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Magic Runs Deep
For the last five years, Veier has been chained to a king’s throne in his bear form. When a neighboring kingdom overthrows the crown, Veier’s imprisonment ends, but true freedom is not so easily earned. With blood on his hands, he needs someone with patience, strength, and trust to help him become the person he was before and prove to the invaders that he isn’t the monstrous king’s loyal pet. Elrid, the invading king's brother and a powerful mage, is everything Veier despises. He’s also the only thing between Veier and execution, because he thinks he can help Veier change from an aggressive bear shifter into a reasonable man. While the pair have a rough start, with long talks and mutual leaps of faith, they begin to care for each other. However, the closer Veier gets to his freedom, the closer he is to losing Elrid. He must find balance in his heart and his life if he wishes to truly claim the freedom he’s been given — and the man he loves. Word 47,900; page 182
162 pages, Kindle Edition
First published April 9, 2018
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Alex Whitehall
30 books73 followersIf there are two types of people in the world, Alex Whitehall probably isn't one of them, despite being a person. Their favorite pastimes include reading, horseback riding, reading, watching geek-tastic television, reading, and running. While Alex prefers writing over doing anything else (except maybe reading), sometimes they emerge from the cave to be social and to hunt for food at the local market. They can be found blogging, scrolling Tumblr, and tending after their aloe plants.
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May 24, 2020
3.5 Stars
The blurb captured my interest right away and the story kept it.
Veier has been held prisoner in his bear form, magically compelled to protect an evil king with no will of his own. When technically “freed”, his beastly nature is at the forefront, and it remains to be seen if his human side can dominate over base instinct. The only one in his corner is the new king’s brother Elrid, who has faith that Veier can overcome his past trauma and severe mistrust so that he can return back home and regain his life.
This was a slow burn - both in the healing and in the romance. I have a soft spot for gentle (or not so gentle) giants and when they’re bear shifters? All the better. The plausible progression was appreciated, and this was a thoughtful, touching fantasy tale that didn’t shy away from the brutality or the violent repercussions.
A very satisfying win showcasing that love heals and burrows deep, bringing change in the best possible of ways.
The blurb captured my interest right away and the story kept it.
Veier has been held prisoner in his bear form, magically compelled to protect an evil king with no will of his own. When technically “freed”, his beastly nature is at the forefront, and it remains to be seen if his human side can dominate over base instinct. The only one in his corner is the new king’s brother Elrid, who has faith that Veier can overcome his past trauma and severe mistrust so that he can return back home and regain his life.
This was a slow burn - both in the healing and in the romance. I have a soft spot for gentle (or not so gentle) giants and when they’re bear shifters? All the better. The plausible progression was appreciated, and this was a thoughtful, touching fantasy tale that didn’t shy away from the brutality or the violent repercussions.
A very satisfying win showcasing that love heals and burrows deep, bringing change in the best possible of ways.
April 10, 2018
I seriously had no idea what I was going to get from this book, never having read the author before, so it was a real delight to get a well written and plotted fantasy story with a quiet romance at its heart.
There's a real lack, imho, of people writing in the Sci-Fi and Fantasy genres in the LGBTQ+ space (when considered against the pure romance field that is) and while there was a bear shifter in this, the focus was on relationships in a fantasy setting with a flavour of the Medieval mixed in with some druidic and and shamanic influences.
Every thing is gentle, even though there is some violence, and the real focus is between two characters learning to trust the other and to open up to finding something more.
I loved the world building, it's familiar - stone castles, guards and invaders overthrowing a cruel ruler - but there's elements which take it beyond that and into a new narrative where a Human mage and an Ursini shifter can find common ground and a solid love.
#ARC kindly received from Riptide via NetGalley in return for an honest and unbiased review.
There's a real lack, imho, of people writing in the Sci-Fi and Fantasy genres in the LGBTQ+ space (when considered against the pure romance field that is) and while there was a bear shifter in this, the focus was on relationships in a fantasy setting with a flavour of the Medieval mixed in with some druidic and and shamanic influences.
Every thing is gentle, even though there is some violence, and the real focus is between two characters learning to trust the other and to open up to finding something more.
I loved the world building, it's familiar - stone castles, guards and invaders overthrowing a cruel ruler - but there's elements which take it beyond that and into a new narrative where a Human mage and an Ursini shifter can find common ground and a solid love.
#ARC kindly received from Riptide via NetGalley in return for an honest and unbiased review.
April 8, 2020
4 Stars
I gobbled this one right up.
As a fan of fantasy stories, particularly those set in unique imaginary kingdoms, featuring magic, intrigue and romance, this hit a lot of my favourite trope buttons and left a lasting impression.
Magic Runs Deep tells the slow-burn tale of how a long-enslaved bear shifter named Veier learns to rebuild his fractured life and manages to find a semblance of peace and happiness, supported through his unexpected companionship and growing attraction to his saviour, Lord Elrid, a powerful mage and the brother of the invading King who has the means to set Veier free for good.
With a bit of an enemies-to-lovers vibe between them, mostly due to Veier’s initial (and understandably) untrustworthy and grumpy disposition, Veier and Elrid’s slow fall into love was measured and worthwhile, with the two building a solid foundation of trust and respect first and foremost, before their feelings naturally grew into something stronger and more palpable.
Considering this was essentially an M/M shifter romance, the plot and the characters held an impressive weight to them — more character driven than relationship driven, which I actually preferred and felt worked perfectly here. I grew to care for a good deal for Veier and Elrid, alike, savouring their time together and appreciating how Veier grew from a troubled and violent character to a hopeful and healing man, helped along, always, by Elrid’s company and support.
Needless to say, I enjoyed reading my first Alex Whitehall story and I wouldn’t hesitant to read more of their works in the future.
I gobbled this one right up.
As a fan of fantasy stories, particularly those set in unique imaginary kingdoms, featuring magic, intrigue and romance, this hit a lot of my favourite trope buttons and left a lasting impression.
Magic Runs Deep tells the slow-burn tale of how a long-enslaved bear shifter named Veier learns to rebuild his fractured life and manages to find a semblance of peace and happiness, supported through his unexpected companionship and growing attraction to his saviour, Lord Elrid, a powerful mage and the brother of the invading King who has the means to set Veier free for good.
With a bit of an enemies-to-lovers vibe between them, mostly due to Veier’s initial (and understandably) untrustworthy and grumpy disposition, Veier and Elrid’s slow fall into love was measured and worthwhile, with the two building a solid foundation of trust and respect first and foremost, before their feelings naturally grew into something stronger and more palpable.
Considering this was essentially an M/M shifter romance, the plot and the characters held an impressive weight to them — more character driven than relationship driven, which I actually preferred and felt worked perfectly here. I grew to care for a good deal for Veier and Elrid, alike, savouring their time together and appreciating how Veier grew from a troubled and violent character to a hopeful and healing man, helped along, always, by Elrid’s company and support.
Needless to say, I enjoyed reading my first Alex Whitehall story and I wouldn’t hesitant to read more of their works in the future.
dnf
June 2, 2019I liked the premise, but there wasn't sufficient plot to keep my interest. It makes me wonder what this could have been with the help of a developmental editor to bring out its potential. DNF @ 40%.
April 9, 2018
5 BIG stars Owwww I love some sensitive magical stories and this one was like wowww
It was deep emotional, beautiful sentences woven with a sparkling thread of magic.
Veier is chained to the kings throne for over five years and all the time in his bear form.
He is dangerous with blood on his hands and deeply hurt.
When he is freed by invaders, the invaders kings brother Elrid saves his life.
Elrid, a beautiful gentle mage, sees who Veier really is and now he has to earn his trust.
Because Veier is wild he is kept in a sort of dungeon with Elrid at his side.
The story was awesome good written, I read it in one breath, it was tremendously captivating. The way of slowly trust building between the two was very endearing. The attraction and tension was delicate build and delightful to watch. The growing love and romance was beautiful displayed.
The way of writing was wonderful done, beautiful lines and all with a lot of emotions in them.
I just loved the magic in it because it felt close and in reach. With my eyes closed and deep breaths I could feel the flow in my soul.
Kindly received an arc from the publisher through NetGalley
It was deep emotional, beautiful sentences woven with a sparkling thread of magic.
Veier is chained to the kings throne for over five years and all the time in his bear form.
He is dangerous with blood on his hands and deeply hurt.
When he is freed by invaders, the invaders kings brother Elrid saves his life.
Elrid, a beautiful gentle mage, sees who Veier really is and now he has to earn his trust.
Because Veier is wild he is kept in a sort of dungeon with Elrid at his side.
The story was awesome good written, I read it in one breath, it was tremendously captivating. The way of slowly trust building between the two was very endearing. The attraction and tension was delicate build and delightful to watch. The growing love and romance was beautiful displayed.
The way of writing was wonderful done, beautiful lines and all with a lot of emotions in them.
I just loved the magic in it because it felt close and in reach. With my eyes closed and deep breaths I could feel the flow in my soul.
Kindly received an arc from the publisher through NetGalley
February 26, 2019
Just a little FYI here...
This is not a romance story but there is a romance in it and even more importantly there is one seriously good story to be had.
Aside from this book the one thing that i know Alex Whitehall and Adam R. Watson have in common is that they're both new to me, which is kind of a scary combination because....'ohmygod!!! I said I'd review this and what if I hate it because I can't say I love something if I didn't that's just not something that I like most people would be comfortable doing...so in a nutshell...I was a little nervous going into this. Enough that I actually listened to the first few minutes and went off to listen to something else but that's only a good deflection for so long and then I had to make myself come back to this and thankfully that turned out to be a much better life choice than I had anticipated..
In the interest of being fair I started back at the beginning and the one thing I realized right away was that the lack of success on my first listen was just me not in a good frame of mind so I'm not sure that much of anything would have worked for me that day but on my second try I was barely past where I'd stopped the first time and I was all in and more than happy just to sit back and enjoy the story.
If I had to classify this one I'd probably call it historical fantasy with a touch of romance but regardless of that I'd definitely call it good.
Veier has spent the past 5 years of his life trapped in his bear form and held by a magic spell as the pet of a king. When a neighboring kingdom overthrows the king, Veier becomes their prisoner and while most are of the opinion that Veier has lost his humanity and shouldn't be allowed to live...not all share these feelings and the new king's brother, Elrid believes that while Veier's humanity maybe be a little misplaced it's still there.
As much as Veier tries to fight it he comes to respect Elrid and appreciate that Elrid is both honest and trustworthy and that his choice to try and help Veier find his humanity and ultimately return home to his family is sincere.
Most of this story focuses on Elrid and Veier's efforts to gain his freedom but in doing this the men spend time together getting to know each other and helping each other to learn about their people. It takes an actual threat to Elrid's life to make his brother the king see that Veier's humanity is very much intact and working and sadly it's the realization that Veier's humanity has been restored and is firmly in place that also brings about their separation when Veier is allowed to go home to his people.
From start to finish this book had such a soft and gentle feel to it. In spite of the battles and attempted assassinations it was the chemistry between Eldrid the strong, powerful yet gentle and soft spoken magician with Veier, the kind and compassionate ursine shifter whose pure physical size and strength was intimidating enough without the knowledge of the power he wielded in his ursine form that shaped this story.
I loved the overall feel of this story and listening to Adam R. Watson's narration of this story was every bit as delightful as the story and definitely reinforced the the overall feeling of the story itself for me. As much as I enjoyed the entire story for me the icing on the cake was definitely the ending and the epilogue...both were added the perfect touch to make this a 5 star story for me.
Maybe the first time around was a case of right story wrong day but the second time around was definitely a case of right story, right day for me.
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An audio book of 'Magic Runs Deep' was graciously provided by the publisher in exchange for an honest review.
This is not a romance story but there is a romance in it and even more importantly there is one seriously good story to be had.
Aside from this book the one thing that i know Alex Whitehall and Adam R. Watson have in common is that they're both new to me, which is kind of a scary combination because....'ohmygod!!! I said I'd review this and what if I hate it because I can't say I love something if I didn't that's just not something that I like most people would be comfortable doing...so in a nutshell...I was a little nervous going into this. Enough that I actually listened to the first few minutes and went off to listen to something else but that's only a good deflection for so long and then I had to make myself come back to this and thankfully that turned out to be a much better life choice than I had anticipated..
In the interest of being fair I started back at the beginning and the one thing I realized right away was that the lack of success on my first listen was just me not in a good frame of mind so I'm not sure that much of anything would have worked for me that day but on my second try I was barely past where I'd stopped the first time and I was all in and more than happy just to sit back and enjoy the story.
If I had to classify this one I'd probably call it historical fantasy with a touch of romance but regardless of that I'd definitely call it good.
Veier has spent the past 5 years of his life trapped in his bear form and held by a magic spell as the pet of a king. When a neighboring kingdom overthrows the king, Veier becomes their prisoner and while most are of the opinion that Veier has lost his humanity and shouldn't be allowed to live...not all share these feelings and the new king's brother, Elrid believes that while Veier's humanity maybe be a little misplaced it's still there.
As much as Veier tries to fight it he comes to respect Elrid and appreciate that Elrid is both honest and trustworthy and that his choice to try and help Veier find his humanity and ultimately return home to his family is sincere.
Most of this story focuses on Elrid and Veier's efforts to gain his freedom but in doing this the men spend time together getting to know each other and helping each other to learn about their people. It takes an actual threat to Elrid's life to make his brother the king see that Veier's humanity is very much intact and working and sadly it's the realization that Veier's humanity has been restored and is firmly in place that also brings about their separation when Veier is allowed to go home to his people.
From start to finish this book had such a soft and gentle feel to it. In spite of the battles and attempted assassinations it was the chemistry between Eldrid the strong, powerful yet gentle and soft spoken magician with Veier, the kind and compassionate ursine shifter whose pure physical size and strength was intimidating enough without the knowledge of the power he wielded in his ursine form that shaped this story.
I loved the overall feel of this story and listening to Adam R. Watson's narration of this story was every bit as delightful as the story and definitely reinforced the the overall feeling of the story itself for me. As much as I enjoyed the entire story for me the icing on the cake was definitely the ending and the epilogue...both were added the perfect touch to make this a 5 star story for me.
Maybe the first time around was a case of right story wrong day but the second time around was definitely a case of right story, right day for me.
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An audio book of 'Magic Runs Deep' was graciously provided by the publisher in exchange for an honest review.
November 5, 2018
Overall book rating: 3.8
Audio Book: N/A
Book Cover: 4
First Alex Whitehall .
I have to say that I do think this requires a particular reading taste or rather, mood.
That being said, it worked for me. I was definitely in the RIGHT mood.
I didn’t know what to expect from this but I enjoyed what it offered me. I absolute loved the idea of the Ursinai and the wildness that Veier had to fight after being “set free” from his chains.
Elrid was also a very likable character. His magic made for a little bit of extra entertainment and I liked his way of being. His relationship with his brother as well.
If there is something I could perhaps add in the negative if I should want to.
The fact that I could do with more info. A little more would have been really nice. And also, though the book carried itself without needing it, I would have really liked a little MORE steamy time between the two MC’s. Emotional connection in an intimate level, not necessarily anything else.
To me, this was just a really nice “warm-and-fuzzy” read. Just the right kind of mellow.
Audio Book: N/A
Book Cover: 4
First Alex Whitehall .
I have to say that I do think this requires a particular reading taste or rather, mood.
That being said, it worked for me. I was definitely in the RIGHT mood.
I didn’t know what to expect from this but I enjoyed what it offered me. I absolute loved the idea of the Ursinai and the wildness that Veier had to fight after being “set free” from his chains.
Elrid was also a very likable character. His magic made for a little bit of extra entertainment and I liked his way of being. His relationship with his brother as well.
If there is something I could perhaps add in the negative if I should want to.
The fact that I could do with more info. A little more would have been really nice. And also, though the book carried itself without needing it, I would have really liked a little MORE steamy time between the two MC’s. Emotional connection in an intimate level, not necessarily anything else.
To me, this was just a really nice “warm-and-fuzzy” read. Just the right kind of mellow.
May 1, 2018
Sad to say I’m not going to remember this story a couple weeks from now. Some clunky grammar here and there, lack of world building, and underdeveloped characters. It was a great storyline that just wasn’t as well executed as it could have been.
August 4, 2018
This was my first time reading this author so I wasn't sure what to expect. It was an interesting set up and an interesting world. I wish there would have been more world building and character development. It was a pretty good book but had the potential to be a great book. I will check out this author another time though.
**ARC provided through Netgalley in exchange for an honest review**
**ARC provided through Netgalley in exchange for an honest review**
May 17, 2018
**grm**
I found this book interesting, but I wished there were more explanations about many things, and a lot more pages. I must also admit that the cover was really good and was the first thing that attracted me.
The story had many dark parts, the previous King was a rapist and liked small kids, and I was happy to see him die. Luckily all those parts never happened on page, but we learned about them thanks to Veier's speeches and thoughts. Nothing of the sexual kind happened to our sweet bear, but he was a slave for 5 years, chained to the throne room and under a spell that made him loyal to the former King. When Elrid and his brother's the King, conquer the kingdom in which Veier was slave, let's say that their first meeting isn't one of the best. The bear doesn't trust easily, is afraid and has nightmares terrors, and all that was normal, was real. The feelings btw the mage and the bear develop slowly and all thanks to Elrid care and smiles, and sweetness. I liked to see Elrid and his brother, the King, caring so much for each other and really being a family. For the King, what was more important was his brother well being more than the reign, also if for obvious reasons this wasn't something he could say infront of other ppl.
There was a scene almost at the start of the book, where we had an attempted rape. Veier, when not in bear form, was cute and beautiful, a little older than a teen, probably around 22 or so and maybe the same age as the mage, and this made a lot of ppl turn their stare to him, and one of them tried also to act on his urges. Nothing happens, don't worry, the bear is capable of protecting himself and I actually didn't mind the fact that he killed that guard, bcs the man's intentions were clear and you don't go in someone else chambers in the middle of the night, and don't expect them to defend themselves. Mostly also bcs Veier had been abused for 5 years and been a slave, and was still healing his mind.
The plot was pretty simple and was all focused on Veier gaining the prince and King's trust, on him acting like a man(not a caged beast) and saving the mage's life, and then in him joining again his family and being free.
The love btw the MCs was a slow build and it all made sense. Don't expect to see something sexual in this book, but only sweet caresses and kisses and the start of something more, that continues off page. I didn't mind it at all, I think this was the right choice, for this book.
The finale was good, and something the readers could expect, seeing how Elrid and Veier both missed the other when apart. But what made me smile was the fact that with them having the same dream, the same day, after 1 year that they weren't together, and the pull to see each other again was too strong to be ignored anymore, we learned that they were mates.
No cheating in this book and luckily also the time apart is a few pages long(sure 1 year but the pages are few).
I'll probably read more books from this author.
I found this book interesting, but I wished there were more explanations about many things, and a lot more pages. I must also admit that the cover was really good and was the first thing that attracted me.
The story had many dark parts, the previous King was a rapist and liked small kids, and I was happy to see him die. Luckily all those parts never happened on page, but we learned about them thanks to Veier's speeches and thoughts. Nothing of the sexual kind happened to our sweet bear, but he was a slave for 5 years, chained to the throne room and under a spell that made him loyal to the former King. When Elrid and his brother's the King, conquer the kingdom in which Veier was slave, let's say that their first meeting isn't one of the best. The bear doesn't trust easily, is afraid and has nightmares terrors, and all that was normal, was real. The feelings btw the mage and the bear develop slowly and all thanks to Elrid care and smiles, and sweetness. I liked to see Elrid and his brother, the King, caring so much for each other and really being a family. For the King, what was more important was his brother well being more than the reign, also if for obvious reasons this wasn't something he could say infront of other ppl.
There was a scene almost at the start of the book, where we had an attempted rape. Veier, when not in bear form, was cute and beautiful, a little older than a teen, probably around 22 or so and maybe the same age as the mage, and this made a lot of ppl turn their stare to him, and one of them tried also to act on his urges. Nothing happens, don't worry, the bear is capable of protecting himself and I actually didn't mind the fact that he killed that guard, bcs the man's intentions were clear and you don't go in someone else chambers in the middle of the night, and don't expect them to defend themselves. Mostly also bcs Veier had been abused for 5 years and been a slave, and was still healing his mind.
The plot was pretty simple and was all focused on Veier gaining the prince and King's trust, on him acting like a man(not a caged beast) and saving the mage's life, and then in him joining again his family and being free.
The love btw the MCs was a slow build and it all made sense. Don't expect to see something sexual in this book, but only sweet caresses and kisses and the start of something more, that continues off page. I didn't mind it at all, I think this was the right choice, for this book.
The finale was good, and something the readers could expect, seeing how Elrid and Veier both missed the other when apart. But what made me smile was the fact that with them having the same dream, the same day, after 1 year that they weren't together, and the pull to see each other again was too strong to be ignored anymore, we learned that they were mates.
No cheating in this book and luckily also the time apart is a few pages long(sure 1 year but the pages are few).
I'll probably read more books from this author.
April 26, 2018
A Joyfully Jay review.
4.25 stars
I thoroughly enjoyed Magic Runs Deep. It’s a quick, engaging read with just enough world building to give the reader something to sink their teeth into. Elrid and Veier are both interesting characters: one who has learned to fear magic and the other who wields it like breathing. This juxtaposition sets up a nice level of tension between the two, though Elrid’s kindness is always evident. The romance is subtle and the book as a whole is more about the friendship between Elrid and Veier rather than any sort of sexual relationship. In fact, the romance is almost an afterthought, but that doesn’t detract from the overall story in any way. The author does a good job of portraying Veier’s return to humanity and the realities of having to deal with his actions while in bear form.
Magic Runs Deep…doesn’t run that deep. This is a light fantasy to be sure and while what we get is good, there aren’t a lot of layers. The story and overall world imagery works despite this. I would have appreciated a bit more development of the kingdoms involved and more exploration of Veier’s time in captivity, only because this information would have helped to round out the plot. The only part of Magic Runs Deep that stumbles is the ending. There are essentially two epilogues, which don’t really fit with the rest of the book’s natural, easy pacing. The end feels rushed and sort of crammed together, and the story markers don’t really fit the wider narrative. It left Magic Runs Deep feeling a bit jagged at the end.
Read Sue’s review in its entirety here.
4.25 stars
I thoroughly enjoyed Magic Runs Deep. It’s a quick, engaging read with just enough world building to give the reader something to sink their teeth into. Elrid and Veier are both interesting characters: one who has learned to fear magic and the other who wields it like breathing. This juxtaposition sets up a nice level of tension between the two, though Elrid’s kindness is always evident. The romance is subtle and the book as a whole is more about the friendship between Elrid and Veier rather than any sort of sexual relationship. In fact, the romance is almost an afterthought, but that doesn’t detract from the overall story in any way. The author does a good job of portraying Veier’s return to humanity and the realities of having to deal with his actions while in bear form.
Magic Runs Deep…doesn’t run that deep. This is a light fantasy to be sure and while what we get is good, there aren’t a lot of layers. The story and overall world imagery works despite this. I would have appreciated a bit more development of the kingdoms involved and more exploration of Veier’s time in captivity, only because this information would have helped to round out the plot. The only part of Magic Runs Deep that stumbles is the ending. There are essentially two epilogues, which don’t really fit with the rest of the book’s natural, easy pacing. The end feels rushed and sort of crammed together, and the story markers don’t really fit the wider narrative. It left Magic Runs Deep feeling a bit jagged at the end.
Read Sue’s review in its entirety here.
November 7, 2018
I liked it ... it was a very nice story and I enjoyed it
July 20, 2022
I loved this book from start to finish. The different forms of caretaking, gentleness and violence kept things balanced and interesting as the relationship between Veier and Elrid developed, and the world building and magic explanations were just enough for this type of story – adding to the romance without taking away any focus from it. The way the life force played into the romance was so good. I enjoyed the gradual buildup of trust between Veier and Elrid, it made the romance develop in a way that made me really need these characters to get together and get the HEA they deserved. I also appreciated that there was no magic trauma healing, and that it took Veier time to recover from what happened to him.
I had no expectations for this book when I picked it up on a whim, having never heard of it or the author before, but I'm very glad I did because it was a lovely read.
I had no expectations for this book when I picked it up on a whim, having never heard of it or the author before, but I'm very glad I did because it was a lovely read.
July 19, 2018
Rating: 4.5 stars
I’ve had this book on my wish list for a bit when a friend lent me her copy. I just loved this book and will be buying my own copy in the future. I can definitely see myself reading it again. The story is told exclusively from Veier’s point of view. Through his eyes we get to see just what a wonderful and caring person Elrid is and while I wouldn’t have minded seeing things from Elrid’s perspective, I think the story worked better the way it was written.
I think what I loved about this book the most was the fact that they didn’t sugar coat the struggles that Veier went through after being a captive so long. There wasn’t any of this insta-love and now all my psychological problems have gone away business. They also didn’t fall into bed together five minutes after meeting, which I appreciated.
I highly recommend this book to those who like a bit of a different take on the shifter genre and who like their stories to come with a slow burn without the instant mating that is so prevalent in many other books.
I’ve had this book on my wish list for a bit when a friend lent me her copy. I just loved this book and will be buying my own copy in the future. I can definitely see myself reading it again. The story is told exclusively from Veier’s point of view. Through his eyes we get to see just what a wonderful and caring person Elrid is and while I wouldn’t have minded seeing things from Elrid’s perspective, I think the story worked better the way it was written.
I think what I loved about this book the most was the fact that they didn’t sugar coat the struggles that Veier went through after being a captive so long. There wasn’t any of this insta-love and now all my psychological problems have gone away business. They also didn’t fall into bed together five minutes after meeting, which I appreciated.
I highly recommend this book to those who like a bit of a different take on the shifter genre and who like their stories to come with a slow burn without the instant mating that is so prevalent in many other books.
March 3, 2019
Audiobook provided through Scattered Thoughts and Rogue Words in exchange for an impartial review.
I really enjoyed this story. An unusual shifter tale, in this one Veier (rhymes with bear) has been chained to a king’s throne and kept in his bear shifter form for five years. He’s freed when the kingdom is overthrown, but the new king wants him executed and it’s his brother, Elrid, who saves Veier’s life. Elrid is a powerful mage and he rightly points out that the chain indicates Veier was not necessarily loyal to the previous rulers.
But it takes patience and trial and error before Veier is trusted enough to be let outside the room where Elrid works and sleeps with him as the two begin to build trust. He has brief moments of freedom but always seems to be in the wrong place when trouble occurs. He and Elrid become close as he slowly starts to trust that this human may really not wish him harm.
When Elrid is severely injured in an attack by the previous king’s followers, it’s Veier who risks not only his freedom, but his life, to go to Elrid and use his own life force to help Elrid recover and regain his strength.
I liked the way the author created Veier’s character as a very rough, gruff, hard to get to know man, yet one who we definitely want to get to know and cheer for as he slowly grows from the bear who reacts before thinking to the man who feels all levels of emotion. Elrid was the strong, silent type—the kind of man with enough patience to wait out Veier’s slow buildup of trust.
The narrator did a good job with unique vocalizations for each man. If I had one peeve it would be that the MC’s name, Veier, rhymed with bear and he’s a bear shifter. Perhaps the narrator mispronounced it. Or perhaps the author never read the book out loud. In either event, it caused confusion on several occasions when I was listening as I wasn’t quite sure which word was being used. And at some points in the story, when it was important to know Veier was in bear or in human form, it was frustrating.
Other than that, this is a definite recommendation to my fellow MM romance readers. Most definitely not insta-love, this is a slow burn, enemies to friends to lovers story with a unique shifter slant.
I really enjoyed this story. An unusual shifter tale, in this one Veier (rhymes with bear) has been chained to a king’s throne and kept in his bear shifter form for five years. He’s freed when the kingdom is overthrown, but the new king wants him executed and it’s his brother, Elrid, who saves Veier’s life. Elrid is a powerful mage and he rightly points out that the chain indicates Veier was not necessarily loyal to the previous rulers.
But it takes patience and trial and error before Veier is trusted enough to be let outside the room where Elrid works and sleeps with him as the two begin to build trust. He has brief moments of freedom but always seems to be in the wrong place when trouble occurs. He and Elrid become close as he slowly starts to trust that this human may really not wish him harm.
When Elrid is severely injured in an attack by the previous king’s followers, it’s Veier who risks not only his freedom, but his life, to go to Elrid and use his own life force to help Elrid recover and regain his strength.
I liked the way the author created Veier’s character as a very rough, gruff, hard to get to know man, yet one who we definitely want to get to know and cheer for as he slowly grows from the bear who reacts before thinking to the man who feels all levels of emotion. Elrid was the strong, silent type—the kind of man with enough patience to wait out Veier’s slow buildup of trust.
The narrator did a good job with unique vocalizations for each man. If I had one peeve it would be that the MC’s name, Veier, rhymed with bear and he’s a bear shifter. Perhaps the narrator mispronounced it. Or perhaps the author never read the book out loud. In either event, it caused confusion on several occasions when I was listening as I wasn’t quite sure which word was being used. And at some points in the story, when it was important to know Veier was in bear or in human form, it was frustrating.
Other than that, this is a definite recommendation to my fellow MM romance readers. Most definitely not insta-love, this is a slow burn, enemies to friends to lovers story with a unique shifter slant.
March 1, 2019
This is my first Alex Whitehall novel, but it definitely won't be the last. As a devourer of books, it's a joy to find one that is so unique in plotline, and so skillfully crafted. I listened in audiobook format and the narrator brought such life to the characters.
Not your run-of-the-mill shifter or mage story, and the connection of the two main characters could have gone on for much longer, or even been the start of a series.
Highly recommended!
Not your run-of-the-mill shifter or mage story, and the connection of the two main characters could have gone on for much longer, or even been the start of a series.
Highly recommended!
October 24, 2018
slowest burn ever
February 12, 2018
I loved this story. It has a wonderful fairytale feel to it and if you like shifter stories this is definitely a must read.
Veier is a bear shifter who has been held captive by a despotic and cruel king for five long years. Veier is very violent, angry and chained in his shifted state. It is hard for him to think like a man because he hasnt been one for years. His chains are both physical and magical. Veier cannot remember his life before captivity but the yearning for home and for his past life and family lies deep within him.
When a neigbouring king invades the chance of going home become real.
Elrid is the brother of the invading king. Although others see a wild shape shifter who should be put down, Elrid is sure that there is a sane man in the depths of the feral shifter that was found at the deposed kings throne.
The King is convinced that it would be better to kill the bear shifter who is obviously wild and not in his right mind, but Elrid see this as a chance to learn more about this magical shifter race. There is also something else that pulls him to Veier and so he pleads for Veier's life convinced he can restore him to his right mind.
Elrid has magic on his side. He is a powerful mage and can use magic to help bring Veier back to sanity and also protect himself as he does so. And so risking his life Elrid, sets up himself and the bear shifter in a room and gets to work convincing Veier to shift, helping him control his anger and sharing time with him.
As Elrid does this, Veier is slowly restored to sanity. The two men develop a deep friendship. When Elrid is attacked and threatened it becomes clear that the seeds of love have been sown and there is something deeper between the two men but with Veier still healing and needing his family, how can the two men find something meaningful together?
This is a lovely romantic story just right for valentines day. It has a gentle slow growing romance, great characters, and the magic of love. The story also overflows with hope. I could feel the desperation as Veier realises the old king is dead and his frustration and fear of the new king. When Veier starts meeting Elrid we are taken on a journey of romance but is it one that will survive the journey back to healing and freedom that Veier must take?
I enjoyed reading this. It has great leading characters and a gentle fairytale romance. It also has magic and adventure!
Copy provided by Netgalley in exchange for an unbiased review.
February 13, 2018
ARC provided via Netgalley. Review of title to come closer to publication date.I really enjoyed this story. I particularly like titles that mix magic, a monarchy, and Arthurian settings into one. Veier was a captive bear shifter for five years until his tormentor is killed by an invading kingdom. This is one of those slow burn kind of stories, it's not hardcore or anything, but simple and sweet. Veier has a major case of PTDS when Elrid finds him because Veier has never been seen more than an animal, but to Elrid he is more. It's sweet seeing the attraction grow between the two. The angst is almost suffocating, but it's so stinking sweet that I can deal.
A lot of the story has Veier being the bad guy when he's just completely misunderstood and nowhere in the story does he really get that image changed for him. Yes he saves Elrid, but even then the king, Elrid's brother and the rest of the royal court see Veier as a beast. I love the contrast of Veier being a bearshifter with a gentle heart. It tickles my love of reverse stereotypes.
I really wish this were longer and a series because I would read it. I love this kind of old world and old world magic that has shifters because most tend to be placed in the modern era. I wish this were steamier, but again, it was really sweet and the characters were likable that I didn't have too much of an issue. 3.5 stars (Title provided via netgalley for an honest review)
A lot of the story has Veier being the bad guy when he's just completely misunderstood and nowhere in the story does he really get that image changed for him. Yes he saves Elrid, but even then the king, Elrid's brother and the rest of the royal court see Veier as a beast. I love the contrast of Veier being a bearshifter with a gentle heart. It tickles my love of reverse stereotypes.
I really wish this were longer and a series because I would read it. I love this kind of old world and old world magic that has shifters because most tend to be placed in the modern era. I wish this were steamier, but again, it was really sweet and the characters were likable that I didn't have too much of an issue. 3.5 stars (Title provided via netgalley for an honest review)
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April 12, 2018This is more of a fantasy with a bit of romance. There is no steam, and the physical nature of their relationship is hinted at only.
The writing was wonderful and the world-building well-done, however, this isn’t my thing. While I could appreciate the skill in the author’s ability, I probably wouldn’t have chosen this if I’d known that the romance was a secondary issue rather than the main pursuit.
I think fans of high fantasy and people looking for LGTBQ MCs without romance as the central theme will really enjoy this. If you’re like me and you crave the romance, you might be disappointed.
No rating.
The writing was wonderful and the world-building well-done, however, this isn’t my thing. While I could appreciate the skill in the author’s ability, I probably wouldn’t have chosen this if I’d known that the romance was a secondary issue rather than the main pursuit.
I think fans of high fantasy and people looking for LGTBQ MCs without romance as the central theme will really enjoy this. If you’re like me and you crave the romance, you might be disappointed.
No rating.
March 12, 2018
Oh my gosh how have I never discovered Alex Whitehall before? Magic Runs Deep was simply amazing and I’m not saying that. Once I started reading about Veier and Elrid, I immediately was sucked in and could not put this book down.
Let me start with I initially picked up the book because it was a M/M PNR, that and the shifter in the story was a bear. Most bear shifter stories run I’ve read have fallen into the humorous side and I wanted something a bit more serious. You don’t get to much more serious that a bear shifter, excuse me – a Ursinai, being held captive in his bear form for over five years. Poor Veier! After basically being imprisoned for so long he has a lot of adjusting and PTSD to deal with. Thank goodness Elrid saw something in him and was able to help him prove to his brother he wasn’t king’s loyal pet.
What really sold this story for me is the dynamics between Elrid and Veier. It’s a slow gradual buildup of trust and friendship. It felt honest and fragile with its two steps forward one-step back process. The story was told from Veier’s view, which gave me an insight to him. His struggles with wanting to be free yet realizing being free may mean losing Elrid. As for Elrid, my initial impression was he was going to be a weak character. Boy was I wrong! This mage is no pushover but instead he is kind yet firm and the perfect person to help bring Veier back to the Ursinai and man he once was. Also, Kudos to the author for keeping things real when it came to the romance as well as not instantly fixing Veier the minute he’s no longer in chains. I really hate when authors take someone his has been broken and imprisoned then having things all better once they are free.
Everything in Magic Runs Deep, from the world building to the characters, hit all the sweet spots I have when it comes to PNRs. I’m new to author Alex Whitehall and I’m hoping other titles by this author prove to be as entertaining for me. As for Magic Runs Deep, this one is worth keeping and worth recommending to all fans of PNR.
Let me start with I initially picked up the book because it was a M/M PNR, that and the shifter in the story was a bear. Most bear shifter stories run I’ve read have fallen into the humorous side and I wanted something a bit more serious. You don’t get to much more serious that a bear shifter, excuse me – a Ursinai, being held captive in his bear form for over five years. Poor Veier! After basically being imprisoned for so long he has a lot of adjusting and PTSD to deal with. Thank goodness Elrid saw something in him and was able to help him prove to his brother he wasn’t king’s loyal pet.
What really sold this story for me is the dynamics between Elrid and Veier. It’s a slow gradual buildup of trust and friendship. It felt honest and fragile with its two steps forward one-step back process. The story was told from Veier’s view, which gave me an insight to him. His struggles with wanting to be free yet realizing being free may mean losing Elrid. As for Elrid, my initial impression was he was going to be a weak character. Boy was I wrong! This mage is no pushover but instead he is kind yet firm and the perfect person to help bring Veier back to the Ursinai and man he once was. Also, Kudos to the author for keeping things real when it came to the romance as well as not instantly fixing Veier the minute he’s no longer in chains. I really hate when authors take someone his has been broken and imprisoned then having things all better once they are free.
Everything in Magic Runs Deep, from the world building to the characters, hit all the sweet spots I have when it comes to PNRs. I’m new to author Alex Whitehall and I’m hoping other titles by this author prove to be as entertaining for me. As for Magic Runs Deep, this one is worth keeping and worth recommending to all fans of PNR.
April 9, 2018
My Review:
This story is definitely more about the paranormal world that Veier lives and has survived in, rather than a true love story. Yes, there is somewhat of a romantic storyline, but it plays second to Veier's life and what he's trying to come out of. I think that's important to know going into it if you need a die-hard romance story line.
Because once you accept that, you can truly appreciate the story of Veier and what exactly he's been through the last five years and how difficult that is to overcome. He definitely would not have done that without Elrid's help...and that's where the relationship part of the story comes in. Because Elrid saves him by helping Veier find his humanity again...not exactly an easy prospect after what he's been through.
They both suffer trying to get him there in a very quick timeframe. The story was interesting and fascinating. I loved Elrid because he is definitely the hero of this story. His empathy for Veier is what keeps him alive and makes their developing relationship even more precious. It was a highly entertaining and engaging story.
I liked it and definitely recommend it. Just don't expect it to score high on the romantic scale. This is about two men thrown together who slowly build respect and trust and eventually (and slowly) that evolves to more. But it was good.
I received a complimentary copy of this book in return for an honest review.
This story is definitely more about the paranormal world that Veier lives and has survived in, rather than a true love story. Yes, there is somewhat of a romantic storyline, but it plays second to Veier's life and what he's trying to come out of. I think that's important to know going into it if you need a die-hard romance story line.
Because once you accept that, you can truly appreciate the story of Veier and what exactly he's been through the last five years and how difficult that is to overcome. He definitely would not have done that without Elrid's help...and that's where the relationship part of the story comes in. Because Elrid saves him by helping Veier find his humanity again...not exactly an easy prospect after what he's been through.
They both suffer trying to get him there in a very quick timeframe. The story was interesting and fascinating. I loved Elrid because he is definitely the hero of this story. His empathy for Veier is what keeps him alive and makes their developing relationship even more precious. It was a highly entertaining and engaging story.
I liked it and definitely recommend it. Just don't expect it to score high on the romantic scale. This is about two men thrown together who slowly build respect and trust and eventually (and slowly) that evolves to more. But it was good.
I received a complimentary copy of this book in return for an honest review.
January 6, 2020
I loved this book so much! Its got the magic, the world building, plot and that slow burn romance which I adore. Veier is a great MC I really enjoyed his development and his overcoming his imprisonment, it took a lot of time and effort for him to slowly get to a comfortable space again - which is done wonderfully over his time spent with Elrid and then among his family for a time.
The exploration of the Ursinai and life forces was interesting, I just loved Elrids and Veiers moments together especially the learning to trust and slowly falling for each other.
My only downside is that I wish there were more as plenty to work with here, so felt quite short and quick especially the last few chapters as resolved quickly.
It has a lovely HEA and I highly recommend to anyone who loves a fantasy with a great plot and slow burn romance.
The exploration of the Ursinai and life forces was interesting, I just loved Elrids and Veiers moments together especially the learning to trust and slowly falling for each other.
My only downside is that I wish there were more as plenty to work with here, so felt quite short and quick especially the last few chapters as resolved quickly.
It has a lovely HEA and I highly recommend to anyone who loves a fantasy with a great plot and slow burn romance.
June 18, 2018
3.5 starts
This is another book that I’ve been seeing in the kindle store a lot. I finally decided to just go for it. I didn’t love it but didn’t hate it.
The beginning was fast paced, exciting and all around fantastic. But I kept waiting for the other shoe to drop, and I waited, and waited, and it never came...
It ended up being just a simple sweet story and the most climactic part was the beginnings. Which is totally fine, it’s just not what I expected from the storyline.
This is another book that I’ve been seeing in the kindle store a lot. I finally decided to just go for it. I didn’t love it but didn’t hate it.
The beginning was fast paced, exciting and all around fantastic. But I kept waiting for the other shoe to drop, and I waited, and waited, and it never came...
It ended up being just a simple sweet story and the most climactic part was the beginnings. Which is totally fine, it’s just not what I expected from the storyline.
May 27, 2018
An involving and heart wrenching story that could have been amazing had it a bit more of a world and some explanations to build it all up. As it was the relationship and the story of the past five years carried this story and made it something beautiful in and of that.
Veier has been chained for the past five years with his mind lost to a magic that makes him loyal to a mad king. When the king dies and the magic is gone Veier is still a chained man with blood on his hands, only now the next ruling group has a wizard that wants to see him free. But to be free Veier must work with the wizard, Elrid, and prove that he is a changed man from the beast they first saw so he can go home.
This book that a good job of looking at both the work to get beyond such a betrayal of trust and of self, as well as the cultural differences in getting past it. As Veier slowly works to be trusted he deals with anger and aggression, which makes sense given both the abuse of the past five years and the aggression of the soldiers around him. Yet, he is deemed as dangerous for his actions, especially when he shifts. The thing is Veier is part bear, but everyone around him simply deems him shifting as becoming an animal, while he can only be trusted when he remains as a human, regardless to the fact that each is only half to the whole that is him. The more he works with the patient and trusting Elrid the more this comes out as the two slowly find out more about each other and their beliefs, creating a bond that allows both healing and trust.
I found this universe a bit hard to understand at times in terms of world building. The shifters, Ursinai, are known by everyone. However they seem to be both hated and feared, but then at the same time simply accepted? It was a confusion of statements where everything about the Ursinai seemed to be kept secret, up to even where they lived, but in the next breath it was determined that thye freely and openly traded with others and could be visited quite easily. It was hard to determine how everyone fit together and what exactly was the situation that was getting walked into. Add int he fact that there were oddities to the magic Elrid could perform, from what it was useful for to how it worked, and it felt that just a bit more explanation and backstory would have been beneficial to really top up this story.
As it was I loved the relationship that built up between Elrid and Veier. It was hard won through a slow and patient trust as well as understanding born from basic truths. They were a complicated pair with as much for as against them, but the love they built was sweet and slow burning, making for a lovely and satisfying read.
Veier has been chained for the past five years with his mind lost to a magic that makes him loyal to a mad king. When the king dies and the magic is gone Veier is still a chained man with blood on his hands, only now the next ruling group has a wizard that wants to see him free. But to be free Veier must work with the wizard, Elrid, and prove that he is a changed man from the beast they first saw so he can go home.
This book that a good job of looking at both the work to get beyond such a betrayal of trust and of self, as well as the cultural differences in getting past it. As Veier slowly works to be trusted he deals with anger and aggression, which makes sense given both the abuse of the past five years and the aggression of the soldiers around him. Yet, he is deemed as dangerous for his actions, especially when he shifts. The thing is Veier is part bear, but everyone around him simply deems him shifting as becoming an animal, while he can only be trusted when he remains as a human, regardless to the fact that each is only half to the whole that is him. The more he works with the patient and trusting Elrid the more this comes out as the two slowly find out more about each other and their beliefs, creating a bond that allows both healing and trust.
I found this universe a bit hard to understand at times in terms of world building. The shifters, Ursinai, are known by everyone. However they seem to be both hated and feared, but then at the same time simply accepted? It was a confusion of statements where everything about the Ursinai seemed to be kept secret, up to even where they lived, but in the next breath it was determined that thye freely and openly traded with others and could be visited quite easily. It was hard to determine how everyone fit together and what exactly was the situation that was getting walked into. Add int he fact that there were oddities to the magic Elrid could perform, from what it was useful for to how it worked, and it felt that just a bit more explanation and backstory would have been beneficial to really top up this story.
As it was I loved the relationship that built up between Elrid and Veier. It was hard won through a slow and patient trust as well as understanding born from basic truths. They were a complicated pair with as much for as against them, but the love they built was sweet and slow burning, making for a lovely and satisfying read.
April 19, 2018
I never use to like fantasy books, but I’ve had a great run of them lately.
This fantasy world appealed to me because while it was fantasy it was also familiar. There were knights and kings and mages and castles and all kinds of other delicious medieval things. Just with some shifters thrown into the mix. However, much of the story is spent in the confines of one room of the castle, where Elrid keeps Veier locked away while attempting to prove to the king that Veier is not the out of control animal he appears to be.
I’ll admit, it took me a while to like this story. Actually, the story was fine. It took me a while to like Elrid, was the problem. I wanted to like the guy. After all, he was one of the main characters. But the way he kept using his magic against Veier, someone who was already traumatized after being controlled by magic for five years…what an ass, right? But eventually, once he realizes the errors of his ways, well then I could like him and applaud them as a couple.
Veier, well I liked our poor abused bear right from the start. I was so angry about the way he was being treated by the people who had “rescued” him that at one point I was kinda cheering for him to rip of Elrid’s head then go find himself a nice bear to fall in love with. But like I said, Elrid sorted his shit out, and became an acceptable love interest for our angry grizzly. The confusion and anger and helplessness that Veier was experiencing was so…well, I won’t say realistic, because, you know…bear shifter. But the author did a great job of moving through a whole range of emotions to demonstrate Veier’s instability.
There really wasn’t much romance here, but that was okay. That worked, I think. Veier was in no state to be thinking of love or even lust really, and while the author used the growing connection between them to hasten along Veier’s recovery, there was no miraculous “love fix”. And if you’re hanging out for a sex scene, well you’ll be waiting right till the very end of the book.
If you’re a lover of Arthurian-type fantasy worlds with a nice, slow build to the romance, then this book should be just the thing for you.
Reviewed for Love Bytes Reviews
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This fantasy world appealed to me because while it was fantasy it was also familiar. There were knights and kings and mages and castles and all kinds of other delicious medieval things. Just with some shifters thrown into the mix. However, much of the story is spent in the confines of one room of the castle, where Elrid keeps Veier locked away while attempting to prove to the king that Veier is not the out of control animal he appears to be.
I’ll admit, it took me a while to like this story. Actually, the story was fine. It took me a while to like Elrid, was the problem. I wanted to like the guy. After all, he was one of the main characters. But the way he kept using his magic against Veier, someone who was already traumatized after being controlled by magic for five years…what an ass, right? But eventually, once he realizes the errors of his ways, well then I could like him and applaud them as a couple.
Veier, well I liked our poor abused bear right from the start. I was so angry about the way he was being treated by the people who had “rescued” him that at one point I was kinda cheering for him to rip of Elrid’s head then go find himself a nice bear to fall in love with. But like I said, Elrid sorted his shit out, and became an acceptable love interest for our angry grizzly. The confusion and anger and helplessness that Veier was experiencing was so…well, I won’t say realistic, because, you know…bear shifter. But the author did a great job of moving through a whole range of emotions to demonstrate Veier’s instability.
There really wasn’t much romance here, but that was okay. That worked, I think. Veier was in no state to be thinking of love or even lust really, and while the author used the growing connection between them to hasten along Veier’s recovery, there was no miraculous “love fix”. And if you’re hanging out for a sex scene, well you’ll be waiting right till the very end of the book.
If you’re a lover of Arthurian-type fantasy worlds with a nice, slow build to the romance, then this book should be just the thing for you.
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April 6, 2018
I liked this shifter romance, but it’s definitely more focused on the fantasy elements and hurt/comfort themes than the love story.
The plot revolves around bear shifter Veier, who has spent five years magically enslaved by an evil king. When his rule is overthrown by invaders, they aren’t sure what to do with Veier, since he has been abused to the point where he has descended into savagery. The king’s brother Elrid, a mage and healer, asks to have the opportunity to help Veier recover his human side and is given responsibility for his rehabilitation. Although the trauma he has experienced has damaged him, Veier does come to trust Elrid and begins to heal. As the two spend time together, deeper feelings start to grow, but what future is there for a prince and a damaged bear shifter?
Most of the story involves Veier overcoming the demons of his abuse. Veier basically has post-traumatic stress disorder; he reacts with violence when he feels threatened and suffers from night terrors. Elrid finds ways to help him, and Veier eventually returns the favor when Elrid is attacked by men who resent his brother's rule.
Their romantic relationship really doesn’t manifest until the final chapters, so readers who are looking for a book that foregrounds romance and sexy times might not be satisfied. For all the violence of Veier’s actions, this is really more of a sweet story of growing affection between two men.
It probably won’t be to everyone’s taste, but readers who enjoy books featuring shifters and hurt/comfort stories might want to give this book a try.
A copy of this book was provided through NetGalley for review; all opinions expressed are my own.
The plot revolves around bear shifter Veier, who has spent five years magically enslaved by an evil king. When his rule is overthrown by invaders, they aren’t sure what to do with Veier, since he has been abused to the point where he has descended into savagery. The king’s brother Elrid, a mage and healer, asks to have the opportunity to help Veier recover his human side and is given responsibility for his rehabilitation. Although the trauma he has experienced has damaged him, Veier does come to trust Elrid and begins to heal. As the two spend time together, deeper feelings start to grow, but what future is there for a prince and a damaged bear shifter?
Most of the story involves Veier overcoming the demons of his abuse. Veier basically has post-traumatic stress disorder; he reacts with violence when he feels threatened and suffers from night terrors. Elrid finds ways to help him, and Veier eventually returns the favor when Elrid is attacked by men who resent his brother's rule.
Their romantic relationship really doesn’t manifest until the final chapters, so readers who are looking for a book that foregrounds romance and sexy times might not be satisfied. For all the violence of Veier’s actions, this is really more of a sweet story of growing affection between two men.
It probably won’t be to everyone’s taste, but readers who enjoy books featuring shifters and hurt/comfort stories might want to give this book a try.
A copy of this book was provided through NetGalley for review; all opinions expressed are my own.
February 4, 2018
Arc recieved from Netgalley
I so wish this book was longer so that it never ended. This is such a lovely read and just what I needed. There are heavy ptsd themes in this story which is a given after what Veier went through being forced to stay in bear form for 5 grueling years and the abuse he suffered under magic and the hands of men. He rightly does not trust magic and especially when Elrid keeps using so Veier doesnt hurt people who he feels threatened. So it takes a long time for him to trust Elrid but it is so worth the wait.
The bond that the two of them share is so powerful and it is amazing to watch it grow because Veier has every right to never trust again. This is less of a slow burn romance because there isnt a lot of sexual tension but more a friendship to lovers. I truly enjoyed the magic and view of the world we are given in such a short span of time this is a quick read and I hope for more of this world
TW: abuse, ptsd, nightmares, nightmares that lead to violent outbursts, past talk of child sex abuse at the hands of the evil king upon other people
I so wish this book was longer so that it never ended. This is such a lovely read and just what I needed. There are heavy ptsd themes in this story which is a given after what Veier went through being forced to stay in bear form for 5 grueling years and the abuse he suffered under magic and the hands of men. He rightly does not trust magic and especially when Elrid keeps using so Veier doesnt hurt people who he feels threatened. So it takes a long time for him to trust Elrid but it is so worth the wait.
The bond that the two of them share is so powerful and it is amazing to watch it grow because Veier has every right to never trust again. This is less of a slow burn romance because there isnt a lot of sexual tension but more a friendship to lovers. I truly enjoyed the magic and view of the world we are given in such a short span of time this is a quick read and I hope for more of this world
TW: abuse, ptsd, nightmares, nightmares that lead to violent outbursts, past talk of child sex abuse at the hands of the evil king upon other people
February 11, 2018
2.5
I think it was me. I've read books like this before and been ok with the plot. But this time I just wasn't able to overlook how quickly Veier got over five years of enslavement, physical, mental and sexual abuse (the last being implied) when it came to Elrid. They were just instantly civil with one another, trust bloomed in no time and almost instantly Veier and Elrid were comfortable with one another. It was too much too fast, and instead of reading as building trust and Elrid being a nice person, it just read as Mary-Sue, bland. I was frankly bored for most of the book, absolutely all of the book in which I wasn't too busy being utterly incredulous.
Having said all that, the writing is fine and any editing issues I noted were few and far between, and probably due to the fact that I was reading an ARC. Thus, my assertion that I this case, "it's me, not you," might account for my dislike of the book.
I think it was me. I've read books like this before and been ok with the plot. But this time I just wasn't able to overlook how quickly Veier got over five years of enslavement, physical, mental and sexual abuse (the last being implied) when it came to Elrid. They were just instantly civil with one another, trust bloomed in no time and almost instantly Veier and Elrid were comfortable with one another. It was too much too fast, and instead of reading as building trust and Elrid being a nice person, it just read as Mary-Sue, bland. I was frankly bored for most of the book, absolutely all of the book in which I wasn't too busy being utterly incredulous.
Having said all that, the writing is fine and any editing issues I noted were few and far between, and probably due to the fact that I was reading an ARC. Thus, my assertion that I this case, "it's me, not you," might account for my dislike of the book.
April 2, 2018
A Scattered Thoughts and Rogue Words Review
Rating: 5 stars our of 5
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From that review: " I just loved everything about Magic Runs Deep by Alex Whitehall. Here is a fantasy novel where the author managed to combine some very dark and realistic elements like PTSD, the horror of torture , the effects of long term prisoner captivity under the worse conditions, with that prisoner's recovery and love. That the prisoner is an Ursinae or bear shifter, the one to save and help him recover a mage and brother to a king, and that some of the methods used include magic? In the hands of author Alex Whitehall, that seems normal. Whitehall seamlessly blends modern methods for dealing with PTSD and the magical to come up with a unique combination of spells and universe for this story that entranced me."
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Rating: 5 stars our of 5
For the full review visit https://wp.me/p220KL-dfY
From that review: " I just loved everything about Magic Runs Deep by Alex Whitehall. Here is a fantasy novel where the author managed to combine some very dark and realistic elements like PTSD, the horror of torture , the effects of long term prisoner captivity under the worse conditions, with that prisoner's recovery and love. That the prisoner is an Ursinae or bear shifter, the one to save and help him recover a mage and brother to a king, and that some of the methods used include magic? In the hands of author Alex Whitehall, that seems normal. Whitehall seamlessly blends modern methods for dealing with PTSD and the magical to come up with a unique combination of spells and universe for this story that entranced me."
For all our reviews, author interviews and such, visit us at http://scatteredthoughtsandroguewords...
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