"You can't force me to marry you! " I said firmly, making sure there is no trace of fear in my voice but it was pretty much hard to read this guy's expression. He was as thick as ice itself and cold blooded looking.
" I know I can. I always get what I want and I never lose. You're going to stand right by my side and smile for the world and there's nothing you can do about it. "
"I don't take orders from people! " I spat out to him annoyingly from where I stood. I could feel my hand fold into a fist. This guy was really getting to me. He stood up from his seat and walked up to me with still not a trace of humanity. He finally stood in front of me, his face as stiff as a rod and his eyes as cold as ice. it was hard to penetrate.
"Then I'll make you learn." he said in an irritatively calm manner. His eyes told me that he meant what he just said and that kind of sent shivers down my spine.
This man was determined to ruin my life and I was a bit scared of that fact.
Wonderful story!! 4 stars for some newness and a bit different content but the ending was quite rushed. Blayze is shown with like VERY different moods everytime and our poor Caden keeps on asking if she has done something wrong. All the while they were trying their best to cope up with each other which was amazing. Climax could have been more enhanced otherwise a superb read!!
Carter family owes Blayze Norman 10 million dollars. But the family business is going through some financial issues and as a result, they can't pay this huge sum of money... So, Blayze comes up with this amazing plan to take over the Carter family business. And that is to force the eldest daughter, Caden Carter, into marrying him.
And thus, ladies and gentleman, we have got a billionaire romance with an arranged marriage trope on our hands!
Now all of that sounds interesting and all... But unfortunately, none of it worked out for me.
The first thing that irked me was the writing style. It simply wasn't my cup of tea. It was repetitive, full of odd phrases and felt like a rushed draft, specially the first few chapters. A lot of telling and very little showing. The POV changes were abrupt and sudden. The transition from one scene to another is very poorly written. For example there was a scene where Caden was riding a horse and then suddenly, in the next paragraph, she was in the kitchen... It just didn't work.
Next up, the characters...
BLAYZE 'idk-what-respect-means' NORMAN The Male Lead, Blayze is a bitch and borderline incompetent for his job! What type of a CEO agrees to a marriage this easily??? The girl can have a lover or something! He doesn’t know anything about her…not even her name and still insists on marrying her??? Wtf! Listen, if this story was a dark, shady mafia romance or something, then I guess, it would have been somewhat acceptable… but the book is clearly not about that… then …just… oh my god... I can't... He has absolutely no respect for women! And doesn't know about personal space! He just randomly shows up, grabs the MC's hands and then pushes her inside his car against her will! Excuse me? This is harrasment! How t f did this guy became a CEO? Oh right, he didn't earn it, was gifted to him on a silver platter... He is described as this sexy AF man... and blah blah... But trust me, he is far from that! He's a piece of rotten shit from top to bottom - a massive red flag! He treats the mc as a servant, he wont let her work so he pulls strings to shut down her work place, tells her to shut up every time, complains that the mc is not ladylike when he is the one who forced her to marry him! gets jealous when the mc talks to other man, threatens the mc only becuz she touched his arm, stares at the mc while she sleeps..., hires security guards so the mc can't leave the house... Like what dude, chill! Towards the end of the book, the author tried to show us that he had a rough childhood... But that was like only 2 chapters! Throughout the whole book, he stays literally the same! An utter asshole!
CADEN 'not-like-other-girls' CARTER
She's just your typical wattpad girl. No depth, no dimension, plain ass annoying! She is being forced to marry this random ass dude! It's an easy guess that she should be in a big mental turmoil or something... but no! One encounter with the sexy AF Blayze and she's suddenly ready for everything! She looses all her composures when he leans closer to her face and whispers things... Suddenly, she's in love with him! Even tho she has no fucking reason to!
Oh, did I say that she has some sort of super power? Apparently, she can tell if a man is good or bad based on how good of a kisser he is! And with this power, she finds out that ML has a "heart full of human emotions" too... Seriously girl?
OTHER CHARACTERS Wait, there were other characters too? Totally didn't notice them LOL! That's how boring the were! Any male character introduced in the story was only to make Blayze jealous. There was a Leslie something - Blayze's ex. And just like all other ex-grilfriends/boyfriends of wattpad, her actions didn't make any fucking sense!
THE STORY
Girl and boy gets married. Girl and boy do silly things. Boy's ex shows up, girl gets jealous. Girl's ex shows up, boy gets jealous. Boy's ex tries to kill girl and fails. Boy and girl live happily ever after.
That's basically the whole 60 chapter story summed up in 6 sentences. If you wanna read, go on! It may work out for you! But it surely didn't for me.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
The book was interesting. Caden was a very interesting FL She was unique. Blayze was quite moody and a difficult person to het along with. The story kept me hooked to find out how it would turn out eventually. The last chapter was rushed. The crisis in the last chapter was averted a little too quickly. There was no drama. The story begain in the third person narrative. Then it followed a first person narrative. Somewhere in the middle, where there was a flahback of 16 years ago, the narrative goes back to third person again. Personally I prefer a third person narrative. I was going to give this book a miss but I am glad I did not. The editing could be better. There are grammatical errors, syntax errors, spelling mistakes, incorrect tenses, etc. Though the story keeps you hooked, these minute details affect the flow of the story. The author has potential.
I loved this book... But I have to quit it in middle... As there is half baked chapter after 47 on wattpad... I read further 2 chapters on inkitt,,,but there as also half chapters..only till 49....and now I am stuck in the middle... So irritated😡😡.. Hence giving 1 rating.....
To Author : Either post full story with all chapters without skipping scenes or don't post it ever🤯🤯🤯