I encountered 4 of the 7 essays in this collection in different undergraduate music subjects, each on quite different topics. In a class on music history from 1600-1750 we read the chapter 2 essay on Monteverdi, memorable for its reference to Stephen Greenblatt and the history of science's attitudes to female sexuality, and the resulting aesthetic of equal two-part sexual friction in Monteverdi's vocal lines; in a musicology capstone we read chapter 3, thinking about whether there is such a thing as a Woman's Music or a Gay Man's Music; in a class on nineteenth-century music we read chapter 5 and learn about the violent sexuality of the symphony; and in a class on twentieth-century music we read chapter 6 and learn about Laurie Anderson and the differences between mind, body, and technology.
All this is to say that it's a diverse collection, not planned as a unity, as McClary says in her introduction, and I think encountering her work in this somewhat fragmented manner can actually be a positive. One possible weakness I would offer on this point is the fact that, since her essays seem to cater to a wide range of interdisciplinary readers, they inevitably only begin to open up a particular problem, and more than a few of them end by conceding that they risk going down an oversimplifying route. Reading each essay in a row can reveal a certain repetitiveness of structure and argumentative movement. For example, McClary is quite conscious that hypostatising or essentialising a Woman's Music might not be a philosophically or tactically sound thing to do, even if it seems to follow from the plausible and thoroughly-argued claim that tonal desire is effectively a patriarchally-organised kind of desire. This concession repeats itself in the conclusion to several of the essays in different ways. Beethoven, for example, in his extreme symphonic violence, could be subverting or staging that violence; it's hard for McClary to issue a definitive verdict. However, this is also the flip-side of a great strength of this book, its accessibility and provocativeness.
I might also say that, even though she comments on her unusual writing style, and hypes it up a little bit as an attempt "to enact within language the musical processes I seek to describe" (xiii), she could probably be quite a bit more experimental than she actually is. This is the risk of offering an interdisciplinary work that is also interdisciplinarily stylistic: McClary's discipline, musicology, is, or was, notorious for a particularly dull writing style, while so much of literary criticism and continental philosophy has taken a willfully difficult or conceptually performative style as a norm.
The only thing that I actually don't like about this volume are the instances where she disparages Freud and Freudian theory. It's a familiar story: McClary will offer a throwaway comment, such as "The surveillance and control that had always characterised the psychiatric profession became focused on the "problem" of Woman, and so it has remained with substantial help from Darwin and Freud" (84). Then, on the next page, she will indicate that she substantially agrees with Freud, seemingly without realising it: "One of the conventions governing representations of madwomen in most media is that they are silent. They are seen but are rarely given the power of language, are almost never given the opportunity to speak their own experiences" (85). Freud's innovation lay precisely in asking his patients to speak, in believing that the cure required listening to the patient, learning, rather than imposing, a discourse.
It is clear that McClary is familiar with psychoanalysis because so much of her most famous work is explicitly psychoanalytical - her reading of Beethoven's Ninth Symphony is nothing if not Freudian - so my complaint here is mostly just registering my displeasure at a facile history of psychiatric thought.
Somewhat along these lines, one of the most interesting things I got out of reading this book all the way through is the way McClary is actually able to incorporate big names in music, big theoretical positions, into her own paradigm in a revealing way. For example, it turns out that McClary has a certain theoretical valorisation of Arnold Schoenberg, because both his atonal music and his writings, at least for a period, indicated an awareness of the images and structures of the sexual binary that dominated the history of music and a willingness to step outside of that binary, to write music with an asexual desire, so to speak. Likewise, McClary thinks that Heinrich Schenker's extensive graphic analytical system effectively bears out her claim that tonality is a sexually structured language, because each of Schenker's graphs reduces to one of a handful of Ursatzen, or underlying structures of tension and inevitable resolution.
McClary's project is thus one of revaluation and revision, but also one of incorporation and suggestion. It's very productive and I think she's delivered, in her later and contemporary work, on many of the opening remarks that characterise this volume's conclusions.