Well.... This was a little disappointing, but I can afford this decent finish.
As a first disappointment, we have Maria's past, not for the lack of surprises, but for the inconsistency of the writing, the narrative and the lack of logic in the respective parts...... I mean, while I might think the writing remains decent , the narrative seems strangely misplaced. The situations that the characters find themselves in are poorly explained and even considering the point of view of fiction, they are incongruous and do not do justice to human complexity. Most of them later turn out to be predictable plot twists and even with very cliché settings. In general, reactions do not seem to connect well with the grandeur of the facts, whether this is due to the author's incompetence in passing the flow of information so that we can think like the characters or simply because of his clear lack of cohesion that seems to laugh at all the complexity. human, like a political stand-up show in which satire only hides the hate
Flashbacks are commonly used to bring empathy, it's the most practical way to feel the pain of others and their sins, but it seems that some authors completely forget the power of context and think that all feelings can be conveyed by a quick and superficial writing. ..... Shit, that's not how literature works!
I can clearly see a depth here and I catch it before being drowned by the pressure of the cliché, but this small remnant doesn't serve to overcome all the negative pressure caused by the sea, thus creating a typhoon, a maritime distortion that takes everything around it. , even the remnant of depth
(Hey... Was I the only one who laughed when Kazuki kills a dog? I'm not a sadist or ibama's worst enemy {I leave that title to Hoshino}, but the narrative construction of this was comical shit lol)
But, with the slight inclination of the narrative, a clear change of quality appears, bringing itself to the vision of Kazuki and later... The "approximation writing" here ties to Kazuki and his endless loops, thus generating well-written literary plot twists. pleasant people who manage to hide a little between mystery and obviousness, the latter usually camouflaged by how absurd the situation is (in a positive and creative way)
Of course, we have an interesting amount of philosophies here, with some decent answers!!!
Lies are cheap, truth is expensive. Human beings usually take the path of least resistance.
The choice is yours: watch the crack in the wall grow until the bricks fall on your head, or tear down the opaque wall and build a low fence or a wall with windows, to let the truth shine through.
But obviously, still, something cheap can still be more important than something expensive, everything is based on reframing the context of what you really want to protect at the moment and this is reason enough to lie or tell the truth.
Lies have always been two sides of a coin, they are neither absolute evil nor the ultimate good. In the same way they can be used as a refuge to protect yourself or someone, for example a child who had his father's absence as a mark of loneliness for much of his childhood and if he asks if his father is still alive, just we have to lie that he sure is, after all, the only duty of children is to smile and be happy and we can't spoil all this by throwing the cold and mysterious reality for them. In the same way, they can be used as a way to hurt and I don't even need to explain this, after all the amount of kidnapping scams or fake products speaks for itself.
But regardless, as long as there was humility in the heart of a lost man, there would be courage in the heart of a hero. While everything seems to be falling apart, there will always be someone who will be willing to protect you from the rubble, even if they hide this virtue behind a black and somber layer. So, scream for help and stop carrying silly guilt that will develop into an infinite trauma, because then, surely someone will try to help you
So when Aya Otonashi calls for help, she becomes Maria and so the empty box that is her fearless knight who lost everything appears once again.
Every human being makes mistakes, that is obvious, but every human being also has the right to apologize, and it will be this excuse that will hold his momentary status. It is from the moment you are able to overcome the bubble of pride and take the next step that you can mend what has been cracked by the past.
Yes... Human complexity is infinite, so when interspersed with another infinity, equalities will appear infinitely. So, even without your connoisseur, the world didn't end, you just need to give the world and its people another chance. Just like astronauts landing on the moon, this was a small step towards change, but a huge step towards salvation.
In the end, with all the distortions caused by the box, one's indestructible motive still remains! A boy who traded his everyday life for solid love and finally understood what it's like to connect with someone and what "the eternal" means to this idiotic world of constant changes caused by the box that mock the everyday!!!! To love is to never give up, it is to capture this fine line between a discolored world and another one surrounded by the organoleptic rainbow. From the moment you let go of it, it means that love is lost as well as what you wanted to prevail in the end.
Any idiotic rebuttal of this fact is probably a denial of reality...... After all, when was there a love that involved abandoning oneself?
Just like an illusionist who pretends to create distortions in reality, this is this author's fantasy world, sometimes allowing himself to be the magician of his own story and sometimes being inferior to his own audience, but in the end, his career is over. and his magic was marked, even just as a form of illusion, becoming a real writer