I liked Sophie's character development, and the message of the story overall, but Ella annoyed me a lot. It seemed that she was trying to put down her friend all the time and for being jealous of the way she looked. I can understand if she feels insecure, but that just made her a crappy friend for accusing her and purposely making Sophie feel bad for having a nice body. Like, one of the adventures that Ella has Sophie do is become a modal for a day, and the stylist instantly said "OMG you're huge! all my models are size 00, and you're a size 6!" And the first thing Ella to Sophie said was "Now you know how I feel whenever I walk beside you." Like WTF?? What kind of best friend says that? There was conflict and tension rose near the end of the book, and there was like a brief two chapters where Sophie and Ella didn't talk to each other, but then they made up the next day without having resolved the issue at all! They didn't even talk it out or acknowledge the issue, it was just a basic "We looked at each other and hugged, our silence saying everything."
Second, I thought 90% of the dialogue was ABSOLUTELY UNNECESSARY. All the characters said explicit actions AS THEY WERE DOING IT, which is what made me feel like I was reading a book for nine year olds. Especially this one section where Sophie resolves the issue with her father and brother being able to look after themselves, and so they hire a MAID. Um, weird solution but okay. Anyways, the conversation went like this, "I have one more question. The house, well, it looks clean. When did you have time to do that as well as cook and order groceries?"
"I hired a cleaning person to come in once a week."
"I've also found a laundry service. They charge by the pound."
"So, you have somebody to clean the house, deliver groceries and the two of you are cooking."
Like, the dialogue repeats itself so much. It was really annoying.
I did think it was somewhat original cuz it was the first contemporary YA in a loong time where there was no romance what so ever. And Sophie truly gained closure and acceptance as readers unveil how her mother died. That part did get to me, I'll admit.
The description of the use of social media was also really cringy though. You could tell it wasn't authentic and it was some old person disguising themselves as a teenage girl. Like, realistically, is Sophie was a normal 18 year old girl she would know what Instagram and Twitter is as well as the basic logistics of it, regardless of whether or not she's active on it. Some parts too explicitly described Twitter and Snapchat, etc, and you could just tell that the author IRL had no knowledge of social media at all.
Other people also mentioned the lack of consistency in this novel and how each different 'day' was completely unrelated. I guess that was the point of the book, but I didn't expect it to be THAT random. It was incredibly fast paced and didn't leave readers enough time to catch up with the characters.
The storyline was meh. Characters had potential. I liked the father, but he seemed really submissive at times. Good message and it was a tad mit encouraging and made me want to start trying new things, so I'll give you a point for that. But the ending had no closure between Sophie and Ella at all. I thought they would get some huge scene where they get to say their goodbyes but it was a mere narration of Sophie saying how she'll miss her, and that was that. It was mainly a farewell between her and her father. That part was kinda heart tugging too.