I’m going to open this review with a criticism that needs to be pointed out to this author. I hate to open reviews in a negative light but this really irks me... a distinct lack of clear perspective. Mr. McCracken, pick a perspective and stick with it! Because this book is full of head-popping and it is disorienting to the reader.
If you have never heard that term before, head-popping is a common term used in writing/publishing that refers to author’s jumping from one person’s perspective to another in their writing. This leads to the story/manuscript feeling disjointed and it is something this book has in abundance. Personally, I found it frustrating as I tried to maintain focus.
There simply is no consistent story-telling perspective and someone needs to be honest enough to tell Mr. McCracken as much. Perspective is simply Writing 101, learn it! This issue alone would have kept the small independent Oklahoma publisher I work for from touching this manuscript.
This issue also leads me to believe this author did not employ an Editor. Aside from head-popping this book is full of errors, disjointed and immature writing, and let’s face it...paragraphs upon paragraphs of unnecessary filler material that have absolutely nothing to do with the actual subject at hand.
I kid you not; there is an entire chapter about nothing but football. What does that have to do with anything other than the fact that this author obviously likes football and yeah, the man who was murdered was in fact a football coach. Talk about that fact, that’s fine. But, the reader does not need to know in detail about football plays that are not integral to the subject matter. A content editor would have had a field-day red-lining the heck out of this book to eliminate filler material.
Admittedly I was disappointed in this read but I read it for a few reason, the first being...my family is from Sapulpa and Keifer and they have lived there for over one-hundred years; so I am very interested in the events of that area. In addition, many of my family members worked at or attended Sapulpa High as well and did so during the time these events took place so I am familiar with the subject matter. I’m also a local history buff. Generally that’s all I need to direct me to read something by someone local. So, when a friend of mine directed me to this book to get my opinion about it, I was of course, intrigued. Unfortunately, that’s where my interest ended because this book certainly did not hold my interest. I was battling for focus from page one!
I found that reading this book honestly felt more like reading a high-school term paper and well... that’s unimpressive to say the least. However, term papers have one thing that is completely missing from this book as well. Source citing’s. Where are they?
This book is not listed as fiction and it discusses actual events, a crime, a trial...yet not a single source is cited to back anything up? That’s sloppy and irresponsible of this author. Even if quoting something found on Google you cite it. I suggest that if Mr. McCracken really wants to learn how to write a book based upon real events that he check out “Hell’s Princess: The Mystery of Belle Gunness, Butcher of Men” by Harold Schechter. Now, there’s an author he can learn from who writes about real events, knows how to maintain perspective...and knows how to cite the material...properly.
To close this review I just have to throw in here that I have written article upon article about self-published authors jumping the gun and publishing their books before they are ready to be published. “Because of the Hate” by Kirk McCracken is regretfully, a case study in an author self-publishing something that was not yet ready to be published and honestly, probably shouldn’t have been.
This gets 1 star from this reviewer.