I recently read this book called The Lion, the Witch, and the Wardrobe by C.S. Lewis. This story is about four children going on an adventure to Narnia.
Lucy, Susan, Peter, and Edmund were shipped to this Professor’s house to help. They were playing hide and seek when Lucy found a wardrobe. She hid inside and started walking in. It leads her to Narnia where she met Mr. Tumnus. Narnia was ruled by the White Witch. Mr. Tumnus told Lucy that if four humans come to Narnia and sits on the four chairs, the White Witch’s magic will weaken. She went back to the mansion through the wardrobe. She tells the other children about Narnia but they don’t believe her. The next day, they kept playing hide and seek. This time, Lucy goes back to Narnia. Edmund follows her into the wardrobe with curiosity. He meets the White Witch and she told him to bring all his siblings because the witch knows that if four humans sit on the chairs, her power will disappear. Walking back to the wardrobe, he meets Lucy. They go back to the mansion. Lucy says Edmund has proof that it is true but Edmund says they were just playing a game to Peter and Susan. Lucy is very mad. The four of them goes into Narnia through the wardrobe and Lucy brings them through the wardrobe to Narnia. Peter was mad at Edmund for lying to all of them. They find out that Mr. Tumnus got arrested because he saved Lucy. They go back to his cave and meet Mr. Beaver. Mr. Beaver tells them that they have to find the great lion Aslan to beat the White Witch. They go to find Aslan and fights with the Witch’s army. They win and Aslan leaves. The four of them become kings and queens of Narnia.
I really liked the author world building and I felt like the world was real. He described the setting and the characters very well. All the settings, and the characters were all very interesting. I also liked this book because I am into this kind of book which is also fantasy and adventure books.
That doesn’t mean that there are no bad things. When Santa comes to give them gifts, it doesn’t make sense that he suddenly came. Some parts of the story is also confusing to understand. Making the points clearer will make the story so much better in my opinion. The author used excellent word choice to describe the setting and characters and the situation.
In conclusion, the overall story is interesting and the author used excellent word choice to describe the 8 point story arc in detail. Things he can improve is his clarity in stories.