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Enemy Savior
The Earth is gone.
All that’s left of humanity is a small ship with a handful of survivors on their way to be sold as slaves.
Alone in a dark, miserable cell Cara hopes that they never make it to their destination. But when she gets her wish, it’s nothing like she hoped.
Sixteen women, the last remnants of humanity in the universe are rescued by a Ra’helio warship and Cara is claimed as the one true mate of the ship’s commander, Lore. The only problem? His species are the ones that destroyed the Earth in the first place.
Her heart is torn. Cara must find a way to accept Lore for the sake of her sister survivors. But how can she when her savior is also her greatest enemy...
All that’s left of humanity is a small ship with a handful of survivors on their way to be sold as slaves.
Alone in a dark, miserable cell Cara hopes that they never make it to their destination. But when she gets her wish, it’s nothing like she hoped.
Sixteen women, the last remnants of humanity in the universe are rescued by a Ra’helio warship and Cara is claimed as the one true mate of the ship’s commander, Lore. The only problem? His species are the ones that destroyed the Earth in the first place.
Her heart is torn. Cara must find a way to accept Lore for the sake of her sister survivors. But how can she when her savior is also her greatest enemy...
65 pages, Kindle Edition
Published March 22, 2018
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Eve Applegate
17 books1 followerEve Applegate is a thirty-something free spirit. She grew up as a sunny west coast granola girl with a love for hiking, writing, and guys. Her wild imagination and passion for writing short stories combined to create a love of erotic fiction. Now, Eve would like to share some of her stories with the world!
If you enjoy passionate love, happy endings, and stories that aren't too long, then you came to the right page!
Eve loves to hear from you! If you have any questions or comments you can reach out to: eveapplegatebooks@gmail.com
If you enjoy passionate love, happy endings, and stories that aren't too long, then you came to the right page!
Eve loves to hear from you! If you have any questions or comments you can reach out to: eveapplegatebooks@gmail.com
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May 7, 2019
What do you do when you can't go home?
Cara and 15 other women are all that remain of the human population. Caged on an alien vessel, off to some backwater black market. Rescue comes in the form of another alien race that seized the traders' ship and want to help the females. Females are precious, due to their rarity, to the new race. The only hitch in this rescue is that when Cara sees her savior, she recognizes his species for what it is. The bugs were bad, but they were just cashing in on opportunity. These guys? Yeah, they destroyed Earth.
Spoilers ahead.
The plot is simple if repeated often: human female(s) captured, to be sold, then rescued by aliens that don't have (any/enough/fertile/insert scenario here) women. The problem is the execution of the story.
*The rescuing aliens don't look like the aliens that supposedly destroyed Earth. Lore is blue/brown/marble? The other guy is described as basically a shadow with white hair/eyes. Um?
*They learn language from a kiss? How is that remotely possible?
*Even if the strange language "download" worked, idioms and slang would go over his head.
*The other women are all on board to be mates. I get that their situation is dire, no planet and all. But to jump all in with barely a conversation with the crew? I'd want to know a bit more about the destination other than "you'd be precious" and "we need women". What happened to theirs?? Important info here.
*No culture clues other than dominant males and women hidden from view is given.
*What's this war about?
*Why was Cara in her own room instead of with the others at the time of rescue?
*If the rescuers had a treaty with the bug aliens, knowing about their nasty flesh sale habits, why the hostility and why did they board the ship to begin with? Are there no repercussions? As an ally, you'd think there would be.
*Were there males left behind on Earth? Were they just slaughtered as part of whatever war this is? Was it blown up after scavenging the females? It only described Earth as destroyed. So does that mean blown up, uninhabitable, or what? The details are more than vague here.
*The women discussed seeing the Earth destroyed. How? Porthole? Aliens taunted them with a recording? News program before the kaboom?
There are a lot of large plot holes. There's also a lot of typos and errors. For a short fluff read it isn't bad. But if this is to be the first of a series it needs a better foundation. There's potential, it just needs a few tweaks, some padding and a thorough editing. I'm leaving 3 stars for an interesting premise and an intriguing cliffhanger. Those 2 lost ones are for the typos, errors and plot holes.
Cara and 15 other women are all that remain of the human population. Caged on an alien vessel, off to some backwater black market. Rescue comes in the form of another alien race that seized the traders' ship and want to help the females. Females are precious, due to their rarity, to the new race. The only hitch in this rescue is that when Cara sees her savior, she recognizes his species for what it is. The bugs were bad, but they were just cashing in on opportunity. These guys? Yeah, they destroyed Earth.
Spoilers ahead.
The plot is simple if repeated often: human female(s) captured, to be sold, then rescued by aliens that don't have (any/enough/fertile/insert scenario here) women. The problem is the execution of the story.
*The rescuing aliens don't look like the aliens that supposedly destroyed Earth. Lore is blue/brown/marble? The other guy is described as basically a shadow with white hair/eyes. Um?
*They learn language from a kiss? How is that remotely possible?
*Even if the strange language "download" worked, idioms and slang would go over his head.
*The other women are all on board to be mates. I get that their situation is dire, no planet and all. But to jump all in with barely a conversation with the crew? I'd want to know a bit more about the destination other than "you'd be precious" and "we need women". What happened to theirs?? Important info here.
*No culture clues other than dominant males and women hidden from view is given.
*What's this war about?
*Why was Cara in her own room instead of with the others at the time of rescue?
*If the rescuers had a treaty with the bug aliens, knowing about their nasty flesh sale habits, why the hostility and why did they board the ship to begin with? Are there no repercussions? As an ally, you'd think there would be.
*Were there males left behind on Earth? Were they just slaughtered as part of whatever war this is? Was it blown up after scavenging the females? It only described Earth as destroyed. So does that mean blown up, uninhabitable, or what? The details are more than vague here.
*The women discussed seeing the Earth destroyed. How? Porthole? Aliens taunted them with a recording? News program before the kaboom?
There are a lot of large plot holes. There's also a lot of typos and errors. For a short fluff read it isn't bad. But if this is to be the first of a series it needs a better foundation. There's potential, it just needs a few tweaks, some padding and a thorough editing. I'm leaving 3 stars for an interesting premise and an intriguing cliffhanger. Those 2 lost ones are for the typos, errors and plot holes.
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