2 stars — because I can’t pretend anymore.
I forgave Book 2. I gave it a generous 3 stars. I chose to focus on the good parts, hoping things would finally start climbing back to the brilliance I know T.A. White is capable of.
But here I am, closing Book 3 with a sigh of frustration and a growing sense of betrayal. I can’t keep making excuses. I can’t keep pretending this series is going to get better. Because if we’re being honest? It’s not.
🗺️ Worldbuilding: Confusing, Contradictory, and Just... Off
Let’s start with what drove me absolutely up the wall in this book: the worldbuilding. Or more accurately, the lack of usable worldbuilding.
1. The “ancient language”
Yes, I get it. T.A. White wanted to create depth with a unique language system — terms like sotee, lasoso tee, ahvit, and ahnteela (which I think means “elder”? Maybe?) are sprinkled throughout like we should just know what they mean. There’s no glossary. No explanation. No consistent in-world translation. I’ve read the entire series, and I still don’t know what half of it means. That’s not immersive — that’s irritating.
2. Dragon-ridden?
Let’s talk about the actual title concept. "Dragon-ridden"? Of all the terms available, this was the choice? It’s clunky, weird, and every time I read it, I cringed. It sounds like something out of a bad fanfic, not a professionally published fantasy series.
3. Elemental magic? Where?
We’re told the dragon-ridden have access to elemental powers. Awesome! Except... no one uses them. Ryu does, occasionally, but Tate? Nope. Despite supposedly going to school to learn how in Book 2, she never uses her magic. Not once in this book. Why give characters powers if you're never going to let them use them?
4. The dragon content in this “dragon” series is almost nonexistent
We’re three books into a series about dragon shifters and have had maybe two actual dragon scenes. That’s it. It’s like T.A. White wanted to write about dragons, got distracted halfway through, and just decided to sprinkle in the word "dragon" every few chapters and call it a day.
5. Power dynamics? Makes no sense
The dragon-ridden are supposedly the Emperor’s elite — powerful, feared, and second only to him. So explain to me why they’re constantly getting ordered around and bullied by humans with no powers. Why are they tiptoeing around council members and bureaucrats like scared interns? If they only answer to the Emperor, why is every minor human official bossing them around? It’s inconsistent and completely undermines their supposed status.
6. Queen dragon reveal? Completely ignored
In this book, Tate’s dragon is called “queen.” A huge reveal, right? Something that should spark a flood of questions and character decisions. But what does Tate do? Absolutely nothing. She doesn’t tell anyone. Doesn’t ask Ilith. Doesn’t even think about it after a page or two. She just brushes it aside like it’s not a potential game-changer. It’s dumb. And lazy.
7. Tate’s constant avoidance of literally everything
She ignores her dreams. Her memories. Her instincts. Her magical relics. She constantly says “I’ll look into that later” and then never does. It’s like watching someone trip over the same rock every five minutes and wondering why their knees are bleeding.
📉 From Love to Disappointment
I first read The Broken Lands — and I liked it.
Then I read The Firebird Chronicles — and I loved it.
I was convinced T.A. White was one of those rare authors who understood character depth, moral nuance, and slow-burn mastery.
Then I read Aileen Travers. And now this.
And I’m starting to think Firebird might have been a happy accident. Because that level of brilliance? I haven’t seen it again. You get glimpses — in the last few Aileen books, in the first Dragon-Ridden book — but the consistency is gone. It’s like a different person is writing. Maybe she had help. Maybe she had a better editor. Maybe it was lightning in a bottle.
But this?
This is disappointing, sloppy, and deeply frustrating.
🙄 Characters Still Doing the Heavy Lifting
Once again, the only characters I cared about were Ilith, Night, and Dewdrop — because they’re the only ones with consistent personalities and actual charm.
But even they couldn’t save this book from itself.
💬 Final Thoughts
I wanted to love this. I needed to love this. But by Book 3, all I feel is regret — for the wasted potential, the abandoned worldbuilding, and the slow erosion of a protagonist I once rooted for.
T.A. White has shown she’s capable of incredible writing. But this book is not that. It’s a meandering, shallow, underdeveloped chapter in a series that’s quickly losing its magic.
2 stars — and that’s being kind.
Not for the plot. Not for the world.
Just for the lingering memory of what this could’ve been.