This book is a tour de force of descriptions, mostly depressing. I never knew there were so many ways to write "white" and make it sound ugly. Also dreamy.
I am told the book is about addiction but the protagonist certainly had a good setup for an addict: a place of her own, a boyfriend who was a jerk but who (somehow) managed to hold on to rental units over the 7 year course of her addiction, supply both of them with cocaine to shoot, and not seemingly advance in their addiction (as in, "sell the damn houses we need more"). Being intimately familiar with addicts over the course of my life, I find this a bit hard to believe but anything is possible.
I think you could take out a hunk of the middle of this novel, keep the beginning and end, and have a good story.
None of the characters are likeable to me and yet I read the whole novel, happily, to underline phrases and words and thoughts that will provide much inspiration to me in my own writing. Braverman is good for that.
Having read this and several stories in "Good Day for Supuku" I can say Braverman has a mommy and a daddy problem (they seem to be separate, but I'm not sure you can separate that). As I've just bought 2 other of her novels, I'm hoping that doesn't hold through all her work, although she has a vivid imagination and none of the mommies are horrible in the same way, but the daddies are in their leaving.
She uses a lot of alliteration and repetition, and borrows heavily from lyric nonfiction (I think this is supposed to be fiction but may be sort of autobiographical, I don't know her background) strategies in her writing.
excerpts:
"...the sun is fatigued and indifferent....The sun suddenly regathers itself for the final battle. It forms one perfect red ball and hangs smack above the ocean, a gouged eye, a beach ball dropped down into the slow stirring night waves of hungry fish mouths and darting crepe-thin fins."
"Her eyes ere agate, flecked and somehow windy."
"I thought about that reading the "Wall Street Journal" yesterday. News is merely the way men gossip."
"IT was becoming clear to me that Francine was missing important cards from her personal deck."
"Suddenly wild moths were beating my eyes wide. I was the candle and the arc of light...The room was inordinately yellow. I smelled alcohol. The room was filled with ripening lemons. Even the light bulb was a glistening yellow metal, as a captured moon might be.,,I was arctic white. The sea opened her icy lip. My path edged avalanches and albino seals I was white under a white skull of sky in my own white season...The afternoon was leaking out white blood into white air. And I was white beyond reason. The poisonous shoreline disappeared singed pure as old shells, their white wormy grooves scorched crepelike, thin as wings. Fat white gulls shrieked in a thick white lull...And I am white marble. No. I am white gravestones. No I am wearing white bandages around my face. I am tongueless. My mouth is sewed shut....Yes. I was freshly painted white fence spokes and ivory piano keys. "
I just discovered her. I'm enthralled with her overwrought descriptives, digressions, detachment from the earth and reality and intrigued by how ugly she make the world seem. This is new. I hope it stays fresh.