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A Cactus In the Valley
When withdrawn Terra Lombardi wakes up in a smoking airplane in the middle of the remote Arizona desert, she realizes the only other survivor is the arrogant Wyatt Hartman. Clouded with the uncertainty of how they crashed, the two strangers head west, in pursuit of civilization. Amidst the environment and dangerous animals against them, they must band together to survive, and even thrive in the rocky, sun-drenched Southwest. However, the elements force them to confront their inner demons.
Told through dual points-of-view and intermittent flashbacks, teenagers Wyatt and Terra brave the sun and sand alone. But it is through the hardest times in which we grow the most.
Told through dual points-of-view and intermittent flashbacks, teenagers Wyatt and Terra brave the sun and sand alone. But it is through the hardest times in which we grow the most.
286 pages, Kindle Edition
Published December 21, 2017
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Olivia J. Bennett
7 books49 followersOlivia J. Bennett is the award-winning author of Casually Homicidal. Her writing has been described as “visceral, honest, and evocative” and “gritty, yet poetic,” and her work often explores themes of mental health, being an eldest daughter, and overcoming past trauma. She loves to include morally-gray female heroines, atmospheric settings, and genre-bending horror in her contemporary, fantasy, and science fiction works. In 2018, her flash fiction “Clutching Roses” was awarded a National Gold Medal from Scholastic Art & Writing. When not creating, Olivia is most likely baking cookies, binge-watching Naruto or Lost with her partner, or cuddling her two cats. She can be found somewhere between the corn and the big blue sky in Illinois.
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July 19, 2019
I received this book for free from the author in exchange for an honest review.
This was an amazing book. I haven’t read a YA book this deep and emotional in a while.
First off, I loved the dual points of view. It allowed me to really get into the minds of both Terra and Wyatt and feel what they felt.
I also really loved the flashbacks. They were incredibly well done and were spaced perfectly throughout the novel. You learned more about the characters gradually, as opposed to being info-dumped with backstory. The author did a good job paralleling the flashbacks. I enjoyed seeing the connections between their stories.
The writing style of the book was really beautiful. The descriptions were phenomenal. The author writes with such an ease. Two of my favorite lines (which also show the parallels) were “My name is Terra Lombardi, and I am a shooting star falling from the heavens” (24) and “My name is Wyatt Hartman, and I am a meteor crashing from the skies” (44).
The subject matter can be heavy and very mature at times, but it was all handled appropriately. Sometimes authors will throw in things like rape and abuse as a plot device, without doing the matter justice. This book did not do that and I really appreciated that.
Overall, this is a powerful story about survival and facing your inner demons.
For more book reviews, be sure to check out my blog: https://oddandbookish.wordpress.com/
This was an amazing book. I haven’t read a YA book this deep and emotional in a while.
First off, I loved the dual points of view. It allowed me to really get into the minds of both Terra and Wyatt and feel what they felt.
I also really loved the flashbacks. They were incredibly well done and were spaced perfectly throughout the novel. You learned more about the characters gradually, as opposed to being info-dumped with backstory. The author did a good job paralleling the flashbacks. I enjoyed seeing the connections between their stories.
The writing style of the book was really beautiful. The descriptions were phenomenal. The author writes with such an ease. Two of my favorite lines (which also show the parallels) were “My name is Terra Lombardi, and I am a shooting star falling from the heavens” (24) and “My name is Wyatt Hartman, and I am a meteor crashing from the skies” (44).
The subject matter can be heavy and very mature at times, but it was all handled appropriately. Sometimes authors will throw in things like rape and abuse as a plot device, without doing the matter justice. This book did not do that and I really appreciated that.
Overall, this is a powerful story about survival and facing your inner demons.
For more book reviews, be sure to check out my blog: https://oddandbookish.wordpress.com/
September 23, 2018
DISCLAIMER: I was given this novel by author Olivia J. Bennett in exchange for an honest review, not a positive review.
And with that said, this novel gave me insight on life that I never fully acknowledged before. A Cactus In The Valley is a story of survival. Two teenagers who while at first seem to have a slightly difficult time working together, eventually team up to help save their own lives. But in the midst of saving their own lives, they don’t realize that they are also trying to save each other.
I wouldn’t call this a romance, but love is prominent in this novel. It skims the surface, but is constantly felt throughout. The love is raw and bends in a way that sometimes is hidden within all the madness their lives hold, but you can still feel it... you can see it. It felt magical at times and disheartening at others. It made me want to hold the ones I love closer to my heart and not let them go.
Bennett incorporates important flashbacks of Wyatt and Terra’s lives before the plane crash. And while at times I felt like some of the flash backs were dragged, Bennett did a tremendous job showcasing how Wyatt and Terra’s deepest secrets helped them move forward with their struggle of surviving in what seemed to be a never ending desert.
Terra and Wyatt’s story is deep and raw. It gives you feelings you’ve never felt before. Great feelings and sad feelings. I loved every second of it. I don’t usually reread books, but this is one I wouldn’t hesitate to pick up again. I can not get enough.
And while I absolutely recommend this novel to everyone, I will say that at times I felt like the similes and metaphors were slightly over used and unnecessary. But, this is Bennett’s debut and for a first novel she did better than great. She is a writer that I will forever be looking forward to what she comes out with next!
And with that said, this novel gave me insight on life that I never fully acknowledged before. A Cactus In The Valley is a story of survival. Two teenagers who while at first seem to have a slightly difficult time working together, eventually team up to help save their own lives. But in the midst of saving their own lives, they don’t realize that they are also trying to save each other.
I wouldn’t call this a romance, but love is prominent in this novel. It skims the surface, but is constantly felt throughout. The love is raw and bends in a way that sometimes is hidden within all the madness their lives hold, but you can still feel it... you can see it. It felt magical at times and disheartening at others. It made me want to hold the ones I love closer to my heart and not let them go.
Bennett incorporates important flashbacks of Wyatt and Terra’s lives before the plane crash. And while at times I felt like some of the flash backs were dragged, Bennett did a tremendous job showcasing how Wyatt and Terra’s deepest secrets helped them move forward with their struggle of surviving in what seemed to be a never ending desert.
Terra and Wyatt’s story is deep and raw. It gives you feelings you’ve never felt before. Great feelings and sad feelings. I loved every second of it. I don’t usually reread books, but this is one I wouldn’t hesitate to pick up again. I can not get enough.
And while I absolutely recommend this novel to everyone, I will say that at times I felt like the similes and metaphors were slightly over used and unnecessary. But, this is Bennett’s debut and for a first novel she did better than great. She is a writer that I will forever be looking forward to what she comes out with next!
November 1, 2020
For an older reader, I see this book would be fit better for the older audience (16+) and the reason is there is heavy material in it such as rape, drinking, and abusive behavior. I really enjoyed the story besides the large quality of language in it. Words beginning with s, a, and f. There is swearing words just FYI. If I would was a younger reader, I would understand why someone rate under three stars. Some material in this book is hard to ingest. It’s a great book with great characters and the flashbacks helped give out character development to both Terra and Wyatt. Rating it: 4 stars.
November 17, 2018
This book surprised me in a good way. I didn't know anything about it except that this was about two teenagers who survived a plane crash.
Terra is a 16-year old girl who's suffering from grief (she lost her grandmother), dealing with a dysfunctional family, and the guilt from the sexual assault that happened to her when she was just 9 years old. She gets her strength from her bestfriend, Harper.
Wyatt on the other hand, is another teenager who's dealing with the verbal and physical abuse from his alcoholic father, and became one troubled teen because of it, dealing with fights in school and also selling drugs. His voice of reason is his younger sister, Lilly.
There were a lot of heavy and important issues that were discussed in this book. Not to mention that being in a middle of the desert and surviving a plane crash is already heavy enough. I loved how you can get to know both characters becuse of the flashbacks, and how their resilience made them strong and helped them survive. I didn't mind the insta-love/romance aspect, since it was done well. It didn't involve cheesy scenes because both characters were dealing with deep scars from their past.
A story about survival, friendship, and love. A captivating and powerful read.
"Take chances, Terra. Make mistakes, because nothing is so terribly messed up that it can't be fixed."
"People are fragile, animalistic to the core. I guess, if you knock them around, they'll think they did something to deserve it."
"Sometimes, I think about the future . . . and can't see anything. Like, it's all fuzz. My life . . . could go a million different ways, and that's what scares me the most, I think."
Soundtrack: Somewhere In Between by Lifehouse
Terra is a 16-year old girl who's suffering from grief (she lost her grandmother), dealing with a dysfunctional family, and the guilt from the sexual assault that happened to her when she was just 9 years old. She gets her strength from her bestfriend, Harper.
Wyatt on the other hand, is another teenager who's dealing with the verbal and physical abuse from his alcoholic father, and became one troubled teen because of it, dealing with fights in school and also selling drugs. His voice of reason is his younger sister, Lilly.
There were a lot of heavy and important issues that were discussed in this book. Not to mention that being in a middle of the desert and surviving a plane crash is already heavy enough. I loved how you can get to know both characters becuse of the flashbacks, and how their resilience made them strong and helped them survive. I didn't mind the insta-love/romance aspect, since it was done well. It didn't involve cheesy scenes because both characters were dealing with deep scars from their past.
A story about survival, friendship, and love. A captivating and powerful read.
"Take chances, Terra. Make mistakes, because nothing is so terribly messed up that it can't be fixed."
"People are fragile, animalistic to the core. I guess, if you knock them around, they'll think they did something to deserve it."
"Sometimes, I think about the future . . . and can't see anything. Like, it's all fuzz. My life . . . could go a million different ways, and that's what scares me the most, I think."
Soundtrack: Somewhere In Between by Lifehouse
September 7, 2018
3.5 stars // disclaimer: I received this book for free in exchange for an honest review, thank you olivia! 🖤 unexpected is the first word that comes to mind when thinking about this novel — the premise is relatively simple: two teenagers survive a small plane crash in the desert. however, instead of a typical survival tale, what you receive instead is two very human souls finding their faith through finding themselves. their trials include not only the physical, but the mental and emotional. there are adult themes in this book but they are executed carefully by the writer who manages to illustrate the impact without going into excrutiating detail (which I personally appreciated) although she lacks no detail elsewhere. her language and heavy metaphoric touches are what drew me into this book the most.
I would most recommend this book to people of a religious conviction or who will best appreciate a religious subtext
I would most recommend this book to people of a religious conviction or who will best appreciate a religious subtext
March 7, 2019
I struggled to come up with my rating for this book. I have mixed feelings about ACITV. My opinion is a bit unpopular, so please don't hate on me for it.
Now I know Olivia, the author, on Instagram and I love her feed so I was super pumped to read her debut--especially since it is very hyped on the teen author community. This review nor these critiques reflect my opinion of her as a person at all. I love Olivia dearly and she's super nice and super raw. I love seeing it reflect into her social media and her writing.
I knew going into this book that ACITV had mature themes. But for some reason, I guess I kind of didn't expect the large quantity of cussing inside the book. To be honest, that's probably why I didn't enjoy this book as much as I expected initially reading it. There's a number of strong language within the story.
However, I do want to say that the swearing in the book did not affect my level of enjoyment for the story itself. ACITV is a well-written story. Olivia has a very beautiful and well-developed writing style. The characters go through so much character development that was portrayed in such a real way. I gave ACITV 3 stars because I found the cussing to interrupt my reading flow. I do understand, however, that this is the way Olivia writes.
I will in the future probably pick up ACITV again. Who knows, I may end up bumping my rating up. Nevertheless, I'm not sad that I read this book. I did enjoy my experience in the end.
Now I know Olivia, the author, on Instagram and I love her feed so I was super pumped to read her debut--especially since it is very hyped on the teen author community. This review nor these critiques reflect my opinion of her as a person at all. I love Olivia dearly and she's super nice and super raw. I love seeing it reflect into her social media and her writing.
I knew going into this book that ACITV had mature themes. But for some reason, I guess I kind of didn't expect the large quantity of cussing inside the book. To be honest, that's probably why I didn't enjoy this book as much as I expected initially reading it. There's a number of strong language within the story.
However, I do want to say that the swearing in the book did not affect my level of enjoyment for the story itself. ACITV is a well-written story. Olivia has a very beautiful and well-developed writing style. The characters go through so much character development that was portrayed in such a real way. I gave ACITV 3 stars because I found the cussing to interrupt my reading flow. I do understand, however, that this is the way Olivia writes.
I will in the future probably pick up ACITV again. Who knows, I may end up bumping my rating up. Nevertheless, I'm not sad that I read this book. I did enjoy my experience in the end.
October 3, 2018
"We are just a cactus in the valley. A raindrop of hope in an endless desert. Life bursting forth where life should not." - Olivia J. Bennett
I'm not sure where to start with this review except to say, Bennett, self-published author, writes with every fiber of her soul. Her style, the way she molded this story, and how the journey captures you from the first sentence is utterly captivating. She writes with a vulnerability that I find lacking in most stories. I believe when she placed this book in the hands of her readers, she offered them a piece of her heart and her own journey.
Before I get too carried away, here is the back cover synopsis of A Cactus In The Valley:
When withdrawn Terra Lombardi wakes up in a smoking airplane in the middle of the remote Arizona desert, she realizes the only other survivor is the arrogant Wyatt Hartman.
Clouded with the uncertainty of how they crashed, the two strangers head west in pursuit of civilization. Amidst the environment and dangerous animals against them, they must band together to survive, and even thrive, in the rocky, sun-drenched Southwest. However, the elements force them to confront their inner demons.
Told through dual points-of-view and intermittent flashbacks, teenagers Wyatt and Terra brave the sun and sand alone. But it is through the hardest times in which we grow the most.
You think it sounds good? Trust me, you should read it.
With characters who are tough in their own ways, yet fighting pasts and struggles that threaten to tear at them more than the desert they are stranded in, this book will make you want to cry along with them.
A Cactus In The Valley is fast paced, keeps your attention, and makes you wonder "how in the world will this end?". Don't be surprised if you hold your breath a few times or grit your teeth.
Stuck in a reading slump? Need something to shake up your reading choices? THIS one is for you!! Let me not forget to mention that, as a Christian, the elements of faith and the fact that even through these characters struggles they knew who to call out to in the end...it really bolstered my own faith and reminded me how good God is.
Thank you, Olivia J. Bennett, for sharing this piece of your heart with us!
I'm not sure where to start with this review except to say, Bennett, self-published author, writes with every fiber of her soul. Her style, the way she molded this story, and how the journey captures you from the first sentence is utterly captivating. She writes with a vulnerability that I find lacking in most stories. I believe when she placed this book in the hands of her readers, she offered them a piece of her heart and her own journey.
Before I get too carried away, here is the back cover synopsis of A Cactus In The Valley:
When withdrawn Terra Lombardi wakes up in a smoking airplane in the middle of the remote Arizona desert, she realizes the only other survivor is the arrogant Wyatt Hartman.
Clouded with the uncertainty of how they crashed, the two strangers head west in pursuit of civilization. Amidst the environment and dangerous animals against them, they must band together to survive, and even thrive, in the rocky, sun-drenched Southwest. However, the elements force them to confront their inner demons.
Told through dual points-of-view and intermittent flashbacks, teenagers Wyatt and Terra brave the sun and sand alone. But it is through the hardest times in which we grow the most.
You think it sounds good? Trust me, you should read it.
With characters who are tough in their own ways, yet fighting pasts and struggles that threaten to tear at them more than the desert they are stranded in, this book will make you want to cry along with them.
A Cactus In The Valley is fast paced, keeps your attention, and makes you wonder "how in the world will this end?". Don't be surprised if you hold your breath a few times or grit your teeth.
Stuck in a reading slump? Need something to shake up your reading choices? THIS one is for you!! Let me not forget to mention that, as a Christian, the elements of faith and the fact that even through these characters struggles they knew who to call out to in the end...it really bolstered my own faith and reminded me how good God is.
Thank you, Olivia J. Bennett, for sharing this piece of your heart with us!
April 10, 2019
A Cactus in the Valley was an impressive debut for a young author. The plot was compelling, full of angst and drama, which kept me turning the pages to the point of practically inhaling it, which is rare for me. The characters were interesting enough to make me want to know more, but I especially enjoyed watching their relationship develop. The writing is good but very flowery and at times overwrought, which isn't unusual for newer writers and didn't detract from the story for me. In fact, there were several metaphors and turns of phrase that really struck me as unique and beautiful, which leads me to believe this young writer has a bright future ahead of her. There were some grammatical issues, tense mixing, and repeated words in quick succession, as well as crutch words that were used too often, all of which I wish had been caught by the editor, but again, nothing that took away from my overall enjoyment of this story. Also: despite the 14 and up label at the beginning, I feel this novel would be more appropriate for 16 and up. :)
May 5, 2018
OMG. ACITV was such a roller coaster of a read! ALL THE FEELS, LIKE GEEZ. I LOVE IT.
It started off with a great hook that kept me reading which is great. I did feel it dipped in pace a little in the beginning, but the deeper in I read, the faster the pages flew. The disasters kept getting worse, I was so afraid for Terra and Wyatt! Also--although harsh topics--I really loved reading their backstories.
This self-published novel was amazing and (to the older audience because of some cussing and hard topics) I highly recommend!
I can't wait to read more books by Olivia!
It started off with a great hook that kept me reading which is great. I did feel it dipped in pace a little in the beginning, but the deeper in I read, the faster the pages flew. The disasters kept getting worse, I was so afraid for Terra and Wyatt! Also--although harsh topics--I really loved reading their backstories.
This self-published novel was amazing and (to the older audience because of some cussing and hard topics) I highly recommend!
I can't wait to read more books by Olivia!
January 18, 2019
This book was our January 2019 book club choice. I have to admit, I'm a bit of a sucker for survival books. When I started this book and realized, that's exactly what this book is all about, I was pretty pumped up! The characters and development are excellent! Each chapter is told from a dual perspective as well as flashbacks between the two characters. I love how the story comes full circle. The emotions in this book are so raw and real. The pain and struggle are so evident. It makes you want to reach in an help these characters on they journey. Kudos to Olivia on this novel! Hope to see many more by her in the future!
If you get a chance, pick this one up and give it a read! You won't be disappointed!
If you get a chance, pick this one up and give it a read! You won't be disappointed!
January 14, 2019
I thought this book brought up an interesting dialogue about grief and trauma. I didn't like the cussing so much, be careful for that, but it was a good one to read. It definitely shoved me right out of my comfort zone, and sometimes we all need that. I will probably read it again to inspect the characters more closely, as they are a good example of how to write realistic, hurting characters.
June 4, 2018
First off, I want to say there are few books I've read lately that caused me to do marathon reading binges. This is one of them. I'm deeply impressed by Olivia J. Bennett's writing skills, especially considering the fact that she was a teenager when she wrote this novel. I looked forward to each reading session and quickly became engrossed by Terra and Wyatt's journey.
I won't get into a lengthy description about the book itself, rather I prefer to focus on my thoughts on the plot, characters, and Olivia's writing style. In short, Terra and Wyatt are two troubled teenagers (strangers when they meet) who survive an airplane crash in Arizona's Sonoran Desert. The story follows them as they struggle to survive the plane crash and come to terms with the personal issues and demons that haunt them and shaped their characters.
What I liked about the novel: Olivia's characters are well-rounded. Readers will completely understand why they act the way they do, even if they don't always agree with their behavior. ("Angsty" doesn't even begin to describe these two). The storyline switched back and forth between both characters' points of view, and switched between the past and present action. Never did I become confused by this. In fact, I really liked the way the author managed to jump back and forth in time, starting with events that happened years ago, leading right up to the day of the plane crash. It helped to build suspense and explain a lot of things about the characters. Also, there was seldom a dull moment throughout the novel. The characters are faced with numerous challenges, some as large and devastating as animal attacks and natural disasters, to as minor as the sheer monotony of being stranded in one place. At times the descriptions were so vivid I felt like I was suffering from dehydration right along with the characters, and more than once my heart pounded as a new threat loomed or the possibility of being saved came into view. Olivia has a very unique writing style that's unlike anything I've read before.
With all that said, there were a handful of things I didn't like. For instance, I understand both Terra and Wyatt had endured some awful situations in their past, but there were times I wanted to shake them and say, "Stop blaming the world and everyone in it for all your problems!" Sometimes the angst was just too much and I found myself hating them for being brats or snapping at everyone for no reason.
As far as writing goes, there is a lot to be said for the power of subtlety, and I didn't see much of it in this book. For example, Terra and Wyatt both have dark secrets, but the author revels them in first couple chapters. I can't say that I didn't care when I read about them--because that's a little too harsh--but I feel like I would have cared a lot more if I'd gotten to know the characters better, then their secrets were revealed. Throwing information or jarring visuals just for shock value doesn't always work; sometimes suspense works better than bluntness.
I had a few tiny pet peeves while reading, particularly regarding the coyotes, the chapter with the Native Americans, and a few other small details. (I won't get specific in order to keep this review spoiler-free, but I did find myself saying, "Wait...what?" more than once).
Overall, I very much enjoyed this book and by the time I was about 3/4 of the way through, I found I had to keep flipping pages and see if/when Terra and Wyatt would get rescued. When I reached the end, I breathed a sign of relief, but I wished there was a little more resolution just to see what happened in the days after! I was very happy to see that both characters found some sense of redemption at the end, and I think they came out stronger and more appreciative of what they have.
I won't get into a lengthy description about the book itself, rather I prefer to focus on my thoughts on the plot, characters, and Olivia's writing style. In short, Terra and Wyatt are two troubled teenagers (strangers when they meet) who survive an airplane crash in Arizona's Sonoran Desert. The story follows them as they struggle to survive the plane crash and come to terms with the personal issues and demons that haunt them and shaped their characters.
What I liked about the novel: Olivia's characters are well-rounded. Readers will completely understand why they act the way they do, even if they don't always agree with their behavior. ("Angsty" doesn't even begin to describe these two). The storyline switched back and forth between both characters' points of view, and switched between the past and present action. Never did I become confused by this. In fact, I really liked the way the author managed to jump back and forth in time, starting with events that happened years ago, leading right up to the day of the plane crash. It helped to build suspense and explain a lot of things about the characters. Also, there was seldom a dull moment throughout the novel. The characters are faced with numerous challenges, some as large and devastating as animal attacks and natural disasters, to as minor as the sheer monotony of being stranded in one place. At times the descriptions were so vivid I felt like I was suffering from dehydration right along with the characters, and more than once my heart pounded as a new threat loomed or the possibility of being saved came into view. Olivia has a very unique writing style that's unlike anything I've read before.
With all that said, there were a handful of things I didn't like. For instance, I understand both Terra and Wyatt had endured some awful situations in their past, but there were times I wanted to shake them and say, "Stop blaming the world and everyone in it for all your problems!" Sometimes the angst was just too much and I found myself hating them for being brats or snapping at everyone for no reason.
As far as writing goes, there is a lot to be said for the power of subtlety, and I didn't see much of it in this book. For example, Terra and Wyatt both have dark secrets, but the author revels them in first couple chapters. I can't say that I didn't care when I read about them--because that's a little too harsh--but I feel like I would have cared a lot more if I'd gotten to know the characters better, then their secrets were revealed. Throwing information or jarring visuals just for shock value doesn't always work; sometimes suspense works better than bluntness.
I had a few tiny pet peeves while reading, particularly regarding the coyotes, the chapter with the Native Americans, and a few other small details. (I won't get specific in order to keep this review spoiler-free, but I did find myself saying, "Wait...what?" more than once).
Overall, I very much enjoyed this book and by the time I was about 3/4 of the way through, I found I had to keep flipping pages and see if/when Terra and Wyatt would get rescued. When I reached the end, I breathed a sign of relief, but I wished there was a little more resolution just to see what happened in the days after! I was very happy to see that both characters found some sense of redemption at the end, and I think they came out stronger and more appreciative of what they have.
April 6, 2018
Holyyyyyyyy crap this book. THIS BOOK WAS SO INTENSE & RAW & AMAZING & MY HEART CAN’T HANDLE READING ANYTHING SAD FOR LIKE 238687 YEARS. Seriously, you’ll bawl your eyes out. 100% recommend. But, I read a gigantic chunk of it on an airplane of all places, I would NOT recommend that…..
What I liked (LOVED):
The characters:
Terra & Wyatt (main characters) were so relatable & no where near two dimensional… Their personalities were so REAL & I felt like I was getting to know them the same pace they were getting to know each other. They’re exactly what you’re looking for when you’re on the hunt for characters that are written beautifully. I actually disliked both of them at the beginning BUT DONT FEAR. You’ll grow to them love & cry for them & just ugh, they’re currently my babies. Also, the way their relationship with each other grew was so realistic, they helped each other find hope & light even in the darkest of times. I also loved how it wasn’t just a hormonal raged mess of a relationship with each other. OH & LETS NOT FORGET ABOUT THE CHARACTER GROWTH. BECAUSE LET ME TELL YOU HOW MUCH THEY GREW. Terra & Wyatt’s lives before the airplane crash was never easy, they both had battles they had to fight to overcome some really bad self-hatred thoughts. Their thoughts consisted of doubt, self hatred, & self-blame throughout the journey of finding civilization because what else is there to do in a stranded desert other than think? But as they go on, they have unexpected visits from people they never thought they’d see again & they go through obstacles when they thought it wasn’t possible to get any worse. These things help them discover who they truly are & that maybe, it is okay to be flawed. I cant stress enough how real these characters were.
The way it was written & the world building:
Its written quite differently from your normal read, but that doesn’t mean its a bad thing. I enjoyed the way it was immensely & I need books that are similar to this. You kind of get the feel of journal entries since it shows you dates, times, & scenes from the past & the present. Each chapter is in someone else’s point of view (either Terra or Wyatt) so it is in more than one point of view which was just AMAZING. I love novels that show us what more than one character is thinking since you get a broader range of what is happening. The different point of views helped so much with the world building because for example, what terra would fail to describe, you can be sure it’d pop up in the next chapter by Wyatt, & vice versa. Also, the flashbacks helped ALOT with making us understand the worlds of Wyatt & Terra before the crash. Also, the authors writing is so descriptive & helps you imagine everything so clearly yet it doesn’t suffocate you with paragraphs of details.
The only things I didn’t enjoy was that Terra & Wyatt just seemed so unreasonable sometimes, like when they’d constantly finish their water & when they’d find more they wouldn’t try to save it to last longer?? Also, I was a bit confused about the whole village scenes, I felt like it just all happened so fast but I admit it helped keep the story from getting boring. There was a couple typos but it didn’t take away from the story, at all. All in all, this is easily one of my favorite reads of the year & I cannot wait to read more from this author.
What I liked (LOVED):
The characters:
Terra & Wyatt (main characters) were so relatable & no where near two dimensional… Their personalities were so REAL & I felt like I was getting to know them the same pace they were getting to know each other. They’re exactly what you’re looking for when you’re on the hunt for characters that are written beautifully. I actually disliked both of them at the beginning BUT DONT FEAR. You’ll grow to them love & cry for them & just ugh, they’re currently my babies. Also, the way their relationship with each other grew was so realistic, they helped each other find hope & light even in the darkest of times. I also loved how it wasn’t just a hormonal raged mess of a relationship with each other. OH & LETS NOT FORGET ABOUT THE CHARACTER GROWTH. BECAUSE LET ME TELL YOU HOW MUCH THEY GREW. Terra & Wyatt’s lives before the airplane crash was never easy, they both had battles they had to fight to overcome some really bad self-hatred thoughts. Their thoughts consisted of doubt, self hatred, & self-blame throughout the journey of finding civilization because what else is there to do in a stranded desert other than think? But as they go on, they have unexpected visits from people they never thought they’d see again & they go through obstacles when they thought it wasn’t possible to get any worse. These things help them discover who they truly are & that maybe, it is okay to be flawed. I cant stress enough how real these characters were.
The way it was written & the world building:
Its written quite differently from your normal read, but that doesn’t mean its a bad thing. I enjoyed the way it was immensely & I need books that are similar to this. You kind of get the feel of journal entries since it shows you dates, times, & scenes from the past & the present. Each chapter is in someone else’s point of view (either Terra or Wyatt) so it is in more than one point of view which was just AMAZING. I love novels that show us what more than one character is thinking since you get a broader range of what is happening. The different point of views helped so much with the world building because for example, what terra would fail to describe, you can be sure it’d pop up in the next chapter by Wyatt, & vice versa. Also, the flashbacks helped ALOT with making us understand the worlds of Wyatt & Terra before the crash. Also, the authors writing is so descriptive & helps you imagine everything so clearly yet it doesn’t suffocate you with paragraphs of details.
The only things I didn’t enjoy was that Terra & Wyatt just seemed so unreasonable sometimes, like when they’d constantly finish their water & when they’d find more they wouldn’t try to save it to last longer?? Also, I was a bit confused about the whole village scenes, I felt like it just all happened so fast but I admit it helped keep the story from getting boring. There was a couple typos but it didn’t take away from the story, at all. All in all, this is easily one of my favorite reads of the year & I cannot wait to read more from this author.
January 22, 2018
Disclaimer: This review is solely my opinion. I was given a copy of this book from the author Olivia Bennett, in exchange for my honest review. The comments in this review do not reflect the views of the author.
This contemporary novel (I think it's contemporary) follows the journey of the two main characters, Terra and Wyatt. This book is written well and focuses on the lives of both the main characters. Each is struggling with their demons and are forced to face them head on or not survive. The book This novel begins from the perspective of Terra waking up from a terrible plane crash. She comes to her senses realizing that something terrible has happened. We then are shifted to the point of view of Wyatt and his view of waking from the plane crash. In the beginning, both experience grief, strength, awareness, and physical pain all before we get to the first 50 pages. The author spent time explaining each character's past, using foreshadowing as a method to do so. The reader gains an understanding of the moments leading up to the day of the crash and the moments both characters face to survive. They are both stranded in a desolate area hoping to survive long enough to make it to their families. Terra and Wyatt must decide what they are living for, they must not lose hope, and they must rely heavily on each other. We watch as these two spring into action, noting their survival instincts, rooting for them to survive, mourning their losses, and crying for their pain. A Cactus in the Valley is an incredibly captivating novel, and I recommend this to anyone. The author did a fantastic job capturing the attention of the reader throughout the entire story.
You can read my full review on my blog located in my profile at librarielbooreviews.wordpress.com
This contemporary novel (I think it's contemporary) follows the journey of the two main characters, Terra and Wyatt. This book is written well and focuses on the lives of both the main characters. Each is struggling with their demons and are forced to face them head on or not survive. The book This novel begins from the perspective of Terra waking up from a terrible plane crash. She comes to her senses realizing that something terrible has happened. We then are shifted to the point of view of Wyatt and his view of waking from the plane crash. In the beginning, both experience grief, strength, awareness, and physical pain all before we get to the first 50 pages. The author spent time explaining each character's past, using foreshadowing as a method to do so. The reader gains an understanding of the moments leading up to the day of the crash and the moments both characters face to survive. They are both stranded in a desolate area hoping to survive long enough to make it to their families. Terra and Wyatt must decide what they are living for, they must not lose hope, and they must rely heavily on each other. We watch as these two spring into action, noting their survival instincts, rooting for them to survive, mourning their losses, and crying for their pain. A Cactus in the Valley is an incredibly captivating novel, and I recommend this to anyone. The author did a fantastic job capturing the attention of the reader throughout the entire story.
You can read my full review on my blog located in my profile at librarielbooreviews.wordpress.com
September 9, 2018
Olivia, I know I've said this personally to you ,but seriously this is one of THE BEST books I've ever read in my life! I am still constantly thinking about Terra and Wyatt's well being.
With that said,
A Cactus In The Valley is a survival story where two teenagers survive a plane crash in the remote desert of Arizona. Terra and Wyatt go through tremulous days with the anticipation to return back to their families, in hopes that they make it out alive.
Terra and Wyatt's relationship begins and develops the moment that plane crashed and have impacted their lives forever. With the guidance and support of each other, Terra and Wyatt become this dynamic duo of survival and can accomplish anything as long as there together.
Olivia wrote this story in such a compelling way that leaves you lost within the words on the page and have you gripping your seat (literally).
From reading in two different perspectives, going back in fourth between Terra and Wyatt, you come to an understanding that there not much different from one another and if anything are two halves to what now is a whole.
If I could rate this book a 10-10 I would because this story was meant to be written and published.
I truly aspire to be as good as a writer as Olivia is today and HIGHLY recommend this book to all readers of any kind.
With that said,
A Cactus In The Valley is a survival story where two teenagers survive a plane crash in the remote desert of Arizona. Terra and Wyatt go through tremulous days with the anticipation to return back to their families, in hopes that they make it out alive.
Terra and Wyatt's relationship begins and develops the moment that plane crashed and have impacted their lives forever. With the guidance and support of each other, Terra and Wyatt become this dynamic duo of survival and can accomplish anything as long as there together.
Olivia wrote this story in such a compelling way that leaves you lost within the words on the page and have you gripping your seat (literally).
From reading in two different perspectives, going back in fourth between Terra and Wyatt, you come to an understanding that there not much different from one another and if anything are two halves to what now is a whole.
If I could rate this book a 10-10 I would because this story was meant to be written and published.
I truly aspire to be as good as a writer as Olivia is today and HIGHLY recommend this book to all readers of any kind.
April 11, 2018
"'Terra, we can't let go. We can't let go of the hope that someday, we'll make it back. That someone will find us. Because without this hope, there's no point in anything that we're doing.'"
Okay,
A long time ago I learned that true literature is writing that defines the human condition...or at least tries to discover it. Amazingly, Olivia J. Bennett has crafted a novel that follows that very definition. The type of writing that is within the pages of this gorgeous novel transcends what is customarily expected from a self published novel. Bennett has created a story that reaches out to her readers while dragging them into the arduous world of Terra and Wyatt. This book is defiantly not an act of vanity, but a true force of creativity. You can tell that Bennett is writing because she wants to share something deep and profound.
A Cactus in the Valley Forces you to feel what the characters are enduring (unlike any YA novel I've read). The book breaks you a thousand times, yet fills you with an infinite hope. I personally believe that this book is so much better than most of the YA books I've read. I truly hope that millions of people eventually read this story.
Finally, I blame you for making me miss a BUNCH of subway stops.
Thank you for creating true art Wordshaker.
Okay,
A long time ago I learned that true literature is writing that defines the human condition...or at least tries to discover it. Amazingly, Olivia J. Bennett has crafted a novel that follows that very definition. The type of writing that is within the pages of this gorgeous novel transcends what is customarily expected from a self published novel. Bennett has created a story that reaches out to her readers while dragging them into the arduous world of Terra and Wyatt. This book is defiantly not an act of vanity, but a true force of creativity. You can tell that Bennett is writing because she wants to share something deep and profound.
A Cactus in the Valley Forces you to feel what the characters are enduring (unlike any YA novel I've read). The book breaks you a thousand times, yet fills you with an infinite hope. I personally believe that this book is so much better than most of the YA books I've read. I truly hope that millions of people eventually read this story.
Finally, I blame you for making me miss a BUNCH of subway stops.
Thank you for creating true art Wordshaker.
March 21, 2019
Updated:
-a great survival story with well placed flashbacks (I love survival stories)
-the character growth was wild (like woah)
-a couple typos (ouch)
-while most of the language added to the realism of the various situations, some it felt a little extra. (and that's my opinion. Not a fact)
-the end was Bam Bam Bam with me thinking how the heck are they going to get out alive or find someone.
-a great survival story with well placed flashbacks (I love survival stories)
-the character growth was wild (like woah)
-a couple typos (ouch)
-while most of the language added to the realism of the various situations, some it felt a little extra. (and that's my opinion. Not a fact)
-the end was Bam Bam Bam with me thinking how the heck are they going to get out alive or find someone.
January 20, 2018
So, last night I sat down with a cup of tea and this book, intending to spend half hour or so reading the first few chapters of A Cactus In The Valley. This, however, did not happen. Instead, I plowed through the whole book in the space of four hours, only taking breaks to use the loo and make myself more tea. I can say with the utmost certainty that I enjoyed this book.
March 18, 2019
A Cactus in the Valley by Olivia J. Bennet is the first self-published work other than my own that I've had the pleasure to read. So I can most certainly say that this was quite a treat from the beginning. I found this novel fresh and impacting, two qualities I try to write in my own work. Thank you, Olivia, for this story.
At the end of the day, I gave this book 3.5 stars, because while I enjoyed the first half, I found the second somewhat lacking. This rating means I liked the novel but found some issues with it. Of course, it is all based on my own reading preferences so some of my issues with it might be what will make other readers fall in love with the story more than I have.
The prose of this novel was undeniably distinct and new. It was beautiful and heartbreakingly descriptive. I could see and feel everything the characters were experiencing. I usually find "isolation/survival" novels lacking in this aspect. I find that the descriptions are for full of information that do hardly anything to make me feel or to make me present in the story. Olivia's writing style is nothing like this. The setting of this story is very much its own character. It is rare that I read a book where the setting is not only important but also informs the plot and characters to a degree that requires a steady writing hand which Bennet certainly had. The opening scene with the plane was especially emotionally jarring and well-written. Olivia is truly a word-shaker.
The plot in hindsight didn't really have a lot to it. The setting and the characters really drove this story for me. With that said, what did happen seemed reasonable and not thrown in for the sake of mere convenience which I appreciate. However, there were some instances in which action sprang upon the characters too suddenly for my taste. Of course, it was realistic in the sense that things did spring very suddenly on the characters (that's just how it goes), but sometimes I felt there were scenes that could have benefitted from some leadup such as the characters considering the consequences of being next to the high ledge before someone falls etc.
My main issue with the book lies in the characters themselves. I find myself quite conflicted because I liked both Terra and Wyatt A LOT and was rooting for them throughout the story. I found each of their voices distinct and compelling. In most duel pov books I read, I find this lacking. Bennet excelled in this aspect. But by the latter part of the story, I found their actions rather immature (despite their age a trauma) and rather sudden due to the fact that we hardly ever hear their thoughts. Their pov's become stagnant with clipped actions. Which, while it worked with the continual actions of survival, their relationship seemed forced as a result. We hear Terra complaining about Wyatt being an arrogant ass but she never says or indicates why. Wyatt complains that Terra is too reserved and snappish but also never explains why. This caused me to feel disconnected from them. I enjoyed them each as individuals, but as a couple and in their interactions, I couldn't understand or connect with them.
The religious aspects of the story in the epilogue seemed to come out of nowhere. God isn't really mentioned at all until the very end when suddenly a character is claiming that their experiences in the desert as changed them Spiritually for the better. And while the passage of time between the end of the story and the epilogue could explain this, the fact that neither one of the main characters said anything about God before this, made the epilogue seem jarring and out of character. Despite this, I found the words in the epilogue strong and truthful. They were impactful and encouraging. And we find out the meaning of the title and it's beautiful.
I also did not realize how mature some of the content in this book was. It is not something that bothers me (maybe the language a bit) but it might be something other readers would want to know before reading it. The violence is plentiful and descriptions somewhat gory, but it's all realistic and not done unnecessarily so. I could have done with less language, but it was written realistically as well. The sexual content included talk and brief, vague descriptions of rape and some kissing.
Again, I'm not against the mature content. I appreciate that Bennet does not back down from hard topics and hard situations. Bring on the angst! Bring on the truth! If you like either one, this is definitely the book for you! Since I am reading this book 2 years after its publication, I can assume that Bennet has come a long way in her writing style. (I know I have in two years.) So I am more than excited to read what she creates next!
At the end of the day, I gave this book 3.5 stars, because while I enjoyed the first half, I found the second somewhat lacking. This rating means I liked the novel but found some issues with it. Of course, it is all based on my own reading preferences so some of my issues with it might be what will make other readers fall in love with the story more than I have.
The prose of this novel was undeniably distinct and new. It was beautiful and heartbreakingly descriptive. I could see and feel everything the characters were experiencing. I usually find "isolation/survival" novels lacking in this aspect. I find that the descriptions are for full of information that do hardly anything to make me feel or to make me present in the story. Olivia's writing style is nothing like this. The setting of this story is very much its own character. It is rare that I read a book where the setting is not only important but also informs the plot and characters to a degree that requires a steady writing hand which Bennet certainly had. The opening scene with the plane was especially emotionally jarring and well-written. Olivia is truly a word-shaker.
The plot in hindsight didn't really have a lot to it. The setting and the characters really drove this story for me. With that said, what did happen seemed reasonable and not thrown in for the sake of mere convenience which I appreciate. However, there were some instances in which action sprang upon the characters too suddenly for my taste. Of course, it was realistic in the sense that things did spring very suddenly on the characters (that's just how it goes), but sometimes I felt there were scenes that could have benefitted from some leadup such as the characters considering the consequences of being next to the high ledge before someone falls etc.
My main issue with the book lies in the characters themselves. I find myself quite conflicted because I liked both Terra and Wyatt A LOT and was rooting for them throughout the story. I found each of their voices distinct and compelling. In most duel pov books I read, I find this lacking. Bennet excelled in this aspect. But by the latter part of the story, I found their actions rather immature (despite their age a trauma) and rather sudden due to the fact that we hardly ever hear their thoughts. Their pov's become stagnant with clipped actions. Which, while it worked with the continual actions of survival, their relationship seemed forced as a result. We hear Terra complaining about Wyatt being an arrogant ass but she never says or indicates why. Wyatt complains that Terra is too reserved and snappish but also never explains why. This caused me to feel disconnected from them. I enjoyed them each as individuals, but as a couple and in their interactions, I couldn't understand or connect with them.
The religious aspects of the story in the epilogue seemed to come out of nowhere. God isn't really mentioned at all until the very end when suddenly a character is claiming that their experiences in the desert as changed them Spiritually for the better. And while the passage of time between the end of the story and the epilogue could explain this, the fact that neither one of the main characters said anything about God before this, made the epilogue seem jarring and out of character. Despite this, I found the words in the epilogue strong and truthful. They were impactful and encouraging. And we find out the meaning of the title and it's beautiful.
I also did not realize how mature some of the content in this book was. It is not something that bothers me (maybe the language a bit) but it might be something other readers would want to know before reading it. The violence is plentiful and descriptions somewhat gory, but it's all realistic and not done unnecessarily so. I could have done with less language, but it was written realistically as well. The sexual content included talk and brief, vague descriptions of rape and some kissing.
Again, I'm not against the mature content. I appreciate that Bennet does not back down from hard topics and hard situations. Bring on the angst! Bring on the truth! If you like either one, this is definitely the book for you! Since I am reading this book 2 years after its publication, I can assume that Bennet has come a long way in her writing style. (I know I have in two years.) So I am more than excited to read what she creates next!
December 4, 2018
3.5 stars!
ACITV is about two teenagers, Terra and Wyatt, who survive a plane crash and go through Arizona's Sonoran Desert in search of rescue. It isn't easy, especially when they're still dealing with past trauma and demons.
The story is told from both points of views. So you see inside Terra's head as well as Wyatt's. We also get flashbacks, all are well written and very well placed throughout the novel. It helps give insight to each character, developing them without info dumping all at once.
Though I do wish their darkest secrets hadn't been revealed so fast. But I guess any other way might not have worked as well either...it would've been flashbacks with filler words just to bring some suspense and “ease” us in.
Now, despite that this story is deeply emotional and very powerful. It is written very beautifully, compellingly, and with purpose.
I will not get over how descriptive Bennett's writing is. I could see everything so clearly. I felt the words. (Though I would've liked some of the similes to be cut out)
There were so many hits to my heart. At times, I was convinced I was struggling just as bad as them, my tongue going as dry as Terra's and Wyatt's as they fought dehydration and I would have to chug water.
Every bit of this story is about survival. Not just them physically surviving the crash and going on through the harsh desert. But mentally and emotionally as they accept and fight their inner demons and their losses. It's also about friendship and love, protecting more than just yourself.
“People are fragile, animalistic to the core. I guess, if you knock them around they'll think they did something to deserve it.”
Keep in mind there are heavy issues being talked about here in ACITV. But they are important and also handled with care, maturity, and told with enough detail to get the point across and spread light on the subject. Even so, read with caution. Trigger warning includes abuse (both physical and verbal) as well as alcoholism.
Religion and God are also discussed but it's not something that is shoved down your throat and overtakes everything. Not once, despite my lack of faith, did it ruin or lower my rating. But it is there just to let you know.
All in all, I enjoyed this book very much. Again the descriptions are very well done albeit the overuse of similes. Though I didn't quite enjoy a part toward the end involving Native Americans...I will keep from elaborating as not to have any type of spoilers, but something about it...I just didn't quite enjoy it.
I was also expecting more resolution and emotion at the end. Still, it remained strong and was emotional. And I'm glad Terra and Wyatt were able to come out alive, realize their strength, and appreciate all they went through and will go through because of their struggles. This story will stick with me.
I recommend this book and I cannot wait to read Olivia's next one. And anything she decides to share with the world.
ACITV is about two teenagers, Terra and Wyatt, who survive a plane crash and go through Arizona's Sonoran Desert in search of rescue. It isn't easy, especially when they're still dealing with past trauma and demons.
The story is told from both points of views. So you see inside Terra's head as well as Wyatt's. We also get flashbacks, all are well written and very well placed throughout the novel. It helps give insight to each character, developing them without info dumping all at once.
Though I do wish their darkest secrets hadn't been revealed so fast. But I guess any other way might not have worked as well either...it would've been flashbacks with filler words just to bring some suspense and “ease” us in.
Now, despite that this story is deeply emotional and very powerful. It is written very beautifully, compellingly, and with purpose.
I will not get over how descriptive Bennett's writing is. I could see everything so clearly. I felt the words. (Though I would've liked some of the similes to be cut out)
There were so many hits to my heart. At times, I was convinced I was struggling just as bad as them, my tongue going as dry as Terra's and Wyatt's as they fought dehydration and I would have to chug water.
Every bit of this story is about survival. Not just them physically surviving the crash and going on through the harsh desert. But mentally and emotionally as they accept and fight their inner demons and their losses. It's also about friendship and love, protecting more than just yourself.
“People are fragile, animalistic to the core. I guess, if you knock them around they'll think they did something to deserve it.”
Keep in mind there are heavy issues being talked about here in ACITV. But they are important and also handled with care, maturity, and told with enough detail to get the point across and spread light on the subject. Even so, read with caution. Trigger warning includes abuse (both physical and verbal) as well as alcoholism.
Religion and God are also discussed but it's not something that is shoved down your throat and overtakes everything. Not once, despite my lack of faith, did it ruin or lower my rating. But it is there just to let you know.
All in all, I enjoyed this book very much. Again the descriptions are very well done albeit the overuse of similes. Though I didn't quite enjoy a part toward the end involving Native Americans...I will keep from elaborating as not to have any type of spoilers, but something about it...I just didn't quite enjoy it.
I was also expecting more resolution and emotion at the end. Still, it remained strong and was emotional. And I'm glad Terra and Wyatt were able to come out alive, realize their strength, and appreciate all they went through and will go through because of their struggles. This story will stick with me.
I recommend this book and I cannot wait to read Olivia's next one. And anything she decides to share with the world.
January 23, 2019
*4.5 stars*
A Cactus in the Valley is about two teens who are thrust into a, to put it lightly, difficult situation.
Wyatt and Terra's story is one of survival, and both of them know what it's like to just survive because they've been doing it practically their whole lives.
Wyatt had to deal with an abusive father and absent mother.
Terra was been raped, in her family's inn, at a young age.
Both Terra and Wyatt don't trust each other at first, but have to come together in order to survive and make it through the desert.
Their story isn't just about surviving though, it's also about finding redemption in an unlikely place. They find out what it means to truly persevere, and what it means to forgive others and even forgive themselves.
Walking through the desert certainly isn't easy, but they face these challenges head on, and hold onto hope of making it back.
I fell in love with Wyatt and Terra's story and cheered them on as they made their way through the desert. The writing was amazing and kept you engaged through the whole book. With such heavy topics dealt with in the flashback, and the severity of the situation the characters are going through, it's balanced with the characters humor, while not taking away from the important topics dealt with through the book. I liked how even though Wyatt and Terra's love story is kinda instalove, it was also slow burn as they dealt with their demons.
The one complaint I have with this book is the amount of language. Most of the time it didn't take away from the story, it was just something that I'm not a fan of.
Overall I really enjoyed this book, and would definitely recommend it(to older teens because of the content)!
And after A Cactus in the Valley, I'm excited to see what Olivia comes up with next!
A Cactus in the Valley is about two teens who are thrust into a, to put it lightly, difficult situation.
Wyatt and Terra's story is one of survival, and both of them know what it's like to just survive because they've been doing it practically their whole lives.
Wyatt had to deal with an abusive father and absent mother.
Terra was been raped, in her family's inn, at a young age.
Both Terra and Wyatt don't trust each other at first, but have to come together in order to survive and make it through the desert.
Their story isn't just about surviving though, it's also about finding redemption in an unlikely place. They find out what it means to truly persevere, and what it means to forgive others and even forgive themselves.
Walking through the desert certainly isn't easy, but they face these challenges head on, and hold onto hope of making it back.
I fell in love with Wyatt and Terra's story and cheered them on as they made their way through the desert. The writing was amazing and kept you engaged through the whole book. With such heavy topics dealt with in the flashback, and the severity of the situation the characters are going through, it's balanced with the characters humor, while not taking away from the important topics dealt with through the book. I liked how even though Wyatt and Terra's love story is kinda instalove, it was also slow burn as they dealt with their demons.
The one complaint I have with this book is the amount of language. Most of the time it didn't take away from the story, it was just something that I'm not a fan of.
Overall I really enjoyed this book, and would definitely recommend it(to older teens because of the content)!
And after A Cactus in the Valley, I'm excited to see what Olivia comes up with next!
November 25, 2018
The integrity of this book is applaudable. Olivia Bennet’s writing is poetry, and the amount of figurative language she uses is astounding. Now, books like this may not be for everyone, but I enjoyed having to look back and actually think about what the author was trying to convey with her beautiful and twisting words. The compelling flashbacks and intertwined points of view made for two very different outlooks on the whole plot of the book. Olivia does a splendid job of building and developing her characters, with past experiences and memories that shape who they were throughout their trek.
I highly recommend this book and the fact that it’s written by an independent author makes it all the more incredible for how good it turned out. I’d give it 3.5 stars. I rounded up to 4 stars. For the rest of this review, go check out my blog! https://www.literarylightings.com/201...
I highly recommend this book and the fact that it’s written by an independent author makes it all the more incredible for how good it turned out. I’d give it 3.5 stars. I rounded up to 4 stars. For the rest of this review, go check out my blog! https://www.literarylightings.com/201...
June 27, 2019
Disclaimer: I am very close friends with author, but I am leaving a completely honest review!
I believe this is a very good book! It is well written, especially considering the author was in high school when she wrote it. It tackled extremely raw topics, thoughts, feelings, and events, and the character development reflected all of it. I went into it with hesitation because I am not a huge fan of the genre, but I am genuinely surprised with how much I enjoyed it. There are a couple missed grammar/spelling mistakes, but they are easy to miss and look over as you immerse yourself in the words around them. I definitely would say this is for ages 16+ because of the topics it covers, as well as the strong language. This book will definitely have you hooked from the very beginning!
I believe this is a very good book! It is well written, especially considering the author was in high school when she wrote it. It tackled extremely raw topics, thoughts, feelings, and events, and the character development reflected all of it. I went into it with hesitation because I am not a huge fan of the genre, but I am genuinely surprised with how much I enjoyed it. There are a couple missed grammar/spelling mistakes, but they are easy to miss and look over as you immerse yourself in the words around them. I definitely would say this is for ages 16+ because of the topics it covers, as well as the strong language. This book will definitely have you hooked from the very beginning!
October 15, 2018
Just wow. All goods for this book. As much as I had get used to it in the beginning (I almost only read fantasy), it soon happened that I couldn’t stop anymore. And halfway I was really having some troubles of my own, and I felt so bad, but this book is so much about facing your fears and thoughts and troubles... it really helped me to look differently at the things I was going through. Thank you for that!
And I totally fell in love with Terra and Wyatt. They are such lovely, realistic human beings. Everything felt so recognisable (not the plain crash of course.. but everyone has a crash in their lives at some point I guess and then you need to keep going and solve it al out and talk about it and speak it out. That’s what this book brought me, it made me think, it made me feel, it made me talk.
Wonderful <3
And I totally fell in love with Terra and Wyatt. They are such lovely, realistic human beings. Everything felt so recognisable (not the plain crash of course.. but everyone has a crash in their lives at some point I guess and then you need to keep going and solve it al out and talk about it and speak it out. That’s what this book brought me, it made me think, it made me feel, it made me talk.
Wonderful <3
May 16, 2019
I loved this book so much! It tackles the harsh issues of life beautifully, but it also springs forth a lot of hope. I love the Christian message in this book, and how well it is woven in! In fact, every element is woven in perfectly, and the writing style is elegant and vibrant; I could picture everything described perfectly! Terra and Wyatt were perfectly flawed characters and I loved them so much! Whatever you’re going through in life, or if you just want a beautiful story full of hope and pain, with the stronger being hope, I’d recommend this book! I definitely look forward to reading more from this author!
March 6, 2019
This book impressed me for many reasons. One is that the author was so young when she wrote this but that didn’t stop her from writing about hard topics and she really made these characters come to life. If you are a fan of character driven books, this is for you. I had a few problems with the pacing and at times the long descriptions took me out of the story. But the characters kept me going. I immediately connected with Terra based on all that she’s been through. I really loved seeing such an important story from a fellow young Christian writer. I can’t wait to see what Bennett does next.
August 23, 2018
I know it took me almost three months to read but that's not because of the book. well, okay, it is. it's a super intense book with some really tough stuff going on. one of those ones I have to be in the right place to read it, and once I was, I read the last 3/4 in about a day and a half. Absolutely incredible.
March 6, 2018
Disclaimer: I received a copy of this book from the author in exchange for an honest review.
5/5 stars!
“My name is Terra Lombardi, and I am a shooting star falling from the heavens.”
*
No child should have to bury their parent at the age of 16, nor watch them be eaten by wolves but that’s exactly what Terra and Wyatt did on the second day after their place crashed in a desert of Arizona. As the two teenagers fight the odds and try to survive on their own they battle their inner demons along the way.
*
The description was my favourite part of the book because I could imagine the pain that Terra Lombardi was going through. Her voice was raw and real and was beautifully represented.
I loved the genuine content of the book as the plot was very well thought out and I loved every aspect of the book. The back and forth perspective change from Terra and Wyatt as well as a different look about the characters as the book constantly jumps between their past and their current situations.
*
“Nothing is so terribly messed up that it can’t be fixed.”
*
I loved how Wyatt and Terra grew more fond of each other as the book came along, it made me love watching their story unfold. The twists also kept me intrigued as the storyline is more than just two teenagers being stranded, it’s a story of trust, love and perseverance. The story is not only an adventure but it is also a thrilling story for two teeenagers who fight the odds to survive. I found Wyatt’s character intriguing he lets his guard down around Terra throughout the story and the two really open your eyes to how you would act in certain situations, especially being stranded with someone you didn’t know until that time.
*
“You live everyday. You die once.”
I would recommend this thrilling book to those who love adventure, fiction and coming of age stories as A Cactus In the Valley is a story worth reading and will have you looking at all book differently. Description is key and Olivia J. Bennett produced the elements perfectly. This 5/5 star book is one that needs to be on your to be read list, NOW!
You can purchase her book on amazon by clicking the following link- https://www.amazon.com/Cactus-Valley-...
5/5 stars!
“My name is Terra Lombardi, and I am a shooting star falling from the heavens.”
*
No child should have to bury their parent at the age of 16, nor watch them be eaten by wolves but that’s exactly what Terra and Wyatt did on the second day after their place crashed in a desert of Arizona. As the two teenagers fight the odds and try to survive on their own they battle their inner demons along the way.
*
The description was my favourite part of the book because I could imagine the pain that Terra Lombardi was going through. Her voice was raw and real and was beautifully represented.
I loved the genuine content of the book as the plot was very well thought out and I loved every aspect of the book. The back and forth perspective change from Terra and Wyatt as well as a different look about the characters as the book constantly jumps between their past and their current situations.
*
“Nothing is so terribly messed up that it can’t be fixed.”
*
I loved how Wyatt and Terra grew more fond of each other as the book came along, it made me love watching their story unfold. The twists also kept me intrigued as the storyline is more than just two teenagers being stranded, it’s a story of trust, love and perseverance. The story is not only an adventure but it is also a thrilling story for two teeenagers who fight the odds to survive. I found Wyatt’s character intriguing he lets his guard down around Terra throughout the story and the two really open your eyes to how you would act in certain situations, especially being stranded with someone you didn’t know until that time.
*
“You live everyday. You die once.”
I would recommend this thrilling book to those who love adventure, fiction and coming of age stories as A Cactus In the Valley is a story worth reading and will have you looking at all book differently. Description is key and Olivia J. Bennett produced the elements perfectly. This 5/5 star book is one that needs to be on your to be read list, NOW!
You can purchase her book on amazon by clicking the following link- https://www.amazon.com/Cactus-Valley-...
January 21, 2019
Disclaimer- This book was sent to me for free in exchange for an honest review. With that being said, let’s jump in to the review itself.
This book definitely deserves all the praise and the hype it gets. It’s absolutely amazing.
A Cactus In The Valley is completely different from what I’m used to reading, but the premise intrigued me and the writing and character development kept me engaged and wanting more.
The most prominent (and frankly impressive) part about A Cactus In The Valley is the character development. I know it can be hard to create three dimensional characters that readers can relate to, but Bennett managed to hit the nail on the head and I found myself in awe the entire time I was reading. I found myself feeling bad for both Wyatt and Terra in their quest to survive and in the midst of their own personal flashbacks, which I think helped me understand more of who they were as individuals and it made it easier to differentiate between the two considering the book is told in dual point of views. In a way it almost felt like they were my own friends and I was beside them the entire time, which I think is a major accomplishment.
The second thing I loved about A Cactus In The Valley is Bennett’s way of writing. Its simple but effective and she manages to paint a picture in the readers mind and immerse them into the world of the Arizona desert.
My only critiques are that I felt like in certain spots she used a little more metaphors than what was needed, but overall the writing was amazing and I really enjoyed it.
And now this isn’t a critique, but rather a comment/question. I need to know if Wyatt and Terra stayed together because their romance was placed so well in A Cactus In The Valley that it felt almost natural. It didn’t feel rushed at all and personally I LOVED them together. I ship them, so I need to know if they at least stayed together or stayed in contact cause I couldn’t really gather from the epilogue.
Otherwise, this is definitely a must-read for anyone who loves survival stories, amazing writing, and a page turner to read in one sitting.
This book definitely deserves all the praise and the hype it gets. It’s absolutely amazing.
A Cactus In The Valley is completely different from what I’m used to reading, but the premise intrigued me and the writing and character development kept me engaged and wanting more.
The most prominent (and frankly impressive) part about A Cactus In The Valley is the character development. I know it can be hard to create three dimensional characters that readers can relate to, but Bennett managed to hit the nail on the head and I found myself in awe the entire time I was reading. I found myself feeling bad for both Wyatt and Terra in their quest to survive and in the midst of their own personal flashbacks, which I think helped me understand more of who they were as individuals and it made it easier to differentiate between the two considering the book is told in dual point of views. In a way it almost felt like they were my own friends and I was beside them the entire time, which I think is a major accomplishment.
The second thing I loved about A Cactus In The Valley is Bennett’s way of writing. Its simple but effective and she manages to paint a picture in the readers mind and immerse them into the world of the Arizona desert.
My only critiques are that I felt like in certain spots she used a little more metaphors than what was needed, but overall the writing was amazing and I really enjoyed it.
And now this isn’t a critique, but rather a comment/question. I need to know if Wyatt and Terra stayed together because their romance was placed so well in A Cactus In The Valley that it felt almost natural. It didn’t feel rushed at all and personally I LOVED them together. I ship them, so I need to know if they at least stayed together or stayed in contact cause I couldn’t really gather from the epilogue.
Otherwise, this is definitely a must-read for anyone who loves survival stories, amazing writing, and a page turner to read in one sitting.
November 13, 2018
This story is told beautifully. Terra and Wyatt were fascinating, and their fight for survival in the desert kept me turning pages. I stayed up late til my eyes were blurry and I couldn’t read anymore. There were many times I read a line from the book and I just had to put it down and think about it, because it was so powerful. I loved everything about this book, and it deserves 5 Stars and a place on my favorites’ shelf. I can’t wait to read the other stories Olivia creates!
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