I voluntarily reviewed this after receiving a free copy.
This is the second book in the series.
Style: 3.5/5
This is the second book in the series, and I found it improved on the first. It can over-explain at times, and I found some exposition clunky when laying out the character’s schemes. When there’s a lot going on, the clarity of the author’s writing works well. It keeps you turning the pages.
Plot: 4/5
Pacing –
Book one was kind of slow - book two is never slow. I loved the pacing on this and was gripped enough to finish it in a day.
Story –
Solid plot, man. It worked. I had fun. The characters didn’t. Good stuff.
Characters: 4/5
Protagonist(s) –
It’s rare to have a female main character who is a great fighter, smart, and emotional, so this combination made her refreshing.
She’s still the most ‘special’ character in the book in terms of abilities, but this isn’t the Hunger Games. Her ‘special’ status is just one plot line, not an overarching ‘Mockingjay’ type motif. This may expand in book three, but I found it was balanced enough to make her competent, without being overbearing. I found that the character displayed a lot more heart than in book one. This development made me like her more.
On another note, she also seeks and develops positive friendships with other female characters. This may not seem worthy of note, but this doesn’t actually happen a lot in YA/Fantasy/etc., so it was nice to see.
Love interest(s) –
Book one leaves the love interest situation flexible. Book two goes full out. What I appreciated was that every love interest felt relatively justified within the world. The romance was balanced with the action in the novel, and it added some levity. It never felt like the main character was being shady by being around these guys because the alien world has specific courtship norms and rules. The main character gets more attention than any of the other girls, which is a touch Mary Sue-ish, so it depends on your reading preference. Personally I found it all pretty fun. One thing I would have liked is for the love interests to be more unique from each other.
Side character(s) –
In book one there is a wide cast. In book two, we focus more on a touch more on the core cast, which I was a fan of. I feel the side characters had a lot more individual time to shine, and more to do. I would like to know more about their individual stories.
Villain(s) -
I appreciated seeing more of the villains, as we begin to understand more of their ideology and exactly how it differs to the Resistance. I definitely want to find out more about their motivations as we only see rare glimpses of individual soldiers/agents of the oppressors and their thought processes. I enjoyed seeing some of the pressures within the Resistance itself. The book is positioned to give us more insight into this in the next installment of the series.
That isn’t the say that we don’t see threat - it is constant and happily racing along throughout. This was one of the reasons the pacing felt so improved on the first book - while there are still lore and world-building elements to set the scene, it is balanced with the action, romance, and main character’s conflicts.
World building: 4/5
Magic system –
The magic system stays consistent to the first book and builds upon it.
General world –
This is also consistent and built upon. No complaints. You get an alien world with its own customs, particulars of diction and animals. I would like more detailed descriptions of the animals, but this doesn’t get in the way of the story or the fun. The names for the alien creatures make great use of the “bouba-kiki effect”.
Summary:
Book one in this series showed enough promise for me to want book two. I read this in a day. It’s fast paced, has a bona-fide strong female lead, a solid alien world, and a touch of humour. Some moments made me smile, some genuinely left me pretty crushed (this is a good thing). The writing style improves from book one, and has it’s pros and cons, so this is more left to personal taste, but I found once I got into the book I didn’t want to put it down.
Recommendation:
If you’re looking to get into a fantasy series with a strong female character and a fun magic system with fantastical creatures, this could be great for you.