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Lost Souls
Updated on 6/5/17
Mature Content Ages 18+
This book contains Sex, drugs, abuse, and rape. It may not be for everyone.
Raya has had a rough life. She deals with physical abuse from her father daily. Her mother hates even the sight of her and doesn’t let her forget it. The only person who truly loves and cares for Raya is her older brother Ezra. The sad part is Ezra left years ago leaving Raya to fend for herself. The only thing that kept Raya going since Ezra left is her only friend Raina. When Raya finally turns eighteen she sneaks out of town in search of Ezra. Never in her wildest dreams would she expect to find Ezra as the Vice President of a Motorcycle Club. Can Ezra help Raya find her way out of the darkness? Will Raya be able to finally find happiness in the last place she thought she would ever be? Or will Raya forever be that lost girl?
Mature Content Ages 18+
This book contains Sex, drugs, abuse, and rape. It may not be for everyone.
Raya has had a rough life. She deals with physical abuse from her father daily. Her mother hates even the sight of her and doesn’t let her forget it. The only person who truly loves and cares for Raya is her older brother Ezra. The sad part is Ezra left years ago leaving Raya to fend for herself. The only thing that kept Raya going since Ezra left is her only friend Raina. When Raya finally turns eighteen she sneaks out of town in search of Ezra. Never in her wildest dreams would she expect to find Ezra as the Vice President of a Motorcycle Club. Can Ezra help Raya find her way out of the darkness? Will Raya be able to finally find happiness in the last place she thought she would ever be? Or will Raya forever be that lost girl?
250 pages, Paperback
First published March 4, 2015
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March 6, 2015
Lost Souls seems to be the author's first attempt at the MC world. It's a book about being lost and then found and reconnecting with people. The book doesn't just center around Raya and Ezra, but includes characters from the MC. Even though that's the case, you don't find yourself being lost in a crowd of characters.
This book contains the stereotypical storylines that you find in some MC books. Someone has a drug addiction? Check. Someone comes from an abusive home? Check. I don't have a problem in reading these storylines, but you have to make the strong. I feel that the author was getting close to having a strong storyline but fell back when it got a little intense. I also feel that there wasn't much character development. You are just introduced to the characters and then jump into the story. The only one you really get a backstory on is Raya. By not developing the characters, as a reader, you feel no connection to them. You're just reading a story that you're not emotional about.
The author also makes the mistake of cramming so much into one book. I think that it could have been a fantastic read if the story was broken down into multiple books. She has a good story to tell, it just doesn't need to be told all at once.
I'm not saying that the book was bad. I'm just saying that it had some flaws that keep it from being an awesome read. The author made a great attempt at this but it just fell short of being spectacular.
This book contains the stereotypical storylines that you find in some MC books. Someone has a drug addiction? Check. Someone comes from an abusive home? Check. I don't have a problem in reading these storylines, but you have to make the strong. I feel that the author was getting close to having a strong storyline but fell back when it got a little intense. I also feel that there wasn't much character development. You are just introduced to the characters and then jump into the story. The only one you really get a backstory on is Raya. By not developing the characters, as a reader, you feel no connection to them. You're just reading a story that you're not emotional about.
The author also makes the mistake of cramming so much into one book. I think that it could have been a fantastic read if the story was broken down into multiple books. She has a good story to tell, it just doesn't need to be told all at once.
I'm not saying that the book was bad. I'm just saying that it had some flaws that keep it from being an awesome read. The author made a great attempt at this but it just fell short of being spectacular.
March 24, 2015
In general, the storyline was a good idea. But the timeline was SO LONG. I don't think I've ever read a book where the timeline stretched as far as this one does, especially in the choppy manner it was in. And how it got past editors is a wonder to me. Almost every paragraph has missing or needed punctuation. Sentences are continued or ended in the wrong spot. Honestly, that was beyond painful to read. I would suggest next time taking more time on the editing and not try to fit this large of a storyline in one spot. If you do, streamline it a bit.
September 5, 2015
Good read
I enjoyed the story. It's not your typical biker read. I hope to see more from this author. The editing could have been better
I enjoyed the story. It's not your typical biker read. I hope to see more from this author. The editing could have been better
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