Where do I even start? I picked this book randomly during one of my library visits as I usually do, picking out random stuff i see and taking home what seems like an interesting read. I had high expectations, yet it all ends with a very critical review.
First of all, this book is a part of a very long series and it is recognizable for us as the readers, what is not a good thing in this case. If the book is not a part of a clearly defined and tightly connected series, just loosely connects to the rest by featuring the same characters and shows a little of their personal drama, the reader should be able to understand what is going on and connect with the characters without having to read all the other books that were written before. Despite a big portion of the book being focused on the characters personal life, we didn´t learn much about them, except their skin and hair colour.
That leads me to another issue I had with the characters, that being that the cast felt like one big diversity hire meeting. I don´t mind a diverse cast if it is done correctly, but it felt really forced here, like it was done just for the sake of it. How to make a diverse cast right?
- don´t emphasize their diversity every chance there is, make the diversity more subtle. For example, let´s take Ollie. Rather then telling us he is overweight and is currently trying to hold a diet, it would be much more authentic to show it through him maybe having a dilemma over buying himself a cake and let us observe his inner thoughts.
- "You don´t trust me because i´m black" The amount of refering to someone´s race and bringing up racism that wasn´t even there was something that didn´t add any value to the book, in fact rather made me go huh? How did we even got here? The character never shown any racist behavior, so what is happening here and why? If the character is supposed to be a racist, okay, but let it be reflected through their actions in some way, bigger or smaller, and as always, show more tell less.
- use their unique culture and heritage rather then keep repeating this person is black, this person has red hair because they are irish etc. Having a diverse cast is a great opportunity to open the readers mind to appreciate different cultures and learn about them. Study the culture, habits and customs of the people and let them shine through your work.
I also disliked the amount of hate the characters were filled with towards so many things. It felt like they are all very bitter, and we were being told about it in a very explicit way at every possible chance.
The dialogues were very chaotic and often didn´t add any value, or worked purely as a rushed transition to get the characters where they need to be. Making the dialogue passages longer and using transition like "said" and adding action to the words would have made a huge difference, like: XY observed his collegue over his coffee mug. "We don´t have the time for that" he said and took a long sip.
Too big synch between the characters private life follow. We saw person A´s romance, then person B, then person C, then person D etc. all in close succession right after each other. This felt a bit unnatural, and it would have been cool to have the different characters deal with different issues, and mix it up a bit by not having them all on the romance watch at the same time, but someone at the beginning, someone in the middle etc.
On the positive side, I really enjoyed the concept of the book and how the detectives all came to the answers independently from each other, using their own leads. That was a very unique way of a solution, since in most crime novels it is either someone realizing it or everyone putting the clues together. So the method of everyone coming to the same conclusions independently was a very unique thing I enjoyed.
Overall, I think it was an okay read, the mystery was interesting and I enjoyed the solution, and although it has a lot of space for improvement, the mystery was definitely worth it.