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War for Humanity #1
Sovereign Protocol: A Soldier's Rise
Gunnery Sergeant Darius is unaware that his genetic inheritance is destined to change the universe forever! An unexpected job opportunity will force his destiny to manifest. But before he can become the light in the darkness, he must first find a way to prevent the enslavement of trillions!
265 pages, Kindle Edition
Published February 18, 2018
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Displaying 1 - 8 of 8 reviews
April 6, 2018
A few grammar & spelling errors, slightly cheesy but a real page turner for me. Even though some the character interaction was a bit B grade, I found the overall story arch is interesting enough for me to zip through the pages. The pace is fast(maybe a little too much so) but things are definitely happening in the authors universe. Perhaps the best I can say is I'm online now buying the next book in the series. To the author, thank's for some interesting concepts, keep up the good work.
May 10, 2018
Well written for all lovers of military science fiction
Well written , well thought out futuristic battle combines humans, AI and genetic engineering with a unique twist to the plot of the book
Well written , well thought out futuristic battle combines humans, AI and genetic engineering with a unique twist to the plot of the book
December 11, 2018
Oh dreck. This is just awful. It badly needs an editor or at least a proofreader. Some sentences are incomprehensibel, others you can make good guess at what word should be there.
It might work as a parody - sadly it is not intended as such.
It might work as a parody - sadly it is not intended as such.
March 2, 2018
Great potential
Thoroughly enjoyed the dialogue between the characters. The story itself has the potential to be a great space oddessy and has me itching to see what happens next.
Thoroughly enjoyed the dialogue between the characters. The story itself has the potential to be a great space oddessy and has me itching to see what happens next.
March 14, 2018
Sovereign Protocol
This book was exciting from beginning to end!! I can’t wait for the next book, I hope it’s as outstanding!
This book was exciting from beginning to end!! I can’t wait for the next book, I hope it’s as outstanding!
March 16, 2018
Interesting concept but need work. Lots of spelling and grammar errors making it hard to stay "in" the story. Needed to be professionally proofread and edited.
April 19, 2018
Frustrating
Too many punctuation and grammatical errors to warrant a full reading. Do authors even hire professional editors these days? It would be great if they did.
Too many punctuation and grammatical errors to warrant a full reading. Do authors even hire professional editors these days? It would be great if they did.
May 8, 2018
Has potential but....
Desperately in need of an editor. E.g. use of berth not birth, route not rout etc etc and a few plot holes that could be improved
Desperately in need of an editor. E.g. use of berth not birth, route not rout etc etc and a few plot holes that could be improved
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