The story of the crew of a coal burning US destroyer, USS Delilah, on duty in the Philippines in the year prior to US entry into WWI in early 1917 – over one hundred years ago -, and in the aftermath of the Tagalog Insurgency (Filipino-American War, 1899-1902). It was based on the author’s personal experience on the destroyer USS Chauncey (DD-3). It is not a story of sea battles. All the action is shore based expeditions and liberty, fast steaming and rescue operations, and of dry-dock refitting of the ship.
This novel is a worthy read that I thoroughly recommend for naval surface fleet professionals and naval historians, but it is a very tough read for even strong general readers. The text is dense and rich with long, complex sentences that require grammatical diagraming to decipher, and extensive vocabulary that demands a dictionary at hand. (Examples below.) The descriptions of the sea, sky and jungles are especially captivating, but this feast of words will seem verbose to modern readers. Published in 1941, there are also some objectionable (“politically incorrect”) terms and attitudes.
The mastery of this book is the portrayal of the crew, both enlisted and officers. Naval ship crew culture and protocol may be baffling to readers without some military experience. The author treats the crew as an integral part of a complex mechanical machine, like the parts of a fine clock. He progressively examines the construction (physical portrait), idiosyncrasies (personality and mannerisms), and condition (age, wear and tear) of each member (for thirty-six of the sixty-seven enlisted crew members and all four officers) but only in context of the other parts around it. Their past histories and homelives are not relevant. [For example, the Captain’s wife is immaterial to the life of the ship and crew except if she constrains the normal behavior of the Captain, for example when the ship hosts a formal party for the officers of the fleet and naval base.] The author never uses crew first names and they are usually referred to by their position or rank, like "the quartermaster first-class", "the machinist mate", "the ordinary seaman", "the fireman", "the water-tender", "the chief boatswain’s mate", or "the ensign".
It takes almost three quarters of the book, but the reader steadily begins to project and predict how the crew will act and react to orders and events. It is thrilling to watch a precision machine in action and stirring when it is pressed beyond its limits.
This book absolutely begs for its second volume. The author intended it as a two volume work, but unfortunately was never able to finish it. Readers will feel a real sense of regret not knowing the ultimate fate of the Delilah crew (especially knowing the tragic fate of the author's ship, the USS Chauncey).
[Single sentence example (p400): “His gaze encountered no fabulous, predatory hovering, nothing but the infinite blackness; save where a small, sharply defined, uneven rift in it disclosed, as above the top of some chasm in the universe, and at a greater distance than he ever had imagined or dreamed, a few eerily vivid stars that gave no light, that hung there, in the sombre blue clarity above that unthinkably deep hole in black nothingness, looking awesomely, thee-dimensionally like what they really were, like vast globes of molten metal, like monstrous specks of reflective dust, like spheres, glittering and iridescent, of frozen ash, like swirls of flaming gas towering higher than the world, all unconvincingly decreased by the illusion of the visible distance, frightful in itself, to a size no greater than that of animal eyes peering from thickets on summer nights.”]
[Single sentence example (p476-7): “There were only thirty or so of them aboard, surly, exhausted and incapable of wonder, to shuffle into double rank along the starboard side of the deck with Ensign Woodbridge and Ensign Snell at their front; and though most of them were semi-naked, without shoes or with them laced on bare feet, though they were soiled with blood, and wrung to the point of collapse by long striving, by lack of sleep and by assaults of tearing emotion, and though a murderer who had been one of them was even now lashed out there on their flank like a massive, naked, gold-toothed, Irish Christ crucified on steel, a monstrous stigma gaping in the centre of his brow and the blood of a friend splattered over his body, they yet managed to impress themselves and their Captain – who faced them with the Executive officer at his left elbow—as a ship’s company, as a collective being that had sustained itself, its peculiar, sedulously patterned self, in the face of what had proved too much for nearly each of the individuals composing it.
‘Atten…tion!’ ordered Ensign Woodbridge.”]