I'm not sure about this book. I think it might have missed the last editing process because there were a lot of grammatical errors and one paragraph was repeated but slightly different so I wasn't sure which was it was going. Don't get me wrong, I did really enjoy it, it was an easy read and a sweet story.
I just have a few things I'd want improved.
1. Maybe a relationship between her art teacher and her because art was such a big part of her journey that I feel she should have become friends with her teacher and developed her art technique
2. It jumped quite rapidly in the middle and I got a bit lost
3. Maybe a development of her relationship with Richard, I just think I lost the feel of their relationship and wanted a bit more.
4. I think I also wanted some more time with friends
5. Maybe less time mentioning pointless details
I did really enjoy it though. Beautiful concept and story, the ending was very much improved and just easy to read.