This was a very well written, fast-reading sequel to _The Waking Fire_, one that kept me up late night after night as I plowed through it. The action scenes were well done, the world building continued at an astonishing rate (some of the best world building of any fantasy series I have ever read), and the main characters continued to get further developed with a great deal of nuance. The scale of the conflict widened considerably, with surprisingly the fight against the White Drake not the only fighting in the book.
Just as with _The Waking Fire_, the reader is treated to multiple points of view, each illuminating an entirely different aspect of what becomes in the novel a world conflict. We continue to follow Lizanne Lethridge, that while very much a covert agent, isn’t quite part of the Exceptional Initiatives Division of the Ironship Trading Syndicate anymore. Still on the trail of the Mad Artisan (and in a developing romance with Arberus, who accompanies her), her quest takes her into not only byzantine intrigue in the capital of the Corvantine Empire but to its gulag-like mining-centric prison city of Scorazin, where Lizanne becomes embroiled in gang politics, murder, still more intrigue, and political revolution. Corrick Hilemore’s and Claydon Torcreek’s separate plotlines more or less merge as the two characters are together on the same ship and remain together for a decent-sized portion of the book (though eventually separate again). Their conjoined fates take them deep to the south, to basically their world’s version of Antarctica, having to contend with icebergs, polar weather, food shortages, the massive blue drake called Last Look Jack, and more mysterious ruins similar to those seen in Arradsia, the latter of which was glimpsed in the prophetic vision Clay had when he ingested White drake blood.
As with any world sprawling epic fantasy series, the reader gains some characters and loses some others. Braddon Torcreek and Tekela Akiv Artonin, while present, are nowhere near as prominent in _The Legion of Flame_. I do think the character Clay grew because Braddon wasn’t present, as Clay wasn’t able to rely on Braddon’s experience and confidence (or be restricted by his commands) owing to long periods of separation in the book. New characters include a Corvantine marine by the name of Myratis Lek Sigoral (just called Sigoral through most of the book) who becomes a vital part of Clay’s storyline, and not a new character but a newly important one, Sirus, the curator of the Morsvale Imperial Museum of Antiquities, in love with Tekela, and now, sorry if this is a spoiler, but let’s just say gives the reader a fascinating and valuable villain point of view series of chapters, something much needed as for the most part the White Drake’s activities are nowhere near the other characters, from the fall of Morsvale to the development of its forces to their first conquests.
A great many aspects of this world are further developed and in such a way that they are vital to the plotline. The reader finds a great deal more about the Spoiled and their relationship with the drakes as a whole and the White Drake in particular, vital to develop the coming conflict. The Corvantine Empire, glimpsed at Morsvale and in the context of the fleet they sent to Arradsia, is richly developed, vital again to the coming conflict with the armies (and navies!) of the White Drake. The Islanders and their culture also get further developed, important as the first real test for the White Drake’s forces are the Islanders.
Few real complaints. I think some of the pacing of Clay’s adventures in the deep, deep frozen south could have been a little faster paced, though definitely at the end they were fast paced. Some of the gang intrigue in Scorazin was a bit much to absorb at first but later become clearer with increased exposure. I think Hilemore’s character was a well utilized in the first third of the book and then for much of the rest comparatively underutilized but given the nature of the story I am not sure there was much to be done about that. Some reviewers have complained about the cliffhanger ending but I loved it, it made me want to read the third book right now. I hope the wait isn’t too long!