A coal miner with leadership qualities and a big-city lawyer up against a corrupted board member of a West Virginian coal mine.
It’s more original than other romances I’ve been reading these days. It’s one of those one-night shags without either knowing the other, and guess who’s the fertile Myrtle on the first try? Yep! The lawyer who happens to be the daughter inheriting the mine after her adrenalin junkie of a father’s accidental death. And it’s not that she wants it, either. And the coal miner? The recently elected head of the miners’ union.
BIG oops.
Talk about a lawyer having a big conflict of interest, but it’s not something she could simply recuse herself from. But the more she discovers the goings-on with the administration, the more she realizes she and her unborn baby have bigger problems than her getting the gumption to reveal her secret to her baby’s father.
Length: Long novella.
Character development: I am pleased that I get a chance to really get to know Amelia and Samuel. Both are very likable individuals with a strong sense of loyalty and trying to do the right thing. As for our antagonist, I wish he wasn’t such a cookie cutter villain. It feels like the same old same old with a few corrupt cops on the take and messianic visions in his head. My only irritation is that Amelia IS a lawyer, and female lawyers eat nails for breakfast, especially before court appearances. BB Hamel didn’t give her enough spine in situations early on in the story. In fact, she really wimped out, being too fatalistic. Lawyers don’t get to her pay level without being sneaky, crafty, and gutsy. Okay, cutthroat, too. BB Hamel should have worked with these qualities rather than wait to the end… and even then, it’s Amelia in the victim role. Come on! She could have kicked some major corporate ass!
Emotional factor: This is a tug-a-war of emotions on many levels. It’s employer vs employee, a line that can’t be crossed especially with unionized workers. Amelia may be criticized for not telling Samuel sooner about her condition, but keep in mind she is a lawyer, and as a lawyer, you can’t trust anyone.
Speed of action: Great action. It kept me reading without stopping for a breath.
Predictability: Tit for tat. Threat and confrontation. Yes, and Samuel does get the crap kicked out of him. It’s not like it was exactly predictable. It’s what usually happens in a union’s strike when dealing with dirty administration. But BB doesn’t wimp out. In real life, people have died in similar situations.
Credibility issues: I already mentioned how UN-lawyerly Amelia acted. She certainly had enough experience in corporate law to know what to do in the board room. Also, I’ve worked in West Virginia in coal country in an urgent care in the middle of NOWHERE. (We really were the first-contact ER without being attached to a hospital.) She didn’t make me feel I was there. This is another example on how important it is to research and make the reader feel like s/he was actually there. It could have been in upstate New York for that matter. Also, it’s REALLY POOR out there. I should know. I did a few house calls because I knew the families couldn’t afford coming to my urgent care. And they are a very proud and loyal folk. They don’t turn their backs that easily because of the whiff of $$. Those who are new gen without ethics would have blown out of Dodge long prior to that.
Grammar and technical errors: Some misspellings. But… (here we go again with my pet peeve): I am NOT PLEASED with the bonus materials included of ebooks still available at Amazon. Here’s the breakdown:
Big Stranger’s Baby: A Bad Boy Secret Baby Romance 16 January 2018 $3.99. It contains:
Intense: A Dark Billionaire’ Romance 21 January 2017 $3.99
Virgin’s Daddy: A Billionaire Romance 13 April 2017 $2.99
This is a total of $6.98 worth of materials. The problem? This is $6.98 wasted had you bought the two bonus novellas when they originally came out. This isn’t any penny-ante $0.99 per book. THESE ARE EXPENSIVE NOVELLAS! I would be enraged to find out that these were made for free a year afterwards. Why in the world did I buy them in the first place if BB Hamel would reprint them for free?? And Big Stranger’s Baby isn’t cheap for a novella. $3.99? A smart reader would only read it as a KU borrow. I would. Then BB Hamel would wonder why she isn’t selling books. (I’m hearing this whine ALL THE TIME now from writers. Well… DUH!)
Okay, I do have KU, but I’m getting so tired of the books I HAVE bought, only to find out they have been reprinted for free less than a year later that any new writer I find doing this, I’m not reading another one of their books again. Why bother? (In a very recent case, an author included $35.84 worth of “freebie” bonus material, most of these novel/las having been published less than one year ago!)
I give the story 3 stars. I give Ms. Hamel zero stars for unethical behavior.