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GAME FALL: HAYDEN'S BOOK 2
Welcome back to the lands of Waara; a virtual world designed to cater to your every desire. Seek out a comfortable chair to marvel at the sight of two setting suns or revel in bloody battle on the Plains of Deadalon, destroying skeleton warriors with your devastating magic. Whatever your heart desires, Waara will provideeeeeeeeee Error304, Error 6800, Report! Critical Failure! Click here for customer support.
I should have known that you bastards were still sending out that whole spiel about the wonders of Waara to the masses, who are so lucky that the company created it for them. Aren't we so wonderful; you should all bow down and kiss our rings. MEAAAAAAA. Come and find out the truth about Waara with Hayden and his friends, as they delve deep into the mysteries of who and what Hayden really is. Got to go! They will find me soon. FREEDOM, HAYDEN FOR ALL!!!!!
Yes. Sorry for that interruption; we will now return to out regularly scheduled broadcast.
SOMEONE FIND THAT HACKER. OH SHIT! WE'RE STILL ON THE AIR.
I should have known that you bastards were still sending out that whole spiel about the wonders of Waara to the masses, who are so lucky that the company created it for them. Aren't we so wonderful; you should all bow down and kiss our rings. MEAAAAAAA. Come and find out the truth about Waara with Hayden and his friends, as they delve deep into the mysteries of who and what Hayden really is. Got to go! They will find me soon. FREEDOM, HAYDEN FOR ALL!!!!!
Yes. Sorry for that interruption; we will now return to out regularly scheduled broadcast.
SOMEONE FIND THAT HACKER. OH SHIT! WE'RE STILL ON THE AIR.
414 pages, Kindle Edition
Published March 15, 2018
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March 30, 2018
Great second effort.
I thoroughly enjoyed the first book and although it took a few chapters to get back up to speed, in this the second book I could not put it down. I can only hope the I interval between books shorten considerably. The old model of a year or more between books is annoying in this fast paced world and I hope the next book will show up soonest. I had trouble with some spelling mistakes which were probably caused by auto complete, I have been embarrassed too often because I did not re-read and correct the not so smart word choices of the computers, so I am understanding of the errors and apparent wrong word choices but maybe find someone other than yourself who loves to read to question apparent errors with you. Overall I loved what I read. Keep up the good work and improve if possible by lessening mistakes in word choice and spelling.
I thoroughly enjoyed the first book and although it took a few chapters to get back up to speed, in this the second book I could not put it down. I can only hope the I interval between books shorten considerably. The old model of a year or more between books is annoying in this fast paced world and I hope the next book will show up soonest. I had trouble with some spelling mistakes which were probably caused by auto complete, I have been embarrassed too often because I did not re-read and correct the not so smart word choices of the computers, so I am understanding of the errors and apparent wrong word choices but maybe find someone other than yourself who loves to read to question apparent errors with you. Overall I loved what I read. Keep up the good work and improve if possible by lessening mistakes in word choice and spelling.
December 18, 2018
Horribly edited mess of a story
The dialogue is awful and rife with misspelling. The plot is crammed down your throat in heavy dumps from characters who have no business knowing the things they are saying and the pacing is glacial during the least interesting moments and glosses over anything that has even a hint of being interesting.
The dialogue is awful and rife with misspelling. The plot is crammed down your throat in heavy dumps from characters who have no business knowing the things they are saying and the pacing is glacial during the least interesting moments and glosses over anything that has even a hint of being interesting.
January 9, 2020
2nd great book
A great storyline and great characters. Some of the events that happen in here are awesome! Jack the ripper and the quest, pure gold! Takes the current RPG storyline and refreshes it! Looking forward to book 3!
A great storyline and great characters. Some of the events that happen in here are awesome! Jack the ripper and the quest, pure gold! Takes the current RPG storyline and refreshes it! Looking forward to book 3!
March 21, 2018
Good read
Another fun book in the hayden series. Needs more editing. So far my favorite wrong was slime instead of smile 😀
Looking forward to book 3 hope it comes out quick
Another fun book in the hayden series. Needs more editing. So far my favorite wrong was slime instead of smile 😀
Looking forward to book 3 hope it comes out quick
April 29, 2018
The series is coming along nicely, looking forward to the next one.
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