Not gonna lie, it took a little too long for the plot to get off the ground. It felt weird, wishing the heroine would get abducted just to ramp up the action. But once it got past the stealth and into the meat of it, I was invested till the end.
Plot
This book wavered between a 3 and 4 star for about half the book. My investment began at around chapter 20, which is pretty late even for a series starter. But it ended at a solid 5, and I’ve gotta give it credit for such an incredible payoff. The bulk of it essentially sets up the world and supporting characters, and of course, acquaints us with our protag. Perhaps I'm reading into it, but the pacing reminds me a lot of the title. Slow and steady initially (even), but then once it begins to pick up, it's gripping until the end (like falling). (Too cheesy?)
To sum it up, there are three separate realms each with a different kind of magic. Ember only knew of the existence of her realm, and when she’s mysteriously transported to a new one, she must navigate it as a total stranger relying on help from those around her.
It helps in understanding the world that we’re getting to know it alongside Ember. She’s not from a world that we’re familiar with, but since she’s a stranger to the realm that she’s in, you don’t feel lost in the worldbuilding.
Warning, spoilers ahead!
Ember
In the world that she’s from, she’s an outsider. Her parents can’t reign in her curiosity, and she can’t behave like the gentle obedient lady she’s expected to be.
She’s an independent thinker, and in the new world she’s mysteriously transported to, her independence helps her to think objectively when she’s pulled between two opposing groups.
In this new world, she’s expected to be the Savior (cue chosen one trope), which depending on who you ask has different expectations. One group expects her to defeat the Crescent Prince and make it so that the people can legally use their powers again, because the Crescent Prince punishes those who use magic. The other party expects her to fix a broken world and overcome a bigger threat to everyone's existence that others deny exists.
Ember doesn’t understand why people expect anything of her, because as far as she knows, she doesn’t possess any special abilities. But on her journey, a power she didn’t know she had rescues her when she’s in trouble. The problem is that it’s a power only the Crescent Prince is known to have, and given that everyone tells her he’s a villain, she struggles to accept what she is.
Her objectivity makes her such a pleasant viewpoint to be behind. There’s no over-reliance on angst built on a series of misunderstandings, though there are some minor understandable frustrations as she tries to sort out the truth for herself.
I love that she’s able to maintain her individuality instead of being easily swayed when pushed to go into a certain direction. There are so many books where the heroine joins up with one group and maintains a prejudice against the other when it makes zero sense. Why stick to the prejudices of group #1 when you just recently joined them?!
If anything, she becomes the middle ground. Complicated situations aren’t in black and white, and she navigates the gray zones well. These traits combine to create a believable heroine that I could easily root for.
The Crescent Prince
Mordecai is immortal, and has been hunting for Ember since her birth. Ada is helping Ember to avoid him, since the Crescent Prince is the hated ruler of their world and wants to use her to solidify his power and rule over all three realms (supposedly).
He takes on the mantle of the hated ruler because it helps to keep everyone following his laws. They don’t understand that it’s for their own good, and he doesn’t need them to understand. It’s easier to rule when everyone thinks he’s a monster. He’s sad and lonely, and you kinda wanna pet him. Being alone for so long has made him a bit prickly. He's clearly out of practice catering to the needs of others.
The romance
Ember does have an instant attraction to him, and after a bit of the hate-to-love trope, it can feel a bit insta-love-ish. I usually love the first and hate the second, but given that Ember fights against it while she sorts through whether or not he’s actually good, the insta-attraction doesn’t bother me. It also helps that they both have different paths that they’re on. There’s a bit of romance, but there’s a larger story going on, and there will be obstacles to overcome if they’re going to end up together. There’s also some hints that other love interests will get in the way in future novels, but there’s none of that this round––it’s just me speculating. There have been too many references to a past love interest of Ember’s to think that he won’t at some point pop up again. But Mordecai seems like the true ship.
It has a Beauty and the Beast vibe at times. Specifically, there’s one scene with an attack on the castle––you’ll see.
Supporting characters
They’ve got potential. Honestly, I wasn’t too into the book when they were the focus. Without Mordecai providing the tension, I found myself a bit bored. Even though there’s interpersonal drama among the other characters, it didn’t feel relevant enough to the main story for me to really care. Now that the characters are established though and the groundwork is done, I’m looking forward to their potential to provide contrast to our heroine in future novels. And I may even be more interested in their own stories by that point.
I will give it props though for incorporating diversity without using it as a ploy. There’s history of a same-sex relationship and references towards bisexuality, and it never feels like a hey-look-at-me-I’m-inclusive moment. It’s natural; it doesn’t pander.
Verdict
Now that the story is established, I expect to enjoy the sequel even more than the first. Establishing the necessary worldbuilding and introducing the characters took time, understandably, but I’m happy it’s out of the way. There’s still more left to learn, but I feel like it can be worked in without distracting from the plot. The ending leaves you wanting more, as it feels like the journey is just beginning. I wouldn’t say it tortures you with unanswered questions, but it leaves you with a smidgen of angst for what’s coming. The first novel is spent in one realm, and it looks like the second will be spent in another; I’m looking forward to the contrast. Mordecai’s fate is a question mark, but I’m optimistic.
Merged review:
Not gonna lie, it took a little too long for the plot to get off the ground. It felt weird, wishing the heroine would get abducted just to ramp up the action. But once it got past the stealth and into the meat of it, I was invested till the end.
Plot
This book wavered between a 3 and 4 star for about half the book. My investment began at around chapter 20, which is pretty late even for a series starter. But if I could rate just the ending it’d be a solid 5, and I’ve gotta give it credit for such an incredible payoff. The bulk of it essentially sets up the world and supporting characters, and of course, acquaints us with our protag. Perhaps I'm reading into it, but the pacing reminds me a lot of the title. Slow and steady initially (even), but then once it begins to pick up, it's gripping until the end (like falling). (Too cheesy?)
To sum it up, there are three separate realms each with a different kind of magic. Ember only knew of the existence of her realm, and when she’s mysteriously transported to a new one, she must navigate it as a total stranger relying on help from those around her.
It helps in understanding the world that we’re getting to know it alongside Ember. She’s not from a world that we’re familiar with, but since she’s a stranger to the realm that she’s in, you don’t feel lost in the worldbuilding.
Warning, spoilers ahead!
Ember
In the world that she’s from, she’s an outsider. Her parents can’t reign in her curiosity, and she can’t behave like the gentle obedient lady she’s expected to be.
She’s an independent thinker, and in the new world she’s mysteriously transported to, her independence helps her to think objectively when she’s pulled between two opposing groups.
In this new world, she’s expected to be the Savior (cue chosen one trope), which depending on who you ask has different expectations. One group expects her to defeat the Crescent Prince and make it so that the people can legally use their powers again, because the Crescent Prince punishes those who use magic. The other party expects her to fix a broken world and overcome a bigger threat to everyone's existence that others deny exists.
Ember doesn’t understand why people expect anything of her, because as far as she knows, she doesn’t possess any special abilities. But on her journey, a power she didn’t know she had rescues her when she’s in trouble. The problem is that it’s a power only the Crescent Prince is known to have, and given that everyone tells her he’s a villain, she struggles to accept what she is.
Her objectivity makes her such a pleasant viewpoint to be behind. There’s no over-reliance on angst built on a series of misunderstandings, though there are some minor understandable frustrations as she tries to sort out the truth for herself.
I love that she’s able to maintain her individuality instead of being easily swayed when pushed to go into a certain direction. There are so many books where the heroine joins up with one group and maintains a prejudice against the other when it makes zero sense. Why stick to the prejudices of group #1 when you just recently joined them?!
If anything, she becomes the middle ground. Complicated situations aren’t in black and white, and she navigates the gray zones well. These traits combine to create a believable heroine that I could easily root for.
The Crescent Prince
Mordecai is immortal, and has been hunting for Ember since her birth. Ada is helping Ember to avoid him, since the Crescent Prince is the hated ruler of their world and wants to use her to solidify his power and rule over all three realms (supposedly).
He takes on the mantle of the hated ruler because it helps to keep everyone following his laws. They don’t understand that it’s for their own good, and he doesn’t need them to understand. It’s easier to rule when everyone thinks he’s a monster. He’s sad and lonely, and you kinda wanna pet him. Being alone for so long has made him a bit prickly. He's clearly out of practice catering to the needs of others.
The romance
Ember does have an instant attraction to him, and after a bit of the hate-to-love trope, it can feel a bit insta-love-ish. I usually love the first and hate the second, but given that Ember fights against it while she sorts through whether or not he’s actually good, the insta-attraction doesn’t bother me. It also helps that they both have different paths that they’re on. There’s a bit of romance, but there’s a larger story going on, and there will be obstacles to overcome if they’re going to end up together. There’s also some hints that other love interests will get in the way in future novels, but there’s none of that this round––it’s just me speculating. There have been too many references to a past love interest of Ember’s to think that he won’t at some point pop up again. But Mordecai seems like the true ship.
It has a Beauty and the Beast vibe at times. Specifically, there’s one scene with an attack on the castle––you’ll see.
Supporting characters
They’ve got potential. Honestly, I wasn’t too into the book when they were the focus. Without Mordecai providing the tension, I found myself a bit bored. Even though there’s interpersonal drama among the other characters, it didn’t feel relevant enough to the main story for me to really care. Now that the characters are established though and the groundwork is done, I’m looking forward to their potential to provide contrast to our heroine in future novels. And I may even be more interested in their own stories by that point.
I will give it props though for incorporating diversity without using it as a ploy. There’s history of a same-sex relationship and references towards bisexuality, and it never feels like a hey-look-at-me-I’m-inclusive moment. It’s natural; it doesn’t pander.
Verdict
Now that the story is established, I expect to enjoy the sequel even more than the first. Establishing the necessary worldbuilding and introducing the characters took time, understandably, but I’m happy it’s out of the way. There’s still more left to learn, but I feel like it can be worked in without distracting from the plot. The ending leaves you wanting more, as it feels like the journey is just beginning. I wouldn’t say it tortures you with unanswered questions, but it leaves you with a smidgen of angst for what’s coming. The first novel is spent in one realm, and it looks like the second will be spent in another; I’m looking forward to the contrast. Mordecai’s fate is a question mark, but I’m optimistic.
UPDATE ON REREAD
The details of this book was a wee bit fuzzy when I wanted to read the sequel, so I had to give it a reread.
Overall, opinion still pretty much stays the same. It drags in the beginning, picks up in the end, and could not be a standalone as the whole novel is basically a setup for the real story. Like a teaser. They do enter the I’m-in-love phase way too early, but given that there’s still some obstacles to overcome (i.e. ex boyfriend), it might not feel too unearned later on. The two are like magnets from the get-go, which is a bit of a ripoff on the romance building, but I still like them.
And I definitely got Beauty and the Beast vibes again without rereading my prior review, so that’ll probably always hold true.
Time for the sequel! (Finally)