I voluntarily read and reviewed an advanced copy of this book. All thoughts and opinions are my own.
I was very hopeful and excited for this book and I was pleasantly surprised and enjoyed it immensely. The synopsis intrigued me, as I thought it had a similar premise to The Night Circus by Erin Morgenstern, where a couple of magicians take on apprentices in a competition to see who would win in magic and skill. While Illusions did not have such a competition, it did have the same air of mystery, intrigue and wonder that I wanted from such a book.
The story focuses on two main characters: Thomas Pendleton, son of a wealthy banker, aspiring poet and magician’s apprentice, who also harbours a dangerous and life-changing secret; and Saverio Moretti, apprenticed to the magician Paolo il Magnifico whose dream is to take center stage in his own act of magical tricks and illusions. The story is told in the format of a historical account of the events that transpired over the course of the book, with the author using journal entries from both characters, newspaper articles, and third person narrative. Through alternating journal entries we see the interactions between both Thomas and Saverio and their views, emotions, and thoughts of each other. Saverio wants to use Thomas to gain knowledge and fame in the world of magic and prestidigitation (had to look that one up), and Thomas seeks a friend, and perhaps more, who keeps him on his toes with mystery and intrigue. Both characters have gripping and engaging arcs throughout the story, going from player and pawn to being romantically involved, then having to deal with tragedy and loss. It was such an engaging read that I found myself finishing it in one weekend.
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It took a few chapters to get into the narrative style of the story. I was never under the impression that journal entries were so detailed, but as the story progressed it got much easier to keep up with the journal/diary formatting. The dates sometimes got lost on me but the timeline was simple enough to follow.
With the trick Thomas and Neville were performing, I would have liked a bigger build up for the trick on the night of the performance. More about the characters' feelings and expectations about the feat. The quick "it worked" from Sav, and Thomas’s explanation of the stunt, weren’t quite the build up I was hoping for with how much emphasizes the story put on it.
I was drawn to this book with the premise of it being a story of infiltration and and flirtation, and that was certainly to be found. Saverio is a very suave and charismatic character, and it shows in the interactions between him and Thomas. Sav leaving tokens behind with only an initial to go by, and taking Thomas to new locations was fun to read about. I loved reading about their interactions and getting vivid details from one or both of them was always satisfying and indulgent in some cases. I was happy that the romance played out over a span of months rather than a few weeks and that I was able to see the growth and evolution of these characters.
The only issue I took with this story was with the narrative in the last third of the book, after Thomas’s death.Saverio stops writing and the author picks up where he leaves off, writing the remainder of the book in third person, instead of the first person narratives that I had become used to over the story. I felt that this was unnecessary and even inconsistent with the way the story was being told. The formatting of diary and newspaper entries is just suddenly changed to third person with no note from the author. We do get a note in the introduction mentioning that the journal and newspaper entries were primary sources that detailed the events of the story, so why do we suddenly get a third person perspective with no mention of transition or how the narrator came to know these facts? It felt very inconsistent and despite my love of the story and characters it was something that I could not ignore. When reading a passage it felt like someone was intruding on a private moment since the perspective is not from one of the main characters. I think it would have gone better if Sav had decided to write down his findings whenever he spotted another clue from Thomas, and then chronicling his journey all over Europe to find him. With Sav writing down the findings in his diary to keep track of them, it would help the reader not to think the character as going completely mad over such small details.
I was frustrated with not understanding how Thomas’s powers worked or what the rules were, yet I feel that might just be part of the magic trick of this book. I felt the same way when Sav finds Thomas alive in Bruges, Belgium. How did he track Thomas all the way to Belgium when they had never spoken of it? And what has Thomas been doing for the past few months? Such is the art of magic and secrets I suppose….
Some other ideas that came to mind after completing this book were that I think it would have been interesting to also include other records, such as the detective's file against Thomas and the witnesses who came forward to testify. Maybe even a redeeming moment for Thomas's parents, trying to speak up for their son and make amends? These are just ideas I thought might add some dimension to the side characters who seemed one-dimensional and could have used some empathetic qualities.
Overall I found this book to be an excellent read. It was thrilling and entertaining and I was entranced throughout most of it. It was a great LGBT read and one that I would recommend.
Favorite quotes:”I read somewhere that boredom is the desire for desires.”
“O, the things I tolerate to portray the ultimate illusion: love.”
“Most of what I wrote was pure drivel-even the inspiration that has come from being in love does not always produce the most masterful of art.”