Matthew Lewin, fresh out of college after completing a math degree, isn’t sure where his life will take him. Painfully shy, stuck in a closet he’s never even attempted to step out of, he’s home for the summer when his father spring on him that he’s found him a job. Only there’s a huge catch: it means working for the rumored crime boss, Ricardo Bianchi.
Matthew wants no part of it until his father confesses he owes Bianchi a debt, and that there’s little chance that Matthew can get out of the deal. Bianchi needs a new accountant, and he’s heard about Matthew’s brains.
With reluctance, the young graduate takes the job offered in person by the formidable Ricardo Bianchi, and Matthew starts work immediately. What he hasn’t counted on, though, is that Bianchi’s son, spoiled and aloof, is also smoking hot and always around.
Lou Bianchi wants nothing more to make his father proud but seems to fail at every turn. When he hears that a young graduate is being welcomed into an important role in the family business, Lou is furious. It’s the job he wanted. He deserved it more.
But he can’t possibly be offended by Matthew, who’s so unassuming and naïve that Lou finds himself drawn to him. As they become closer, Lou also discovers that unless he acts quickly, his terrifying father, once his idol, will destroy the spirit and possibly the life of the innocent man he’s grown to love.
The actual story ("A Made Man") is the first 8% of the 1799 pages in the kindle book. So the actual story is about 142 pages. I didn't read the rest of the kindle doc, based on the reviews I can only image it goes down in quality. The main story was not great, but not terrible. There were a few issues with switching from first person (I did x-y-z) to third person (and then he did x-y-z) in the middle of a paragraph.
I do not like a story that is told to you and rushed through. I want to experience everything with my main characters. This would have been a great story if more time and effort was made to actually writing a story you can feel. It was so rushed and as I said you were told what happened as well as all the nonsense that went through the characters head that had nothing to do with anything.