Gunnery Sergeant Darius is unaware that his genetic inheritance is destined to change the universe forever! An unexpected job opportunity will force his destiny to manifest. But before he can become the light in the darkness, he must first find a way to prevent the enslavement of trillions!
A few grammar & spelling errors, slightly cheesy but a real page turner for me. Even though some the character interaction was a bit B grade, I found the overall story arch is interesting enough for me to zip through the pages. The pace is fast(maybe a little too much so) but things are definitely happening in the authors universe. Perhaps the best I can say is I'm online now buying the next book in the series. To the author, thank's for some interesting concepts, keep up the good work.
Oh dreck. This is just awful. It badly needs an editor or at least a proofreader. Some sentences are incomprehensibel, others you can make good guess at what word should be there.
It might work as a parody - sadly it is not intended as such.
Thoroughly enjoyed the dialogue between the characters. The story itself has the potential to be a great space oddessy and has me itching to see what happens next.
Interesting concept but need work. Lots of spelling and grammar errors making it hard to stay "in" the story. Needed to be professionally proofread and edited.
Too many punctuation and grammatical errors to warrant a full reading. Do authors even hire professional editors these days? It would be great if they did.