An interesting story with some wonderfully poetic prose. When the yatch lands on the island, the story takes on a real mythological, fairy tale quality that is quite wonderful.
The spoiled brat heroine Ardita, although irritating at first, becomes strangely attractive as she starts revealing her inner desire to be free from the restraints of society, even if this means standing on the edge of the cliff. Metaphorically?
Toby, the Pirate Captain, is a less interesting person, but his attitude to living life by the seat of his pants certainly has its attractive qualities to it. Personally though, I can't see myself falling in love with him. Especially considering that the tale he told of the life he lived is nothing but a story. In reality, he's just another rich man's son.
This story would have had a 5 star rating if it wasn't for the twist at the end, which in my opinion, ruined what could have been a potentially great, yet tragic ending. Even if it would have been somewhat sad. As the story stands, it's just good romance, not great literature.
I wonder if this is one of those stories where FSF changed the ending just to make it more saleable.
The worst part of the ending, is that it turns all the interesting African-American pirates from outlaw rougues with personalities, into mere domestic household servants. Too bad there.
But still an enjoyable read, in a Blue Lagoon sort of way.