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Detective Tan: Coconut Rough
Pulled from the nets by the fishermen of Lalomanu. A dead body awaits. Detective Tan is assigned the case but is quickly summoned to a diamond heist onboard the Princess Leia by the Minister of Tourism MP Tuiatama.
A blue diamond owned by Julio Cente worth millions en route to it's new owner in Fiji. With strict instructions to solve the case before the departure of Princess Leia Detective Tan is the master juggler switching between the John Doe and the diamond heist.
A blue diamond owned by Julio Cente worth millions en route to it's new owner in Fiji. With strict instructions to solve the case before the departure of Princess Leia Detective Tan is the master juggler switching between the John Doe and the diamond heist.
20 pages, Kindle Edition
Published June 17, 2017
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July 25, 2022
Downloaded cheaply onto my Kindle. It was so badly written in the first TWO pages, I could not fathom going further. The format for the dialogue was in paragraph form. The English grammar "translation"?? was embarrassing. Could Not Endure.
Mr. Leavasa, I am willing to give it another go after some serious editing.
UPDATE: I received an Update on my Kindle. As the story was short, I reread it.
Although the grammar improved slightly, there still were errors. The dialogue format was still difficult due to the punctuation and paragraph format.
The story was simple and predictable.
Mr. Leavasa, I am willing to give it another go after some serious editing.
UPDATE: I received an Update on my Kindle. As the story was short, I reread it.
Although the grammar improved slightly, there still were errors. The dialogue format was still difficult due to the punctuation and paragraph format.
The story was simple and predictable.
Displaying 1 of 1 review