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The Archer's Heart
In the ancient kingdom of Marhavad, noblemen dominate the lower castes, wielding mystic weapons, known as shartas, against any who oppose them. For generations the rule of Marhavad’s kings has been absolute. But now the line of succession is divided, and whispers of revolution are heard in even the royal palace.
Keshan Adaru, an outspoken man of unearthly charms, welcomes these changes. All his life he has foreseen an uprising that will shatter the castes and end the tyranny of the old laws. His visions have driven him but now, at the brink of their fulfillment, he finds himself obsessed with Prince Jandu Paran-- a man whose entire family must be destroyed if the kingdom is to be freed.
Tarek Amia would gladly see Jandu Paran brought low. Born the son of a charioteer, Tarek has no love for the royal princes who have slighted and insulted him all his life. Only Keshan’s philosophies have elevated him from the brutal ranks of common soldiers. Tarek owes Keshan his devotion, but he is a pragmatic man and when he discovers Keshan’s reckless affair he realizes that Keshan may have to be sacrificed for the sake of his own revolution.
Young Prince Jandu Paran has never concerned himself with court intrigue. His life has been dedicated to the lordly art of archery and mastering the immense powers of the shartas. Handsome and arrogant, he is sure that no man can surpass him and yet Keshan Adaru’s mere touch brings Jandu to his knees. But his desire for Keshan is more than forbidden; it threatens to destroy Jandu’s pride, position and family. In the midst of this turmoil, an unspeakable event forces Jandu to redefine the meaning of honor and loyalty.
And now, as armies arise to war, each man must decide where his allegiance lies and what he will sacrifice in his heart and on the battlefield.
Keshan Adaru, an outspoken man of unearthly charms, welcomes these changes. All his life he has foreseen an uprising that will shatter the castes and end the tyranny of the old laws. His visions have driven him but now, at the brink of their fulfillment, he finds himself obsessed with Prince Jandu Paran-- a man whose entire family must be destroyed if the kingdom is to be freed.
Tarek Amia would gladly see Jandu Paran brought low. Born the son of a charioteer, Tarek has no love for the royal princes who have slighted and insulted him all his life. Only Keshan’s philosophies have elevated him from the brutal ranks of common soldiers. Tarek owes Keshan his devotion, but he is a pragmatic man and when he discovers Keshan’s reckless affair he realizes that Keshan may have to be sacrificed for the sake of his own revolution.
Young Prince Jandu Paran has never concerned himself with court intrigue. His life has been dedicated to the lordly art of archery and mastering the immense powers of the shartas. Handsome and arrogant, he is sure that no man can surpass him and yet Keshan Adaru’s mere touch brings Jandu to his knees. But his desire for Keshan is more than forbidden; it threatens to destroy Jandu’s pride, position and family. In the midst of this turmoil, an unspeakable event forces Jandu to redefine the meaning of honor and loyalty.
And now, as armies arise to war, each man must decide where his allegiance lies and what he will sacrifice in his heart and on the battlefield.
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First published August 1, 2008
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July 16, 2016
Reading The Archers Heart was truly a pleasure. This beautiful fantasy novel draws on elements from the Mahābhārata and is set in a land, not dissimilar to India, called Marhavad. It is a tale of caste, magic, betrayal, adventure, war and love. I spent a week sloping off to bed early just so I could read more!
I think the first thing that appealed was the setting. The Indian influence that saturated Marhavad was delightful and with most of what I've read in fantasy set in more European influenced worlds, an enjoyable change. It made me remember reading The Far Pavilions (incredible, beautiful story) and sneaking out to watch The Jewel in the Crown when I was younger. I cannot express how nice it is to read about somewhere a little different and loose some of the Anglo-European centric feel that many fantasy novels have. No LOTR template here and no singing hobbits either!
The world building was tight with magical elements blending seamlessly within the historical feel of the novel. It was also well paced with nothing glossed over or rushed despite the book covering a period of several years. There were the odd bits that lagged, but for the most part I was kept well entertained.
I liked the character of Keshan Adaru, who is a man with change at the forefront of everything he does. He is determined to see a society where all men and women are treated equally and the caste system removed. He is charismatic and beautiful. The romance that blossoms between him and Prince Jandu Paran kept me up way past my bedtime. I think, of the two characters, the depth and growth of Jandu was what really captured my interest. He begins the story a brash young boy and grows into a man worthy of his title. And yeah, all serious waffle aside it was kinda hot. heh.
The inclusion of Tarek Amia, whose story runs along side that of Keshan and Jandu, was very poignant at times. I enjoyed his stoic, soldier like nature and unrequited love for his Prince. Such an honorable man, I wanted someone to ruffle his hair occasionally.
If I have any whinges it's that I did find Jandu's curse a little odd in the scheme of things. While it did move the story along it was a little different and unexpected. I also felt a bit uncomfortable at the unsympathetic portrayal of Keshan's wife and wondered if this could have been handled a little differently.
I think the most charming thing about this book is its uniqueness. I don't think I've really read anything quite like it before and this was probably its most appealing quality. Beautifully presented and a distinctively different read that is well worth reading. Liked it lots!
Paperback from Blind Eye Books and from Amazon.
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I think the first thing that appealed was the setting. The Indian influence that saturated Marhavad was delightful and with most of what I've read in fantasy set in more European influenced worlds, an enjoyable change. It made me remember reading The Far Pavilions (incredible, beautiful story) and sneaking out to watch The Jewel in the Crown when I was younger. I cannot express how nice it is to read about somewhere a little different and loose some of the Anglo-European centric feel that many fantasy novels have. No LOTR template here and no singing hobbits either!
The world building was tight with magical elements blending seamlessly within the historical feel of the novel. It was also well paced with nothing glossed over or rushed despite the book covering a period of several years. There were the odd bits that lagged, but for the most part I was kept well entertained.
I liked the character of Keshan Adaru, who is a man with change at the forefront of everything he does. He is determined to see a society where all men and women are treated equally and the caste system removed. He is charismatic and beautiful. The romance that blossoms between him and Prince Jandu Paran kept me up way past my bedtime. I think, of the two characters, the depth and growth of Jandu was what really captured my interest. He begins the story a brash young boy and grows into a man worthy of his title. And yeah, all serious waffle aside it was kinda hot. heh.
The inclusion of Tarek Amia, whose story runs along side that of Keshan and Jandu, was very poignant at times. I enjoyed his stoic, soldier like nature and unrequited love for his Prince. Such an honorable man, I wanted someone to ruffle his hair occasionally.
If I have any whinges it's that I did find Jandu's curse a little odd in the scheme of things. While it did move the story along it was a little different and unexpected. I also felt a bit uncomfortable at the unsympathetic portrayal of Keshan's wife and wondered if this could have been handled a little differently.
I think the most charming thing about this book is its uniqueness. I don't think I've really read anything quite like it before and this was probably its most appealing quality. Beautifully presented and a distinctively different read that is well worth reading. Liked it lots!
Paperback from Blind Eye Books and from Amazon.
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March 18, 2016
Take it from me, who's read a ridiculous amount of m/m novels - it's super hard to find a good quality fantasy m/m book. Like, I can probably count the number on one hand. And Archer's Heart is exactly what I search for! It has a solid world, characters I adored, and a storyline that took my breath away.
The story starts off, and is based around, the battle between Darvad Uru and Yudar Paran to be chosen to inherit the throne of Marhavad. Marhavad is a country with a strict and oppressive caste system, and Yudar is a strict traditionalist as opposed to Darvad, who is more open. Our two main characters are on either sides of this feud. Keshan Adaru, who is definitely my favourite character, is a charismatic visionary who is fervent in his belief of abolishing the caste system, and sees Darvad as the man to bring this about. Jandu Paran, Yudar's brother, is a brilliant archer but is shallow and arrogant, yet he cannot ignore the powerful attraction between he and Keshan. Their dangerous love affair is set against the backdrop of courtly intrigue, magic and betrayal.
I'm going to be completely honest and say that Jandu starts off as a complete brat. He doesn't care about anything past his own archery and is both confused and ashamed of his attraction to Keshan. But this is what makes his progress into an incredible character so brilliant! His growth is slow and subtle, provoked by events and not just influenced by Keshan's own ideals. After finishing this, it is absolutely mind-blowing to go back and think about how all the main characters started out, especially Jandu (particularly since I started out not really liking any of them!).
The world-building in this novel is also phenomenal. I could see the influences from India, and that's made it stand out for me amongst fantasy books. I can't think of another fantasy novel that I've read which borrows from India, rather than that dreaded Middle Ages cliche, or even from the Middle East. The whole world is incredibly solid, rich with customs and traditions. The magic in this novel comes in the form of 'shartas', which are weapons that can only be used by the uppermost caste.
This book is divided into three novels, and I am writing this review after re-reading the first one. While the first book starts off fairly predictably, the ending of it completely blindsided me. All of my preconceived notions and cliches of how I thought this book would go down were thrown out the window. From the second book on, Amara's imagination absolutely exploded. This is definitely up there with the best m/m books I've ever read!
Reviewed for A Drop of Romeo
The story starts off, and is based around, the battle between Darvad Uru and Yudar Paran to be chosen to inherit the throne of Marhavad. Marhavad is a country with a strict and oppressive caste system, and Yudar is a strict traditionalist as opposed to Darvad, who is more open. Our two main characters are on either sides of this feud. Keshan Adaru, who is definitely my favourite character, is a charismatic visionary who is fervent in his belief of abolishing the caste system, and sees Darvad as the man to bring this about. Jandu Paran, Yudar's brother, is a brilliant archer but is shallow and arrogant, yet he cannot ignore the powerful attraction between he and Keshan. Their dangerous love affair is set against the backdrop of courtly intrigue, magic and betrayal.
I'm going to be completely honest and say that Jandu starts off as a complete brat. He doesn't care about anything past his own archery and is both confused and ashamed of his attraction to Keshan. But this is what makes his progress into an incredible character so brilliant! His growth is slow and subtle, provoked by events and not just influenced by Keshan's own ideals. After finishing this, it is absolutely mind-blowing to go back and think about how all the main characters started out, especially Jandu (particularly since I started out not really liking any of them!).
The world-building in this novel is also phenomenal. I could see the influences from India, and that's made it stand out for me amongst fantasy books. I can't think of another fantasy novel that I've read which borrows from India, rather than that dreaded Middle Ages cliche, or even from the Middle East. The whole world is incredibly solid, rich with customs and traditions. The magic in this novel comes in the form of 'shartas', which are weapons that can only be used by the uppermost caste.
This book is divided into three novels, and I am writing this review after re-reading the first one. While the first book starts off fairly predictably, the ending of it completely blindsided me. All of my preconceived notions and cliches of how I thought this book would go down were thrown out the window. From the second book on, Amara's imagination absolutely exploded. This is definitely up there with the best m/m books I've ever read!
Reviewed for A Drop of Romeo
March 29, 2015
Epic read for fantasy lovers. If you love reading Fantasy don't miss out on this book. The tale told will snag you and keep you enthralled through the very end. I do have to admit that I found the beginning a bit slower but it's to be expected as the author is setting up the story and we also get to know the characters. But once the Paran Family's luck changes I couldn't put the book down at all. It was two nights of very little sleep.
The story and world, I found just amazing. I loved the Indian-Style elements to it. It just gives it the right tone to be exotic and mystic.
Jandur's growth as a character is painful but also beautiful. It is heartbreaking at so many moments. It is a journey from being arrogant to being proud and earning the respect of those around you. It is also funny how Keshan's growth is actually slower, but when the truth finally hits him it is beautiful. He accomplished his job of changing the world by changing only one man.
I loved this story and I will think about all of its nuances for a long time and I will very likely re-read.
The story and world, I found just amazing. I loved the Indian-Style elements to it. It just gives it the right tone to be exotic and mystic.
Jandur's growth as a character is painful but also beautiful. It is heartbreaking at so many moments. It is a journey from being arrogant to being proud and earning the respect of those around you. It is also funny how Keshan's growth is actually slower, but when the truth finally hits him it is beautiful. He accomplished his job of changing the world by changing only one man.
I loved this story and I will think about all of its nuances for a long time and I will very likely re-read.
August 31, 2016
This book had such glowing reviews that even though I had a really hard time getting into it because of all the names, I decided to give it a shot. Well, my review, alas, won't join those glowing ones. Also, spoilers ahead.
Strange that none of the reviews (well, those I've read anyway) seem to mention that this book contains lots of infidelity and Polyandry, amongst other things, and all of that directly involves the main two characters.
Right from the start, there are too many characters introduced, with long titles and non-western names, which made it all rather confusing. The beginning just plunges into whatever's happening, such beginnings are good for action-packed books, but not this type of a book. I would've liked it more if the introduction of the characters had been more gradual, not all at once. But I got through it, trying to remember who's who wasn't easy though.
The plot and pace: interesting enough plot, but events unfolded at such a slow pace that made me want to scroll. There were numerous scenes where I wondered, what exactly is the point of this scene/arc? Later it turned out, that those scenes were just fillers, didn't lead to much of anything notable. For instances, the scene with the forest fire. Ok, they helped the Demon King and he gifted them. And? For me, each scene should be a lead-up to something, or a continuation of something, not a filler. The jumping POV was a bit irritating, it felt like there was finally something interesting happening and then bam! POV switch. Most of the book dragged on, to be honest, all of the important events and plot twists could've fitted in fewer pages. The worst however, by the end of the book, reading the last sentence felt absolutely anti-climatic. It seemed like not much happened and there wasn't much of an actual story, or romance for that matter. Basically, it seemed like a draft, an introduction prequel sort of thing, to the actual story. Also, there wasn't a solid enough storyline, it seemed like the narrative kept jumping all over the place, one moment there's Tarek and his issues, another moment there's Jandu saving someone from an attack, the next there's Keshan healing some sick woman, and after, comes a passage about Darvad's ambitions or whatever else. It made me go "get to the point!" way too often.
The characters: I can't say that a single character in this book appealed much to me. Keshan — married some woman just because she wrote some letter to him, and though he doesn't like her at all, he keeps her at his side (for what?) while cheating on her left and right. Nice. AND she's portrayed as a sour-faced bitch. Is that supposed to make the reader feel like cheating is ok, in that case? Well, nope. NOT okay, absolutely disgusting.
Jandu — seemed one-dimensional and he also married some woman just because he wanted to show off and win the challenge. But not only that, he and two of his brothers also married her and each would have her for a year. Passing her around like some object. Disgusting #2.
Tarek — spineless fool who lucked out to move up to another caste, but acts like a slave to his friend Darvad, who also happens to be his love interest. He drops everything to do his bidding, steps over himself and really, it's just pathetic. Would be hard pressed to call him a man, more like a worm.
Then there are other characters, like Jandu's older brother who gambled everything away like a fool, and almost gambled away Jandu himself. I would say I liked Iyestar, but the way he acted in the end there…nope. Basically, all these characters are very selfish despite what most of them say and claim to strive for, they only care for their own agendas and that sort of dissonance between their actions and words was a bit irritating.
The romance: well, it was barely there. The characters go from flirtation to love very fast, and I don't like insta-love. It doesn't seem convincing. The fact they are both married and are therefore cheating on their wives, also ruins it a bit. Yes, the culture in the book is strict and homosexuality is punishable by death but I still don't think it makes infidelity okay. Again, the love, if it was there I didn't see it.
The world-building seemed poor and mismatched to me, some things were clearly copied from India, and then, there was the magic. At times it seemed like Harry Potter, at other times, like some Bollywood film, I didn't get the impression of something whole rather bits and pieces here and there and some of them seemed like random fillers. Spent most of the book waiting for the plot to really take off, but it never truly did. Instead, it finished with TBC.
Won't be reading the other books, I'm afraid.
Strange that none of the reviews (well, those I've read anyway) seem to mention that this book contains lots of infidelity and Polyandry, amongst other things, and all of that directly involves the main two characters.
Right from the start, there are too many characters introduced, with long titles and non-western names, which made it all rather confusing. The beginning just plunges into whatever's happening, such beginnings are good for action-packed books, but not this type of a book. I would've liked it more if the introduction of the characters had been more gradual, not all at once. But I got through it, trying to remember who's who wasn't easy though.
The plot and pace: interesting enough plot, but events unfolded at such a slow pace that made me want to scroll. There were numerous scenes where I wondered, what exactly is the point of this scene/arc? Later it turned out, that those scenes were just fillers, didn't lead to much of anything notable. For instances, the scene with the forest fire. Ok, they helped the Demon King and he gifted them. And? For me, each scene should be a lead-up to something, or a continuation of something, not a filler. The jumping POV was a bit irritating, it felt like there was finally something interesting happening and then bam! POV switch. Most of the book dragged on, to be honest, all of the important events and plot twists could've fitted in fewer pages. The worst however, by the end of the book, reading the last sentence felt absolutely anti-climatic. It seemed like not much happened and there wasn't much of an actual story, or romance for that matter. Basically, it seemed like a draft, an introduction prequel sort of thing, to the actual story. Also, there wasn't a solid enough storyline, it seemed like the narrative kept jumping all over the place, one moment there's Tarek and his issues, another moment there's Jandu saving someone from an attack, the next there's Keshan healing some sick woman, and after, comes a passage about Darvad's ambitions or whatever else. It made me go "get to the point!" way too often.
The characters: I can't say that a single character in this book appealed much to me. Keshan — married some woman just because she wrote some letter to him, and though he doesn't like her at all, he keeps her at his side (for what?) while cheating on her left and right. Nice. AND she's portrayed as a sour-faced bitch. Is that supposed to make the reader feel like cheating is ok, in that case? Well, nope. NOT okay, absolutely disgusting.
Jandu — seemed one-dimensional and he also married some woman just because he wanted to show off and win the challenge. But not only that, he and two of his brothers also married her and each would have her for a year. Passing her around like some object. Disgusting #2.
Tarek — spineless fool who lucked out to move up to another caste, but acts like a slave to his friend Darvad, who also happens to be his love interest. He drops everything to do his bidding, steps over himself and really, it's just pathetic. Would be hard pressed to call him a man, more like a worm.
Then there are other characters, like Jandu's older brother who gambled everything away like a fool, and almost gambled away Jandu himself. I would say I liked Iyestar, but the way he acted in the end there…nope. Basically, all these characters are very selfish despite what most of them say and claim to strive for, they only care for their own agendas and that sort of dissonance between their actions and words was a bit irritating.
The romance: well, it was barely there. The characters go from flirtation to love very fast, and I don't like insta-love. It doesn't seem convincing. The fact they are both married and are therefore cheating on their wives, also ruins it a bit. Yes, the culture in the book is strict and homosexuality is punishable by death but I still don't think it makes infidelity okay. Again, the love, if it was there I didn't see it.
The world-building seemed poor and mismatched to me, some things were clearly copied from India, and then, there was the magic. At times it seemed like Harry Potter, at other times, like some Bollywood film, I didn't get the impression of something whole rather bits and pieces here and there and some of them seemed like random fillers. Spent most of the book waiting for the plot to really take off, but it never truly did. Instead, it finished with TBC.
Won't be reading the other books, I'm afraid.
May 21, 2020
I'm a sucker for Fantasy/Intrigues/Gay Romance and snotty aristocrats.
The world building is great and I loved Jandu from the beginning. I've seen that a lot of readers were annoyed at him at the start but everything about him practically screams "character development". It also helps that his faults were mostly being a snotty aristocrat.
But despite my high rating, there were still some things that bugged me a lot.
1.) Yudar. I understand that there are characters you are plainly not supposed to like but he was just extremely frustrating to a degree that lessened my enjoyment of the story. Compared to awesome villains who you might also hate but are awesome to read about (see: the Lannisters in ASoIaF, who come in varying shades of villainy and morality, but who are all extremely entertaining to read about), I was mostly waiting for someone to give him a long and painful death already. Or a short and quick one, so Keshan and Jandul are finally rid of him.
2.) Yeah, I was absolutely not a fan of that thing at the beginning of book 3.
Trigger and Spoiler warning: attempted rape. I'm never a fan of that and I'm more attuned to it now that I've run into that so often lately even though I was anticipating a decently fluffy read (*cough* The Last Sun *cough*).
3.) Yudar
4.) The romance part was unbelievable imo. From Keshan's side it seemed more like instalust and from Jandul's side like a crush than the everlasting love they promised each other so quickly. Also, before the events of book 3, the relationship also seemed imbalanced to me, in favor of Keshan.
5.) Have I mentioned Yudar yet?
Granted, the perceived imbalance might be only on my part and due to the weird association my brain made.
If anyone has read the series in question, please tell me if I'm just imagining the following:
okay, so for some reason so many of The Archer's Heart characters reminded me strongly of Mistborn characters...
like, you cannot tell me Keshan and Kelsier (Mistborn) are not extremely similar - my brain always replaced Keshan with Kelsier, which maybe caused the perceived imbalance as Kelsier is older, wiser and widowed. Tarek would be Sazed then (or rather Hrathen from Elantris now that I think about it) and Yudar would be Yeden (although Yudar is so much more despicable that a comparison wouldn't even fit onto a scale).
So at times this read like a freaky gay Mistborn AU to me which was a.) weird and b.) didn't do this series justice. My point is, take my rant with a pinch of salt.
tl;dr: Yudar sucks.
The world building is great and I loved Jandu from the beginning. I've seen that a lot of readers were annoyed at him at the start but everything about him practically screams "character development". It also helps that his faults were mostly being a snotty aristocrat.
But despite my high rating, there were still some things that bugged me a lot.
1.) Yudar. I understand that there are characters you are plainly not supposed to like but he was just extremely frustrating to a degree that lessened my enjoyment of the story. Compared to awesome villains who you might also hate but are awesome to read about (see: the Lannisters in ASoIaF, who come in varying shades of villainy and morality, but who are all extremely entertaining to read about), I was mostly waiting for someone to give him a long and painful death already. Or a short and quick one, so Keshan and Jandul are finally rid of him.
2.) Yeah, I was absolutely not a fan of that thing at the beginning of book 3.
Trigger and Spoiler warning: attempted rape. I'm never a fan of that and I'm more attuned to it now that I've run into that so often lately even though I was anticipating a decently fluffy read (*cough* The Last Sun *cough*).
3.) Yudar
4.) The romance part was unbelievable imo. From Keshan's side it seemed more like instalust and from Jandul's side like a crush than the everlasting love they promised each other so quickly. Also, before the events of book 3, the relationship also seemed imbalanced to me, in favor of Keshan.
5.) Have I mentioned Yudar yet?
Granted, the perceived imbalance might be only on my part and due to the weird association my brain made.
If anyone has read the series in question, please tell me if I'm just imagining the following:
okay, so for some reason so many of The Archer's Heart characters reminded me strongly of Mistborn characters...
like, you cannot tell me Keshan and Kelsier (Mistborn) are not extremely similar - my brain always replaced Keshan with Kelsier, which maybe caused the perceived imbalance as Kelsier is older, wiser and widowed. Tarek would be Sazed then (or rather Hrathen from Elantris now that I think about it) and Yudar would be Yeden (although Yudar is so much more despicable that a comparison wouldn't even fit onto a scale).
So at times this read like a freaky gay Mistborn AU to me which was a.) weird and b.) didn't do this series justice. My point is, take my rant with a pinch of salt.
tl;dr: Yudar sucks.
February 10, 2020
Wow! What can I say - wow! It is definitely epic material to rival some of Mary Renault's novels but with a lot more graphic M-on-M descriptions. I loved so many of the characters (so well rounded and real - they are all flawed in some way but yet sympathetically drawn). Much as I wanted to hate characters like Tarek, Yudar and Baram - I couldn't. And whilst the true baddies like Darvad and his henchmen probably deserved to die for their self-centred treachery - I can so see how they were all victims of the social systems that hold them in thrall and status.
I cried in several passages - especially the bit where Keshan realises that his mission to change the world could be redefined to the influencing of one man whom he loved - Jandu. And Keshan and Jandu make such a wonderful pair of lovers - swoon worthy in every way. I really hope they would make a movie out of this book. The locale, customs, magics and exotic flavour of the book were all rivetingly fantastic and real. The horrors of the caste-system and the punishments meted out on those who flout traditions were definitely designed to raise the social justice ire in any compassionate reader. And despite the many many (but no!-type) deaths leading towards the ending - some of which I could not predict - I was so relieved that the lovers were left some family and friends to start their brave new world in - these ranking amongst my favourite of the characters e.g. Iyestar, Suraya and her brother, Anant (love this fellow) and the 17 year-old mentoree of Jandu's.
The author was rather clever in her plot device to reduce the Paran family to exile desolateness to allow them the opportunity to see how the other half lives. Strange though that it was only Jandu out of the 4 who seemed to develop a greater compassion and understanding of the outcast untouchables through all the suffering they went through - might that be cause he had a mentor like Keshan? And likewise for Keshan - to find that ideals and dreams can only become real through the physical manifestation of love towards a tangible human being - moves his experience and understanding of social justice and equality beyond the abstract nature of law and legislation into the personal and experiential - he would be willing himself to become one of those who he was championing for the sake / love of another.
There were a couple of plot anomalies but these are over trivial stuff.
And my heart breaks for Tarek - in the end, despite his being loved unconditionally - he chose to fall on his own sword of duty, honour and pride. One could say the same for the old regent-mentor of the royal boys as well Yudar. He could not break away from his own moral codes and from judging himself (and others) by those very destructive rules and mores - despite being shown what alternatives there could be with Anant as well as his observation of our two main lovers.
Wonderful wonderful books in this trilogy - they will definitely remain on my keep forever to re-read pile. I have them in both hard-copy as well as e-book format.
I cried in several passages - especially the bit where Keshan realises that his mission to change the world could be redefined to the influencing of one man whom he loved - Jandu. And Keshan and Jandu make such a wonderful pair of lovers - swoon worthy in every way. I really hope they would make a movie out of this book. The locale, customs, magics and exotic flavour of the book were all rivetingly fantastic and real. The horrors of the caste-system and the punishments meted out on those who flout traditions were definitely designed to raise the social justice ire in any compassionate reader. And despite the many many (but no!-type) deaths leading towards the ending - some of which I could not predict - I was so relieved that the lovers were left some family and friends to start their brave new world in - these ranking amongst my favourite of the characters e.g. Iyestar, Suraya and her brother, Anant (love this fellow) and the 17 year-old mentoree of Jandu's.
The author was rather clever in her plot device to reduce the Paran family to exile desolateness to allow them the opportunity to see how the other half lives. Strange though that it was only Jandu out of the 4 who seemed to develop a greater compassion and understanding of the outcast untouchables through all the suffering they went through - might that be cause he had a mentor like Keshan? And likewise for Keshan - to find that ideals and dreams can only become real through the physical manifestation of love towards a tangible human being - moves his experience and understanding of social justice and equality beyond the abstract nature of law and legislation into the personal and experiential - he would be willing himself to become one of those who he was championing for the sake / love of another.
There were a couple of plot anomalies but these are over trivial stuff.
And my heart breaks for Tarek - in the end, despite his being loved unconditionally - he chose to fall on his own sword of duty, honour and pride. One could say the same for the old regent-mentor of the royal boys as well Yudar. He could not break away from his own moral codes and from judging himself (and others) by those very destructive rules and mores - despite being shown what alternatives there could be with Anant as well as his observation of our two main lovers.
Wonderful wonderful books in this trilogy - they will definitely remain on my keep forever to re-read pile. I have them in both hard-copy as well as e-book format.
August 18, 2010
Beautiful story of devotion, deep love and belief :). I loved it.
Highly recommended read.
Highly recommended read.
March 12, 2019
DNF at 25%
I truly don't know what I am missing about this book. I was pretty excited to find it in a used book store after reading the glowing reviews, and it looked incredibly refreshing -- it's always a struggle to find non-European fantasy and fantasy with lgbt+ leads. Both in one book? Seemed to good to be true!
And it was! The writing is horrible. HORRIBLE. I truly don't understand how there are so many glowing reviews about the writing. I am genuinely interested in the plot and the setting, but the process of actually reading the book is painful. The author has some strong points -- she paints a very lush depiction of the setting, and her descriptions of magic are enchanting. She REALLY excels at describing food (every time the characters had to eat, I came away feeling hungry), funny as that may sound. Her descriptions of the characters are pretty solid, even though it eventually becomes tedious to read ANOTHER description of a young man with rippling abs and glowing bronze skin.
The problem is that the author does a great job of "showing" when it is relevant to creating the setting and the magic system. The setting is appealing. The writing on the characters? Awful. The tell-inous of this story is incredible. As soon as you get into character thoughts, motivations, and inspirations, any of the complexity of writing is lost. It makes the characters incredibly grating. There is NO subtlety at all in any of the characters, their thoughts, their feelings, their motivations. There is no grey room, no room for questioning, no room for anticipation. It's incredibly flat and aggravating to read, and eventually, I just gave up. As much as I am interested in the plot and would love to see where it goes, the writing (on the characters in particular) is painful. It makes characters who I would otherwise really enjoy (the two main characters are brats but I find their personalities pretty fun) painful to read.
Another thing that I found frustrating. In the first like 120 pages, there are like three women. And most of them are one dimensional and vilified. When I realized this, I realized what the book reminded me of -- it reminded me of bad slash fiction from like 2009. The women are all b!tches, the men are all beautiful and misunderstood and falling for each other left and right. I honestly don't mind the polyandry angle of the book, I'm not trying to pass moral judgments on any of that -- but the female characters were just, like, thrown in there to.... be there? It was like propping a cardboard cutout up in the kitchen, calling it your wife, and then blaming her for lack of depth. It really did feel like slash fiction from the early 2000s, and I feel like maybe this story just.... appeals to slash fans exclusively, and that's why some people love it and some people hate it.
I honestly don't know what I'm missing. If someone could honestly tell me the writing improves in the second half of the book or any of the sequels, or that there is any more nuance, subtlety, and death. I might consider reading it. At the moment, though, it seems like a really intriguing story and lush world bogged down by boring writing.
I truly don't know what I am missing about this book. I was pretty excited to find it in a used book store after reading the glowing reviews, and it looked incredibly refreshing -- it's always a struggle to find non-European fantasy and fantasy with lgbt+ leads. Both in one book? Seemed to good to be true!
And it was! The writing is horrible. HORRIBLE. I truly don't understand how there are so many glowing reviews about the writing. I am genuinely interested in the plot and the setting, but the process of actually reading the book is painful. The author has some strong points -- she paints a very lush depiction of the setting, and her descriptions of magic are enchanting. She REALLY excels at describing food (every time the characters had to eat, I came away feeling hungry), funny as that may sound. Her descriptions of the characters are pretty solid, even though it eventually becomes tedious to read ANOTHER description of a young man with rippling abs and glowing bronze skin.
The problem is that the author does a great job of "showing" when it is relevant to creating the setting and the magic system. The setting is appealing. The writing on the characters? Awful. The tell-inous of this story is incredible. As soon as you get into character thoughts, motivations, and inspirations, any of the complexity of writing is lost. It makes the characters incredibly grating. There is NO subtlety at all in any of the characters, their thoughts, their feelings, their motivations. There is no grey room, no room for questioning, no room for anticipation. It's incredibly flat and aggravating to read, and eventually, I just gave up. As much as I am interested in the plot and would love to see where it goes, the writing (on the characters in particular) is painful. It makes characters who I would otherwise really enjoy (the two main characters are brats but I find their personalities pretty fun) painful to read.
Another thing that I found frustrating. In the first like 120 pages, there are like three women. And most of them are one dimensional and vilified. When I realized this, I realized what the book reminded me of -- it reminded me of bad slash fiction from like 2009. The women are all b!tches, the men are all beautiful and misunderstood and falling for each other left and right. I honestly don't mind the polyandry angle of the book, I'm not trying to pass moral judgments on any of that -- but the female characters were just, like, thrown in there to.... be there? It was like propping a cardboard cutout up in the kitchen, calling it your wife, and then blaming her for lack of depth. It really did feel like slash fiction from the early 2000s, and I feel like maybe this story just.... appeals to slash fans exclusively, and that's why some people love it and some people hate it.
I honestly don't know what I'm missing. If someone could honestly tell me the writing improves in the second half of the book or any of the sequels, or that there is any more nuance, subtlety, and death. I might consider reading it. At the moment, though, it seems like a really intriguing story and lush world bogged down by boring writing.
May 30, 2020
The bestest !!!!!!!!!!!!!
December 1, 2021
I liked it, but chose not to read the rest. I read the other blurbs to know what is coming.
August 16, 2009
The Review:
Honesty from the outset~
Over the last few months I have reviewed several stories by Astrid Amara in the anthologies Hell Cop and Tangle: Edition XY. Each time I have come away more and more impressed by her storytelling. The Archer's Heart did not disappoint. This was the stuff of epics.
First things first~
When The Archer's Heart arrived with a thunk on my doorstep I admit to being daunted about the task of reviewing such a large book that was sure to be filled with the rich prose I've come to expect from this author. Once I'd started reading I quickly forgot my earlier intimidation and over the next four to five hours completely lost myself in the world the author had created.
Where to start...
The Archer's Heart is beautifully written with the culture and landscape of the Marhavad kingdom being lushly crafted and reminiscent of India at its most beautiful and its most darkest. This is a story about power, oppression, societal expectations, personal belief systems, acceptance, hope, friendship, family, loyalty and love. The setting, especially with its rigid caste system, provides a perfect backdrop to the exploration of these themes.
There were a few places where I did find the world building a little too descriptive. Having said that, it never overwhelmed as is sometimes the case in the fantasy genre, was always relevant to the plot and helped to paint the vivid picture that was the Marhavad kingdom. In places, you could almost smell the stink of the sewerage of the slums or the stench of the dying bodies on the battlefield. It was very evocative.
The story focuses on Keshan and Jandu and their relationship and on the story of Tarek. Through them you meet a cast of characters, who both repel and engage your emotions. Some of you might be jumping to your own fantasies conclusions and thinking along the lines of m/m/m, but I assure you it is not. Tarek and the unrequited feelings he has for his Lord (Darvad) provides the contrast to the openness, love and commitment between Keshan and Jandu. From a low caste, Tarek worked his way up to his high status and as a result is obsessed with his oath and the man who helped him get there. He will do anything to serve his Lord, even compromise his own beliefs.
Keshan and Jandu on the other hand are complete opposites; not only in ideals, but also in factions. Keshan is politically savvy with a radical vision (literally) for the future which he works to see implemented and Jandu is a spoilt young man who has never questioned his position as Prince. The two are fascinated with each other from the very beginning, despite Jandu's horror at being attracted to a man which is an act punishable by death in the kingdom.
For all his apparent shallowness at the beginning of the book, Jandu was by far my favourite character. Don't get me wrong, all the protags are very well developed in The Archer's Heart. Yet, it was Jandu who captured MY heart. I think this was because of the incredible and challenging experiences this character has over the approximately four year period the book covers. Although he becomes lovers with Keshan quite early in the story, it is not Keshan who is the central catalyst to Jandu's maturation but it is the impact of his other life circumstances. As a reader, I felt privileged to witness Jandu's change and growth in character albeit distressing at times.
Finally, and trying not to give any spoilers, some of you sooner, as I did, rather than later will get an idea as to how the book may finish. Do not let this distract you from your enjoyment because, in my opinion, it is the journey - the hows, whys and whens - that make this story, not necessarily the ending.
A couple of issues/warnings~
There were only a few things which stopped this from being five stars for me. The first was a minor issue associated with the world building and I touched on that above. The second related to the telling of Tarek's story. Although I understand Tarek's relationship with Darvad provided juxtaposition to that of Keshan's and Jandu's, I found myself becoming increasingly frustrated with his inability to see the truth about Darvad. There is no doubt in mind this was the response the author was trying to evoke in the reader; however, I have to admit I did skip some of the passages towards the end of the book because he was annoying the absolute crap out of me.
My recommendation~
This is quite simply the best fantasy story I've read in my nearly 18 months of reading m/m fiction. To those who particularly enjoy this genre I would strongly recommend that you buy The Archer's Heart. It is excellent.
Honesty from the outset~
Over the last few months I have reviewed several stories by Astrid Amara in the anthologies Hell Cop and Tangle: Edition XY. Each time I have come away more and more impressed by her storytelling. The Archer's Heart did not disappoint. This was the stuff of epics.
First things first~
When The Archer's Heart arrived with a thunk on my doorstep I admit to being daunted about the task of reviewing such a large book that was sure to be filled with the rich prose I've come to expect from this author. Once I'd started reading I quickly forgot my earlier intimidation and over the next four to five hours completely lost myself in the world the author had created.
Where to start...
The Archer's Heart is beautifully written with the culture and landscape of the Marhavad kingdom being lushly crafted and reminiscent of India at its most beautiful and its most darkest. This is a story about power, oppression, societal expectations, personal belief systems, acceptance, hope, friendship, family, loyalty and love. The setting, especially with its rigid caste system, provides a perfect backdrop to the exploration of these themes.
There were a few places where I did find the world building a little too descriptive. Having said that, it never overwhelmed as is sometimes the case in the fantasy genre, was always relevant to the plot and helped to paint the vivid picture that was the Marhavad kingdom. In places, you could almost smell the stink of the sewerage of the slums or the stench of the dying bodies on the battlefield. It was very evocative.
The story focuses on Keshan and Jandu and their relationship and on the story of Tarek. Through them you meet a cast of characters, who both repel and engage your emotions. Some of you might be jumping to your own fantasies conclusions and thinking along the lines of m/m/m, but I assure you it is not. Tarek and the unrequited feelings he has for his Lord (Darvad) provides the contrast to the openness, love and commitment between Keshan and Jandu. From a low caste, Tarek worked his way up to his high status and as a result is obsessed with his oath and the man who helped him get there. He will do anything to serve his Lord, even compromise his own beliefs.
Keshan and Jandu on the other hand are complete opposites; not only in ideals, but also in factions. Keshan is politically savvy with a radical vision (literally) for the future which he works to see implemented and Jandu is a spoilt young man who has never questioned his position as Prince. The two are fascinated with each other from the very beginning, despite Jandu's horror at being attracted to a man which is an act punishable by death in the kingdom.
For all his apparent shallowness at the beginning of the book, Jandu was by far my favourite character. Don't get me wrong, all the protags are very well developed in The Archer's Heart. Yet, it was Jandu who captured MY heart. I think this was because of the incredible and challenging experiences this character has over the approximately four year period the book covers. Although he becomes lovers with Keshan quite early in the story, it is not Keshan who is the central catalyst to Jandu's maturation but it is the impact of his other life circumstances. As a reader, I felt privileged to witness Jandu's change and growth in character albeit distressing at times.
Finally, and trying not to give any spoilers, some of you sooner, as I did, rather than later will get an idea as to how the book may finish. Do not let this distract you from your enjoyment because, in my opinion, it is the journey - the hows, whys and whens - that make this story, not necessarily the ending.
A couple of issues/warnings~
There were only a few things which stopped this from being five stars for me. The first was a minor issue associated with the world building and I touched on that above. The second related to the telling of Tarek's story. Although I understand Tarek's relationship with Darvad provided juxtaposition to that of Keshan's and Jandu's, I found myself becoming increasingly frustrated with his inability to see the truth about Darvad. There is no doubt in mind this was the response the author was trying to evoke in the reader; however, I have to admit I did skip some of the passages towards the end of the book because he was annoying the absolute crap out of me.
My recommendation~
This is quite simply the best fantasy story I've read in my nearly 18 months of reading m/m fiction. To those who particularly enjoy this genre I would strongly recommend that you buy The Archer's Heart. It is excellent.
December 27, 2016
A very good example of a fantasy m/m romance, at last. It's very hard to find, you know. So I had been expecting something bland and primitive, but was suddenly and very pleasantly disappointed. I liked it from the start. There is a 'but' coming, of course.
For the life of me I coudn't figure out why I wasn't enjoying The Archer's Heart as much as I should, why it didn't seem captivating, fascinating, lovable, why I didn't want to reread it immediately after finishing like I'd often have done with my favorite one.
I had been thinking about it all the way through Book 1. Somewhere at 2/3 I recognized the plot from the Mahabharata (at first I thought there are only some minor details borrowed, like several husbands, and that's all), which is a plus, meaning there is no shameless stealing, nothing too obvious. Jandu Paran was identified as Arjuna Pandava, "Pity there is no Krishna" I thought... And then it finally hit me. Keshan was supposed to be Krishna, but he is so not. And Jandu is so not Arjuna. Had it been a Mahabharata-based fanfic, I would have enjoyed it so much more. However, as a stand-alone original story it lacks epic material. There is no amazement, fascination, glory, magic and bloodshed of the Hindu myths (although the final battle was rather epic, I must admit). It a good story - not a brilliant one. Not a one that would keep you awake till you'd finished it. Not a one that you would keep thinking about afterwards feeling hot all over.
I can't in good conscience rate it five stars - not only because of my personal opinion, but also because of some minor plot details that I didn't like, some stylistic discrepancies... in other words, some things I'd ignore completely had I loved this book with all my heart. But my heart wasn't in it.
I should mention the romance itself. At the beginning I was glad to find an openly bisexual character who likes sex and feels no guilt whatsoever for his sexual desires. I mean Keshan XD During the first few pages I was even thrilled thinking, "OMG, at last free unrestrained sex, at last the characters are attracted to each other instantly, at last a world without homophobia and prosecution of gays." No such luck, sadly. I always wonder why authors who are painstakingly creating their own worlds, almost never fail to introduce homophobia and, sometimes, a brutal punishment for being gay - like burning at the stake (!) in the Rifter series (The Shattered Gates and other 9 books). Here it's... um, sorry, can't remember, it's only mentioned, thank God, not described. Actually I can remember only one world (beside my own) where the majority of people are happily bisexual - the Administration series (Mind Fuck and other books).
OK, Jandu overcomes his 'I can't love a man, it's awful and forbidden' routine quite easily, and there is happy and hot sex afterwards. But always with caution. Except the law against sodomy, there is their respectful marriages to consider XD Although the wives have nothing against it, so technically there is no adultery.
Also I should mention the beautiful cover. I remember myself thinking, "A book with such a cover just can't be bad, and if it is it will break my heart." Although, *pedantic mode on* it's not consistent with the supposed racial features and battle gear XD
For the life of me I coudn't figure out why I wasn't enjoying The Archer's Heart as much as I should, why it didn't seem captivating, fascinating, lovable, why I didn't want to reread it immediately after finishing like I'd often have done with my favorite one.
I had been thinking about it all the way through Book 1. Somewhere at 2/3 I recognized the plot from the Mahabharata (at first I thought there are only some minor details borrowed, like several husbands, and that's all), which is a plus, meaning there is no shameless stealing, nothing too obvious. Jandu Paran was identified as Arjuna Pandava, "Pity there is no Krishna" I thought... And then it finally hit me. Keshan was supposed to be Krishna, but he is so not. And Jandu is so not Arjuna. Had it been a Mahabharata-based fanfic, I would have enjoyed it so much more. However, as a stand-alone original story it lacks epic material. There is no amazement, fascination, glory, magic and bloodshed of the Hindu myths (although the final battle was rather epic, I must admit). It a good story - not a brilliant one. Not a one that would keep you awake till you'd finished it. Not a one that you would keep thinking about afterwards feeling hot all over.
I can't in good conscience rate it five stars - not only because of my personal opinion, but also because of some minor plot details that I didn't like, some stylistic discrepancies... in other words, some things I'd ignore completely had I loved this book with all my heart. But my heart wasn't in it.
I should mention the romance itself. At the beginning I was glad to find an openly bisexual character who likes sex and feels no guilt whatsoever for his sexual desires. I mean Keshan XD During the first few pages I was even thrilled thinking, "OMG, at last free unrestrained sex, at last the characters are attracted to each other instantly, at last a world without homophobia and prosecution of gays." No such luck, sadly. I always wonder why authors who are painstakingly creating their own worlds, almost never fail to introduce homophobia and, sometimes, a brutal punishment for being gay - like burning at the stake (!) in the Rifter series (The Shattered Gates and other 9 books). Here it's... um, sorry, can't remember, it's only mentioned, thank God, not described. Actually I can remember only one world (beside my own) where the majority of people are happily bisexual - the Administration series (Mind Fuck and other books).
OK, Jandu overcomes his 'I can't love a man, it's awful and forbidden' routine quite easily, and there is happy and hot sex afterwards. But always with caution. Except the law against sodomy, there is their respectful marriages to consider XD Although the wives have nothing against it, so technically there is no adultery.
Also I should mention the beautiful cover. I remember myself thinking, "A book with such a cover just can't be bad, and if it is it will break my heart." Although, *pedantic mode on* it's not consistent with the supposed racial features and battle gear XD
August 17, 2012
Astrid Amara’s The Archer’s Heart is a wonderful fantasy novel set in a Middle Eastern-type environment. Unlike the European-based setting of most books in this genre, the main characters are gay. That’s right: the title character and other major players of this book are gay! This is one of the reasons why this book is near and dear to me: the inclusion of people who struggle with their sexual orientation in a society where it is considered disgusting is painfully familiar, and added a sense of increased empathy between myself and the characters
Jandu Paran, a prince of the land, is the youngest brother in line for the throne. However, is half-brother, Darvad Uru, believes he is the rightful heir, rather than the eldest legitimate sibling, Yudar Paran. Jandu is an expert with the bow and arrow (he is the Archer referred to in the title of the novel). Upon seeing his long lost cousin Keshan Adaru at a gathering, he is instantly intrigued, if not already smitten. Keshan, just returning from a years-long banishment, is equally attracted to Jandu. Of course, homosexuality is considered disgusting and goes against God’s Word (again, sadly familiar), so the men keep their feelings to themselves, although Keshan’s older brother is aware of his sibling’s leanings, much to his chagrin.
There is also a strict caste system in place, keeping rich, entitled people (Triya) in the upper echelons of society, while the poor Jegora are the lowest of the low, being referred to as “Untouchable” and only allowed to wear clothing stripped from the dead. Vertical mobility is nearly impossible and unheard of, but Keshan hopes to change all that.
Finally, there is also Tarek Amia, best friend of Darvad, and recently promoted from the middle Suya caste to the highest warrior Triya caste (only Kings can change one’s caste level). Tarek is a fierce fighter with good intentions, and his devotion to Darvad is absolute. In trugh, it stems from the sexual attraction and unreturned love he has for the handsome leader. Of course, Tarek, too must keep his feelings to himself.
I can go on and on about this fantastic book, but you should totally just read it yourself. The clear social commentary on sexual identity intolerance and rigid caste systems adds depth to the story. The novel has a wide cast of characters, some of whom are used as foil and/or are archetypal, but most of the people have well-defined personalities, and their actions help drive the plot lines forward at an exciting, yet believable pace.
Amara’s work really spoke to me. As a gay man, experiencing a budding gay romance in a literary genre that rarely contains it was a wonderful treat. The novel doesn’t reduce their relationship to just sex (though there are some very steamy scenes throughout the book). The complexity of the main characters’ relations to others and society as whole allowed for a fascinating dynamic of decisions, ethics, laws, and morals. This is more than a high fantasy book; The Archer’s Heart is an entertaining, eye-opening, thrilling love child of an op-ed piece and an engrossing epic story. I wish I could wipe it from my memory so I could read it again for the first time.
Jandu Paran, a prince of the land, is the youngest brother in line for the throne. However, is half-brother, Darvad Uru, believes he is the rightful heir, rather than the eldest legitimate sibling, Yudar Paran. Jandu is an expert with the bow and arrow (he is the Archer referred to in the title of the novel). Upon seeing his long lost cousin Keshan Adaru at a gathering, he is instantly intrigued, if not already smitten. Keshan, just returning from a years-long banishment, is equally attracted to Jandu. Of course, homosexuality is considered disgusting and goes against God’s Word (again, sadly familiar), so the men keep their feelings to themselves, although Keshan’s older brother is aware of his sibling’s leanings, much to his chagrin.
There is also a strict caste system in place, keeping rich, entitled people (Triya) in the upper echelons of society, while the poor Jegora are the lowest of the low, being referred to as “Untouchable” and only allowed to wear clothing stripped from the dead. Vertical mobility is nearly impossible and unheard of, but Keshan hopes to change all that.
Finally, there is also Tarek Amia, best friend of Darvad, and recently promoted from the middle Suya caste to the highest warrior Triya caste (only Kings can change one’s caste level). Tarek is a fierce fighter with good intentions, and his devotion to Darvad is absolute. In trugh, it stems from the sexual attraction and unreturned love he has for the handsome leader. Of course, Tarek, too must keep his feelings to himself.
I can go on and on about this fantastic book, but you should totally just read it yourself. The clear social commentary on sexual identity intolerance and rigid caste systems adds depth to the story. The novel has a wide cast of characters, some of whom are used as foil and/or are archetypal, but most of the people have well-defined personalities, and their actions help drive the plot lines forward at an exciting, yet believable pace.
Amara’s work really spoke to me. As a gay man, experiencing a budding gay romance in a literary genre that rarely contains it was a wonderful treat. The novel doesn’t reduce their relationship to just sex (though there are some very steamy scenes throughout the book). The complexity of the main characters’ relations to others and society as whole allowed for a fascinating dynamic of decisions, ethics, laws, and morals. This is more than a high fantasy book; The Archer’s Heart is an entertaining, eye-opening, thrilling love child of an op-ed piece and an engrossing epic story. I wish I could wipe it from my memory so I could read it again for the first time.
July 18, 2016
This review contains spoilers.
Amazing. That one word is enough to describe my thoughts about this book. The Archer's Heart did everything that took Game of Thrones two massive books to do. The brutality of war, homophobia in a very traditionalist society, class inequality, and religious fundamentalism. These are themes that Amara so wonderfully deals with.
The world building itself is nicely done. As someone else has pointed out, Amara seems to be drawing upon a mixture of South Asian and Middle Eastern influences. The importance attached to castes in Marhavad is an obvious reference to the Indian caste system and discrimination that still goes on today. It is also very believable as well that people treat the Jegorah as being repulsive and that it is a curse to even touch them. This is very similar to how lepers were treated in the Middle Ages.
The descriptions of battle scenes were very gory. It reminded me of the gory style in the manga Berserk. At times it did get a little bit too much, to the point that I had to take a break from the story for a while.
The characters were the best part of this book. Keshan and Jandu are on my favourite lists of Yaoi couples now. What starts out as a bit of fun becomes a loving relationship where both men are willing to sacrifice everything for each other. Moreover, Jandu ends up changing from an immature show off to a man willing to change the social system. By the end Jandu transforms to being the warrior in Keshan's vision who will bring about change.
However, the supporting characters are also brilliantly written. Tarek was absolutely tragic. He was so in love with Darvad that he couldn't see what an a hole Darvad really was. In the end Darvad was just using Tarek and never really valued him. It was a shame Tarek had to die for that. He could have been happy with Anant but Tarek was too scared to take that step forward. In the end Tarek was not as brave as Jandu. Suraya and Jandu's brothers were also well written. I was crushed when Baram died and Jandu had to kill Yudar. They weren't perfect. After all, Yudar had caused his family to be exiled and had then gambled Jandu away to being raped, leading Keshan to save Jandu only to be stripped of his caste. Baram had also rejected Jandu at first when Jandu came out to them. Despite all this you could still see that Yudar and Baram both loved Jandu a lot.That is why it is sad that Jandu had to kill Yudar in the end and Baram had been killed by Tarek as well
Overall, this book was a fantastic read.
Amazing. That one word is enough to describe my thoughts about this book. The Archer's Heart did everything that took Game of Thrones two massive books to do. The brutality of war, homophobia in a very traditionalist society, class inequality, and religious fundamentalism. These are themes that Amara so wonderfully deals with.
The world building itself is nicely done. As someone else has pointed out, Amara seems to be drawing upon a mixture of South Asian and Middle Eastern influences. The importance attached to castes in Marhavad is an obvious reference to the Indian caste system and discrimination that still goes on today. It is also very believable as well that people treat the Jegorah as being repulsive and that it is a curse to even touch them. This is very similar to how lepers were treated in the Middle Ages.
The descriptions of battle scenes were very gory. It reminded me of the gory style in the manga Berserk. At times it did get a little bit too much, to the point that I had to take a break from the story for a while.
The characters were the best part of this book. Keshan and Jandu are on my favourite lists of Yaoi couples now. What starts out as a bit of fun becomes a loving relationship where both men are willing to sacrifice everything for each other. Moreover, Jandu ends up changing from an immature show off to a man willing to change the social system. By the end Jandu transforms to being the warrior in Keshan's vision who will bring about change.
However, the supporting characters are also brilliantly written. Tarek was absolutely tragic. He was so in love with Darvad that he couldn't see what an a hole Darvad really was. In the end Darvad was just using Tarek and never really valued him. It was a shame Tarek had to die for that. He could have been happy with Anant but Tarek was too scared to take that step forward. In the end Tarek was not as brave as Jandu. Suraya and Jandu's brothers were also well written. I was crushed when Baram died and Jandu had to kill Yudar. They weren't perfect. After all, Yudar had caused his family to be exiled and had then gambled Jandu away to being raped, leading Keshan to save Jandu only to be stripped of his caste. Baram had also rejected Jandu at first when Jandu came out to them. Despite all this you could still see that Yudar and Baram both loved Jandu a lot.That is why it is sad that Jandu had to kill Yudar in the end and Baram had been killed by Tarek as well
Overall, this book was a fantastic read.
September 3, 2013
I enjoyed it a lot. Though I had some issues.
You always take a gamble with reading books that are going by word of mouth...it doesn't always work out, especially in the M/M genre...but so far I have been lucky to only run across those that live up to their hype, Mostly. The world created on this book was very interesting and the magic pretty well explained and built...though I would have liked a bit more information on how the demon world worked and more into how the demon world and the human world interacted...how did they begin, etc...so more explanation of the mythology. I thought that would make some aspects of the story easier to understand and follow.
But outside of this, I enjoyed the story. The characters were well thought out...their motivations understandable...so even if they do bad things you get an idea of why and why. This story goes to demonstrates that everyone is the hero is their own story. Every thinks their reasons for doing things are just and right. Whether it is for love, or family, for religion, for honor or even revenge...we all justify ourselves....who is right ends up being is survives in the end. I enjoyed seeing all of the characters journey's even if it did not end well. I especially enjoyed Tarek's arc.....how easily you can be destroyed by the wrong kind of love. In some way I found this love story...a bit better realized/a bit deeper than the main. Which is one other issue I had with the tale.
Overall I enjoyed the conflict and the love story and the ending gave me lots of satisfaction......sometimes we need that happy ending.
You always take a gamble with reading books that are going by word of mouth...it doesn't always work out, especially in the M/M genre...but so far I have been lucky to only run across those that live up to their hype, Mostly. The world created on this book was very interesting and the magic pretty well explained and built...though I would have liked a bit more information on how the demon world worked and more into how the demon world and the human world interacted...how did they begin, etc...so more explanation of the mythology. I thought that would make some aspects of the story easier to understand and follow.
But outside of this, I enjoyed the story. The characters were well thought out...their motivations understandable...so even if they do bad things you get an idea of why and why. This story goes to demonstrates that everyone is the hero is their own story. Every thinks their reasons for doing things are just and right. Whether it is for love, or family, for religion, for honor or even revenge...we all justify ourselves....who is right ends up being is survives in the end. I enjoyed seeing all of the characters journey's even if it did not end well. I especially enjoyed Tarek's arc.....how easily you can be destroyed by the wrong kind of love. In some way I found this love story...a bit better realized/a bit deeper than the main. Which is one other issue I had with the tale.
Overall I enjoyed the conflict and the love story and the ending gave me lots of satisfaction......sometimes we need that happy ending.
February 3, 2013
EDIT: I was posting this for the Book One Kindle version, which is this book split into 3 parts. So here is my review for the complete book.
So this book as a whole...is amazing. It's one of my favorite things I've read recently. It's a gay romance fantasy, similar to Ginn Hale's books. (In fact it has a lot in common with her Lord of the White Hell.)
The fantasy is set in a world reminiscent of India, with a rigid caste system and lots of religious laws. Homosexuality is punished by death. So when a prince 4th in line for the throne and another man of the warrior caste begin a romance, there are very real and dangerous obstacles to their relationship. The beginning focuses mostly on the development of their relationship, but eventually the political situation of the country takes center stage. Pretty much everything that could go wrong does, and the story spends a lot of time making the characters suffer. Honestly this was the weakest part of the story, but ultimately it adds to the story as a whole. The final third of the story involves yet more horrible things happening, and eventually war.
But throughout, the story is about how people's beliefs change, about the strength of the love between these two men, and ultimately it's a story of hope. I spent the last sixth of the book in nearly constant tears, either from the injustice of the society or from the thwarting of those injustices.
I really can't recommend this book enough.
So this book as a whole...is amazing. It's one of my favorite things I've read recently. It's a gay romance fantasy, similar to Ginn Hale's books. (In fact it has a lot in common with her Lord of the White Hell.)
The fantasy is set in a world reminiscent of India, with a rigid caste system and lots of religious laws. Homosexuality is punished by death. So when a prince 4th in line for the throne and another man of the warrior caste begin a romance, there are very real and dangerous obstacles to their relationship. The beginning focuses mostly on the development of their relationship, but eventually the political situation of the country takes center stage. Pretty much everything that could go wrong does, and the story spends a lot of time making the characters suffer. Honestly this was the weakest part of the story, but ultimately it adds to the story as a whole. The final third of the story involves yet more horrible things happening, and eventually war.
But throughout, the story is about how people's beliefs change, about the strength of the love between these two men, and ultimately it's a story of hope. I spent the last sixth of the book in nearly constant tears, either from the injustice of the society or from the thwarting of those injustices.
I really can't recommend this book enough.
February 1, 2012
4.5 stars ^^
EPIC!
Taking place in imaginary place called Marhavad which not-so-simillar with Indian, the story follows the love and live 3 remarkable young men, Jandu Paran, Keshan Adaru and Tarek Amia.
Jandu Paran is Marhavad prince, 4th in the throne line, who find his love on Keshan Paran, the Tiwari Prince. Their love is forbidden at the time with execution threat. Keshan not only giving Jandu unconditional love, he's also giving him a vision of new world. A new world where no castes, where there public school for everyone, where their love is no longer forbidden.
Tarek Amia, comes from Suya caste who had a blind devotion for Darvad, the man who lifted him from his low caste into honorable lord in Marhavad, the man he fell in love with. Tarek will do anything for Darvad, including betraying himself.
The story itself adapted Mahabarata tale, you know, that classic war of two family fighting for their honor, but off course with moaaarrrr romance here. I've been caught with Jandu and Keshan at the first read. It's surprising me that I could finish the whole book less than a week! Means what? Means this book is engaging and enchanting!
Really, reading this book giving me a new experience ^_^
EPIC!
Taking place in imaginary place called Marhavad which not-so-simillar with Indian, the story follows the love and live 3 remarkable young men, Jandu Paran, Keshan Adaru and Tarek Amia.
Jandu Paran is Marhavad prince, 4th in the throne line, who find his love on Keshan Paran, the Tiwari Prince. Their love is forbidden at the time with execution threat. Keshan not only giving Jandu unconditional love, he's also giving him a vision of new world. A new world where no castes, where there public school for everyone, where their love is no longer forbidden.
Tarek Amia, comes from Suya caste who had a blind devotion for Darvad, the man who lifted him from his low caste into honorable lord in Marhavad, the man he fell in love with. Tarek will do anything for Darvad, including betraying himself.
The story itself adapted Mahabarata tale, you know, that classic war of two family fighting for their honor, but off course with moaaarrrr romance here. I've been caught with Jandu and Keshan at the first read. It's surprising me that I could finish the whole book less than a week! Means what? Means this book is engaging and enchanting!
Really, reading this book giving me a new experience ^_^
September 4, 2011
I have the most difficult time to review this book. Not because of the story or the writing but because it is not what I expected. When I bought it I had no notion it was inspired by the ancient indian epic The Mahabharata. Nothing appeared in the book about it nor in the reviews I had read. Unfortunately I was unabled to put myself in the right frame of mind and kept waiting for the epic mode - the Mahabharata was a GREAT discovery for me.
Epic and psychology don't agree with each other : they are two contrary ways of viewing the world. For me, the psychological causes that drive the protagonists feel weak compared to epic scope of the model which include the gods and the whole world.
And so I was disappointed til the end because I could not accept the book for what it is. The irony is that I would have bought the book at once if I had known its roots but I would have been prepared . I guess I 'll have to read it again later. However I think it would be more honest to mention the Mahabharata at some point.
So what did I learn from reading this book ? That U. Eco is right to emphasize the part of the reader in the fabula !
Epic and psychology don't agree with each other : they are two contrary ways of viewing the world. For me, the psychological causes that drive the protagonists feel weak compared to epic scope of the model which include the gods and the whole world.
And so I was disappointed til the end because I could not accept the book for what it is. The irony is that I would have bought the book at once if I had known its roots but I would have been prepared . I guess I 'll have to read it again later. However I think it would be more honest to mention the Mahabharata at some point.
So what did I learn from reading this book ? That U. Eco is right to emphasize the part of the reader in the fabula !
September 17, 2010
This was a different book for me, while it was a good read, I pretty much had an idea how it would end due to its core skeleton being based on the Mahabharata. The author has written a good story featuring the main protagonists and showcasing their love. The prose is very neatly done and the worldbuilding is bit on the less-descriptive side.
But all in all a very different take on the Mahabharata & if you don't have any clue about it, then you will enjoy this story a bit more than people who know about it.
May 30, 2017
Nice story, actually one of the best M/M romances I've read and it's epic fantasy based on a non-Western setting to boot.
Unfortunately, it also brings the notion of "contrived plot device" to a whole new level: while I truly appreciated the attempt to create a developed story, my expectations rose accordingly and considering the narrative flaws, I'm conflicted as to how to rate this book. The logical reader in me says 2.5/3 stars, on a gut-level is a full 4 stars.
On the whole, I enjoyed this three-part book and I recommend it to any fan of the genre.
Unfortunately, it also brings the notion of "contrived plot device" to a whole new level: while I truly appreciated the attempt to create a developed story, my expectations rose accordingly and considering the narrative flaws, I'm conflicted as to how to rate this book. The logical reader in me says 2.5/3 stars, on a gut-level is a full 4 stars.
On the whole, I enjoyed this three-part book and I recommend it to any fan of the genre.
January 11, 2011
This is one of the best books I've read in a long time. Right from the start the vibrant characters and well developed world pulled me in and didn't let go. Even at 600 pages I still wanted more. I highly recommend this book. It's sweet, sad and oh so human. Very well done. :)
August 19, 2011
There has already been so many good 5 star reviews on this book so I won't repeat what has been said. This book is exceptionally good and it's one of the best in it's genre.
March 24, 2017
I loved this book, it was truly one of the best m/m books I've ever read (I've been reading m/m since 2009) and it offers an amazing story, full of adventure and emotions and wonderful scenes!
May 3, 2016
4.5 STARS
This is a fantastic fantasy series
This is a fantastic fantasy series
August 7, 2008
This book is a big, long crazy adventure.
December 5, 2018
This was a very enjoyable book. I've had it on my 'to read' list for a few years now, but I've had trouble finding it. I finally got my hands on it recently and instantly pounced. From the reviews I read that led me to try to find it I hoped I would find something amazing. Overall, the book didn't quite meet those expectations. There were some editing errors, and Amara wrote many contradictions. She would have Jandu put his hands at his side and then three sentences she would contradict the action. Also some of the story was a little too unbelievable. Just a little more detail or background might have helped. Despite these, the story was great and the characters were lovable. There were tons of laugh out loud moments and twists that brought me to the edge of my seat. I was enchanted by the story and I am very glad I finally got to read it. It's a solid four star. Recommended if you don't mind GLBT fantasy.
April 3, 2018
I bought this book knowing nothing of the plot and I was pleasantly surprised to see that it was about royal succession and pseudo revolution. Not surprisingly, I ended up being more interested in what was happening with the kingdom and the castes than the love story. I enjoyed the way every little thing in the first part of the story (Keshan's vision, helping the king etc.) built up the perfect end, which honestly surprised me. I wasn't particularly impressed with the romantic side of the book, it looked a bit rushed and too sexual, but by the second part of the novel even that greatly improved and by the end of it I just couldn't stop reading. Lovely world creation and book structure! If I had more time and a laptop with me I would write a much longer review.
May 14, 2015
I dont know what to think about those books.The story started good and was interesting to see how Jandu and his cousin Keshan fall in love.In our moder culture i cant understand how one can make love with his cousin,but in ancient time and maybe also some part of the world today,that was and is not scandalous.Said that this is the last problem in this book,for what I think.
Keshan arrives at the tournament a man did for his daughter,to see which man will be her husband.Keshan and Jandu fall in love at first sight,but they continue bickering and in the end to demostrate his archery skill to Keshan he wins the competion.In the end since he is the youngest son,he cant marry before the others and Yudar his eldest brother uses an ancient law,to make the girl,Suraya,marry all the 3 of them at the same time.From that day on all continues normally.Keshan and Jandu try to spend all the time they have together and at the same time being carefully,bcs the love btw men is punished with death.
What a stupid society,the love is the same for all.This really annoyed me,another think i couldnt stand was Tarek or Terek im so annoyed with this char i refuse to go check his right name.This man was so obssessed with his best friend and after King,Darvand that he couldnt see that what he was doing was wrong.Sometimes he made me furious with him,others i pitied him,and in the end i was sad for him.His life was all about helping his friend,which he loved,and at the same time that man only and always thought about him as a friend and didnt stop having sex with woman infront of Terek,destroying his feeling not caring and maybe also never really understanding.Terek will find another lover named Anant his troupes commander,and he will start to care about him,the commander will love him,but in the end when he must take a decision,after Darvand showed another time his true nature,trying to kill Jandu and saying he's a faggot and he must die for it,also after all of this,Terek cant desert the man and Anant leaves him,and he lets the man walk away,too late he will try stop him,and will not find Anant.
Anant will join Jandy army.
But also after all of this,the worst Char of all for me is Yudar,the man loses in a game his kingdom,bets his little brother and gives him to the men who will have raped him if Keshan,thanks to a vision,wouldnt have saved him killing those 3 men.He's an useless bastard and idk how Jandu could still in end when he must kill him,bcs he used a weapon he cant controll,still forgive him for all.
Some scenes for me could be cancelled,for exp the one when Jandu has to pass his year as Suraya's husband.To start idk how u can trade to others the person u love and how u can sleep in the next room knowing they'll make love to him/her,i would be mad with jealousy...
Suraya and Jandu will have sex in that 1st night as husband and wife,after Yudar and Baram years,and also if when they do is fast and Jandu has his eyes closed and thinks about Keshan,he still does the act.After he'll explain to Suraya he cant do it,and wtf couldnt he say it before???
Keshan will never cheat on him and also if Jandu will never after,and that time he thought about him,i still dont know how Keshan can smile to him knowing.Bcs they dont have secrets and tell all to each other but wtf.....
The lowest scene of Yudar is when they're in the camp preparig for the war,Jandu comes in his tent with Keshan,and the eldest prince says he shouldnt be seen with Keshan and that he will put shame on their family for it,bcs now Keshan is a jenora the lowest class in their society and all of this bcs he saved Jandu from the want-to-be-rapers his brother had walked to his room.The man who helped them,all the time in the exile,who gave them money,who loves and protected his little brother,the man says is a shame..he's insane and i really hated Yudar.
Jandu will stay firm on his steps and say they're lovers,and then hell will happen.Baram tries to kill Keshan,Suraya is shocked that Jandu said it,but she knew already and blessed them,while Yudar says to him to leave and never show his face again.
After some time Bramam will come to Jandu and tells him to forgive what he did and said and that he loves him,they'll make peace and his brother will say to him that Suraya is pregnant and that he'll be an uncle.Bramam will be after killed in the war and i was sad for this,bcs in the end he was a real brother and cared about Jandu and accepted his relantioship with Keshan.
Jandu is the char who changed the most,at start he was arrogant,spoiled too sure of his qualities and rights,noncurante of the lower classes and also ignorant of their difficulties,but in the end he is a different person and become a good man and an awesome king.
In the end of the book,Jandu will kill Terek as revenge for Baram,Abiyar(a 16 years old who had become Jandu friend)will kill Darvand before he kills Jandu.
Jandu is now alone and King,but Keshan is with him and in the last pages u see the two of them after the coronation,after Keshan receives back his title and will become Royal Judge.In that forest they'll made love and Jandu will give all of himself to the other man.Keshan will then explain to him the vision he had,they will be happy for a long time and the changes Jandu will make during his reign,will change the world.
The words they say to each other are beautiful and the sex scenes hot,but i couldnt really love this book for the things i wrote about.
(ignore my grammar ty)
Keshan arrives at the tournament a man did for his daughter,to see which man will be her husband.Keshan and Jandu fall in love at first sight,but they continue bickering and in the end to demostrate his archery skill to Keshan he wins the competion.In the end since he is the youngest son,he cant marry before the others and Yudar his eldest brother uses an ancient law,to make the girl,Suraya,marry all the 3 of them at the same time.From that day on all continues normally.Keshan and Jandu try to spend all the time they have together and at the same time being carefully,bcs the love btw men is punished with death.
What a stupid society,the love is the same for all.This really annoyed me,another think i couldnt stand was Tarek or Terek im so annoyed with this char i refuse to go check his right name.This man was so obssessed with his best friend and after King,Darvand that he couldnt see that what he was doing was wrong.Sometimes he made me furious with him,others i pitied him,and in the end i was sad for him.His life was all about helping his friend,which he loved,and at the same time that man only and always thought about him as a friend and didnt stop having sex with woman infront of Terek,destroying his feeling not caring and maybe also never really understanding.Terek will find another lover named Anant his troupes commander,and he will start to care about him,the commander will love him,but in the end when he must take a decision,after Darvand showed another time his true nature,trying to kill Jandu and saying he's a faggot and he must die for it,also after all of this,Terek cant desert the man and Anant leaves him,and he lets the man walk away,too late he will try stop him,and will not find Anant.
Anant will join Jandy army.
But also after all of this,the worst Char of all for me is Yudar,the man loses in a game his kingdom,bets his little brother and gives him to the men who will have raped him if Keshan,thanks to a vision,wouldnt have saved him killing those 3 men.He's an useless bastard and idk how Jandu could still in end when he must kill him,bcs he used a weapon he cant controll,still forgive him for all.
Some scenes for me could be cancelled,for exp the one when Jandu has to pass his year as Suraya's husband.To start idk how u can trade to others the person u love and how u can sleep in the next room knowing they'll make love to him/her,i would be mad with jealousy...
Suraya and Jandu will have sex in that 1st night as husband and wife,after Yudar and Baram years,and also if when they do is fast and Jandu has his eyes closed and thinks about Keshan,he still does the act.After he'll explain to Suraya he cant do it,and wtf couldnt he say it before???
Keshan will never cheat on him and also if Jandu will never after,and that time he thought about him,i still dont know how Keshan can smile to him knowing.Bcs they dont have secrets and tell all to each other but wtf.....
The lowest scene of Yudar is when they're in the camp preparig for the war,Jandu comes in his tent with Keshan,and the eldest prince says he shouldnt be seen with Keshan and that he will put shame on their family for it,bcs now Keshan is a jenora the lowest class in their society and all of this bcs he saved Jandu from the want-to-be-rapers his brother had walked to his room.The man who helped them,all the time in the exile,who gave them money,who loves and protected his little brother,the man says is a shame..he's insane and i really hated Yudar.
Jandu will stay firm on his steps and say they're lovers,and then hell will happen.Baram tries to kill Keshan,Suraya is shocked that Jandu said it,but she knew already and blessed them,while Yudar says to him to leave and never show his face again.
After some time Bramam will come to Jandu and tells him to forgive what he did and said and that he loves him,they'll make peace and his brother will say to him that Suraya is pregnant and that he'll be an uncle.Bramam will be after killed in the war and i was sad for this,bcs in the end he was a real brother and cared about Jandu and accepted his relantioship with Keshan.
Jandu is the char who changed the most,at start he was arrogant,spoiled too sure of his qualities and rights,noncurante of the lower classes and also ignorant of their difficulties,but in the end he is a different person and become a good man and an awesome king.
In the end of the book,Jandu will kill Terek as revenge for Baram,Abiyar(a 16 years old who had become Jandu friend)will kill Darvand before he kills Jandu.
Jandu is now alone and King,but Keshan is with him and in the last pages u see the two of them after the coronation,after Keshan receives back his title and will become Royal Judge.In that forest they'll made love and Jandu will give all of himself to the other man.Keshan will then explain to him the vision he had,they will be happy for a long time and the changes Jandu will make during his reign,will change the world.
The words they say to each other are beautiful and the sex scenes hot,but i couldnt really love this book for the things i wrote about.
(ignore my grammar ty)
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January 25, 2022The writing is really rough initially but I think I would have adapted had the story been good. Unfortunately, shortly thereafter we find out the love interests are first cousins. As I'm not into first cousin incest, it's an automatic drop for me.
March 24, 2023
Starts a bit slow, plus lots of sex scenes (might be your thing or not, but the story would not suffer if they weren't there), but the rest of the story is well told and enjoyable, definitely worth a read.
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