I took this home free from the bookshop I volunteer at. I wasn't sure how this would be, so I wanted to read it early on in summer.
I didn't like hearing of how he coaxed a girl to have sex with him in the back of his truck when he was 17.
All Spec Ops guys tear their insignia off their uniforms and only wear their last names and blood types.
The hero's and heroine's POV sounded exactly the same, even both of them thinking of the other and wondering if they were at their respective locations, which they were. Very convenient.
She was a little too masculine and tough for my tastes, and unrelatable.
Idl all the time jumps, between present and past. I wish it had started with them in the past so we can get the whole story and just be done with it. I didn't find it necessary to keep going back. I mean they barely know each other, so it's not like there's much to tell.
Usually in military books it keeps it on the surface, with tidbits of military life, like an introductory. This jumped us right into the deep end. There's so much military lingo and things that I don't understand nor would most people unless you're in the military/know someone in the military. Words and phrases were used that I didn't understand and they weren't explained.
Why was the CIA guy called a spook? What was the Green Zone?
I was so glad the heroine was allowed to have good sex, even great sex, in her past, and that she wasn't relegated to being a virgin paired with another man whore hero.
I hated that he lost his leg; I was hoping he wouldn't.
After Shane's reception in Germany, I wouldn't have forgiven him. It's like he forgot how he acted at that camp when he was injured, cause he was friendly then.
We enter Shane's POV to find 18 months have passed, and I'm thinking, & hoping, he won't have gotten with anyone. I mean it's only been 18 months and Shane's rehabbing his missing leg. Doesn't that make sense that he'd be a little busy and focused on other things?
It didn't take long for the comments to come in. Poor Kirby admits her feelings to him and he acts cold and then only 18 months later he's been with other women. We enter his scene to find him in bed with a woman, he had sex one morning in the shower before hanging out with his friends and also with his case manager in DC.
Idl his friends wives setting him up with someone. I was annoyed with them and didn't wanna read their books.
I don't even like mentions of their past, much less names and details. Painful detail, of what they look like, what they did together.
Despite not getting a boner from her kiss, he knows he should call it a night but doesn't. We have to hear her leading him to her room and undressing, and the whole dang scene. Why do I want to read intimate scenes with him and another woman?!? WHO would want to read that? Do authors write detailed scenes of the heroine with other men! NO! So why do you do it with the hero?
He thinks of Kirby while this woman is undressed and that gets him hard, yet he continues on.
He blames it on the fact that that was his first time with a civilian. So it's ok and he's still being 'faithful' the times he had sex with that case manager, who's in the military, because it had been an experiment to see if he could 'get back into the swing of things' but it's romantic that he couldn't go all the way with the 'sexy prosecutor who'd left a red lipstick brand on his dick.'
I'd prefer faithful heroes who, after they're with the heroine and realize they have feelings for her, they aren't with anyone else. I guess that's just me.
Of course Kirby had sworn off men while Shane was having sex with at least two other women. Idk who the shower sex was with. I'm surprised the author didn't wanna detail that.
A character's dialogue would be broken up in different lines instead of kept together. I found it odd and confusing at times.
Everyone spoke old-fashioned in here. "I've not a single doubt."
"I haven't a doubt."
Shane as a SOAR was called a bird jockey.
There was a reference to D-boys, which after Delta Force was mentioned, I guessed must be them.
I feel like there's a bridge between civilians and the military and this author did nothing to close that gap. I couldn't relate to Kirby. She was a little robotic, as were both characters voices. I couldn't connect or feel close to her. She's a doctor which I don't relate to, or the military. The author should have humanized her, made her connect to readers on a personal level to bridge the gap for readers who don't relate to her career.
She wasn't very human to me, which I find in female characters like this. All I could relate was her being stubborn and impatient. But I needed more.
I just knew Kirby didn't have sex with anyone else after him, because the hero always ruins the heroine for other men. She didn't meet a man she had the least interest in having sex with, but Shane had gotten with two women and almost three, and he had kissed the third one and she'd given him a blow job.
He said if he hadn't lied to get her to go away in Germany, then they might have gotten married. And that she wouldn't have worked for the WMR if he'd gotten her pregnant. Which makes him getting with other women even more f'd up.
I guess no one can be faithful in here, which gives military guys a bad rap, on top of talking of women and sex like they do. Quinn has his version of Kirby, Cait Cavanaugh who left after their one night stand. But who were now heading towards marriage. If he would never cheat on her and was 'besotted' with her why would he flirt with Kirby?
And how can Shane call her 'his woman' if he's been with other women and told her to leave in Germany?! Wth was that for?!
I loved that Rachel's past love, Michael Gannon, was there to rescue her!
JAG was one of the most respected units in the military, and one of the most difficult to get into. Because it dealt with military legal issues, it was one of the safest.
Night Stalkers were the most intelligent unit in the Army. They were called flyboys.
He thought the woman his friends wives set him up with was the one. It was a blind date and he didn't even know her!
I knew, despite being a tough military woman and a doctor who'd been in dangerous regions of the world she'd be like every other doormat heroine who is betrayed and heartbroken over the hero, and just gets over the past, isn't mad, and acts like nothing happened.
Michael joined the priesthood because he made a deal with god that he would if Rachel would live. He called the German hospital daily and had flowers sent to her room once a week. She was the only woman he'd ever want or love, but I don't expect him to have been faithful, even though he's a priest.
I hate that this military, high stakes, rescue mission book turned into a fake dating scenario which you can find in any book. I literally just recently read a YA book about that.
I can't believe Shane's big reason for being so mean in Germany was to save her from being stuck with a cripple. She's a doctor, she's in the military, she cared about you. She can handle it. And that didn't stop you from being with other women, who you obviously thought could handle it.
I felt bad she wondered if him moving on included women, available or not, until she said 'she'd expect that. Even understand it.' She doesn't mind if he has sex with OW, only if he settles down with one special woman. Even though she hasn't had sex with anyone.
She asks if there's a woman who'd be upset about him leaving or something, and he says no. She comes out and asks if he's had sex since being injured. He says there wasn't a woman in his life in the way she means.
All the movie quotes and references became annoying, as well as them keeping track of everything they had in common, like how they'd both counted the columns on the antebellum house. For gods sake.
It was cool how in the antebellum period, there were double front stairs so men and women could go up different ones when they went to balls.
The questions were repetitive: 'wasn't that an understatement?'
'Wasn't that profound?'
Even in Shane's POV he said 'wasn't this just perfect?' like Kirby does.
I looked forward to her anger, arguments, her being cool and distant. But there was none of that. She was so 'upset' about the past when he kisses her the very day they see each other after 18 months she goes along with it. Of course the minute the guy kisses her, the women lose their heads.
Even after she remembered leaving Germany in tears because of him.
I couldn't believe how arrogant and ridiculous Shane was for thinking he could pick up where things left off and pretend Germany didn't happen. What an idiot.
She's not even mad he deliberately turned her on so she'd remember things between them but didn't intend for things to go so far.
'"I see all the important parts are in working order."
"Seems to be." At least with you.'
He calls it 'muscle memory' and 'figured it fit the definition in this case.' Fuck you for saying that when you slept with someone and almost did with someone else. It's not just in working order with her, you damn liar.
She tells him she'd given up men. And he makes a joke about her announcing she's a lesbian. He has regret that she'd buttoned her blouse but not that he hadn't given up sex while she had.
He likes to '"concentrate on making sure my woman is sexually satisfied." Which he sure hadn't done with that lawyer the other night.' He was with a woman JUST THE OTHER NIGHT. Right before seeing Kirby here. That is some romantic shit right there. Damn ladies, let's all swoon.
'He was right. Together they were as explosive as an IED. And definitely every bit as dangerous.' Are you serious? You can't make a joke about terrorists but you can make a comparison like that?
And this is all while she's supposed to be worried and focused on rescuing her best friend.
They're called MRE's Meals Rarely Edible, Meals Rejected by Everyone, and Meals Rejected by the Enemy.
I forgot who tangos were.
'"Quinn raised his beer bottle. "hooyah."
"hooyah," Shane and Michael Gannon corrected, repeating it in the Army way.' It was spelled the same way, so I didn't see the difference.
The MRE's had a 'Three Lies for the Price of One' reputation. It's not a meal, it's not ready, and you can't eat it.
I was so irritated at those dumb women--Sabrina and Titania(which I have no idea how to pronounce)--said they're working on a project involving Shane. And have been trying to fix him up with a woman but 'he hasn't been at all cooperative" which is actually a lie because just the other day he went out with the lawyer.
When asked by his friend what took him so long about Kirby he said "it's only been eighteen months." Yet that was long enough to sleep with other women.
Even though she said before she'd had good and great sex, she ends up saying after college she'd begin to worry she was 'undersexed' but Shane had blown that to smithereens. And where are the detailed sex scenes of her with OM? Oh yeah there isn't any. There never is. Because women aren't allowed to enjoy sex with anyone besides the hero.
I wanted her to have gotten with someone since then, or to be dating someone now. Not to be a celibate little nun waiting for him.
It went into typical romance book territory with the ladies giving the heroine a makeover, you know because you need one before you go to the jungle on a covert mission to rescue your kidnapped friend. The same friend you've barely thought about in between making out and almost doing Shane, hanging with the girls tasting food and looking over wedding albums.
Of course Titania and Sabrina knew how to cut hair and trim the dress to fit Kirby.
She said she's rescuing a friend from terrorist rebels, not going on a date, which should remind these two beauty queens the seriousness of the situation. But it doesn't. "Not looking like a frumpy nun and rescuing friends need not be mutually exclusive." Good thing to joke about.
The whole thing was entirely disrespectful to Rachel.
Earlier in the book there was a comment that while skinny was in fashion her curves drew the males attention. She later admits she was pudgy in HS, so there's some skinny shaming for you.
She knocks regular doctors saying "I'd go insane diagnosing skin rashes and writing steroid prescriptions for wheezy asthmatics." And she's easily bored. When Shane comments there's more to a general practitioner than that she said I'm sure there is. That was rude, and just not true.
They were always thinking the same things, or guessing the other was thinking of the same memory. It was absurd. She looks worried and he says that's how she looked when she gave him her key. And he watched her remember that day too. You have no idea what someone is thinking!
He calls Michael Gannon "Father-What-a-Waste" and she asks how he knew she thought the same thing.
I was flabbergasted that he'd known she was the one, had a ring sent to Afghanistan the day before the crash and was planning to propose, and then did what he did in Germany and hooked up with other women since and thought the lawyer might be the one. And it had only been 18 months, in his words. So wth? It's even more fucked up than thought. You thought someone else might be the one for you, after loving Kirby.
He tells her "some things--and some people--are worth waiting for." Even though you didn't wait...and you wouldn't have had to wait if you hadn't deliberately sent her away. We don't find this out until pg 275 that he planned to propose. Idk how you can leave something like that out.
Time transitioned with no warning; all of a sudden you'd be in the past. It was confusing.
Spec Op teams take combat naps, with jerky eye movements, body twitches, irregular breathing and irregular heartbeat. They can instantly drop into REM sleep.
He could set an internal clock to wake himself up at the exact time he wanted, and look as rested after 10 minutes as people after 8 hours.
Michael Gannon and Conn, an ancient Irish name, Gaelic for hound or wolf, were Black Irish. Conn seemed like a cool character with some kinda backstory there, hinting at not knowing what it was to love someone. I hoped he'd have his own book.
It seemed like every single guy in this book is the same, and all the stories are a case of reunited lovers. Like Sabrina and Zach. And Rachel and Michael.
I thought it was ironic Kirby told Shane "like I'd go partying with her friend being held hostage" yet almost had sex with Shane and had a makeover during that time.
Why was the Zodiac, a boat, called IBS?
I didn't like the split POV in the middle of action scenes with Kirby and Shane.
Seals worked in small teams and weren't designed to seize or hold a position, or fight long-term battles, unlike Rangers or Delta Special Forces. Their job was to find a target it, destroy it, and disappear into the ocean. Which is very cool.
It was cool how Quinn did the sniper thing where you control your heartbeat, allowing it to pause long enough to hit a target.
Seals felt the water, in and under it, was home. Other SOF groups, special forces, rangers, and Air Force tactics teams, did diving and small-boat training but the water was an obstacle.
Every seal was trained in dead reckoning, navigating with chart, compass and known speed of the boat.
I couldn't believe the outright lie he said when she said '"the only reason I'd given up men is that none of them were you." "Me, too," he said. "Not men, but--" "I get it. And while I'm always up for a good conversation, I'd really, really like it if you'd just put it back in."'
First off, that's sure as hell not a good conversation, second you already asked if he'd been with anyone and he had. So wth is that lie?
Volcanoes in mythology were considered gods or goddesses, or inhabited by gods, revered, worshipped, or seen as gateways to hell.
They were in a bar talking about Mayan ruins and then all of a sudden at the ruin.
We didn't get to see the guys meet up with Kirby and Shane.
BLISS: blend into surroundings, have Low silhouette, keep Irregular shape, Stay small, keep to Secluded areas.
SEALs work in the dark, at night, in and out before anyone knows they'd been there, clandestine special teams of SOF.
When she mentioned Germany wasn't her favorite place he prepared to grovel, but of course Kirby made it easy on him, like she always did, and said she'd like to spend Christmas with him. I wanted him to grovel. He needed to grovel.
He stupidly thinks her feelings for Germany might change, on a holiday trip or a family trip with kids, that they don't even have yet. He just doesn't get it and doesn't even seem remorseful.
When Shane says he dug out the ring box he's had with him for 'all these months' I was perplexed because they've only been together a mere two or three days, not counting her few unconscious days in the hospital. So when did you buy a ring? While you were screwing other women only a couple days before reigniting with Kirby? I had forgotten he bought it while overseas with Kirby. Can you imagine having a ring intended for someone else while you're hooking up with other people?
The last line confused me: night Stalkers never quit. But you did quit on each other, when you made her leave Germany. So...there goes that. If Kirby hadn't had to come back to the U.S. was Shane ever planning on seeing her again?
The romance scene felt like oh wait this is a romance book, I have to include a sex scene! And another thing she managed to do while being 'worried' about Rachel. Only one sex scene in the present. Some references to their past. A scene with an OW should not be as long/longer than the heroine. It shouldn't be in a book at all.
The plot of them fake dating ended up being for nothing, because they didn't even meet up with the president. The whole thing was unnecessary anyway. They didn't need to fake date, like a couple of teenagers.
The proposal and her wanting to move away with him just felt sudden because she hadn't expressed that to us. Shane was sudden in his feelings too. You don't break someone's heart, then change your mind and think all is fine. He wasn't remorseful at all, and we didn't have enough explanation of what he was thinking while in rehab and his decision to end things with Kirby.
I really didn't like the name Kirby, btw. Or the changing POVs with other characters. Although I did like seeing what they were up to, planning their rescue, and also Michael and Rachel, which was sweet. I actually liked them more than the MCs.
The ending and HEA felt rushed. The action I wanted took place in the last few chapters, was over too quickly, and didn't deliver. I didn't like the pacing in here, and how the author saved the action for the very end. This would have been a lot better, maybe even good without the OW crap. I might have to steer clear of this author.
The cover didn’t fit at all. There was no scene like that in the book.
This felt like more of a military book than a romance at times. It was a little too heavy on the military, to the point of me not understanding a lot of the lingo.
I wish there was more dialogue, because this was wordy at times.
One chapter was two pages, one was one page.
I could have DNF this after that one scene, it was that upsetting. I had to keep reading that night just to get past it so I wouldn't end on that note. Yet another unsafe book.
Because of that crap it could have been 1 star, but the rest of the book, and the military guys were ok.
It sounds like all the stories are of reunited lovers, and you just know the guys haven't been faithful, so I'm not really interested in reading any more in this series, and perhaps any from this author.