For Andreas Flindt, the move from Copenhagen to further his studies was an exciting one, opening up all sorts of new possibilities for him. However, he never expected to meet a man as dark and mysterious as Marc De Rosa. Although Andreas doesn't really get much say in the matter, he soon becomes drawn into Marc’s mysterious world and discovers that men like Marc are capable of anything.......especially when they thirst for blood.
An ancient vampire thirst for the blood of men. His target is a blond prey and this is the start of their adventure in pleasure...
Basically, I did not like how Marc treated his prey. I also didn't feel the connection that Andreas has for Marc, who basically kidnapped him to become his sex toy. But this is just part one and a short story. For mindless enjoyment, it works.
This was very interesting. I didn't really appreciate the way that Marc treated Andreas in the beginning of the story, but later things began to become erotic and unique. I am curious to see where the second part of the story goes, especially since this one ends in a cliffhanger. It's definitely different. =)
And other things without too many typos to distract the reader. My favorite is when the character is being abused in his mouth so deep that "the balls were banging his shin (chin?). The graphic descriptions create mental pictures that can be unbelievable, but only with the aid of automatic spell checking and without editing. The fabled "double sex change" in one sentence and "double name change" in the same paragraph may indicate a rewrite from a previous story without editing.