.
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August 31, 2015
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- The Good : What drew me to the book from jump was the heroine, Elena Rosales. I loved that Elena’s half Mexican, half Fae and that it’s part of her narrative, but not THE story. As the book went along, the romance between Derek and Elena does a good job of grounding the fantastical elements of the story.
Overall, the story skewed young to me, with Elena just turning eighteen and coming into this crazy power to manipulate liquids and transmutation of elements. It’s very scientific at times, as there’s a Fae superbug that’s wiping them out quickly, and it’s a race against time to find the cure. I will say though that it’s not strictly young adult, as there are many, many kisses (which I enjoyed) and some love scenes that were definitely more about the romance than the down and dirty. It fit perfectly within the context of this story and I enjoyed them.
There’s alot to take in with this ‘verse, since Elena and Derek are what’s known as Halven, children born of a Fae/Human coupling. That’s a serious no-no, and the prejudice that they encounter was a good allegory to what many mixed race children have to deal with on a daily basis.
- The Mostly In Between : I wouldn’t call this bad, but it is part of the prose - alot happens off-page, and because it is the first book, there’s alot of information that needs to be parsed out to the characters and the readers. I would have liked to see more happening in real time. To have seen the devastation wrought on the Fae because of this bug, to meet some characters who play integral parts of this story. Also, it felt that for such a fantastical plotline, at first Elena and Derek seemed to be isolated in laboratories and rooms alot. The most exciting scenes happen in the second half and make up for this, so I was satisfied.
The way it’s resolved felt like the majority was recapped towards the end. Since there’s a bit of an overarching storyline, it’s not surprising and I am looking forward to seeing what happens in the next couple of books.
[3 ½ stars]
I enjoyed it. It’s a good start to a series, and I loved Derek and Elena together. I would recommend it for YA/NA paranormal/urban fantasy romance readers.
**ARC provided by author for review**
- The Good : What drew me to the book from jump was the heroine, Elena Rosales. I loved that Elena’s half Mexican, half Fae and that it’s part of her narrative, but not THE story. As the book went along, the romance between Derek and Elena does a good job of grounding the fantastical elements of the story.
Overall, the story skewed young to me, with Elena just turning eighteen and coming into this crazy power to manipulate liquids and transmutation of elements. It’s very scientific at times, as there’s a Fae superbug that’s wiping them out quickly, and it’s a race against time to find the cure. I will say though that it’s not strictly young adult, as there are many, many kisses (which I enjoyed) and some love scenes that were definitely more about the romance than the down and dirty. It fit perfectly within the context of this story and I enjoyed them.
There’s alot to take in with this ‘verse, since Elena and Derek are what’s known as Halven, children born of a Fae/Human coupling. That’s a serious no-no, and the prejudice that they encounter was a good allegory to what many mixed race children have to deal with on a daily basis.
- The Mostly In Between : I wouldn’t call this bad, but it is part of the prose - alot happens off-page, and because it is the first book, there’s alot of information that needs to be parsed out to the characters and the readers. I would have liked to see more happening in real time. To have seen the devastation wrought on the Fae because of this bug, to meet some characters who play integral parts of this story. Also, it felt that for such a fantastical plotline, at first Elena and Derek seemed to be isolated in laboratories and rooms alot. The most exciting scenes happen in the second half and make up for this, so I was satisfied.
The way it’s resolved felt like the majority was recapped towards the end. Since there’s a bit of an overarching storyline, it’s not surprising and I am looking forward to seeing what happens in the next couple of books.
[3 ½ stars]
I enjoyed it. It’s a good start to a series, and I loved Derek and Elena together. I would recommend it for YA/NA paranormal/urban fantasy romance readers.
**ARC provided by author for review**
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July 11, 2023“Fae only mate with Fae. At times, they’ve lain with humans and created a diluted, lesser being, the Halven. It doesn’t happen often. Fae do not generally desire humans. But when it happens, we must watch the offspring for signs of abilities.”
Derek snorted. “Sounds like some serious denial you’ve got going on there, buddy.”
Keen shot him a glare and opened the door.
Before Elena could walk through, Derek pulled her aside and spoke low in her ear. “Mating with humans?
Tirnan and the Fae realm?” He shook his head. “We stick together inside Fae-U, got it?”
Elena wet her chapped lips. The things Keen had said, Derek’s deep voice in her ear and the protective way he’d been acting toward her—all equally distracting.
Derek snorted. “Sounds like some serious denial you’ve got going on there, buddy.”
Keen shot him a glare and opened the door.
Before Elena could walk through, Derek pulled her aside and spoke low in her ear. “Mating with humans?
Tirnan and the Fae realm?” He shook his head. “We stick together inside Fae-U, got it?”
Elena wet her chapped lips. The things Keen had said, Derek’s deep voice in her ear and the protective way he’d been acting toward her—all equally distracting.
June 5, 2024
3.5 ⭐️
March 8, 2023
2.75
This book was a bit odd to me, and the mix of the modern world and a fae kingdom just never stops reading awkwardly. The FMC is intelligent but that's about where her charm ended for me.The MMC is dry and I didn't find myself too invested in him either. The relationship between them just spontaneously develops and theres very little build up between them for me to even feel invested in their romance. The story felt awkward the entire read, I don't really know how else to put it. The book ends with loose ends so I started the 2nd book just to find out what happens, but I might even finish it because it's not picking up any better than the first.
This book was a bit odd to me, and the mix of the modern world and a fae kingdom just never stops reading awkwardly. The FMC is intelligent but that's about where her charm ended for me.The MMC is dry and I didn't find myself too invested in him either. The relationship between them just spontaneously develops and theres very little build up between them for me to even feel invested in their romance. The story felt awkward the entire read, I don't really know how else to put it. The book ends with loose ends so I started the 2nd book just to find out what happens, but I might even finish it because it's not picking up any better than the first.
July 18, 2018
*I received a free copy of this book which I voluntarily chose to write an honest review for.
Welcome to some incredible world building in this new fantasy novel. We meet Elena on her 18th birthday which seems t o be one weird event after another. After seeing a hidden classroom in the physics building she meets a group of Fae that claim she is a half breed or as they say halven. As if that is not enough the Fae are being killed by a very fast acting virus and some believe that she can save them but can she really figure it all out in time? Add the hot neighbor Derek to the mix and the story really heats up while adding another figure to the board. The world building is so great that I had no clue what was going to happen next and the end really blew me away. I look forward to seeing where the author takes the story next time. If you are looking for a fantasy Fae novel to whisk you away from reality for awhile then try this one. I really enjoyed it so I give it 4/5 stars.
Welcome to some incredible world building in this new fantasy novel. We meet Elena on her 18th birthday which seems t o be one weird event after another. After seeing a hidden classroom in the physics building she meets a group of Fae that claim she is a half breed or as they say halven. As if that is not enough the Fae are being killed by a very fast acting virus and some believe that she can save them but can she really figure it all out in time? Add the hot neighbor Derek to the mix and the story really heats up while adding another figure to the board. The world building is so great that I had no clue what was going to happen next and the end really blew me away. I look forward to seeing where the author takes the story next time. If you are looking for a fantasy Fae novel to whisk you away from reality for awhile then try this one. I really enjoyed it so I give it 4/5 stars.
May 28, 2024
Interesting concepts but the writing was choppy and cringey at times. Keen becoming obsessed with Reese at first glance? The insane heights, particularly in men, going well over 7ft? Having to constantly kiss/make-out to extend Derek’s ability to Elena? The overall plot was mildly entertaining, but I found by the time I was 75% done I was constantly checking to see how much until the book was finished. Ultimately finished the book and have some questions about what happens next, but I’m not invested or curious enough to continue reading.
August 8, 2017
Cringe worthy. Mary sue of all Mary Sue's. Abort mission, or prepare to gouge out your eyes!
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September 12, 2015I marked this title as DNF (Did Not Finish) at 12%. I was having a really hard time connecting to the main character and storyline. I had to put FATES DIVIDED down at 12%. I couldn't get past the point where the main character had an inner dialogue about not being Mexican enough for the Latinas, but too Latina for white people and now she couldn't claim either because she is apparently half fae. Her emotion sounded so fake and the situation and the dialogue just didn't mesh for me.
July 9, 2016
I'm a sucker for fae books. This was a new author for me. I loved the concept of the authors approach to this paranormal romance. The book evolved into a complex plot, with compelling characters. The final section ended in a bang. Looking forward to the sequel! Five glittery stars!
July 17, 2024
i would have loved this book if i was 13 and bored
September 28, 2016
*This review also appears here on A Leisure Moment*
**I received an e-copy of this book in exchange for an honest review**
Fairies were a tiny obsession of mine for a while, and I still enjoy reading about them from time to time. Fates Divided put a new spin on fairies and added a dash of alchemy that drew me in. Plus, I love mature YA.
One of my favorite parts of this book was that the main character, Elena Rosales, was eighteen. I did find myself wanting to think of her as the Elena in The Vampire Diaries—the books, not the show—but I overall liked her character. Her love of science, specifically chemistry, kept the story going and showed that girls do know their ways around a lab (even if there were a few accidents here and there).
Since she was in college, it made sense that she didn’t have to go to class. That’s how college works. Even if I don’t do it, if you don’t feel like showing up, you don’t. I got the vibe that Elena was more like me, though: always at class, a planner, and homework completer. The only time I’ve skipped class (so far) I planned it—seriously, there’s no changing me. When the fae came into the mix she kind of forgot about school. It didn’t seem realistic, and considering she was on campus, I expected her to run into people—professors, hello!—when she was back in her world. Nevertheless, the story only took place within one week, so I guess she could miss one week of class. (I’m cringing at the thought.)
I liked the fast pace of the book. Action happened, romance ensued, and heads did roll. It sounds gruesome and anachronistic, but it was oh so exciting. The only issue that I had with the timeline was how fast Elena and Derek O’Brien, her nerd-hot neighbor, fell for each other. Their relationship was faster than the speed of light. Derek did mention that he had watched her from afar (in a non-creepy way), but I would have liked it to have had more build-up. That’s not to say I didn’t love Derek, because I did—very much so! The second half of the novel had most of the action and gasping moments, and the pace was steadier. So if you have a few qualms in the first few chapters, continue! It’s worth it.
Reese, Elena’s roommate, didn’t have a heavy presence, but I loved her spunk. I’m glad that the next book in the series will be about her and Keen, Elena’s bodyguard, and have already starting anticipating what might happen. That brings me to Keen. He was an enigma. I couldn’t figure him out, and I don’t think anyone else could, either. It made him interesting and alluring, not to mention that he had a mess of blonde hair and was super tall. The chemistry between him and Reese couldn’t be denied, even if he tried to do just that.
Fates Divided kept me reading. The slow bits and inconsistencies were inconsequential to the overall story and faded the farther I got into the story. It was reminiscent of Julie Kagawa’s Iron Fey series but created a whole new lineage of fae that I will definitely be reading more of.
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September 30, 2016
(I received this book free from the author in exchange for my honest review)
I loved this book, right form the start I was drew in and captured by the world that Jules Barnard has created.
I don't normally read books solely about Fae, so this was a surprise treat for me. It's not that I have anything agents Fae, I just find that when they are in a story they are, well, too perfect jerks that simply enrage me. Fates Divided did a wonderful job of capturing that easiness of the Fae. In saying that, I was intreated with the way they perceive humans, as Derek said “Sounds like some serious denial you’ve got going on there, buddy.”
Speaking of Derek. He was by far my favourite character. For me I didn't find him to have that brewing jearkish tourp that seems to plague males in YA. He was straight forward, determined and didn't take crap from anyone. He was a perfect match for our girl to the point where I actually enjoyed them falling for one another.
Elena, I like her as well. She's has her own goals in life, and I like how this book started with her, how we're tossed into her freaking out over discovering that she has powers. It was a change form the normal, boy meets girl and boys knows more about girls, and bamn.. boy tell girl she has powers. This was refreshing and an outstanding way to open.
As for the story, it was rich with mystery, backstabbing and down to the wire live or death action that simply had me in a head lock. The writing was smooth, fun and had a sense or urgency to it. It was like the tone was designed to make us, the reader, feel rushed. To keep reminding us that there is a time limited; it puts us in Elena's shoes, to feel what she is, and to know that there's no screwing round with this one.
In all, I highly recommend this book, it's an invigorating read that will have you obsessed with knowing who are trying to kill the Fae and why Elena could make or break the Fae world forever.
Happy Reading.
E.A. Walsh
I loved this book, right form the start I was drew in and captured by the world that Jules Barnard has created.
I don't normally read books solely about Fae, so this was a surprise treat for me. It's not that I have anything agents Fae, I just find that when they are in a story they are, well, too perfect jerks that simply enrage me. Fates Divided did a wonderful job of capturing that easiness of the Fae. In saying that, I was intreated with the way they perceive humans, as Derek said “Sounds like some serious denial you’ve got going on there, buddy.”
Speaking of Derek. He was by far my favourite character. For me I didn't find him to have that brewing jearkish tourp that seems to plague males in YA. He was straight forward, determined and didn't take crap from anyone. He was a perfect match for our girl to the point where I actually enjoyed them falling for one another.
Elena, I like her as well. She's has her own goals in life, and I like how this book started with her, how we're tossed into her freaking out over discovering that she has powers. It was a change form the normal, boy meets girl and boys knows more about girls, and bamn.. boy tell girl she has powers. This was refreshing and an outstanding way to open.
As for the story, it was rich with mystery, backstabbing and down to the wire live or death action that simply had me in a head lock. The writing was smooth, fun and had a sense or urgency to it. It was like the tone was designed to make us, the reader, feel rushed. To keep reminding us that there is a time limited; it puts us in Elena's shoes, to feel what she is, and to know that there's no screwing round with this one.
In all, I highly recommend this book, it's an invigorating read that will have you obsessed with knowing who are trying to kill the Fae and why Elena could make or break the Fae world forever.
Happy Reading.
E.A. Walsh
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September 17, 2021It was free in audible so I listened to it….
July 15, 2016
This started off as the typical story of a girl with a sordid family past which leads her to supernatural abilities being thrust on her upon her eighteenth birthday. Her parents are gone and now she will discover the life she had was nothing but a lie, and the world's a very dangerous place yada, yada, yada.
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So now we have 18 year old Elena Rosales with some sort of magical powers she doesn't quite understand and the ever so handsome, but always brooding Derek. Turns out their both half Fae. Yeah, just like this girl...
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But that's really where the similarities and clichéd stories end. Because these Fae are not like any silly, whimsical creatures I've read about in the past. These Fae are entitled, discriminatory and very dangerous beings. They have a Vampire air of superiority about them which seems to say, "Be gone filthy human, I am superior to your weakened state and I shall slap you with my abnormally enhanced strength." Yes, the Fae are not to be trusted and very intriguing.
The story only strengthens when we learn that Halven (half human and half Fae) are looked down upon as an abomination of God to the Fae. They despise Derek and Elena, yet they need them to seek a cure for a disease that is wiping out their entire race.
Elena wants no part of the Fae but when they threaten her family she has no choice. She is thrust into a dangerous world where danger is lurking behind every corner. She has no one to trust, and a one week deadline to do the impossible.
Jules Barnard really surprised me with this book. The characters were all easy to grow attached to and the new realm of Fairies was created brilliantly. I usually despise Fae books but this story was so unique that I found myself truly caring for this species. I cannot wait to open book two and discover the whereabouts of Elena's bestfriend Reese, who is currently being held against her will by a rebelling army of Fae and Halven.
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So now we have 18 year old Elena Rosales with some sort of magical powers she doesn't quite understand and the ever so handsome, but always brooding Derek. Turns out their both half Fae. Yeah, just like this girl...
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"> But that's really where the similarities and clichéd stories end. Because these Fae are not like any silly, whimsical creatures I've read about in the past. These Fae are entitled, discriminatory and very dangerous beings. They have a Vampire air of superiority about them which seems to say, "Be gone filthy human, I am superior to your weakened state and I shall slap you with my abnormally enhanced strength." Yes, the Fae are not to be trusted and very intriguing.
The story only strengthens when we learn that Halven (half human and half Fae) are looked down upon as an abomination of God to the Fae. They despise Derek and Elena, yet they need them to seek a cure for a disease that is wiping out their entire race.
Elena wants no part of the Fae but when they threaten her family she has no choice. She is thrust into a dangerous world where danger is lurking behind every corner. She has no one to trust, and a one week deadline to do the impossible.
Jules Barnard really surprised me with this book. The characters were all easy to grow attached to and the new realm of Fairies was created brilliantly. I usually despise Fae books but this story was so unique that I found myself truly caring for this species. I cannot wait to open book two and discover the whereabouts of Elena's bestfriend Reese, who is currently being held against her will by a rebelling army of Fae and Halven.
September 25, 2015
Fates Divided, and Jules Barnard, managed to do something that needed to be done - breathe new life into the Fae mythology. It seems that stories centering around Fae are the hot thing in urban fantasy and PNR these days, maybe because vampires and weres are overused, but it really seems like one story is bleeding over into another because they really all seem the same to me. Barnard's story is different and she managed to take the Fae mythos and tear it apart, only to build it back up with her own unique spin making her story about Fae really stand out to me.
In Fates Divided, Elena discovers she is part Fae, a Halven to be exact, fairly early on. After a string of failed chemistry experiments, which she was formerly really good at, and seeing things that really shouldn't be there, it's finally revealed to her that these things are happening because she is only part human. Derek, her love interest, happens to be the same. Elena is recruited to assist the Fae world - there is a disease ravaging them and they need someone like Elena, someone with her type of magic and power, to find the cure. Together, she and Derek embark on this mission, taking them to different realms, in hopes of success.
As I stated before, Barnard's idea of the Fae was very unique and really quite creative and I like her idea of how the Fae, specifically the Halven, came to be. As if the title didn't give it away, the series is based on that race, the half-humans and half-fae.. Being the first in the series, I fully expected there to be quite a bit of information given concerning the world and the various elements surrounding the Fae. However, it felt like maybe there was a wee too much exposition and that really bogged some parts of the story down and made for some slow going in parts, which is the reason I'm giving this a 3.5 vs a 4. I would also classify this more as YA than NA -- Elena is just turning 18 in this novel, but the characters really seem younger, especially Derek. In the beginning, he really came off as a moody, hormonal teenager. Because he was, really, and I would have liked a little more maturity from all of the characters, not just Derek.
Bottom line -- good first installment to what seems like a promising new YA series centering around the Fae. The author states that a new couple will be featured with each subsequent installment in this series, so I'm guessing this series is more PNR than urban fantasy. If you're a fan of Fae, YA novels, and paranormal romance, this might be right up your alley :)
**eARC received via NetGalley in exchange for my honest opinion.
In Fates Divided, Elena discovers she is part Fae, a Halven to be exact, fairly early on. After a string of failed chemistry experiments, which she was formerly really good at, and seeing things that really shouldn't be there, it's finally revealed to her that these things are happening because she is only part human. Derek, her love interest, happens to be the same. Elena is recruited to assist the Fae world - there is a disease ravaging them and they need someone like Elena, someone with her type of magic and power, to find the cure. Together, she and Derek embark on this mission, taking them to different realms, in hopes of success.
As I stated before, Barnard's idea of the Fae was very unique and really quite creative and I like her idea of how the Fae, specifically the Halven, came to be. As if the title didn't give it away, the series is based on that race, the half-humans and half-fae.. Being the first in the series, I fully expected there to be quite a bit of information given concerning the world and the various elements surrounding the Fae. However, it felt like maybe there was a wee too much exposition and that really bogged some parts of the story down and made for some slow going in parts, which is the reason I'm giving this a 3.5 vs a 4. I would also classify this more as YA than NA -- Elena is just turning 18 in this novel, but the characters really seem younger, especially Derek. In the beginning, he really came off as a moody, hormonal teenager. Because he was, really, and I would have liked a little more maturity from all of the characters, not just Derek.
Bottom line -- good first installment to what seems like a promising new YA series centering around the Fae. The author states that a new couple will be featured with each subsequent installment in this series, so I'm guessing this series is more PNR than urban fantasy. If you're a fan of Fae, YA novels, and paranormal romance, this might be right up your alley :)
**eARC received via NetGalley in exchange for my honest opinion.
July 13, 2020
I literally searched for the Narrator, Elizabeth Evans, in Audible. She did such an amazing job, performing books by Sarah J. Mass, and we all know books are done a disservice with a shitty narrator if they're developed into an audible book.
This book/series wasn't even on my radar, but alas, found through my search for this narrator. It sounded interesting, but I was apprehensive, as it features young characters (18 - 20 year olds), and is categorized as young or new adult. I'm not dissing this genre altogether, but knowing I get extremely annoyed by useless dramatic prattle about inane things that is practically the hallmark of new/young adult.... I also know, there are some gems out there... Note: Sarah J. Mass, as above, Renee Ahdieh, Victoria Aveyard, Katherine Arden. What if I am such a book snob, that I completely dismiss the genre and miss out on a hidden gem?!?!
This was not my type of hidden gem.
The general ideas behind the plot, setting, world construct and character development are "okay." But there are a lot of holes a more mature reading can't help but find glaring.... Naivete is abound here. The "Oh I like him, but he can't possibly like me" and vice versa is cumbersome and annoying. I still feel Elizabeth Evans did a great job narrating the book, but don't feel like this is my cup of tea. I couldn't finish at about 45%. About 25% in, I was thinking "faaaack. I should just give up and look for something else." Regrettably, I kept trying.
Good for teens that are super into boys and not having a lot of personal character.
This book/series wasn't even on my radar, but alas, found through my search for this narrator. It sounded interesting, but I was apprehensive, as it features young characters (18 - 20 year olds), and is categorized as young or new adult. I'm not dissing this genre altogether, but knowing I get extremely annoyed by useless dramatic prattle about inane things that is practically the hallmark of new/young adult.... I also know, there are some gems out there... Note: Sarah J. Mass, as above, Renee Ahdieh, Victoria Aveyard, Katherine Arden. What if I am such a book snob, that I completely dismiss the genre and miss out on a hidden gem?!?!
This was not my type of hidden gem.
The general ideas behind the plot, setting, world construct and character development are "okay." But there are a lot of holes a more mature reading can't help but find glaring.... Naivete is abound here. The "Oh I like him, but he can't possibly like me" and vice versa is cumbersome and annoying. I still feel Elizabeth Evans did a great job narrating the book, but don't feel like this is my cup of tea. I couldn't finish at about 45%. About 25% in, I was thinking "faaaack. I should just give up and look for something else." Regrettably, I kept trying.
Good for teens that are super into boys and not having a lot of personal character.
October 5, 2015
I received this book in exchange for an honest review from Lovers of Paranormal
Firstly this book is not categorized as YA, but it definitely reads as YA. Elena is 18 and Derek is 20. a little older than your average YA heroes but the main theme is coming of age and discovering yourself which fits YA.
I'm in two minds whether I liked this or not. It drags out a lot in the beginning, I found it hard to connect to the characters. The main adventure seems rushed, like the author spent a lot of time setting up the story then realized she had to wrap it up. The ending I actually liked. Everything was wrapped up nicely with enough loose ends to keep you interested in the series.
I get that Elena is only 18 but come on, she is studying chemistry, this statement is just idiotic.
"People don’t create viruses, unless they’re of the computer variety.” Viruses are found in nature but there are also viruses created in a lab. This is done for medical research and biological warfare. Which is the whole premise of this book.
The romance itself was good and I enjoyed Elena's and Derek's interactions, but the sex scene was too graphic for barely legal teenagers.
Overall it was an ok read but I wont be continuing the series.
Firstly this book is not categorized as YA, but it definitely reads as YA. Elena is 18 and Derek is 20. a little older than your average YA heroes but the main theme is coming of age and discovering yourself which fits YA.
I'm in two minds whether I liked this or not. It drags out a lot in the beginning, I found it hard to connect to the characters. The main adventure seems rushed, like the author spent a lot of time setting up the story then realized she had to wrap it up. The ending I actually liked. Everything was wrapped up nicely with enough loose ends to keep you interested in the series.
I get that Elena is only 18 but come on, she is studying chemistry, this statement is just idiotic.
"People don’t create viruses, unless they’re of the computer variety.” Viruses are found in nature but there are also viruses created in a lab. This is done for medical research and biological warfare. Which is the whole premise of this book.
The romance itself was good and I enjoyed Elena's and Derek's interactions, but the sex scene was too graphic for barely legal teenagers.
Overall it was an ok read but I wont be continuing the series.
October 16, 2015
***I received this book in exchange for an honest review, Lovers of Paranormal.***
Wow, this was REALLY good. It reminded me a lot of one of my favorite series, The Iron Fey by Julie Kagawa, but wasn't too similar that I felt like was rereading anything.
Elena and Derek were great characters with AWESOME Fae abilities. The plot was exciting, the romance was HOT and the world building was magical. Emain was interesting, New Kingdom sounded cool, Old Kingdom sounded medieval and Sunland was where I'd long to be. :)
Keen was also a fun character, as was Deirdre and the Fae are just exciting to begin with.
I thoroughly enjoyed it and am excited for the rest of the series.
4.5 stars.
Wow, this was REALLY good. It reminded me a lot of one of my favorite series, The Iron Fey by Julie Kagawa, but wasn't too similar that I felt like was rereading anything.
Elena and Derek were great characters with AWESOME Fae abilities. The plot was exciting, the romance was HOT and the world building was magical. Emain was interesting, New Kingdom sounded cool, Old Kingdom sounded medieval and Sunland was where I'd long to be. :)
Keen was also a fun character, as was Deirdre and the Fae are just exciting to begin with.
I thoroughly enjoyed it and am excited for the rest of the series.
4.5 stars.
January 7, 2026
This was horrible...I'm really sorry but...the writing was choppy, it felt like YA Novel but with adult themes, the dialogues were ridicolous/strange/ or just irritating. The whole story was kinda all over the place, the FMC was a mary sue (I don't always have a problem with that but it was very bad here) and although she was very "smart" her decisions often were very stupid.
The MMC was annoying, very obsessed, and there was a scene were he got sexual asaulted but it was never mentioned ever again/not really talked about but the FMC was mad at him for that and didn't believe him? WTF
The Sciience, the World and the skills were nice but everything was so poorly made.
The MMC was annoying, very obsessed, and there was a scene were he got sexual asaulted but it was never mentioned ever again/not really talked about but the FMC was mad at him for that and didn't believe him? WTF
The Sciience, the World and the skills were nice but everything was so poorly made.
March 6, 2023
3.5 ⭐️
2🌶️
This was so freaking entertaining. Had me jumping and screaming at the audiobook in so many occasions.
Narrated by Elizabeth Evans, this definitely gave me some Crescent City vibes but much less action. The characters were very lovable but I wish there had been more conflict or more action. There was a lot of potential and I feel it wasn’t fully explored.
2🌶️
This was so freaking entertaining. Had me jumping and screaming at the audiobook in so many occasions.
Narrated by Elizabeth Evans, this definitely gave me some Crescent City vibes but much less action. The characters were very lovable but I wish there had been more conflict or more action. There was a lot of potential and I feel it wasn’t fully explored.
September 29, 2016
Fates Divided kept me reading. The slow bits and inconsistencies were inconsequential to the overall story and faded the farther I got into the story. It was reminiscent of Julie Kagawa’s Iron Fey series but created a whole new lineage of fae that I will definitely be reading more of.
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January 25, 2021
This was a good story! loved the characters!!
November 17, 2021
Read this book as an audiobook and I couldn’t finish it. Might have enjoyed it more as a physical book (but i doubt it).
January 4, 2025
Kind of cheesy, but I'm invested in the series.
September 28, 2016
As a college student with a pre-med major, Elena is used to working in labs and understands chemical reactions. Which is why it is especially surprising the day she discovers she can boil water and change harmless chemical solutions into potentially harmful ones with the wave of her hand. She has no idea where this magical power came from, but the people who do know want her to find a cure for the disease ravaging their people. Can she trust them or are they using her for their own purposes?
Fates Divided, by Jules Barnard, was an interesting read. I enjoyed the fantasy aspect that melded elements of modern day science and technology with alternate worlds and magic. The somewhat complex plot was filled with betrayals, misunderstandings, age-old feuds, and forbidden romance, which, put together, generally make a pretty fascinating book. I also liked watching the main characters grow and learn, filled with determination to achieve their goals and devotion to each other.
There were a couple things that I did not like about the novel, though. First and foremost were the explicit sexual scenes. I just don’t like reading about that, and the fact that the characters were not married and did not even know each other well makes me dislike it more. Writing the scenes into the book did not add to the story, really, and could have been replaced with a “fade to black” scene that I would have been more comfortable reading. Also, this book did not hold my attention very well. I already disliked it for the reason above, and the rest of it didn’t keep me enthralled enough to make up for the lack, unfortunately.
Fates Divided has its good parts, including some cool plot twists and epic magic skills, but it also has parts that I’m not so thrilled about. I would recommend it to people who enjoy NA fantasy and don’t mind reading about romance.
I received a free copy of this book from the author in exchange for an honest review.
Fates Divided, by Jules Barnard, was an interesting read. I enjoyed the fantasy aspect that melded elements of modern day science and technology with alternate worlds and magic. The somewhat complex plot was filled with betrayals, misunderstandings, age-old feuds, and forbidden romance, which, put together, generally make a pretty fascinating book. I also liked watching the main characters grow and learn, filled with determination to achieve their goals and devotion to each other.
There were a couple things that I did not like about the novel, though. First and foremost were the explicit sexual scenes. I just don’t like reading about that, and the fact that the characters were not married and did not even know each other well makes me dislike it more. Writing the scenes into the book did not add to the story, really, and could have been replaced with a “fade to black” scene that I would have been more comfortable reading. Also, this book did not hold my attention very well. I already disliked it for the reason above, and the rest of it didn’t keep me enthralled enough to make up for the lack, unfortunately.
Fates Divided has its good parts, including some cool plot twists and epic magic skills, but it also has parts that I’m not so thrilled about. I would recommend it to people who enjoy NA fantasy and don’t mind reading about romance.
I received a free copy of this book from the author in exchange for an honest review.
December 12, 2020
So this is my first book under my new rule for myself that if I don't like it I am not going to finish it. I did make it half-way through before I gave up. Next time I will not wait that long.
This was an Audible book. A free one ( you would think I would learn by now - I simply do not have good luck liking free books from Audible).
Narrator was not a good choice. Story idea...kind of weak in my mind to begin with, but I figured I would give it a shot anyway. This may be the authors first book, but it was not polished, too repetative and predictable as the romance sections often are, including the dialog. No real depth to the characters.
Mild spoilers outside of the basic book description coming up....Basically the story is of the Fae and a virus that has been introduced that is killing them. They seek out Elena, a girl who is Helven (half elf/half human) who's mother abandoned her early in life. Elena also happens to like chemistry which the elves hope will lead to finding a cure. Because of course on her 18th birthday, she suddenly gets powers she can't control but ultimately will be hopefully able to be taught to reign in and use to develop a cure, assuming some elves will teach her. She doesn't know she is part Fae either.
Introduce college boy nextstore (Derek) who also happens to be Helven, has an inexplicable attraction to Elena, Fae who are bigots against Helvens yet need their help to survive and of course the warring factions within the elves who just want to kill the Helvens regardless that they may be the races's only hope. Mayhem ensues. The incident that finally put the nail in the coffin for me however, was the power of Derek ( also appearing on his 18th birthday) which was basically to be really strong and make himself invisible/phase with other matter. This power was used to also make Elena invisible long enough to get them into an Elven realm to figure out how to use her powers. The only way the boy could shift them both into invisibility was the fact they literally had to be locked in an open mouthed kiss to be "connected" enough for the invisibility thing to work. So imagine if you will them going through a portal this way, landing in a heap, seen by enemy elves because they fell apart, lip-locking each other to get invisible again then having the guy somehow carry her in this fashion while running for their lives. Oh and when he is phased into this invisiblity state, they can somehow pass between molecules therefore go through walls and stuff. So you see my problem here. I guess I should be glad it wasn't some other form of "connection".
Between bad narration, predictable story development and the ludicrous idea of how Derek could phase them into invisabilty I gave up. No more free books for me.
This was an Audible book. A free one ( you would think I would learn by now - I simply do not have good luck liking free books from Audible).
Narrator was not a good choice. Story idea...kind of weak in my mind to begin with, but I figured I would give it a shot anyway. This may be the authors first book, but it was not polished, too repetative and predictable as the romance sections often are, including the dialog. No real depth to the characters.
Mild spoilers outside of the basic book description coming up....Basically the story is of the Fae and a virus that has been introduced that is killing them. They seek out Elena, a girl who is Helven (half elf/half human) who's mother abandoned her early in life. Elena also happens to like chemistry which the elves hope will lead to finding a cure. Because of course on her 18th birthday, she suddenly gets powers she can't control but ultimately will be hopefully able to be taught to reign in and use to develop a cure, assuming some elves will teach her. She doesn't know she is part Fae either.
Introduce college boy nextstore (Derek) who also happens to be Helven, has an inexplicable attraction to Elena, Fae who are bigots against Helvens yet need their help to survive and of course the warring factions within the elves who just want to kill the Helvens regardless that they may be the races's only hope. Mayhem ensues. The incident that finally put the nail in the coffin for me however, was the power of Derek ( also appearing on his 18th birthday) which was basically to be really strong and make himself invisible/phase with other matter. This power was used to also make Elena invisible long enough to get them into an Elven realm to figure out how to use her powers. The only way the boy could shift them both into invisibility was the fact they literally had to be locked in an open mouthed kiss to be "connected" enough for the invisibility thing to work. So imagine if you will them going through a portal this way, landing in a heap, seen by enemy elves because they fell apart, lip-locking each other to get invisible again then having the guy somehow carry her in this fashion while running for their lives. Oh and when he is phased into this invisiblity state, they can somehow pass between molecules therefore go through walls and stuff. So you see my problem here. I guess I should be glad it wasn't some other form of "connection".
Between bad narration, predictable story development and the ludicrous idea of how Derek could phase them into invisabilty I gave up. No more free books for me.
October 19, 2015
"Suddenly there wasn't a barrier that seemed too great to cross in order to be closer."
Fates Divided was a perfect example of new adult, paranormal romance. It had everything that I want in a novel that makes for an enjoyable, page-turning read. The romance was sizzling and still new and angsty. The main characters, Elena and Derek, were still in college and just discovering major things about themselves. Then throw in a mind-blowing discovery of the existence of another race of magical beings that need Elena to save them from a deadly disease. All of these things lead to the best mix of conflict and excitement.
The plot is very fast-paced and there are twists I never saw coming and kept me turning those pages. The romance helped drive the plot and is very organic yet turns into something so deep & moving without feeling pushy to me. It was page scorching as well. Now, it doesn't get too graphic but it was definitely hot! All the characters are well developed and I loved that they were smart and driven by education and family but still really good looking! Love the hot nerd comeback going on (for girls and guys) in books these days. Score 10 points to Jules Barnard for putting a fun scientific element into this book. If you aren't the science nerd type, like myself, don't worry everything is told very clear and simple and still entertaining.
Elena and Derek really shined. They were so compatible and desperately trying to stay away from each other that you just know it's going to turn out exciting. I was invested in their lives and even though at times I felt they made stupid mistakes, I was cheering them on their journey together to you know save the same Fae that pretty much threatened them and dissed them at any and ever chance. But Elena and Derek had plenty of motivation like their friends and families safety as well as getting to know this strange world they have been granted exclusive and rare access to.
The only thing that took a little bit to get used to was that the story is told in third person and since that isn't as common with most of my reads it did take me a minute. However, once I got used to it, I loved the writing style and devoured the pages. I highly recommend this to paranormal romance lovers as the story is original and hooks you right from the beginning. I can't wait to read the next release in the Halven Rising series!
*I received an eARC in exchange for an honest review as part of participation in the blog tour and no compensation was given to me and all opinions are my own. This review was originally published on BookCrushin blog on 9/16/15.
Fates Divided was a perfect example of new adult, paranormal romance. It had everything that I want in a novel that makes for an enjoyable, page-turning read. The romance was sizzling and still new and angsty. The main characters, Elena and Derek, were still in college and just discovering major things about themselves. Then throw in a mind-blowing discovery of the existence of another race of magical beings that need Elena to save them from a deadly disease. All of these things lead to the best mix of conflict and excitement.
The plot is very fast-paced and there are twists I never saw coming and kept me turning those pages. The romance helped drive the plot and is very organic yet turns into something so deep & moving without feeling pushy to me. It was page scorching as well. Now, it doesn't get too graphic but it was definitely hot! All the characters are well developed and I loved that they were smart and driven by education and family but still really good looking! Love the hot nerd comeback going on (for girls and guys) in books these days. Score 10 points to Jules Barnard for putting a fun scientific element into this book. If you aren't the science nerd type, like myself, don't worry everything is told very clear and simple and still entertaining.
Elena and Derek really shined. They were so compatible and desperately trying to stay away from each other that you just know it's going to turn out exciting. I was invested in their lives and even though at times I felt they made stupid mistakes, I was cheering them on their journey together to you know save the same Fae that pretty much threatened them and dissed them at any and ever chance. But Elena and Derek had plenty of motivation like their friends and families safety as well as getting to know this strange world they have been granted exclusive and rare access to.
The only thing that took a little bit to get used to was that the story is told in third person and since that isn't as common with most of my reads it did take me a minute. However, once I got used to it, I loved the writing style and devoured the pages. I highly recommend this to paranormal romance lovers as the story is original and hooks you right from the beginning. I can't wait to read the next release in the Halven Rising series!
*I received an eARC in exchange for an honest review as part of participation in the blog tour and no compensation was given to me and all opinions are my own. This review was originally published on BookCrushin blog on 9/16/15.
September 27, 2015
I loved the Blue series by Jules Barnard, so I was excited to dig into her latest urban fantasy series, Halvan Rising. I'm happy to say it met my expectations! It has all the new adult romance I've come to expect from Barnard as well as a healthy dose of danger, adventure, and a brilliantly-created fantasy world situated within a modern-day college campus.
As Elena learns to navigate her new normal, Derek keeps an eye on her, both out of a sense of responsibility as well as attraction, and these two are a combustible combination! Elena and Derek each learn about their own pasts, families, and their newly acquired Fae powers, all while trying to stop a deadly virus poised to wipe out the entire Fae population. But not everyone wants them to succeed, and soon they're fighting for their own lives as well as the Faes'.
Plot
The plot revolves around finding a cure for the virus, but there is plenty of subplotting, including who's behind the virus, Elena's missing roommate, Resse, a reluctant attraction between Reese and Elena's Fae bodyguard, Keen, and of course the romance between Derek and Elena. About the only thing I felt lacking was the romance between Derek and Elena. I thought it developed too quickly and took a backseat to the main plot. But that is really my only complaint.
Characters
Told from alternating points of view, Derek and Elena are both well-rounded with decent character arcs. The secondary characters, including Keen and Reese are as fascinating as they are likeable.
World Building
The realm within modern life world-building is really well done. The descriptions are rich and they transported me to another place with vivid detail. The rules surrounding the status and discrimination of Fae versus the half-blooded Halven was believable and drove some of the best conflict in the book. I can't wait to see how that resolves over the series.
The Ending
The main story was wrapped up well, but left open enough for the series to continue. I'm looking forward to finding out what happens next.
Top Five Things I Love About Fates Divided
1. The world building. Rich, vivid details brought the story to life in an exciting way.
2. Reese. Elena's roommate is a hilarious spitfire, and I loved watching her get under Keen's skin.
3. Keen. The big Fae bodyguard with a superiority complex is a riot. I really hope we get some scenes from his point of view in the future.
4. Magic. Because, come on, who doesn't love magic?
5. Derek and Elena. They're good together!
Bottom Line
I don't read much fantasy, but if Jules Barnard is writing it, I'll take more, please!
Disclaimer
I was provided a copy of this book by the author in exchange for an honest review.
As Elena learns to navigate her new normal, Derek keeps an eye on her, both out of a sense of responsibility as well as attraction, and these two are a combustible combination! Elena and Derek each learn about their own pasts, families, and their newly acquired Fae powers, all while trying to stop a deadly virus poised to wipe out the entire Fae population. But not everyone wants them to succeed, and soon they're fighting for their own lives as well as the Faes'.
Plot
The plot revolves around finding a cure for the virus, but there is plenty of subplotting, including who's behind the virus, Elena's missing roommate, Resse, a reluctant attraction between Reese and Elena's Fae bodyguard, Keen, and of course the romance between Derek and Elena. About the only thing I felt lacking was the romance between Derek and Elena. I thought it developed too quickly and took a backseat to the main plot. But that is really my only complaint.
Characters
Told from alternating points of view, Derek and Elena are both well-rounded with decent character arcs. The secondary characters, including Keen and Reese are as fascinating as they are likeable.
World Building
The realm within modern life world-building is really well done. The descriptions are rich and they transported me to another place with vivid detail. The rules surrounding the status and discrimination of Fae versus the half-blooded Halven was believable and drove some of the best conflict in the book. I can't wait to see how that resolves over the series.
The Ending
The main story was wrapped up well, but left open enough for the series to continue. I'm looking forward to finding out what happens next.
Top Five Things I Love About Fates Divided
1. The world building. Rich, vivid details brought the story to life in an exciting way.
2. Reese. Elena's roommate is a hilarious spitfire, and I loved watching her get under Keen's skin.
3. Keen. The big Fae bodyguard with a superiority complex is a riot. I really hope we get some scenes from his point of view in the future.
4. Magic. Because, come on, who doesn't love magic?
5. Derek and Elena. They're good together!
Bottom Line
I don't read much fantasy, but if Jules Barnard is writing it, I'll take more, please!
Disclaimer
I was provided a copy of this book by the author in exchange for an honest review.
September 28, 2016
**Disclaimer: I received a complimentary copy of this book in exchange for honest review.**
I need the next book!
Update: I have signed up to review the next book. My book 'zen' is currently at peace, now.
Elena is one smart cookie! During her studies, she makes a new and miraculous discovery. Unfortunately, what she has uncovered is her own physical ability that cannot be possible, for any human. Desperate for answers, she seeks out the one person who might be able to help her to procure a lab and test her theory.
That person is Derek, her mysterious neighbor who conveniently has a key to a fully equipped lab. But Elena finds that her new power simply cannot be explained with science. Her ability seems to be... magical.
Elena is shocked to find out that she is Halven, or half-Fae, and her magical abilities are severely needed to help create a cure to save the Fae (even if she'd be doing so against her will). Derek gets roped into her mission, as well, and learns more about his own secret abilities.
Soon, the two are on a journey to save the Fae while trying to escape the deadly clutches of their enemies, who seem to be all around them. Toss in a viking-ish Fae protector, a sassy best friend, and a mystical realm with plenty of secrets hidden within, and you have one exciting adventure!
I really enjoyed this story. It takes place over a short period of time but the pacing is quick enough and the second half is definitely full of surprises. The magical elements and secondary fantasy world are interesting, too. I look forward to continuing the story with Keen and Reese! I like the fact that the next book will star a different couple in the same story and their forbidden relationship.
In closing...
Magical realms, romance, secrecy, and danger aplenty! Four Fae-tastic suns!
Full review on blog: http://uptildawnbookblog.blogspot.com/2016/09/review-tour-fates-divided-by-jules.html
November 18, 2020
First I feel the need to mention that Amazon's recommendation system is really terrible. For whatever reason, it has always tons of books that I know I don`t like. And for whatever reason, I still picked this book. Okay, the reason was that I felt like reading a PNR. Fates Divided seemed to pop up every time, so I went with it. And guess what Amazon recommendations still suck.
I kept thinking I was going to DNF, from like the 3rd chapter.. yet I read 46 more.
Not quite sure what to attribute it to. I guess because the idea behind this is quite good?
I also quite liked Elena.
The world-building was not bad. Though I would have liked more of it.
However, that's probably the only thing I wanted more of because I would have been happier with less when it comes to nearly everything else. It was a bit overly dramatic most times and very melodramatic all the time.
The writing style was overly flowery. At times it felt like Barnard was looking for an extra adjective to throw in just to sound bigger, better, and all that.
It felt disruptive somehow and gives it an air of fakeness. The worst part however many of the phrases and fancy adjectives were repeated liberally and often. Which made this feel repetitive on top of it actually being repetitive in the storytelling.
I quite enjoyed the story. Though very predictable it was quite enjoyable. However, there were some technical issues I had, that might be a bit petty but alas, I found it made no sense. For example, why didn't she do something about the boots? She could do Qtips and all these other fancy stuff, but not the boots?
I think what kinda got to me the most the repetition. Like Elena's backstory for example. I mean I got it the first time around why repeat it another 4 times?
Halfway I was convinced I was going to DNF. Then it got quite entertaining for a bit and when I got to maybe I should DNF again, I was nearly done. I contemplated skimming the last bit. But actually didn`t (I'm freakn proud folks, hence the mention.) it wasn`t too bad but honestly, I feel that this needs to have the repetitions taken out and it would be way way better. I kept thinking Barnard needs a better editor while reading this. And I still feel the same.
But as it stands. guessing now new editor insight to take out the millions of repetitions I don`t think I will go on with the series.
I kept thinking I was going to DNF, from like the 3rd chapter.. yet I read 46 more.
Not quite sure what to attribute it to. I guess because the idea behind this is quite good?
I also quite liked Elena.
The world-building was not bad. Though I would have liked more of it.
However, that's probably the only thing I wanted more of because I would have been happier with less when it comes to nearly everything else. It was a bit overly dramatic most times and very melodramatic all the time.
The writing style was overly flowery. At times it felt like Barnard was looking for an extra adjective to throw in just to sound bigger, better, and all that.
It felt disruptive somehow and gives it an air of fakeness. The worst part however many of the phrases and fancy adjectives were repeated liberally and often. Which made this feel repetitive on top of it actually being repetitive in the storytelling.
I quite enjoyed the story. Though very predictable it was quite enjoyable. However, there were some technical issues I had, that might be a bit petty but alas, I found it made no sense. For example, why didn't she do something about the boots? She could do Qtips and all these other fancy stuff, but not the boots?
I think what kinda got to me the most the repetition. Like Elena's backstory for example. I mean I got it the first time around why repeat it another 4 times?
Halfway I was convinced I was going to DNF. Then it got quite entertaining for a bit and when I got to maybe I should DNF again, I was nearly done. I contemplated skimming the last bit. But actually didn`t (I'm freakn proud folks, hence the mention.) it wasn`t too bad but honestly, I feel that this needs to have the repetitions taken out and it would be way way better. I kept thinking Barnard needs a better editor while reading this. And I still feel the same.
But as it stands. guessing now new editor insight to take out the millions of repetitions I don`t think I will go on with the series.
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