It had been awhile since I'd read the first book in this series, so I didn't immediately pick up the connection between the two books, that Patrick McCain was Brody's brother. I preferred the first book, "Double Deception."
Both Patrick in this book, and Brody in the first book, were interested in women who were being threatened, and both brought these women to the same safe house - their mom's. This didn't seem to be very realistic to me. It made me wonder about their other siblings. Are they going to bring desperate, threatened dates to their mom's house, too?
There was another similarity between the books, too. Both had women characters who date nonChristians and lead them towards faith. That's a possibility. In real life, it's also a possibility that the nonChristian will dissuade the Christian, or that they will marry and live in a tension between their beliefs, and with worries over eternity. In fact, I know someone whose husband is currently terminally ill, and she was worried over whether he'd accept Jesus' sacrifice for his sins, whether they would be reunited in heaven someday. That's a horrible fear to have.
I've once heard it said that if you're standing on a chair, and someone is standing on the floor, it's easier for them to pull you down than for you to pull them up... I know several women who live with broken hearts because their husbands do not share their beliefs. Not to mention that it's scheming and manipulative to date someone and try to change them without accepting them as they are. Either accept someone the way they are or don't date them.
For me, when I was a young single woman, I was always afraid that if I did bring a date to Christ that he would end up putting his faith more in me than in Christ - and I would let him down, being human, sooner or later. But if I met and dated someone who already built his faith on Jesus, then no matter how I managed to mess things up, his faith in Jesus would be secure. When I met my husband at church, I didn't know it, and he didn't talk about it much, but I found out little by little that he was already a deacon in his church, even at his young age, mowing and taking care of the church property, the church newsletter, occasionally doing communion meditations. I knew that he was a Christian before I came on the scene, and that if I went on down the road, that he'd still be a Christian after I was gone.
I did not guess who Cam was.
Anne could've solved Patrick's computer problems in a much simpler way (but I realize she was just pretending to be a computer expert, so her not knowing that part was within character.)
Also, after Anne had told Patrick to leave for the evening, he slept outside in the car, watching over her to keep her from harm, even though they didn't know each other very long. If I had been Anne, that would've freaked me out, and I would've wondered if he was a stalker, and perhaps someone worse than the person that he was trying to save her from. In fact, I would've challenged him on it up front. I know in the story, it was supposed to be a sweet, protective action, but to me, it seemed like a red flag, that maybe he was too possessive or too controlling or just falling for her too hard and too fast - which sometimes goes hand in hand with not respecting someone's wishes.
Speaking of which, in this book, as in so many other romances, the relationship progressed too fast to truly get to know one another well.
I have one friend who would point out that the Christians in this book don't actually state their beliefs. They could be Jews or Deists (those who believe in God, but not Jesus as His Son.)