I didn't finish this book. I got about 80 pages in before I just couldn't stand it. I skimmed for a while longer before I quit. Why didn't I finish it?
-The writing was simplistic. As I've stated before, if I can write better, I don't read it (unless it's for a favor/everything else is just so amazing/for review).
-The POV just bugged me. I usually like omniscient, but it just didn't work for the author's writing style. I felt so distanced from the characters and added to the simplicity.
-Jake is just annoying. He continually does dumb things. I don't like characters who do stupid thing after stupid thing and don't realize it. I mean, seriously. Why would I want to read that?
-Jake's dad. He's supposed to be this amazing person ... the one slave who won't rebel, who is respectful to his "master", who works hard no matter what ... and yet he does dumb things, too! His owner wants Jake's dad to call him "master," but he insists upon calling him "mister." This is just dumb. I understand Jake's dad's reasoning (not wanting anyone to be his master but God), but if someone in authority to you, no matter how unfair he may be, wants you to do something (that isn't a sin) and holds terrible power over you, you'd think you'd just call him "master" for peace's sake! What does it hurt other than your pride?
-Hatred towards Southerners. Lines such as "he was a loyal Southerner and hated everyone from the North" and other such general statements against the Southerners was another big turn-off for me. Yeah, some Southerners had slaves and were cruel to them ... but some were kind or simply didn't have slaves. Not all white Southerners were evil. This book seems pretty prejudiced against them. That said, I am not a supporter of the Confederacy.
-It reads like a textbook. Endless facts and stories about people and things unrelated to the story, endless general information about this time ... it doesn't feel like a novel. It feels like a story written for children to amuse them and teach them something at the same time. Which is not a bad thing, but just not something I expected from this book. Especially as the content's not really suitable for children, anyways.
-In the first 80 pages, two women almost get raped, described in some detail. Er, no. I just would rather not read about that. Perhaps it's realistic, but I felt like a: there were too many details and b: it was just talked about/mentioned too much.
-It's sometimes hard to understand the slaves' speech. I know it 's realistic, but it drives me crazy. I don't mind it so much in Elsie Dinsmore or Uncle Tom's Cabin because they're classics, but in a modern-day book, I feel like the author should tone it down so it's easier to understand.
-Can I say again how annoyed I was about all the Southerners being hateful?
And that's only about 150 pages in! Goodness knows what lurks beyond ...
Note: I didn't mean to offend any lovers of this book, the author, or anyone else who reads thing review and thinks I'm being a little harsh. These are my honest opinions, and I hope I don't cause any waves. :)
~Kellyn Roth