I really liked the premise of this story. A paranormal real estate agent who checks to make sure haunted houses are safe to live in before she sells them? One who is looking for a chance to contact her dead fiance just one more time? I'm here for that. Unfortunately, it wasn't well executed. I found this on the Audible Escape package. The narrator was okay. I liked some of the voices she used for the characters, but I don't think she put a lot of emotion into the story. Things that should have been sad, or scary, came across as kind of flat. She was also very slow. I generally listen at 1.85x speed, but I ended up bumping this one to 2.10x speed.
More often than not Sloane was TSTL (too stupid to live). Her dead fiance's best friend, Jonah, is a cold case investigator with the FBI, and also a strong medium. She used to hunt ghosts with him until her fiance died and she retreated into herself. She called him once she made first contact with the spirits in a house in Wisconsin, because she suspected girls had been murdered there. He asked her to wait for him before venturing back into the house, or speaking to anyone about her suspicions. She thinks to herself, "I should wait..but I'm not going to." She also thinks to herself several times that she's in over her head, yet she still continues on her merry way. It was no surprise to me when she ended up trapped in a hole in the floor for her stupidity.
The villains were easily picked out from the first, and honestly they were both such dumb-asses I'm surprised they got away with anything as long as they did. The only reason I kept reading was because I was interested in the ghosts themselves. I was hoping we'd see more of their backgrounds and they'd be a bigger focus of the story. Sadly, that wasn't the case. It mostly focused on Sloane and she bumbled her way into danger.
There were also a lot of inconsistencies in the story. Michael, the dead fiance, was a paragon of male worthiness and nothing could ever live up to his memory..except he sounded like a controlling asshole a lot of the time and she even thinks to herself at one point that things may not have worked with them long-term after all. Except, wait, he was the LOVE OF HER LIFE. Things like that really pulled me out of the story and kind of drove me crazy.
I did really like Jonah, however. He kind of made the story for me, though he spent more time off page than on. Although the premise is interesting, I don't believe I'll continue on with the series. Watching Sloane stumble around and make dumb decisions mostly just gave me a headache.