Where do I begin? Overall, a good (but not great) SHTF story. The timeline of the degradation of society seems a bit off, but we won't really know until the SHTF, will we? But the editing... Oh, the editing... To all indie authors, please stop having your friends or family members edit your books. Use a professional editor. Please! For instance, the head of most schools is a principal, NOT a principle. I endured an entire chapter in which the 'principle' was a character. I cringed every time I read the word. Yet, I plodded through. Also, please note that when you are addressing your parents, Mom and Dad are proper nouns: "I'll take out the trash in a minute, Mom." "When is Dad coming home?" In dialogue, please use commas to set off the person to whom you are talking: "Watch where you're going, Kenny." "Danny, you need to pay attention." Yes, please pay attention to the details.