Feels like I have been repeating myself over and over lately by saying "It had the potential, but then the author just went and messed it up." Sadly,there is no other way how to say it.
It started out so well - accomplished FBI agent, who is psychic and has to do some disgusting stuff (those take out containers? thrillingly gross :D ).
Then there was the case, the boyfriend trouble. Predictable, but enjoyable. And then...
Oh dear Lord...
All throughout the book she is claiming how she always solves the case, how she is a fabulous agent, strong and accomplished, and then she is just..disgusting.
Well it wasn't fast you know. She meets Maxim and has this insane attraction although in her "heart of hearts" she wants only her boyfriend. But okay, I could get over it. Cliche, but sure, why not. Then she sees the club scene and goes all horrified and faints. Big, tough agent my candy jar. But okay, I can get over that too. She had used her powers all day and was weak.
Then she wakes up in the hotel and sees Maxim with his "lace-covered harem". Someone has watched Van Helsing too much. Really too much. And her constant fixation on that? Icky.
Then she sees Maxim's transformation and all she has to say is "eeeek, eeeeek" and again "being horrified". Oaaaakaaaay. Tough agent, huh? But okay. Sure. One time. Let's go with it...
And then it just got so much worse... She decides to seduce him and attract him with doing the opposite of his "harem" - being indifferent. Too much cliche! For the love of sugar!
And then..60% in... What. the. lollipop! Suddenly, there is this guy from CLAN, arguing with the guy from COUNCIL, while his pet dogs attack heroine (yes, big tough guy just stands there and watches while dogs try to chew off her leg) while SHE is just holding a gun (yes, holding not firing), watching the dogs slurp her blood and can you guess? The answer is..Being horrified. No. Just no. The guy is just watching. The girl is acting like a ninny. Then when the dogs have almost chewed off her leg, the bad guy manages to bite her neck, then suddenly Maxim becomes some superhero and kills the bad guy and the dogs, the girl suddenly becomes tough again (now that the danger is over)...
Not to mention other things, such as undeveloped world. First psychics are rare and secret. Then there are Wicca[n] that are basically psychic coven and well known. Are they a secret or well known then? And if there is a distinction then it should be explained better as opposed to just calling everyone "psychic". Then there are suddenly vampires, then mind feeders, then some green naked chick, then more. It is over-complicated. There is COUNCIL. Then there is COVEN. Then there is CLAN. Someone has it in for C-words. Went through paranormal dictionary and chose everything with C? There are so many cliches it is disgusting - the "I don't use make up, I am a bitch to everyone, but every guy wants me" thing, the whole "I have a boyfriend but this guy turns me on like no one ever has", "I have such good morals, I can judge other people all.the.time" etc . The heroine is all tough and strong in times of peace and all "horrified" and weak, and "eeeek,eeek" and a crying mess in times of danger. #Faker #YouAreSoFullOfIt
And it gets worse. Much worse.
So I am sorry. I really am. The cover is beautiful. The beginning was promising. but the way it lost focus of real FBI psychic investigation and went into her emotional and mental instability as well as her CONSTANT indecisiveness and whining was too much for me. Sorry, but no.