NOTE: The Lela Trilogy is unpublished as of Spring 2022 and has been fully rewritten and relaunched as the Prophecy of the Forgotten Fae trilogy. The fully updated version of Shadows of Lela has been released as A Throne of Shadows.
A forgotten princess. A deadly quest. A threat that hides in shadow…
Sixteen-year-old Cora is a princess with a dark past. Exile has kept her safe. But when she rescues a dying unicorn from a mysterious band of hunters, her identity—and her life—are in danger.
Prince Teryn has the perfect plan—win the quest, marry his betrothed, and become king. But his mission goes awry when he faces a feisty young woman in the woods. Although they meet as foes, she shares a secret that bonds them.
Teryn and Cora’s fates are entwined in a plot far deadlier than they ever imagined. Can they face the threat together? Or will a terrifying enemy destroy the land they love?
Shadows of Lela is Book One in the Lela Trilogy. If you like swoon-worthy romance, adventurous quests, breathtaking magic, and surprising twists, then you’ll love Tessonja Odette’s epic fantasy tale.
Tessonja Odette is a Seattle-based author of fantasy romance, epic romantasy, and fairytale retellings. Her different series range from cozy fae romcoms to dark and twisty fantasy. In her books you’ll find witty banter, sizzling romance, and breathtaking magic. When she isn’t writing, she’s watching anime, squeezing her pets, or dancing to the music only she can hear.
Apparently, I was craving an epic fantasy because this book was exactly what I needed! I loved the main character Cora. She was strong and determined and so fun to read about. Teryn was intriguing. I loved how he always stood up for Cora. Lex was probably my favorite character. He was such a sweetie and made things fun. I loved his sisters! And I love that he was ready to fight when it mattered the most.
The ending was my favorite part! During all the political negotiating I was so lost in the moment (mostly thinking about how insane Mareleau's parents are), when BAM! A plot twist came in that I was not expecting. Such a cool ending.
I enjoyed this book from the first page to the last and I immediately want and got book 2 and started it lol . This is the first book I've read by Tessonja Odette and since I'm already reading the next it's definitely not the last . First off I love the main characters and how their stories are coming to light , and all the other characters are well thought out and they seem like they belong in the story . The world building is spot on , and the magic is well thought out and there is unicorns . The action is fantastic . Tessonja does a fantastic job of drawing you the reader into her world and you don't mind because you so involved in the story that you don't even notice how long you've been reading you just know how much you are enjoying this book and how without even knowing you became vested into the characters and you can't wait to see how the choices they make them out . That my friend is an amazing author who makes you care about the characters and what happens to them And those around them . So go ahead and buy this book and be ready to buy the series because after this one you will definitely get the second and third one . But it , sit back and enjoy the adventure , and leave a review only takes a few minutes , then start book 2 .
I was granted complimentary access to the Audible audiobook edition of Shadows of Lela through Audiobookworm Promotion in exchange for an honest review as part of my participation in the blog tour for the new audiobook edition. Thank you to Tessonja Odette (or publicist) and Audiobookworm Promotions for the opportunity. This has not swayed my opinion. My thoughts are my own and my review is honest.
Shadows of Lela reminds me of the sort of fantasy books I admired on the book store shelves in my preteen and teenage years but rarely purchased, only to have them show up at Christmas and birthdays anyway. I was a hardcore science fiction fan and hadn't yet allowed myself to enjoy fantasy, but gosh darn it those Tamora Pierce books everyone thought I wanted really were cleverly written, and the gorgeous medieval women riding horses on the covers of Marion Zimmer Bradley novels made my horse-loving nerdy heart dream. Shadows of Lela reminds me of those books but aged down to present characters with the thoughts, goals and concerns of a teenager. Perhaps if I had read books like this one when I was 14 or so I might have realized how great the fantasy genre really is before D&D player boyfriends in college made me look again.
Shadows of Lela sets up a well-built fantasy world full of political intrigue, strong young women, and telepathic unicorns, and I'm in love! I'll definitely be following this series to see what happens next.
That said, I wish I had read this book with my eyes and not my ears. This book has so many POV characters, and I've discovered from checking reviews written by those who read print/ebook copies that they are clearly distinguished in print. In audio... the narrator gave a distinct voice to Morkai and the unicorn, and that's about it. Morkai's voice was over the top evil and the unicorn was apparently Irish. Beyond that, if I zoned out for a paragraph it was entirely possible I didn't even know if the character I was now listening to was one of the guys or one of the girls. I think there were two important teenage girls (one being Cora) and two important teenage boys (one being Teryn, and they were brothers,) but I can't be certain. Again, I would really like to re-read it with my eyeballs.
I will say the narrator was pleasant to listen to (when she wasn't voicing Morkai, that voice got on my nerves) and paced well enough that those of us who like faster playback can still process what we're hearing at 1.5-2x speed. I do wish this had been an ensemble cast project or even just a duet, but give the male roles to someone with a different voice and the ability to distinguish them without venturing into the cartoon villain range. The two main girls were far easier to figure out even though they sounded the same because their stories are so vastly different. The main boys are brothers. Different motivations but coming from the same starting point, the same back story. They need to sound different.
The story gets a 4-4.5 out of 5 stars for me, this is a great book and I may even bump that to a full 5 if I get a chance to read it visually. The audiobook narration gets a 2.5-3. She's absolutely not a bad narrator, but I don't think she's suited to a large cast with several points of view. Overall I'll call the experience an optimistic but solid 4.
Very entertaining and full of drama and passion. The passions come in several different forms and directions. Passion of feeling as well as those of the heart. This was a huge plot point! I loved how unicorns played a part in this magical land. There was dark magic as well as light. There were family issues centered around betrayal and loss. You have to admire Cora and her strength of character. She fought bravely and fiercely for the things that she believed in. The two princes were intriguing, they're dynamic was very interesting as to building their characters. Neither was in the wrong, but very much affected by their circumstances. I found the princess who requested the quest to be selfish and unkind and even though she had her reasons to be so, I didn't like her. I'm hoping the the rest of the series will change my mind. That being said, I did very much enjoy these characters and the story. I'm so looking forward to the next books! I adore this author and the way in which she expresses the thoughts of her characters to make them so relatable even when they live in a completely different world.
Well, this was certainly a great read! I'd read the short story prequel, but this was the first true book by the author for me.
The prequel set book one up perfectly and gave me a head start on one of the primary characters. The book was well-written, and I found no errors. It was written in first person, from four different povs. I didn't find the pov switches confusing at all. They were all clearly marked, and they allowed the writer to switch easily to the relevant part of the plot. I do like getting into people's heads, which the multiple povs also allowed.
The plot was probably the best part of the book. I loved following the story line and watching as multiple threads spun together. At first, I wondered how Cora's story would play into the others', but I thought the meshing was very well done. There was enough action to keep me on the edge of my seat and yet still a good balance of slower bits to develop everything around the story.
Second best (or perhaps tied for best?), I liked the world building! I loved the idea of the Ancient Ones and the Forest People. I liked the way Mrs. Odette portrayed the unicorns and her other creatures were creative. The magic was intriguing and I am hoping we will learn more about its system in the following books. The geography was a little confusing at first. It took me a minute to figure out that Lela was a land with multiple kingdoms in it (3, I believe) and I never did quite feel completely oriented other than with Kero and the two northern kingdoms in another land. I would really have enjoyed a map to reference at the beginning of the book. But, this didn't draw me out of the story more than once or twice, and it was easier to go along with once I figured out the multiple kingdom to one land idea. I'm very curious to dig into the history of Lela and it's laws and kingdoms and such.
I did truly enjoy the characters as well, especially once things started heating up. I liked watching them grow and adapt to each other and their surrounding situations. I feel like the book almost did Mareleau a disservice (after having read the prequel). She didn't quite get as much explanation as I suppose I expected, which may be why there is a prequel, but I just feel the readers who opt out of the prequel are kinda missing an important piece of her. I had Larylis kinda pegged from the beginning, but that wasn't such a bad thing. He was a bit of a hidden gem, I think, because he often took the high road where he easily could have backed out without consequence. I liked him, even though he was sulky for a good while. Teryn took some time to grow on me, honestly. He was...kinda brainwashed in the beginning, but somewhere in the middle he snapped out of it and I enjoyed watching his true nature come out. Cora. Oh, Cora. Of course, I'm partial to the name. ;-) But she was such a fun character! She was feisty, capable, and still human. I'm very excited to see more of her, and curious to see what she will do now. Demetrius was such a bittersweet hope and Morkai was deliciously evil. I've already mentioned the Forest People, but there were a few SCs that made me smile there too.
Okay, I don't normally do this, but this book got me a little worked up and there are a few points I would like to address. So, soap box time!
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Right, then. My apologies. *clears throat* And now we return to the scheduled programming.
Overall, I very much enjoyed the book and will definitely be reading the sequel. As for content, please listen up! There were a few (single-digits) swear words sprinkled throughout the book. There is a bit of violence and some of it is a little detailed. None of it was horridly graphic, but it could be a little much for some younger readers. As for romance, there was actually very little of it. That said, I felt that there was a bit of an emphasis on women's physical beauty rather than their character and integrity. It was what was desired romantically and I didn't really feel like that was ever truly addressed or corrected. And, finally, there were a handful of moments in which the female figures were described with enough detail to make me just a little uncomfortable. They all passed quickly, but just didn't seem necessary at all. I would probably recommend this book to 16+ so please just be aware when reading or screening for your kids.
Part of what grabbed my attention for this book was the cover - it reminded me of many of the books I read when I was younger. Young girls becoming friends or partners with unicorns was Lexie-catnip. And still is, let's face it.
I had expectations for this book based on the cover and premise. Adventure. A princess in hiding helping the unicorns. A courageous but somewhat clueless young prince. Banter. Hijinks. Unexpected romance built from trust and camaraderie.
The book fulfilled those expectations...after a fashion.
Cora was an adventurous, resourceful and decisive princess. After initial misgivings she decides on her path because it was the right thing to do. Teryn is a clueless but largely well meaning prince who was rather naive (all told). He comes around to the right thing only because Cora pushes him towards it. A lot.
My problems lay in the fact we jump between four different viewpoints. Cora and Teryn primarily, but Larylis (Teryn twin brother) and Mareleau (the Sela Princess that Teryn is trying to woo) more often than helpful.
Often one viewpoint would end on something seemingly important (for example an ultimatum between Teryn and Larylis), but we'd skip around to other viewpoints that dont directly relate to that previous viewpoint's tension before going back and finding out that off screen it was resolved.
It drew me out of the story and made for abrupt transitions. I thought once the stories converged it would resolve some issues, but it created new ones. Sometimes I couldn't follow how Teryn drew this or that conclusion since as a reader I learned the same facts during Cora's viewpoint, but didn't read where she relayed that information to him. Or vice versa. .
It felt a bit like the author really wanted to get Cora's story buttoned up and had a separate story involving Teryn she wove into it. Cora's time with the Forest Folk is barely given time to thrive before she's off to help the unicorns, much of the beginning of that adventure being glossed over as we instead followed Teryn and two other Princes Quest. She's barely with the Princes for a hot second on their joint adventure before they're captured. That's a little longer going, but the wrap up after the fight is...confusing (there's a special short story that clears up some of the confusion that's available after you finish and click a link in the Kindle book).
Largely this may have worked better for me if the book had been clearly broken up into the different Adventures or separate books. Having Larylis and Mareleau have their own viewpoints cluttered up the beginning when we're trying to establish how the players get into place. Especially as they all but disappear for 3/4ths of the novel.
While understanding where Mareleau was coming from (and to an extent Larylis) was nice, it made Teryn look like a fool for embarking on such a dangerous Quest and undercut Cora's realization that her fate was leading her away from the Forest Folk. Cutting out Larylis' angst and Mareleau's antagonistic viewpoint would not change any of the plot at all. Neither viewpoint had anything to do with Morkai's plot, except to give Teryn a reason to be there.
I'm reading these reviews about the audio version, and I don't think it was bad at all. Most reviews are saying the male voice wasn't good. Either I disagree, or this story has been re-recorded since those reviews. It's nice to escape to a fairy tale land from time to time. Men hunt for mythical unicorns for a chance to marry royalty. It's fun to read (listen) to something different than my usual genres.
Cora is an exiled secret princess, who has found a new family with the Forest People. She carries a sad dangerous past. One day, she's dragged into the horrendous unicorn slaughter by a group of hunters, and upon saving a unicorn, she gets dragged by FATE into a mission to stop them. She also has magical abilities, to put it simply, and without spoilers.
Teryn is the crown prince of Mena who has convinced himself it is his duty to win a dangerous quest for the hand of ice princess Mareleau, the biggest beauty in Lela. There are problems though. His twin brother Larylis, who is been treated like second-best, has always been in love with said ice princess; Mareleau is jaded towards love and does everything to not get married, even put her champions in mortal danger (which was frankly hilarious at the beginning).
I don't know exactly how to rate this YA fantasy book. Or what to say about it. So this will probably be some disconnected impressions.
I was engaged, but I felt like both the characters and world-building needed to be explored in more depth. For example, if you asked me to describe prince Teryn psychologically, I wouldn't have much to say. In a medieval setting, the 16 or 17-year-olds should be somewhat more mature, as expected of the times.
As a main character, Cora seems quite capable of protecting herself, in a non-exagerated Black Widow sort of way, of course, which I really appreciate. I liked how the unicorns weren't just pets or fantastic animal companionsTM. She is probably the more interesting one. Okay, Salinda is cool, although she is mostly the wise older figure that spews advice character type. (btw, I'd love a glossary on how to pronounce the names, Idk if I should read them according to the English alphabet, or for example, if I could use the Portuguese one in certain names that would sound way more interesting that way - oh well)
Morkai, the villain, kept triggering me. I'm not even joking around. Lay off with the harassment and unwanted man-handling, you sick man. Eaten by your own Beast due to your stupidity was a good end for him
Even though the parents were being unreasonable and ridiculous about the marriage, which irritated me, I wasn't invested in the romantic drama. Sorry, Mareleau, Larylis you whiny baby, Teryn or Cora. And everything could've easily been fixed how it was, I think everyone thought of that while reading. Readers: Why doesn't Teryn renounce the throne, so Larylis can be king and marry his childhood sweetheart? Then Teryn marries Cora, and Ridine will remain independent.
I would've liked more Lex (he's so salty), Valorre and Cora's Forest Family (see what I did there). In a story like this, characters are what really motivates you. If you don't know much about a land and its people, why will you care fervently about their quests? And King Dimetreus? We need some family time soon.
All in all, if this world and/or characters were more interesting, I'd probably have finished faster. I'd be upset only if the unicorn died at the end of the book, which would be fine if this was like a psychological thriller with horrible characters, but it isn't.
A FANTASTIC FANTASY ADVENTURE When unicorn hunters show up in the land of Lela, Cora knows something is amiss, and she has a sinking feeling she knows who is behind it. She races against time, attempting to free the unicorns before she gets caught as well.
I LOVED this title. It had everything a lover of the fantasy genre could ask for; original mythical creatures, an all-new magical realm, solid writing, loveable characters, hate-able characters, and of course unicorns!
Title: Shadows of Lela Author: Tessonja Odette, Narrated by Emma Faye Publisher: Crystal Moon Press ISBN: B0797H5NLF Buy Link: https://www.amazon.com/Shadows-Lela-T... Reviewer: Teresa Fallen Angel Blurb: Lela Trilogy 1 A forgotten princess. A deadly quest. A threat that hides in shadow… Sixteen-year-old Cora is a princess with a dark past. Exile has kept her safe. But when she rescues a dying unicorn from a mysterious band of hunters, her identity—and her life—are in danger. Prince Teryn has the perfect plan—win the quest, marry his betrothed, and become king. But his mission goes awry when he faces a feisty young woman in the woods. Although they meet as foes, she shares a secret that bonds them. Teryn and Cora’s fates are entwined in a plot far deadlier than they ever imagined. Can they face the threat together? Or will a terrifying enemy destroy everything they love? Shadows of Lela is Book One in the Lela Trilogy. If you like swoon-worthy romance, adventurous quests, breathtaking magic, and surprising twists, then you’ll love Tessonja Odette’s epic fantasy tale.
Total Score: 5/5
Summary: Cora lost everything the day her brother the King banished her from her home as a child. But unlike most people she forged a new life living in the woods with a tribe who took her in. Years pass and the world continued turning bringing a threat to everyone Cora loves. Prince Teryn enters a contest to win the hand of a princess, but the task becomes much more than anyone could have bargained for.
As the danger increases, Cora frees some unicorns that were being killed for their horns and ends up fighting along their side. Teryn and two other princes join forces to win the princesses hand by finding, capturing and dehorning a unicorn for her. The three have no idea that their search is placing them in the path of the one person who is determined to rule control them all leaving no one to stand in their way. Cora’s people know that she is destined for so much more if she is willing to fight for what she wants.
Add to this a madman who will go to any lengths to get what he wants and will use any magic he can get, the darker the better, to bend the world to his wishes.
This is an incredibly intricate story that leaves the listener waiting to find out what will happen next. The audio-book version brings each character to life for the listener.
The first chapter didn't quite sell me, mainly because the main protagonist was supposed to be a child and yet her thought process didn't fit the age. It also didn't change once we got to the present when she's now older. So the initial impression wasn't the greatest.
But I actually really liked this book. I loved reading about Cora's relationship with Valorre and the fact that we already knew she was a princess in exile so it wasn't this massive secret that was waiting to be revealed. I will admit that I wholly dislike how she blatantly forgave her brother for being such a shit person at the end - like no, you are better than that Cora. He deserves none of that. Regardless of what he did at the end.
Marelou was my favourite character, though. I loved that she was unapologetically self-serving, enjoyed making sure that the princes vying for her hand suffered simply because she didn't like them, and was willing to turn on the tears to get what she wanted. I absolutely love her. Not a huge fan of how the author chose to make her nearer to the end, making love this one thing that drove her from the beginning. I rather dislike that narrative and know that Marelou was a fantastic character without requiring it.
The thing that made this not a five (and also not a sold four, more of a three and a half but given four to be nice) was how I absolutely did not feel the build up of feelings between Cora and Teryn as genuine. Teryn was willing to pretty much backstab his twin brother at the beginning for Marelou, and while I get that the quest and what he discovers would ultimately change a person, I don't buy the switching of feelings that the author tried to sell. Especially through Cora's eyes. It also wasn't necessary in this book at all and would have been best to be left out as the build of a friendship should've been the sole focus (and it was for the most part).
I have now started a new trilogy!! Thank you so much Tessonja Odette for giving us a free ARC copy of the Lela Trilogy!! I have finished reading the first book - Shadows of Lela and its AMAZING🔮.
Coralaine, princess of Kero is exiled by her own brother. Leaving her dark past, she now lives with the Forest people. After six long years, she encounters something that almost gets her killed!! Not just that - she ends up saving a dying UNICORN from a hunter party🦄. She now needs to find the answers for why unicorns are being continually hunted😨. But for this she might have to face her past yet again!!
Teryn, the crown prince of Mena is all set to marry Princess Mareleau and become king👑. But a deadly quest brings him to meet a feisty young woman in the woods and now they have to face a graver threat they never expected!! An enemy who seems impossible to be defeated😱 Will they be able to save the land of Lela or lose everyone they love??
Overall I loved the story👌 The plot was very intriguing. I loved the magical elements of the book and definitely the mythical unicorns being all real in Lela😍🔮. Cora is a very strong character which I really loved and the fact that she relies on her own abilities to protect herself💪But like every other person, she has her flaws and weaknesses which is why she is an amazing character that you can relate to💯. The twists and surprises throughout the book definitely kept me hooked😯. The ending was unexpected!! And finally, the romance was subtle but kept me interested😍. The villain also kept me super hooked into what would happen next😱. I hope to get more on his backstory and history of the Ancient people in the coming books🤔.
I rate this one a 4.5 on 5💕. I am excited to see what new twists come up in the sequel😍.
Anyone that knows me knows the kinds of things I like and this book encompasses all of it. The author created a world that I understand and the map is easy to follow and the names and descriptions of the land makes sense. There were no plot holes and the grammar was mistake free. I easily identified each character and became invested with them in their own unique ways. It wasn't a simple story just being told to me, I felt it and absorbed all the underlying work in it as well. I am attracted mainly to fantasy and not romance but this had both and it was written exceptionally well to where it blended perfectly and I had no objection to reading a romance based story. I'm definitely reading the next book because the story is so good I want more. I read it with kindle unlimited as well as having audible narration. Personally, I wasn't fond of narrator, she irritated me with certain voices and as I read along, there were a couple instances where she read things completely wrong. However, I must say that I generally don't use audible anyway because I tend to have a very particular style and voice that I prefer so I know I'm picky when it comes to narrator's and I had another person listen to a clip to tell me if I'm just being " me" about it or if she really was dragging out words and sounding strange, the person agreed with me on it from just the small sample they heard. I definitely recommend the writer and I'll be looking to read more of her books. ( I found the book through some email newsletter I somehow had and the author was giving audible codes to the first 10 people who replied and I happened to be one who received a code, I am so thankful I did!, Even though the narrator wasn't my cup of tea, the book absolutely was!)
I have only read the free sample which covered the first few chapters. I don't think it's a great way to get to know a book or writing style, and I prefer to read the full book. Having said that, this appears to be a standard fantasy, centring on younger royalty. We switch narrators a few times in those pages, which could confuse some readers.
The first narrator is a princess who is promptly disinherited and dismissed at the age of ten, which seems a bit harsh. The move also seems unlikely. Wouldn't she just have been packed off to a distant tower with staff who were told not to let her leave? Princesses were controlled so they could be used as political marriage bargains, and if she left, her children could later mount a claim to the throne.
The next chapters deal with a spoilt princess who is being generally courted and decides to set a quest for her suitors; they need to bring back unicorns dead and alive. Then we return to the disinherited lady, now older and living simply. That's it for the sample. The landscape is not much described at this stage but obviously that's going to change as the quest is followed. If I get the full book I will revisit this review. I do enjoy unicorn stories but found it hard to care for many of the folks we meet so far. This is an unbiased review.
Shadows of Lela is a multiple POV story. And granted, while this gives added depth to the story, it can make it a little harder to get familiar with the story in the beginning (first few chapters). However, even though this is a challenge on its own for the narrator, Ms. Faye did a wonderful work in this one, giving each of the characters its own voice, and helping the reader engage more easily with the story.
Personally, I loved getting to know more about Cora and Prince Teryn. Both their backgrounds and growing throughout the book are great. I also enjoyed the fact that there was a quest; I just can't remember when was the last time I read Fantasy like this, but I was certainly entertained while listening to this story.
Content: there's some violence (both to animals and humans: something's happening to the unicorns, and someone is murdered in cold-blood. Also, fights/battles, by I guess those were expected with the genre). Concerning language, if I remember correctly, there's one use of b***h and a couple of d**n. As for sex, it's implied or talked about in a conversation... And I'm not even sure if it actually happens between two characters in this book: if it does, then it's completely left to the imagination (one kiss and then the door closes), and if it doesn't, then this book never goes beyond kissing.
Part 1 in the Lela trilogy starts where Princess of Thorns; 3 crown princes are chosen to start the final quest. The winner wins her heart and marries her. The quest is impossible to complete, but the chosen princes will still try. Teryn's twin brother has been in love with Mareleau for years, but because he is the 2nd in line, he is not allowed to participate in the quest to win the princess's heart.
They meet Cora in their search for the impossible. Where the princes try to catch a unicorn for the quest, Cora tries to prevent the animals from being harmed. Cora finds out that the black magician Morkai catches the unicorn and kills for his own gain. Morkai is the sorcerer who has influenced her brother so that he has banished her. Together with Teryn, she tries to prevent a war that Morkai wants to start in order to rule over Lela.
Beautifully described fantasy story with romantic aspects incorporated. Personally, I found the character of Lex to show tremendous growth. From submissive to fighting for his choices. Teryn also changes positively in the story. Where at first he is selfish, he changes into a thoughtful and honorable man. Curious about the Cora and Teryn sequel in Veil of Mist. Recommended
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
Disclaimer: I usually try not to get too spoilery in my reviews, and I don't want to pick apart the novel, but beware there are some spoilers ahead!
Right off the bat, this book gave me Graceling and Red Queen vibes. It's a high fantasy novel without the pretentiousness that can sometimes come with it. The book also deals with royal families and the complicated relations between them. Tessonja Odette has created a vast fantastical land full of ancient magic, lost lore, and many kingdoms.
The world building has been done really well. I found the part describing the Ancient Ones quite interesting and I would've loved to delve into the lore even more. I also would've loved more scenery descriptions. As a reader, I've been given this wide new world, and sometimes I felt like I couldn't see where I was. Cora and Teryn are journeying across the land, but I wanted more descriptions of how the landscape changed as they moved into the different kingdoms. I wanted to be fully immersed.
Also, a map at the beginning of the book would've been a huge bonus! They're always helpful when reading a fantasy with many different locations.
I was really excited about reading this book, which the author kindly gave to me for free - the cover is beautiful, I love unicorns, and the blurb sounded exciting! But I found reading the book a bit of a let down. The plot is technically exciting, but the way in which it was written wasn't exciting - it didn't draw me in, didn't make me lose myself in the book; I simply plodded determinedly through. There were few descriptions to help me visualise the fantasy world, and the cultures of the separate countries were hardly touched on. I found it hard to warm up to Cora or Teryn, the two main characters, though they did develop and improve as time went on. I thought some characters acted very irrationally near the end of the book. The bits I enjoyed the most were the depictions of Cora's emerging power, which were different and very interesting (I would have loved more of that!), and the developing love (won't give away with whom!) and two characters whom I ended up liking unexpectedly (Mareleau and Larylis!). Note that there is some gruesome violence for those of a squeamish disposition.
Who doesn't love unicorns? I certainly spent a lot of time fantasizing about unicorns at a certain age, which has not entirely passed, as evident by the fact that I snapped up this book as soon as I saw the cover.
"Shadows of Lela" is a fun, unicorn-intense story with some pleasant humorous interludes about a land that is being threatened by dark magic. Fortunately, there are some true champions, one of which is a princess in hiding, who has a unicorn helper. It's an old trope but a good one, and everyone who's ever dreamed of having a pet unicorn will probably feel their hearts warm a bit. There's also a prince on a quest in order to earn the hand of (another) princess, who's actually in love with his brother. Meanwhile, an evil monster stalks the land, and its kingdoms must unite in order to fight off the menace...
This is basically a YA sword-and-sorcery story, but anyone who wants a tale of adventure, derring-do, star-crossed lovers, and most importantly, unicorns, will probably find it enjoyable.
I received this book as a free giveaway with no expectation of a review. All opinions are my own.
I have a love-hate relationship with this book. I love the whole unicorn, princess, magic thing. It’s a YA fantasy through and through. With unicorns! This book sets up a very interesting plot and kept me entertained throughout. It has a great cast of characters.
On the flip side, it took quite a few chapters for me to remember which character is which. We get perspectives from two very different princesses and two prince brothers, so yes, it takes a moment. I found that there was a lot of development within the book, but for a bit, I wasn’t following along. Suddenly things were happening. In the midst of the plot, Cora and Teryn get close but I found their relationship could have been better developed. Maybe a few more scenes of just them. I suppose fantasy books do not put a lot of stock into such scenes, so maybe it’s a genre thing.
All in all, it’s a good book and after that great ending, I look forward to seeing where the story goes next
I struggled between rating this 3 stars or 4. I think that a lot of events happened in the book, but some things were lacking. It would have been nice to have things more fleshed out. I would have liked to know more about Cora's life than the one chapter. I wanted to see more of her life with the Forest People. We could have seen more interactions between Cora and Teryn. I wanted more sibling time between Cora and Dimi, but that didn't happen either. I am hopeful that these relationships will continue to grow in the upcoming books and we will learn more about Cora. I love Valorre and the interactions between him and Cora - I even wanted more! I thought the ending was satisfying and some satisfying deaths occurred - karma anyone? I did not like the various POVs. I thought it took away from the story a lot of the time and some events were never fully explained due to the transition between characters. It read a bit like a successful debut so I am excited to see how the next books flourish and the writing continues to grow.
I wasn't sure what to expect from this book as it is a new author and narrator to me, but I loved it! Cora has been raised away from the comforts of a princess that she should have been accustomed to. It wasn't her choice but probably was what wound up being the best thing for her. Teryn is a prince out on a crazy quest.
I loved the first meeting between Teryn and Cora. It was great! I love how the author twisted the story lines together and how we get the different viewpoints. The narrator did a good job of giving each character their own voice. There were funny parts, creepy parts, and loving parts to this story. Lots of elements wonderfully balanced and I cannot wait to see what the author does next with these characters in this land.
It was a 5/5 for me!
Thank you to the author for the review copy of this book. I received this book in exchange for an honest review and the opinions stated above are 100% mine.
An imaginative story within a story. Brothers, who are also princes, fall in love with the same princess, but only one is allowed to enter a challenge to win her hand in marriage. The challenge involves the fate of unicorns that another exiled princess, now living with the forest people while hiding her identity, is determined to protect.
Each chapter is titled and is written in a different character’s viewpoint. Sometimes the chapters would change viewpoints with breaks, each indicating a different character. The story jumps around back and forth between each character and their story, it all eventually ties in together at the end. I think the change in POVs weakened the story a bit as there were too many story lines going on, and was lacking in deep character development and emotions.
Overall, it was an entertaining read. I give this story a strong 3.5 stars for imagination.
The Good: A very readable book with a lot of typical fantasy standbys plus an interesting new creature to add to the mix. And without spoiling things, the female heroine lived up to the title of heroine wonderfully at the book's climax.
The Bad: I am definitely a fan of fewer points of view (one is my favorite). This book was done in multiple first person with at least four characters' viewpoints. It was written well, but I felt that as a result, I really didn't get to know the main two until near the end of the book.
The story, description, characters, and action improved as the story went along and really peaked at the end. This speaks well for Odette's future as a writer and for the future books in the series.
I really enjoyed the story while listening to this book. I found the characters very engaging and well developed and the world building well done. My only problem is the narrator. She sounded very whiny to my ears and there wasn't a lot of distinction in her voices and tone. The male characters most often didn't sound masculine at all and the unicorn's voice was like a little child - the kind that grates on you. This is really unfortunate, because, like I said, the story itself is very good. I'll probably choose to read the rest of the series the old fashioned way, rather than listen.
I received a free copy of this book via Audible and Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review of the Audible version.
4+ star book/audio: YA Fantasy with Unicorns & a Quest I listened to Shadows of Lela and the whole time it gave me the vibe of a childhood movie I used to watch in my Youth called Willow. The story is not the same at all, but the vibe is for me at least and I really had fun listening to this audio at work. It is also the kind of audio you can listen to at work or in front of other people without worry. There is love and romance in this fantasy, but nothing graphic. I enjoyed the multiple love triangles. Other elements of the story besides unicorns were royalty, sorcery, and a quest. I recommend the audio and I assume the book is also good too!
This was an easy, happy little read that I needed, although it took longer to finish than I expected. The author recently announced she was rewriting and releasing this trilogy after honing her craft and I hope it would be to flesh out the characters a bit more and refine the world building and magic system. Cora’s magic makes no sense (where did it come from, how is it suddenly growing, etc) and her relationship with Valorre could use some more scenes together. I found the multi POV distracting and hurt the pacing. Not sure if I’ll read books 2 & 3 but if not, they’ll still look lovely on my shelf.