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Deadly Force #1
Every Deep Desire
He's taking it all back
His honor, his freedom, and the woman he loves
Rafe Montfort was a decorated Green Beret, the best of the best, until a disastrous mission and an unforgivable betrayal destroyed his life. Now, this deadly soldier has returned to the sultry Georgia swamps to reunite with his brothers, and take back all he lost. But Juliet must never know the truth behind what he's done...or the dangerous secret that threatens to take him from her forever.
It took Juliet Capel eight long years to put her life back together after her husband was taken from her. Now Rafe is back, determined to protect her at any cost, and it's not just her heart that's in danger. The swamps hold a secret long buried and far deadlier than either of them could have imagined...
His honor, his freedom, and the woman he loves
Rafe Montfort was a decorated Green Beret, the best of the best, until a disastrous mission and an unforgivable betrayal destroyed his life. Now, this deadly soldier has returned to the sultry Georgia swamps to reunite with his brothers, and take back all he lost. But Juliet must never know the truth behind what he's done...or the dangerous secret that threatens to take him from her forever.
It took Juliet Capel eight long years to put her life back together after her husband was taken from her. Now Rafe is back, determined to protect her at any cost, and it's not just her heart that's in danger. The swamps hold a secret long buried and far deadlier than either of them could have imagined...
544 pages, ebook
First published March 6, 2018
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About the author
Sharon Wray
19 books304 followersSharon is a librarian who once studied dress design in the couture houses of Paris and now writes novels of suspense, adventure, and love. A wife, mother of twins, caretaker of Donut the One-Eyed Dog, she's repped by Deidre Knight and Kristy Hunter of The Knight Agency.
Random Fun Facts:
* Jersey girl married to a boy from Charleston, SC and transplanted in Virginia.
* Still not sure why anyone puts sugar in her iced tea.
* Total Buffy fan. Buffy is why she started writing in the first place.
Random Fun Facts:
* Jersey girl married to a boy from Charleston, SC and transplanted in Virginia.
* Still not sure why anyone puts sugar in her iced tea.
* Total Buffy fan. Buffy is why she started writing in the first place.
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November 26, 2017
Every Deep Desire a dark mystery suspense romance with No holds barred.
In Every Deep Desire, everything was taken away from Rafe Montfort a decorated Green Beret. Labeled a traitor by everyone he knows and loves. He has now come backed to reclaim his life and to restore honor to his name.
Juliet Capel had a hard life. But she assumed all was going to change, for the better when she married the love of her life, Rafe Montfort. Her outlook on her life altered with one single letter and a knock at her door.
Every Deep Desire is book #1 of Deadly Force series, written by Sharon Wray. This story isn't your standard romance. It’s more mystery suspense with literature overtone on Shakespeare. With twist and turns that will have you turning the page to find out what happens next. This title even surprised me. I went into this book not knowing what it was about. The first several chapters were about building the plot than from there it was all about character building and the mystery of What happened to Rafe. The story has a hidden meaning of how one’s past could alter ones’ future and how one chances meeting can have a massive impact on said future.
Every Deep Desire a dark mystery suspense which is sure to please fans. An excellent start to this new series.
In Every Deep Desire, everything was taken away from Rafe Montfort a decorated Green Beret. Labeled a traitor by everyone he knows and loves. He has now come backed to reclaim his life and to restore honor to his name.
Juliet Capel had a hard life. But she assumed all was going to change, for the better when she married the love of her life, Rafe Montfort. Her outlook on her life altered with one single letter and a knock at her door.
Every Deep Desire is book #1 of Deadly Force series, written by Sharon Wray. This story isn't your standard romance. It’s more mystery suspense with literature overtone on Shakespeare. With twist and turns that will have you turning the page to find out what happens next. This title even surprised me. I went into this book not knowing what it was about. The first several chapters were about building the plot than from there it was all about character building and the mystery of What happened to Rafe. The story has a hidden meaning of how one’s past could alter ones’ future and how one chances meeting can have a massive impact on said future.
Every Deep Desire a dark mystery suspense which is sure to please fans. An excellent start to this new series.
December 28, 2017
Wow this book is packed full of action, adventure, intrigue and romance that will have you totally hooked from the beginning. I couldn’t stop turning the pages as it had me totally glued to the pages. I really didn’t want this book to end and I will be definitely looking up more books by this author straight away. I would highly recommend
November 27, 2017
I'm loving the books released by Sourcebooks Casablanca and this was one of those books that I could not put down until I discovered who'd framed the former Green Beret, and Prince's man, Rafe and what the mystery behind the Lily was.
The story unravels a legend of the Prince's men, Fianna, men who bow before they execute. They are also known to quote or communicate their actions by uttering lines from Shakespearean works. Rafe is released from prison, eight years after he'd sent a letter to his wife Juliet, allegedly stating his decision to walk out on her. She's had to pick herself up and start her own business, but once he's out, he knows that she's in danger and he does everything to protect her, including enduring her mistrust and anger towards him. There is however something that has not changed, and that is her love and desire to be with him, but Rafe does not know whether that would be enough because once you've made an oath to the Prince, there's no going back.
The fast paced unraveling of events made this a thrilling read. I could not wait to know who was behind all the attacks on the people Rafe cared about and why.
I loved how the author created a mystery around the Prince's men, there was always one more thing to be discovered about the men at every turn. It made me anxious to get to the root of it all.
I also noted that if you are neither a Shakespeare buff nor interested in the works, you can miss the underlying messages in the lines the Prince's men quote and I believe the author went easy on the reader when it came to the conversation between Rafe and the Prince. Their talks were more open and you could feel as though the Prince valued and trusted Rafe.
On the characters, what I empathized was the feeling of hopelessness in the A-Team members because they were wrongly accused and time was running out on them. The misunderstanding which led to Rafe being labeled a traitor, put them and the townsfolk against Rafe and this was more of a internal battle for the man. I'd love to thank Netgalley for the arc and the publishers.
The story unravels a legend of the Prince's men, Fianna, men who bow before they execute. They are also known to quote or communicate their actions by uttering lines from Shakespearean works. Rafe is released from prison, eight years after he'd sent a letter to his wife Juliet, allegedly stating his decision to walk out on her. She's had to pick herself up and start her own business, but once he's out, he knows that she's in danger and he does everything to protect her, including enduring her mistrust and anger towards him. There is however something that has not changed, and that is her love and desire to be with him, but Rafe does not know whether that would be enough because once you've made an oath to the Prince, there's no going back.
The fast paced unraveling of events made this a thrilling read. I could not wait to know who was behind all the attacks on the people Rafe cared about and why.
I loved how the author created a mystery around the Prince's men, there was always one more thing to be discovered about the men at every turn. It made me anxious to get to the root of it all.
I also noted that if you are neither a Shakespeare buff nor interested in the works, you can miss the underlying messages in the lines the Prince's men quote and I believe the author went easy on the reader when it came to the conversation between Rafe and the Prince. Their talks were more open and you could feel as though the Prince valued and trusted Rafe.
On the characters, what I empathized was the feeling of hopelessness in the A-Team members because they were wrongly accused and time was running out on them. The misunderstanding which led to Rafe being labeled a traitor, put them and the townsfolk against Rafe and this was more of a internal battle for the man. I'd love to thank Netgalley for the arc and the publishers.
December 2, 2017
This book was surprising! It's been a long time since the last time I was surprised by the twist and turns a story took. Rafe was determined, wounded and lovable; but Juliet was a surprise. A breath of fresh air in a sea of damsels in distress who just let Life happen and the hero take the lead. If you want something that's different and unexpected you'll love this book.
* I was gifted a copy of this book for my honest review*
* I was gifted a copy of this book for my honest review*
January 31, 2018
5 Action packed Stars! This book had me hooked from start to finish, lots of drama and action, as well as a hot steamy romance, I cannot wait to read some more books by Sharon Wray in the future!
March 3, 2018
Deep and complex intrigue, a plot with more tentacles than an octopus, but only the tip of the iceberg of each thought and twist is given the attention it needs. EVERY DEEP DESIRE by Sharon Wray has the potential to be the buttress for an action-packed series that provides a fresh take on dark secrets, betrayals and love lost and found.
Perhaps the floodgates flew too far open? A brilliant concept involving Shakespearean speech, a shadowy figurehead pulling his puppets’ strings and another second chance romance amidst murder and betrayal are only a few of the issues addressed without complete detail.
Choppy scene switching, a myriad of characters flashing in and out before they became more than blurry images spread over a huge number of pages made this a read that is not quite for me.
I received a complimentary ARC edition from Sourcebooks Casablanca!
Series: Deadly Force - Book 1
Publisher: Sourcebooks Casablanca (March 6, 2018)
Publication Date: March 6, 2018
Genre: Romantic Suspense
Print Length: 546 pages
Available from: https://www.amazon.com/Every-Deep-Des... | https://www.barnesandnoble.com/w/ever...
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Perhaps the floodgates flew too far open? A brilliant concept involving Shakespearean speech, a shadowy figurehead pulling his puppets’ strings and another second chance romance amidst murder and betrayal are only a few of the issues addressed without complete detail.
Choppy scene switching, a myriad of characters flashing in and out before they became more than blurry images spread over a huge number of pages made this a read that is not quite for me.
I received a complimentary ARC edition from Sourcebooks Casablanca!
Series: Deadly Force - Book 1
Publisher: Sourcebooks Casablanca (March 6, 2018)
Publication Date: March 6, 2018
Genre: Romantic Suspense
Print Length: 546 pages
Available from: https://www.amazon.com/Every-Deep-Des... | https://www.barnesandnoble.com/w/ever...
For Reviews & More: http://tometender.blogspot.com
November 29, 2017
I had a bit of a trying time with ‘Every Deep Desire’, though the blurb did given an indication that it wasn’t going to be a typical romantic suspense novel. The extent to which it was atypical however, came as quite a surprise.
And the setup is not unpredictable: after a 8-year hiatus, Rafe Montford returns to a marriage that he supposedly tore apart. Branded as a traitor and jailed for a few of those years, nothing keeps him from wanting his ex-wife safe after the cryptic notes that she has been getting—a sure sign of his past coming back to haunt him. The details thereafter, are hazy, with many hints that point at something, but that something big isn’t unravelling until you get deeper and deeper into the book.
This much sounds normal, yet the way the suspense is woven and written is in no way usual.
But as much as this odd tilt of literary (read: Shakespearean) and mythical (or Italian) undertones with Romeo/Juliet leanings that also reminded me of Dan Brown-type conspiracy theories made the story unique, it frustrated me in part because getting a grasp of the story, place, context and its characters—who go by a variety of codenames, to add to the confusion and secrecy—was basically a struggle. I couldn’t go on without feeling like there were a few missing vital jigsaw pieces that prevented the whole picture from coming together. The uphill battle to make sense of the whole setup went on for me for a quite a while—so call me slow and most unintuitive—and got exhausting as I tried to make sense of it.
There are brutal anti-heroes and then there are brutal anti-heroes, characters who stood on sides that made them both villains and heroes at the same time…and so difficult to root for. With the story's greyed out boundaries, with drug-lords, mafia kingpins and arms-dealers given that mystery and glitz in that Baz Luhrmann Romeo+Juliet way (throw in military suspense into it as well), it pretty felt after a while, like stylish overkill.
I'm going to just say it's not the book for me, though maybe those who like Shakespeare with a very huge twist can get into this a lot better than I did.
*ARC by the publisher via Netgalley
And the setup is not unpredictable: after a 8-year hiatus, Rafe Montford returns to a marriage that he supposedly tore apart. Branded as a traitor and jailed for a few of those years, nothing keeps him from wanting his ex-wife safe after the cryptic notes that she has been getting—a sure sign of his past coming back to haunt him. The details thereafter, are hazy, with many hints that point at something, but that something big isn’t unravelling until you get deeper and deeper into the book.
This much sounds normal, yet the way the suspense is woven and written is in no way usual.
But as much as this odd tilt of literary (read: Shakespearean) and mythical (or Italian) undertones with Romeo/Juliet leanings that also reminded me of Dan Brown-type conspiracy theories made the story unique, it frustrated me in part because getting a grasp of the story, place, context and its characters—who go by a variety of codenames, to add to the confusion and secrecy—was basically a struggle. I couldn’t go on without feeling like there were a few missing vital jigsaw pieces that prevented the whole picture from coming together. The uphill battle to make sense of the whole setup went on for me for a quite a while—so call me slow and most unintuitive—and got exhausting as I tried to make sense of it.
There are brutal anti-heroes and then there are brutal anti-heroes, characters who stood on sides that made them both villains and heroes at the same time…and so difficult to root for. With the story's greyed out boundaries, with drug-lords, mafia kingpins and arms-dealers given that mystery and glitz in that Baz Luhrmann Romeo+Juliet way (throw in military suspense into it as well), it pretty felt after a while, like stylish overkill.
I'm going to just say it's not the book for me, though maybe those who like Shakespeare with a very huge twist can get into this a lot better than I did.
*ARC by the publisher via Netgalley
December 8, 2017
ARC provided by NetGalley and Sourcebooks in Exchange for an honest review.
This was a not a smooth, easy read.
Juliet had a difficult life but then she found love and happiness with Rafe.
Well she thought she did. One day she receives a letter from Rafe that he's leaving her. Juliet was shattered but determined to live her life a best she could. She started her own business and lived a quiet life.
Rafe is accused of being a traitor and sent to prison. Eight years and he's released from prison with the goal of clearing his name. Rafe knew his wife was in danger and was determined to keep her safe at all cost, even know she probably hated him.
This has so much going on in the story that it was overwhelming and difficult to keep tract of who, where what and when. We have the illusion from the synopsis that it was a romance/mystery/romance. It so much more than that; Shakespearean theme, Romeo and Juliet, then throw in some mythical for added confusion. The story line was on overload and found the format to be confusing and difficult to follow, plus keeping track of too many characters. It was choppy and not clear in its delivery.
The concept and idea was creative unfortunately not well executed.
This was a not a smooth, easy read.
Juliet had a difficult life but then she found love and happiness with Rafe.
Well she thought she did. One day she receives a letter from Rafe that he's leaving her. Juliet was shattered but determined to live her life a best she could. She started her own business and lived a quiet life.
Rafe is accused of being a traitor and sent to prison. Eight years and he's released from prison with the goal of clearing his name. Rafe knew his wife was in danger and was determined to keep her safe at all cost, even know she probably hated him.
This has so much going on in the story that it was overwhelming and difficult to keep tract of who, where what and when. We have the illusion from the synopsis that it was a romance/mystery/romance. It so much more than that; Shakespearean theme, Romeo and Juliet, then throw in some mythical for added confusion. The story line was on overload and found the format to be confusing and difficult to follow, plus keeping track of too many characters. It was choppy and not clear in its delivery.
The concept and idea was creative unfortunately not well executed.
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February 8, 2018Every Deep Desire is a highly complex and multifaceted plot, filled with lots of mystery and intense and brutal action. There is an interesting Shakespearean flare to the "bad guys" with their communications and physical speaking using quotes and speech right from Shakespeare's works. In the end, this book was not for me.
I received this ARC copy of Every Deep Desire from SOURCEBOOKS Casablanca. This is my honest and voluntary review. Every Deep Desire is set for publication March 6, 2018.
I received this ARC copy of Every Deep Desire from SOURCEBOOKS Casablanca. This is my honest and voluntary review. Every Deep Desire is set for publication March 6, 2018.
March 5, 2018
UPDATE 3/5/18: OK, so I read (and reviewed) this originally back in December/January. Since then, I haven't been able to get this book out of my head. I've literally talked about it in the Target checkout line with people. So, while I'm reiterating that the first third is confusing and difficult to get through, the rest of it is over-the-top awesomesauce. Upgrading review to 4 stars.
----------Original Review------------
I've read a few romantic suspense novels lately, and picked this up expecting it to be just another average ex-military macho dude trying to win back his ex-wife. Boy was I wrong! This is kind of a Dan Brown-ish romantic suspense, with centuries-old conspiracies and characters searching for secret clues. It's also absolute awesome crazysauce. Look at the first line of the book:
“Juliet’s daddy always told her to stay away from men who bow.”
Men.... who bow? What does that even mean? Yeah, so there's a sinister ancient society of "men who bow," but this book also contains, in no particular order: a bunch of Army Green Berets charged with treason, Zydeco, blackmailing, explosions, cryptic text messages in Shakespearean English, a drug epidemic, pirates, global arms-dealers, a strip club, murders, a 17th-century witch, and Cajun food, all packaged up in the frame of a "Romeo and Juliet" retelling. Because of that, some familiarity with Shakespeare's play would be a definite asset, as there's some pretty cool parallels (Easter eggs, almost?) that wouldn't be appreciated as much. If that list didn't clue you in, there is a LOT going on in this book, and it took until I was around 30% of my way through the book before I felt like I had an inkling of what was going on, and I still kept confusing the jumble of characters until the very end (in fact, the big villain reveal didn't hit me like it should because of it...). But, once I finally got a grasp on the plot, I was surprised to find myself really enjoying the book, crazysauce and all, and found it very hard to put down.
“She’d put up with a lot today. Two strikes of vandalism. A bank loan disaster matched by real estate issues. A narcissistic senator. A rogue ex-husband. A murder on her land. Crazy texts.”
Overall, I liked Juliet. After Rafe's apparent betrayal, she rebuilds her life, getting a graduate degree and founding her own successful floral/landscaping business. Until, of course, he reappears in her life unexpectedly, in the midst of a confluence of really bad luck (OR IS IT???), and she realizes that, despite her anger and mistrust, maybe her love for him isn't really dead... So, you'll understand when I say that my main issue with Juliet was how quickly she picked it back up with Rafe. I waffled back and forth with how I felt about him. While it's clear that he's doing what he thinks is best to protect Juliet, his choices lead to some pretty awful consequences for a whole lot of people. Their relationship, though, is very sweet and romantic, so I found myself warming to him as the book progressed. There's also a jumble of secondary characters, all of whom have histories with Juliet or Rafe (or sometimes both). For the most part, the main secondary characters (if that makes any sense) were well-written, but there was a case of insta-lust that was really odd and out of left field (and that's saying something for this book!).
If I liked Dan Brown-style thrillers or Romeo & Juliet more, this would easily be a 4-star read. As it is, the confusing first third of the book, followed by a thrilling remainder of the book, lead me to give it three stars. I will, however, definitely be picking up the next in the series, as I'm betting that it'll be easier to get into, since I'm already familiar with the characters and backstory.
“[W]e can’t live in the wreckage of the past and the wreckage of the future. We have to be present to each moment as it comes.”
I received this book for free from NetGalley in exchange for an honest review. This does not affect my opinion of the book or the content of my review.
----------Original Review------------
I've read a few romantic suspense novels lately, and picked this up expecting it to be just another average ex-military macho dude trying to win back his ex-wife. Boy was I wrong! This is kind of a Dan Brown-ish romantic suspense, with centuries-old conspiracies and characters searching for secret clues. It's also absolute awesome crazysauce. Look at the first line of the book:
“Juliet’s daddy always told her to stay away from men who bow.”
Men.... who bow? What does that even mean? Yeah, so there's a sinister ancient society of "men who bow," but this book also contains, in no particular order: a bunch of Army Green Berets charged with treason, Zydeco, blackmailing, explosions, cryptic text messages in Shakespearean English, a drug epidemic, pirates, global arms-dealers, a strip club, murders, a 17th-century witch, and Cajun food, all packaged up in the frame of a "Romeo and Juliet" retelling. Because of that, some familiarity with Shakespeare's play would be a definite asset, as there's some pretty cool parallels (Easter eggs, almost?) that wouldn't be appreciated as much. If that list didn't clue you in, there is a LOT going on in this book, and it took until I was around 30% of my way through the book before I felt like I had an inkling of what was going on, and I still kept confusing the jumble of characters until the very end (in fact, the big villain reveal didn't hit me like it should because of it...). But, once I finally got a grasp on the plot, I was surprised to find myself really enjoying the book, crazysauce and all, and found it very hard to put down.
“She’d put up with a lot today. Two strikes of vandalism. A bank loan disaster matched by real estate issues. A narcissistic senator. A rogue ex-husband. A murder on her land. Crazy texts.”
Overall, I liked Juliet. After Rafe's apparent betrayal, she rebuilds her life, getting a graduate degree and founding her own successful floral/landscaping business. Until, of course, he reappears in her life unexpectedly, in the midst of a confluence of really bad luck (OR IS IT???), and she realizes that, despite her anger and mistrust, maybe her love for him isn't really dead... So, you'll understand when I say that my main issue with Juliet was how quickly she picked it back up with Rafe. I waffled back and forth with how I felt about him. While it's clear that he's doing what he thinks is best to protect Juliet, his choices lead to some pretty awful consequences for a whole lot of people. Their relationship, though, is very sweet and romantic, so I found myself warming to him as the book progressed. There's also a jumble of secondary characters, all of whom have histories with Juliet or Rafe (or sometimes both). For the most part, the main secondary characters (if that makes any sense) were well-written, but there was a case of insta-lust that was really odd and out of left field (and that's saying something for this book!).
If I liked Dan Brown-style thrillers or Romeo & Juliet more, this would easily be a 4-star read. As it is, the confusing first third of the book, followed by a thrilling remainder of the book, lead me to give it three stars. I will, however, definitely be picking up the next in the series, as I'm betting that it'll be easier to get into, since I'm already familiar with the characters and backstory.
“[W]e can’t live in the wreckage of the past and the wreckage of the future. We have to be present to each moment as it comes.”
I received this book for free from NetGalley in exchange for an honest review. This does not affect my opinion of the book or the content of my review.
March 6, 2018
Sensational!!
This is not your average romantic suspense, so if you're in the mood for a sweeping, "Gone with the Wind" type saga, a haunted hero ala "Wuthering Heights" then this is the romantic suspense for you! Meaty plot of betrayal, centuries old secrets that people are willing to die for and a "Romeo and Juliet" type young love that turns tragic, but can it be redeemed? I loved this! I had to rearrange my busy schedule so I could keep reading!
This is not your average romantic suspense, so if you're in the mood for a sweeping, "Gone with the Wind" type saga, a haunted hero ala "Wuthering Heights" then this is the romantic suspense for you! Meaty plot of betrayal, centuries old secrets that people are willing to die for and a "Romeo and Juliet" type young love that turns tragic, but can it be redeemed? I loved this! I had to rearrange my busy schedule so I could keep reading!
March 12, 2018
That cover grabbed my eye and when I read the blurb, this sounded like a wonderful book. Romance, betrayal, mystery, the military, I couldn't resist.
Rafe went AWOL from the military eight years ago, betraying his country and his wife Juliet. She gets a divorce and moves on with her life though she's never forgotten him, her first love and also her last. She got her college degree and started a business. Meanwhile Rafe, after joining a mysterious mercenary band, ended up being caught by the US and thrown in jail, but now he's been released and he's back, trying to clear some matters and spend time with Juliet.
There was a lot going on in this story and it was a jumbled mess at times. Wray tried to do too much. There was Rafe and Juliet's romance, Pete and Samantha's romance, Nate's seizures and headaches, the ambush of two Green Beret teams, the imprisonment and pending trial of the survivors of those teams, a secret vial, attacks on Juliet's business, financial difficulties for Juliet, a secret society that was way over the top, and so on and so on. I needed a cheat sheet and a diagram to keep track of everyone and everything. I don't mind complicated or complex but this was just overstuffed. In all of that, Rafe and Juliet's romance got lost. It also wasn't terribly believable. In a matter of days they reconnect and fall back in love and get a doozy of an HEA. Given how things ended between them and everything happening now, their romance and reconciliation happened too quickly. While the romance didn't work for me, most of the mysteries and suspense did. I found myself skimming a lot of the romance portion and focusing on the mysteries, intrigue, politics, and betrayals. There were also a lot of characters and development suffered at times but they were interesting. I'm curious to see who the next romantic couple is, and which characters will return in book two.
In the end, though Rafe and Juliet's romance was a bust, I enjoyed the rest of the story. The secret society, which it sounds like we'll see more of, was both fascinating and difficult to believe. I did like all of its links to history, and after a while I got used to their habit of speaking in Shakespearean language and texts. The story had numerous mysteries big and small, and the overarching series mystery concerning the ambushes and the consequences intrigued me, enough so that I'll be back for book two. If I approach it as a mystery with a romance subplot, I think I'll be a more satisfied reader.
I received a copy from the publisher for review.
Rafe went AWOL from the military eight years ago, betraying his country and his wife Juliet. She gets a divorce and moves on with her life though she's never forgotten him, her first love and also her last. She got her college degree and started a business. Meanwhile Rafe, after joining a mysterious mercenary band, ended up being caught by the US and thrown in jail, but now he's been released and he's back, trying to clear some matters and spend time with Juliet.
There was a lot going on in this story and it was a jumbled mess at times. Wray tried to do too much. There was Rafe and Juliet's romance, Pete and Samantha's romance, Nate's seizures and headaches, the ambush of two Green Beret teams, the imprisonment and pending trial of the survivors of those teams, a secret vial, attacks on Juliet's business, financial difficulties for Juliet, a secret society that was way over the top, and so on and so on. I needed a cheat sheet and a diagram to keep track of everyone and everything. I don't mind complicated or complex but this was just overstuffed. In all of that, Rafe and Juliet's romance got lost. It also wasn't terribly believable. In a matter of days they reconnect and fall back in love and get a doozy of an HEA. Given how things ended between them and everything happening now, their romance and reconciliation happened too quickly. While the romance didn't work for me, most of the mysteries and suspense did. I found myself skimming a lot of the romance portion and focusing on the mysteries, intrigue, politics, and betrayals. There were also a lot of characters and development suffered at times but they were interesting. I'm curious to see who the next romantic couple is, and which characters will return in book two.
In the end, though Rafe and Juliet's romance was a bust, I enjoyed the rest of the story. The secret society, which it sounds like we'll see more of, was both fascinating and difficult to believe. I did like all of its links to history, and after a while I got used to their habit of speaking in Shakespearean language and texts. The story had numerous mysteries big and small, and the overarching series mystery concerning the ambushes and the consequences intrigued me, enough so that I'll be back for book two. If I approach it as a mystery with a romance subplot, I think I'll be a more satisfied reader.
I received a copy from the publisher for review.
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February 27, 2018
This is the first I have read by Sharon Wray and while I like her writing story she might need to loses a few too many characters. This story is jammed pack to the point readers will get lost along the way as who is who.
This story is full of turns and twist that will have readers up late into the night because putting the book down means not knowing what is happening to the characters.
Every step, every word this book will have readers hooked.
Thank you to Netgalley and the publisher Sourcebooks Casablanca for the advance copy
This story is full of turns and twist that will have readers up late into the night because putting the book down means not knowing what is happening to the characters.
Every step, every word this book will have readers hooked.
Thank you to Netgalley and the publisher Sourcebooks Casablanca for the advance copy
June 28, 2018
Reviewed by Gemini
I really enjoyed Every Deep Desire. It was a very imaginative love story. I always appreciate it when an author creates new worlds that are rife with ancient folklore and traditions that you have to take the time to understand. In this scenario, the folklore involves ancient warriors that still exist in the current world. It’s hard to say if they are good or bad, but they are tasked with exacting justice and protecting certain secrets at all costs.
Rafe Montfort went off to become a Green Beret while leaving his wife Juliet Capel to take care of the homefront. Although their love was that of fairytales, Rafe ultimately breaks Juliet’s heart and ends up being labeled a traitor. He also goes to prison. We later find out that for the past 8 years, he has been some sort of Fianna warrior, and he has killed hundreds of men. Somehow, his past has come to find Juliet and Rafe has come to protect her. The title of the book doesn’t really go with the book though. Everything centers around a flower that is Juliet’s namesake and has grown on Capel family land for centuries. The mystery surrounding the flower and bowing men really catapults the intrigue. I truly had no idea what was going on but there were enough bread crumbs that I had to find out how everything fits together.
In addition to the mystery of the flower and the Fianna warriors, there is plenty of family drama, local politics, and a love that will not die. Rafe whose code name is Romeo is very much meant to be with Juliet. Just like that other love story, they risk their lives to be together. When it all ends, you still may not truly understand what happened but you will be glad that you went along for the ride. There is a large supporting cast and the book is actually fairly long so it requires an investment if you really want to enjoy every detail. I would be curious to see if the author doesn’t write a sequel to develop some of the other characters in the book.
**Received a copy from the publisher and voluntarily reviewed the book.**
I really enjoyed Every Deep Desire. It was a very imaginative love story. I always appreciate it when an author creates new worlds that are rife with ancient folklore and traditions that you have to take the time to understand. In this scenario, the folklore involves ancient warriors that still exist in the current world. It’s hard to say if they are good or bad, but they are tasked with exacting justice and protecting certain secrets at all costs.
Rafe Montfort went off to become a Green Beret while leaving his wife Juliet Capel to take care of the homefront. Although their love was that of fairytales, Rafe ultimately breaks Juliet’s heart and ends up being labeled a traitor. He also goes to prison. We later find out that for the past 8 years, he has been some sort of Fianna warrior, and he has killed hundreds of men. Somehow, his past has come to find Juliet and Rafe has come to protect her. The title of the book doesn’t really go with the book though. Everything centers around a flower that is Juliet’s namesake and has grown on Capel family land for centuries. The mystery surrounding the flower and bowing men really catapults the intrigue. I truly had no idea what was going on but there were enough bread crumbs that I had to find out how everything fits together.
In addition to the mystery of the flower and the Fianna warriors, there is plenty of family drama, local politics, and a love that will not die. Rafe whose code name is Romeo is very much meant to be with Juliet. Just like that other love story, they risk their lives to be together. When it all ends, you still may not truly understand what happened but you will be glad that you went along for the ride. There is a large supporting cast and the book is actually fairly long so it requires an investment if you really want to enjoy every detail. I would be curious to see if the author doesn’t write a sequel to develop some of the other characters in the book.
**Received a copy from the publisher and voluntarily reviewed the book.**
February 27, 2018
A reunion romance and a thriller quality suspense seemed just the right thing when a disgraced ex-Green Beret finds his way home and finds everyone he knows in danger as powerful forces converge on Savannah all hunting one thing- a historical artifact.
Every Deep Desire began with a swirl of shifting images and scenes that left me dizzy and confused for quite some time. It was purposeful, I believe, so the reader feels the weight of deep and conplex intrigue going on around them.
But no, I was not even moderately appreciative of this technique especially when it was nearly at the half-way point and I was still feeling the merry-go-round sensation. There was a lot of activity, but it was people moving in circles around each other rather than a nice, crisp linear plot. Yep, it was a crazy amount of plot threads all tangled together and enough characters to fill out a James A. Michener novel. Though, while I'm on the subject of comparisons to other novels, I felt a little like I was reading a Dan Brown thriller especially with that whole secret brotherhood of assassins and, my eyes doth role, their fondness for Shakespeare and the overall tie of the story to Romeo and Juliet.
I was frustrated most of all because there are some really good elements in this book, but there was enough of them to fill four books. I don't think it helped that I was barely tolerating most of the characters including the main pair. Juliet has this 'I am woman hear me roar' thing that kicks in at the most inopportune moments and turns her into a damsel in distress because she over-estimates her abilities and under-estimates her opponents while ignoring the good advice from trained operatives because she's in a mood. And, then there's Rafe... bleeding heart Rafe who really does go big when he decides to screw up or wallow and do nothing when action is called for. One of the side characters is even worse for a drug addicted ex officer who seems to be only capable of letting the bad guys have their merry way and turning his back on duty while hypocritically calling Rafe a traitor and a screw up.
I skimmed this book from the half-way point onward. While the plot started making a little better since (I mean just a little), the characters got more aggravating by the page. I was ready to throw my poor Kindle across the room at the 85% point. People made dumb moves, but the excitement and crisis point was there so I went ahead and finished. I will not be recommending this one though I am going to rate is as okay because it had some good pieces when it came to several of the suspense elements and how the romance side was set up.
My thanks to Sourcebooks Casablanca for the opportunity to read this book in exchange for an honest review.
Every Deep Desire began with a swirl of shifting images and scenes that left me dizzy and confused for quite some time. It was purposeful, I believe, so the reader feels the weight of deep and conplex intrigue going on around them.
But no, I was not even moderately appreciative of this technique especially when it was nearly at the half-way point and I was still feeling the merry-go-round sensation. There was a lot of activity, but it was people moving in circles around each other rather than a nice, crisp linear plot. Yep, it was a crazy amount of plot threads all tangled together and enough characters to fill out a James A. Michener novel. Though, while I'm on the subject of comparisons to other novels, I felt a little like I was reading a Dan Brown thriller especially with that whole secret brotherhood of assassins and, my eyes doth role, their fondness for Shakespeare and the overall tie of the story to Romeo and Juliet.
I was frustrated most of all because there are some really good elements in this book, but there was enough of them to fill four books. I don't think it helped that I was barely tolerating most of the characters including the main pair. Juliet has this 'I am woman hear me roar' thing that kicks in at the most inopportune moments and turns her into a damsel in distress because she over-estimates her abilities and under-estimates her opponents while ignoring the good advice from trained operatives because she's in a mood. And, then there's Rafe... bleeding heart Rafe who really does go big when he decides to screw up or wallow and do nothing when action is called for. One of the side characters is even worse for a drug addicted ex officer who seems to be only capable of letting the bad guys have their merry way and turning his back on duty while hypocritically calling Rafe a traitor and a screw up.
I skimmed this book from the half-way point onward. While the plot started making a little better since (I mean just a little), the characters got more aggravating by the page. I was ready to throw my poor Kindle across the room at the 85% point. People made dumb moves, but the excitement and crisis point was there so I went ahead and finished. I will not be recommending this one though I am going to rate is as okay because it had some good pieces when it came to several of the suspense elements and how the romance side was set up.
My thanks to Sourcebooks Casablanca for the opportunity to read this book in exchange for an honest review.
August 15, 2018
So I really wanted to like this book like so much. I was ready for some James Patterson like romance but this was.... not that.
Here are my problems.
1. the Shakespearean talk... what the hell was that. once in a while would have been ok, but I really did not get a book so I could try and decipher every freaking other sentence... just tell me what the problem is already!
2. there were soooo many characters that played VITAL roles to the story, it was a bit hard to keep up with who did what and I am all for a twists and turns but it was like wait...what... Let me go back and see what he did before.
3. I did not like the romance in this book at all, it was cold and it felt very forced. If I were Juliet, once I found out what Rafe had done for me I would have for sure acted way different. But that is just me.
Basic summary of the book, military man that is forced to commit treason and leave his A-team in order to save his family. Apparently once you join with the gang or team that he had to join with there is no turning back. He is then thrown in jail for years but is released because they need him to finish some business or they will kill off his family. He takes his vengence on those that have stolen his life away and made him have to choose between his wife and his freedom.
January 11, 2018
The blurb of this book peaked my interest but unfortunately I gave up about 10% of the way into the book.
First off I couldn't figure out what century this book was supposed to take place in. You're led to believe it's in current time but then some of the language use makes you think its from the 1700's or something. There were too many players and too much back and forth for me.
DNF
First off I couldn't figure out what century this book was supposed to take place in. You're led to believe it's in current time but then some of the language use makes you think its from the 1700's or something. There were too many players and too much back and forth for me.
DNF
March 6, 2018
4.5 stars--
ABOUT THE BOOK: Release Date March 6, 2018
He's taking it all back
His honor, his freedom, and the woman he loves
Rafe Montfort was a decorated Green Beret, the best of the best, until a disastrous mission and an unforgivable betrayal destroyed his life. Now, this deadly soldier has returned to the sultry Georgia swamps to reunite with his brothers, and take back all he lost. But Juliet must never know the truth behind what he's done...or the dangerous secret that threatens to take him from her forever.
It took Juliet Capel eight long years to put her life back together after her husband was taken from her. Now Rafe is back, determined to protect her at any cost, and it's not just her heart that's in danger. The swamps hold a secret long buried and far deadlier than either of them could have imagined.
••••••••••••
4.5 stars--EVERY DEEP DESIRE is the first instalment in Sharon Wray’s contemporary, adult DEADLY FORCE romantic suspense series focusing on a group of former Green Beret’s betrayed by someone in charge. This is Rafe Montfort, and Juliet Capel’s second chance story line.
NOTE: EVERY DEEP DESIRE contains scenes of graphic violence that may not be suitable for some readers.
Told from several third person perspectives including Rafe and Juliet VERY DEEP DESIRE is a complex and multi-layered story line that focuses on the rekindling romance between former and dishonourably discharged Green Beret Rafe Montfort, and the woman he loves, landscape architect Juliet Capel. Eight years earlier Rafe Montfort went AWOL leaving the woman he loves struggling to survive. Fast forward to present day wherein a changed Rafe returns seeking revenge against people who destroyed his life-a life he no longer controls as his own. With continuing threats against Juliet, and the return of two of the men he once called friend, Rafe’s mission becomes more complicated as the ‘Brotherhood’, a secret organization known as the Fianna, seeks payment and retribution for sins of the past. What ensues is the second chance romance between Rafe and Juliet, and the potential fall-out as one-time friends become enemies, and enemies become future friends, and the Brotherhood refuses to let go of one of their own.
Sharon Wray has loosely adapted Shakespeare’s Romeo and Juliette with the release of EVERY DEEP DESIRE wherein brother is pitted against brother, family against friendship in a war not of their making. From betrayal to secrets, poison to promises, EVERY DEEP DESIRE is a complicated mosaic of double cross and treachery, heartbreak and confession, power and control. The ‘Brotherhood’ speaks in Shakespearean prose referencing life and death with every message and note. There are heroes and anti-heroes, villains and sinners, black sheep and rogues such that the line between good and evil is constantly blurred. With the introduction of Rafe’s former Green Beret Team, I am hoping the author has plans for future story lines.
EVERY DEEP DESIRE is not an easy read due to the numerous intersecting and complex plotlines; the introduction of a diverse cast of secondary and supporting characters; and the mysterious Fianna-a group of ‘mythological’ Irish warriors dating back hundreds of years. The overload of information is, at times, confusing and chaotic, but I recommend reading EVERY DEEP DESIRE until the end. The premise is unique, intriguing and cleverly written; the characters are passionate and tragic; the romance is palpable and intense. EVERY DEEP DESIRE is a thrilling and fascinating take on Romeo and Juliet- the hidden ‘Easter Eggs’ are only the beginning.
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ABOUT THE BOOK: Release Date March 6, 2018
He's taking it all back
His honor, his freedom, and the woman he loves
Rafe Montfort was a decorated Green Beret, the best of the best, until a disastrous mission and an unforgivable betrayal destroyed his life. Now, this deadly soldier has returned to the sultry Georgia swamps to reunite with his brothers, and take back all he lost. But Juliet must never know the truth behind what he's done...or the dangerous secret that threatens to take him from her forever.
It took Juliet Capel eight long years to put her life back together after her husband was taken from her. Now Rafe is back, determined to protect her at any cost, and it's not just her heart that's in danger. The swamps hold a secret long buried and far deadlier than either of them could have imagined.
••••••••••••
4.5 stars--EVERY DEEP DESIRE is the first instalment in Sharon Wray’s contemporary, adult DEADLY FORCE romantic suspense series focusing on a group of former Green Beret’s betrayed by someone in charge. This is Rafe Montfort, and Juliet Capel’s second chance story line.
NOTE: EVERY DEEP DESIRE contains scenes of graphic violence that may not be suitable for some readers.
Told from several third person perspectives including Rafe and Juliet VERY DEEP DESIRE is a complex and multi-layered story line that focuses on the rekindling romance between former and dishonourably discharged Green Beret Rafe Montfort, and the woman he loves, landscape architect Juliet Capel. Eight years earlier Rafe Montfort went AWOL leaving the woman he loves struggling to survive. Fast forward to present day wherein a changed Rafe returns seeking revenge against people who destroyed his life-a life he no longer controls as his own. With continuing threats against Juliet, and the return of two of the men he once called friend, Rafe’s mission becomes more complicated as the ‘Brotherhood’, a secret organization known as the Fianna, seeks payment and retribution for sins of the past. What ensues is the second chance romance between Rafe and Juliet, and the potential fall-out as one-time friends become enemies, and enemies become future friends, and the Brotherhood refuses to let go of one of their own.
Sharon Wray has loosely adapted Shakespeare’s Romeo and Juliette with the release of EVERY DEEP DESIRE wherein brother is pitted against brother, family against friendship in a war not of their making. From betrayal to secrets, poison to promises, EVERY DEEP DESIRE is a complicated mosaic of double cross and treachery, heartbreak and confession, power and control. The ‘Brotherhood’ speaks in Shakespearean prose referencing life and death with every message and note. There are heroes and anti-heroes, villains and sinners, black sheep and rogues such that the line between good and evil is constantly blurred. With the introduction of Rafe’s former Green Beret Team, I am hoping the author has plans for future story lines.
EVERY DEEP DESIRE is not an easy read due to the numerous intersecting and complex plotlines; the introduction of a diverse cast of secondary and supporting characters; and the mysterious Fianna-a group of ‘mythological’ Irish warriors dating back hundreds of years. The overload of information is, at times, confusing and chaotic, but I recommend reading EVERY DEEP DESIRE until the end. The premise is unique, intriguing and cleverly written; the characters are passionate and tragic; the romance is palpable and intense. EVERY DEEP DESIRE is a thrilling and fascinating take on Romeo and Juliet- the hidden ‘Easter Eggs’ are only the beginning.
copy supplied by Netgalley
www.thereadingcafe.com
March 6, 2018
Reviewed at Keeper Bookshelf
I’ll say upfront that I do not believe that this book or this series is going to be for every Romantic Suspense reader. I say that not unkindly but while most Romantic Suspense or Mystery books go from point A to point B and so on with a few twists – the reader is not going to find that in Every Deep Desire. There is a lot going on in this story. A lot. Which means many characters to keep track of and definite world building in the beginning. I expect that in the first book of a series, but there are additional twists, code names, legend and lore that are also added in that, at times, seems a bit too much to appreciate when I’m trying to keep it all straight in my head. I also believe that it would help greatly if you have at least some knowledge of Shakespeare’s works. You don’t need to know them word for word, but a light understanding will help during some scenes. There are twists, turns, betrayals, surprises and constant danger around every corner in Every Deep Desire. You will definitely be kept on your toes with this story.
I enjoyed Rafe and Juliet’s story. Yes, there were moments when I wanted to have a stern talk with them each, and I often mentally shook my head at what was happening. Yet this couple had that magic touch that says they belong together, they simply have to figure out how to do that with their past.
If you enjoy a deep plot with twists and turns that will be completely unexpected. If you can keep a large cast of characters straight in your head. If you can immerse yourself in this world – then I believe you will enjoy Every Deep Desire. I’m looking forward to where this series will go in the next book. I may re-read this one before I dive into the next one though, we’ll see when the time comes. I’ve been vague about the plot on purpose for I believe to really get into this book you need to experience it for yourself first hand. I did enjoy it and if you give it the chance, I think you will as well.
*I received an e-ARC of this novel from the publisher via NetGalley. That does not change what I think of this story. It is my choice to leave a review giving my personal opinion about this book.*
I’ll say upfront that I do not believe that this book or this series is going to be for every Romantic Suspense reader. I say that not unkindly but while most Romantic Suspense or Mystery books go from point A to point B and so on with a few twists – the reader is not going to find that in Every Deep Desire. There is a lot going on in this story. A lot. Which means many characters to keep track of and definite world building in the beginning. I expect that in the first book of a series, but there are additional twists, code names, legend and lore that are also added in that, at times, seems a bit too much to appreciate when I’m trying to keep it all straight in my head. I also believe that it would help greatly if you have at least some knowledge of Shakespeare’s works. You don’t need to know them word for word, but a light understanding will help during some scenes. There are twists, turns, betrayals, surprises and constant danger around every corner in Every Deep Desire. You will definitely be kept on your toes with this story.
I enjoyed Rafe and Juliet’s story. Yes, there were moments when I wanted to have a stern talk with them each, and I often mentally shook my head at what was happening. Yet this couple had that magic touch that says they belong together, they simply have to figure out how to do that with their past.
If you enjoy a deep plot with twists and turns that will be completely unexpected. If you can keep a large cast of characters straight in your head. If you can immerse yourself in this world – then I believe you will enjoy Every Deep Desire. I’m looking forward to where this series will go in the next book. I may re-read this one before I dive into the next one though, we’ll see when the time comes. I’ve been vague about the plot on purpose for I believe to really get into this book you need to experience it for yourself first hand. I did enjoy it and if you give it the chance, I think you will as well.
*I received an e-ARC of this novel from the publisher via NetGalley. That does not change what I think of this story. It is my choice to leave a review giving my personal opinion about this book.*
December 1, 2017
DNF
The blurb for Sharon Wray’s EVERY DEEP DESIRE sounded interesting and right up my alley, but the delivery was so lacking that I gave up ~20% of the way in. Putting the cart before the horse can work to reel readers in and make them feel compelled to figure out how the cart got to where it is, but the approach didn’t work for me in EVERY DEEP DESIRE… either because the cart consists of a serious case of WTFery or because it’s poorly executed. Possibly both. Neither Rafe and Juliet’s Baz Lurhmann Romeo+Juliet-esque love story nor the Prince’s mysterious Fianna warriors engendered any genuine interest or curiosity in me and the writing rubbed me completely the wrong way, so I threw in the towel fairly early on. There’s a very small possibility I’ll give it another go in the future, but it’s doubtful my issues with it will be resolved.
**ARC from publisher via NetGalley
The blurb for Sharon Wray’s EVERY DEEP DESIRE sounded interesting and right up my alley, but the delivery was so lacking that I gave up ~20% of the way in. Putting the cart before the horse can work to reel readers in and make them feel compelled to figure out how the cart got to where it is, but the approach didn’t work for me in EVERY DEEP DESIRE… either because the cart consists of a serious case of WTFery or because it’s poorly executed. Possibly both. Neither Rafe and Juliet’s Baz Lurhmann Romeo+Juliet-esque love story nor the Prince’s mysterious Fianna warriors engendered any genuine interest or curiosity in me and the writing rubbed me completely the wrong way, so I threw in the towel fairly early on. There’s a very small possibility I’ll give it another go in the future, but it’s doubtful my issues with it will be resolved.
**ARC from publisher via NetGalley
February 9, 2020
I loved everything about this book! The plot twists & turns in unexpected ways. The characters are fully developed & believable. The writing flows smoothly from behind to end. I highly recommend this book!
January 5, 2018
1.5 Stars The blurb created so much promise, but the story failed to deliver.
April 14, 2018
I guess that's a military-dark take on Romeo & Juliet... the Shakespearean codes and last plot did not do it for me, dnf
June 17, 2018
What can I say about this read but it was excellent. I loved everything about it there was action, suspense and passion between the main characters. There was a lot to take in and a lot to understand what was happening. There were so many twists and turns and multiple storylines that were happening but everything came together in the very end. Juliet and Rafe had not seen each other in 8 years and now that he is back he needs to gain her trust and that is going to be a little difficult to do. Their journey is going to take them through some tough terrain and people are going to get hurt and lives are going to change forever. But Rafe is going to have to make a decision in the very end is he ready to leave the woman he loves.
I totally recommend this read and can't wait to read the next installment in this series to figure out who is behind the A-Team's dishonorable discharge and imprisonment.
Received ARC from NetGalley in exchange for an Honest Review
I totally recommend this read and can't wait to read the next installment in this series to figure out who is behind the A-Team's dishonorable discharge and imprisonment.
Received ARC from NetGalley in exchange for an Honest Review
March 12, 2018
Sometimes you finish reading a book and your only thought is “what the hell did I just read?!?!” It’s not necessarily a bad thing, but whoa...I’m not exactly sure how I feel Every Deep Desire.
Rafe wanted to pray that his deal with the devil hadn’t followed him home. Except he no longer believed in prayers, and the churning in his gut told him the devil hadn’t just hitched a ride. The devil was driving.
And that drive was wild and crazy, and often left me breathless. But also frequently confused.
Rafe Montfort sent his wife a Dear Jane letter eight years ago, shortly before the Green Beret deserted his A-Team, went AWOL and was convicted of treason. But after spending time in a Russian prison and being transferred to a military prison in the US, he’s mysteriously released and told to go home and wait for instructions (from whom and about what???). When he gets home, he discovers his wife, Juliet - who he never stopped loving - is in danger, he’s in danger, basically everyone he knows is in danger. And he has to stop the bad guys to keep everyone safe again.
I was so excited to begin reading this book by a brand new author. From the first page it drew me in, and the author’s excellent prose impressed me. Her word play is excellent and kept me intrigued.
However, it wasn’t very long until I got a little lost. Or hero was part of some secret group headed by “the Prince” and his men, Fianna warriors, but there wasn’t any explanation about who they are or what their purpose is (and what’s with them speaking in Shakespearean prose?). I’m not a reader who appreciates that kind of mystery in her books. Please just tell me who everyone is and leave the suspense for the actual plot of the story. And EVERYTHING was a mystery. What do Rafe’s tattoos mean? What happened when Juliet was interrogated? Who are the bad guys really working for? Good grief, not a single part of the story was given quickly or easily, and it didn’t make we want to keep reading, it just made me frustrated.
Also, maybe it’s just me, but I tend to visualize things in my head while I’m reading (kinda like I’m watching the movie in my head). The fight scenes in this book were descriptive and extensive - which would be good if you like reading them. But this is supposed to be a romance, and while I can appreciate a certain amount of action, too much description about punches and kicks bogs the story down for me. Same with the amount of violence - lots of blood and gore, which may appeal to some audiences, but there was a bit too much for me.
This book is first a mystery story - full of conspiracies, double crossers, lots of bad guys. There was so much going on with this story, it was sometimes hard to keep track of everyone, and who was doing what. It was also really long - over 500 pages. If you go in expecting a great love story about a man who was forced to leave his wife to keep her safe, you’re going to be disappointed. Yes, that part of the story is there - and it’s actually really good. But the main focus of this book is Rafe, the Fianna warriors, and the mystery of who framed two military teams for crimes they didn’t commit, and why. And by the way...still don’t know the answer to that question, which I’m sure means there’s another book or two coming. I’ll probably want to read it, just because after all the time I’ve invested into this story, I want to know if they’re able to get everything all straightened out!
Bottom line: this was an extremely well written book, but there was a lot going on, much of which was initially confusing. I’m not a huge fan of hinting at things and not revealing information for the purpose of drawing out suspense, and that was pretty much how the whole book was written. But I liked the characters, and despite being in the dark about what happened in the past and who people were, the plot moved at a quick pace and kept me engaged - it just didn’t have me so engrossed in the story that I either couldn’t put it down or was clamoring to get back to it (it's rare for me to take five days to read a book - even if it's long). Hopefully the next book in the series will be an easier read since the framework has been laid and all the major players introduced. Because this book was kind of a beating to read. With it being a loosely-based retelling of Romeo and Juliet, thank goodness it didn’t end the way Shakespeare’s story did! I might have had to throw my Kindle out the window otherwise...
* thank you to NetGalley and Sourcebooks Casablanca for providing an ARC in exchange for an honest review
Rafe wanted to pray that his deal with the devil hadn’t followed him home. Except he no longer believed in prayers, and the churning in his gut told him the devil hadn’t just hitched a ride. The devil was driving.
And that drive was wild and crazy, and often left me breathless. But also frequently confused.
Rafe Montfort sent his wife a Dear Jane letter eight years ago, shortly before the Green Beret deserted his A-Team, went AWOL and was convicted of treason. But after spending time in a Russian prison and being transferred to a military prison in the US, he’s mysteriously released and told to go home and wait for instructions (from whom and about what???). When he gets home, he discovers his wife, Juliet - who he never stopped loving - is in danger, he’s in danger, basically everyone he knows is in danger. And he has to stop the bad guys to keep everyone safe again.
I was so excited to begin reading this book by a brand new author. From the first page it drew me in, and the author’s excellent prose impressed me. Her word play is excellent and kept me intrigued.
However, it wasn’t very long until I got a little lost. Or hero was part of some secret group headed by “the Prince” and his men, Fianna warriors, but there wasn’t any explanation about who they are or what their purpose is (and what’s with them speaking in Shakespearean prose?). I’m not a reader who appreciates that kind of mystery in her books. Please just tell me who everyone is and leave the suspense for the actual plot of the story. And EVERYTHING was a mystery. What do Rafe’s tattoos mean? What happened when Juliet was interrogated? Who are the bad guys really working for? Good grief, not a single part of the story was given quickly or easily, and it didn’t make we want to keep reading, it just made me frustrated.
Also, maybe it’s just me, but I tend to visualize things in my head while I’m reading (kinda like I’m watching the movie in my head). The fight scenes in this book were descriptive and extensive - which would be good if you like reading them. But this is supposed to be a romance, and while I can appreciate a certain amount of action, too much description about punches and kicks bogs the story down for me. Same with the amount of violence - lots of blood and gore, which may appeal to some audiences, but there was a bit too much for me.
This book is first a mystery story - full of conspiracies, double crossers, lots of bad guys. There was so much going on with this story, it was sometimes hard to keep track of everyone, and who was doing what. It was also really long - over 500 pages. If you go in expecting a great love story about a man who was forced to leave his wife to keep her safe, you’re going to be disappointed. Yes, that part of the story is there - and it’s actually really good. But the main focus of this book is Rafe, the Fianna warriors, and the mystery of who framed two military teams for crimes they didn’t commit, and why. And by the way...still don’t know the answer to that question, which I’m sure means there’s another book or two coming. I’ll probably want to read it, just because after all the time I’ve invested into this story, I want to know if they’re able to get everything all straightened out!
Bottom line: this was an extremely well written book, but there was a lot going on, much of which was initially confusing. I’m not a huge fan of hinting at things and not revealing information for the purpose of drawing out suspense, and that was pretty much how the whole book was written. But I liked the characters, and despite being in the dark about what happened in the past and who people were, the plot moved at a quick pace and kept me engaged - it just didn’t have me so engrossed in the story that I either couldn’t put it down or was clamoring to get back to it (it's rare for me to take five days to read a book - even if it's long). Hopefully the next book in the series will be an easier read since the framework has been laid and all the major players introduced. Because this book was kind of a beating to read. With it being a loosely-based retelling of Romeo and Juliet, thank goodness it didn’t end the way Shakespeare’s story did! I might have had to throw my Kindle out the window otherwise...
* thank you to NetGalley and Sourcebooks Casablanca for providing an ARC in exchange for an honest review
August 29, 2020
This book has it all! An action-packed love story with suspense, rich details and intriguing characters, each with their own story to tell. LOVED IT!
May 27, 2018
In a word- complicated!
Life hasn’t been easy for Rafe Montfort, but his love for his wife, Juliet, has seen him through his darkest days. That is until she ends up in the middle of a deadly plot and he needs to break a vow in order to save her life.
Juliet has worked hard in the eight long years since her husband’s betrayal and subsequent disappearance. She’s built a business, friendships, and a life on her own. She’s even put Rafe’s ghost to rest- mostly. That is until he suddenly appears one hot and steamy Savannah day.
They must work with a ragtag group of disgraced Green Berets, old acquaintances, and each other if they want to stop a string of murders, recover a three hundred year old secret, and exonerate the past.
This story has it all, action, suspense, a forbidden love, ancient lore, Shakespearean quoting Knights, and a plot that will keep the reader turning the pages well past midnight!
I give Every Deep Desire 5+ lovely kisses- a must read!
March 11, 2018
He's taking it all back
His honor, his freedom, and the woman he loves
Rafe Montfort was a decorated Green Beret, the best of the best, until a disastrous mission and an unforgivable betrayal destroyed his life. Now, this deadly soldier has returned to the sultry Georgia swamps to reunite with his brothers, and take back all he lost. But Juliet must never know the truth behind what he's done...or the dangerous secret that threatens to take him from her forever.
It took Juliet Capel eight long years to put her life back together after her husband was taken from her. Now Rafe is back, determined to protect her at any cost, and it's not just her heart that's in danger. The swamps hold a secret long buried and far deadlier than either of them could have imagined...
Review:
There is a lot more to this story than what the blurb says.
Its kind of a cross between any military intrigue and an action adventure story. It is very full of action, adventure and intrigue. There is some going on and so much detail that you need to read everything and not skip around. There were a lot of characters to keep track of too, but the Author did a good job of keeping everything straight. I also, was never sure who to really trust when reading this since so many had their own agendas. I enjoyed reading about all the characters in the book and think any would make great stories when it is their turn. I felt so bad for Rafe and Juliet and all the crap they had to go through to get their happy ending.
Interesting and intriguing start to this new series. I am very curious to see where this series heads.
3.5Stars
*I voluntarily read an advance reader copy of this book provided by the publisher.*
His honor, his freedom, and the woman he loves
Rafe Montfort was a decorated Green Beret, the best of the best, until a disastrous mission and an unforgivable betrayal destroyed his life. Now, this deadly soldier has returned to the sultry Georgia swamps to reunite with his brothers, and take back all he lost. But Juliet must never know the truth behind what he's done...or the dangerous secret that threatens to take him from her forever.
It took Juliet Capel eight long years to put her life back together after her husband was taken from her. Now Rafe is back, determined to protect her at any cost, and it's not just her heart that's in danger. The swamps hold a secret long buried and far deadlier than either of them could have imagined...
Review:
There is a lot more to this story than what the blurb says.
Its kind of a cross between any military intrigue and an action adventure story. It is very full of action, adventure and intrigue. There is some going on and so much detail that you need to read everything and not skip around. There were a lot of characters to keep track of too, but the Author did a good job of keeping everything straight. I also, was never sure who to really trust when reading this since so many had their own agendas. I enjoyed reading about all the characters in the book and think any would make great stories when it is their turn. I felt so bad for Rafe and Juliet and all the crap they had to go through to get their happy ending.
Interesting and intriguing start to this new series. I am very curious to see where this series heads.
3.5Stars
*I voluntarily read an advance reader copy of this book provided by the publisher.*
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