I know I’m in the minority here but I sooo didn’t have a good time ...
I know I’m in the minority here but I sooo didn’t have a good time ...
while I love a good strong alpha and of course you want him protective,no woman wants to share her man but these idiots ( sorry, but to me they are) just take the freakin cake....
No only do these men want to keep the women almost literally chained to their sides and only allow them to be away from them when the men have to ride off to fight some lame bad guy,( though in this story they only seemed to chase their own tails ) other stories they at least seemed to use the women’s gifts to get the low down on their enemies,here they can’t even (literally ) sniff out a traitor in their own midst,when they should at least have a clue when they are yet AGAIN attacked in their own compound that, It. Must . Be . An. Inside. Job!
Even I can see who the inside guy is,Heck I think even a real human MC could be closer to knowing who it is betraying them ...
I don’t read a lot of MC books, most are too dark and gritty for me, and I’ve only come back because I got Wulf free and got curious where the story was heading ...but come on guys!
Only ,ON A FREAKING LY insider could have taken down your systems and told th “Keres” where to attack... Duh!!!!!
From what I’ve seen in human MC books they would have seen that,called “church “ ( I believe) had only their “patched” guys meet and discussed who would have access and would have stopped til the had the traitor... I mean come on! And since the insider used his essence ( instead of a bathroom ) to mark the trees to help the “Keres” why didn’t they just get Aria ( who can tell things from objects when she touches them) to go and touch the trees he marked to tell them who it was ?
Aaaaaaaaa,Helllooooo?
But no instead the get their collective man panties in a twist, because the women have the nerve to go poly in what seemed to me a gentle stream because a snake or something might come along ,or anything else they could think of...
Dear lord,it’s one thing to be protective but to berate your women like their are careless and reckless,when you want to keep them wrapped in cotton wool on a shelf ?
Is total doggy poo.... can’t say Bull , like I want to...
This book annoyed he fruck our of me...
These men aren’t the sharpest tools in the toolbox and are ruled by insane possessive tempers.where I’d someone soo much as hurts on3 of the women’s feels for half a second her “man” is growing .... cue eye roll 🙄... Seriously?
These women aren’t ever to leave the compound,can’t have jobs p, are barely allowed out side ( might stub a toe on a rock) can’t touch another man even if she’s a healer and just trying to , aaaaa heal them or offer a hug or a touch in sympathy or comfort and like I said God forbid someone says even the slightest thing to upset them ... geez , it’s soo over kill lane doesn’t begun to cover it...
And I’d all that didn’t make me crazy and annoy to the point I almost had real indigestion,to got with the mental version from this , I just wanted to strangle bit Brie and Bion for most of the book and a few of the guys as well...
Ok, CAN NOT STAND a weak self loathing woman, Bion is supposedly to be soo sweet and sensitive and smart but the clueless wonder couldn’t see til over half way thru the book or further just how bad Brie’s self was/greatly lacking and while they ALL kept her in the dark as to his interest in her and why the heck she is even there ..... and I’d that wasn’t bad enough all I’d them but especially Bion being upset or outraged when the poor clueless naive self loathing girl wants to leave...
I wanted to smack Jasmine ( who I swear acts somewhere between 18-21) and definitely not some child’s mother, when she started to pout when Brie told everyone she needed to go... Jas” I thought you liked us ? I thought we were friends?”
Cue pout,cue Wulf growling because someone dared to barely upset his precious mate..... Dear lord,save from immature Bull like this...
Why on earth is the girl supposed to want to stay and leave her life behind and join your MC commune when your all kerlingher in the dark ?
Bion was worse,such a clueless wonder , Keelung the truth from her and then storming off and coming back wondering why she was hurt ...
I did not enjoy this at all , I spent most of the book angry and frustrated with these idiots, and angry with myself for being curious about them ..,
Everything here in my opinion was handled very very poorly,this is the fifth woman they should have a clue by now how to bring them into the fold w/out soo much non sense and I seriously think if you found a six grader ( sex scenes deleted of course) ( no that I cared with these two ) and they read this series they ,unlike the O soo smart Elementals ,the kid would know who the traitor is too....
Btw where the heck is this book set ? Nature Valley still sounds like my favorite granola,and Cape Town still sounds like Africa,soo I don’t know hoe the F.B.I would be involved in either...