I want to make it very clear I feel baited by this book.
Because for at least half the book I felt like it was going to be absolute shit. It was 150 pages of rehashing the same bland, boring character who distinctly lack personality or anything interesting, melded in with a plot that seemed to be veering off course suddenly while simultaneously going no where at all, all the while the writing was as uninspired, mediocre, and predictable as usual. Oh, Anna Banks, you never fail to remind me what a subpar writer you are.
But then, but then (!) there was a glimmer of hope. Halfway through the book, (and this is where I got baited,) something interesting actually happens. SOMETHING INTERESTING, IN A SERIES THAT HAS HAD LITERALLY NOTHING INTERESTING HAPPEN, happens. I was floored, but kind of excited. The book went from an absolute chore to get through, a book I was just skimming through, to something worth getting invested in.
And I mean, let's be frank, Tarik and Sepora have basically no chemistry. They're kind of shitty people, who do nothing but doubt each other and have useless moments of conflict. There's nothing romantic about their relationship, they don't even seem to like each other, and when they get separated in this book, it gets better because of it. Sepora kind of becomes a likable character, and the reader gets to learn new things about her and her ability, and a different kingdom. I was digging the side characters that popped up, and where the plot was going. I was like, hey, this book could pull out a three. This could be a three start book, with the interjection of some decent politics, tension, and plot progression.
I was baited.
This is my problem with Anna Banks as an author, and I get suckered by her every time. She has good ideas. She has interesting plots. She has ...okay.. characters. She just doesn't know what to do with them. This book is barely 300 pages long, and it needed to be so much longer. The second half of this book starts interjecting new characters, new subplots, interesting themes, and actual plot progression ... which goes absolutely no where. Banks is an author who never goes anywhere with her characters. She just seems like she forgets about the shit she's writing, and figures her readers are too stupid to remember, too. But I remember. I 'member.
Tell me more about the science (for lack a better word) behind Sepora's abilities. Tell me more about these other characters. Tell me more about the politics, the culture, the caste system, anything. Tell me something!
Oh, no, no. Can't do that. We have to get back to will they/won't they. It must be no less than a dozen times Sepora and Tarik decide they hate each other, then they don't and they're going to get married, then they're not, then they are again, then ... please shoot me in the head. There's nothing romantic or interesting about two characters who are incapable of communicating, or having any kind of consistency with their emotions. In the span of 20 pages they go down the will they/won't they road twice. It's irritating, it's stupid. It's nonsense. It's the mark of a bad writer.
So I got baited. I expected the book to be shit, got baited that it might be decent, and then realized no, I was right, the book is shit.
The thing is, I did get interested. I did find something of worth in this book, but Banks is such a terrible writer she couldn't hold onto that magic in a bottle. She couldn't finish out her plots, evolve her characters, or even write a semi-coherent ending.
I wanted better from this book, even if I didn't expect it, and the worst part is, for a half second there, I saw it. But in the end, I just ended up with shit.