I usually end up tossing MFA-generated books across the room because they are pretentious, check listed, formulaic, committee-engineered works that only Bryn Mawr graduates enjoy. This one I didn’t toss, even though it has a really annoying three-to-four-page Acknowledgements section where the author thanks everybody he ever talked to in his life, including the dog. I regard acknowledgments in a fiction novel as a poor attempt by an egotistical, narcissistic, self-regarding author to not seem so. Spare us the false modesty. You want to thank somebody, dedicate the book to them.
Despite that, it’s a good novel.
Treeborne refers to a family of the same name living in the fictional Alabama town of Elberta, which is geographically hard to locate in the state. They have coal mines and trouble with the Authority, a thinly disguised version of the Tennessee Valley Authority, so this must be northern Alabama, but Elberta is on the way to the Florida beaches and, well, no, that’s LA- lower Alabama. Let’s just settle for it being an Alabama small town.
Janie Treeborne is telling the story of Elberta and the Treeborne's to her grandson or nephew, not sure which, as the Authority is getting ready to blow up a dam they put up decades before because it’s either no longer needed or about to fall down. All of Elberta has been evacuated except for Janie who refuses to leave so I guess she’s destined for the same fate as George Clooney at the end of O Brother Where Art Thou? And what is the story she relates?
Well, it’s Hugh Treeborne in 1928 and Tammie Treeborne in 1958 and Janie in the present day, with a lot of references to other persons and time periods all the way back to the local Indians and the unfortunate coming of Hernando de Soto. Who has a statue in the middle of Elberta and a yearly celebration during what’s called Peach Days.
Hugh Treeborne takes a job with the Authority in 1928 after the coal mines close, an act somewhat of a betrayal because the Authority is building a dam that will flood the mines, hence their need to close, but everyone else in town takes a job with the Authority, too, so it's a wash, so to speak. Hugh owns 700 acres (named, appropriately, the Seven Hundred) that will not be flooded and there he builds wondrous sculptures called assemblies and throws them around the woods willy and nilly. One day a city slicker named Loudermilk spots some of the assemblies and hauls them off with a promise that he’ll be back with money and recognition but ends up claiming the assemblies as his own and becomes a famous artist as a result. Hugh does nothing about this.
Hugh ends up marrying the town postmistress, Maybelle. He and she and Lee Malone, the only black man in the area with the courage to associate with the somewhat backwards and egregiously racist Elbertans, form an odd but intense friendship. Lee is too capable of a man in an area short of capable men so he is made foreman of the Peach Pit, a local market, and subsequent owner of the attached peach orchard, something that causes unacknowledged umbrage throughout the town but no one does anything about it. Sort of like Hugh and his assemblies.
In 1958, Tammie Treeborne, wife of Ren Treeborne, son of Hugh and Maybelle, tries to shoot Lee in the back of the head as he is led off under arrest through the middle of the Peach Day parade for the murder of Maybelle who was found dead in a marsh clutching one of Hugh’s lost assemblies. Seems she believes what everyone believes, that Lee murdered Maybelle. Tammie’s shot misses, which is an indictment of her skills because it was point blank right behind him, but Lee does lose the hearing in one ear. Incredibly, no one sees Tammie do this except her daughter, Janie, who then arranges for Tammie’s kidnapping and sequestering in an abandoned coal mine where she is found weeks later half starved. Did Janie arrange said kidnapping because of said assassination attempt? No, but because Tammie and Janie's father, Ren, are building a house in the Seven Hundred, which Janie considers a sacrilege. Of the three persons Janie enlists for the kidnapping, only a former football star named Ricky Birdsong, who is suffering from severe mental retardation due to the many hits to the head while playing, is sent to jail. And no, Maybelle wasn’t murdered, it was natural causes. Lee would never kill her. They were lovers. After Hugh died.
Got all that?
This is what the book is about, a series of vignettes and odd stories gleaned from three distinct periods of time about three distinct personalities and, while it may sound disjointed and random, which it is, it works. It does, it just does, even though it suffers from the pseudo-intellectual conceit that small town Alabama people are an odd, inbred lot that possess a secret meaning to everything they say and do. It’s sort of like a test, can you see the Emperor’s pseudo-intellectual clothes? I can’t and find all this MFA-generated hidden meaning k-rap tiresome. That doesn’t mean I’m calling this a fake story because it’s not; this actually reads as a rather genuine small town Alabama family. Just with a bit of mysticism tied in.
And MFA conceit.