Mr. Bennet's Favours

by glassfacet

Unknown Binding

Published August 19, 2017

Reviews

[wosedwew · Rating 4 out of 5]

4-5-2018 -- At this time, Mr. Bennet's Favors is an unfinished WIP.

5-29-2020 -- this has finally finished so I am beginning again.

It is available here:
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12619781...

[Madenna U · Rating 4 out of 5]

This story is a fun work in progress - I hope the author finishes it.

Mr. Darcy owes Mr Bennet 3 favors which he trades in for his middle daughters as they are ignored by Mrs Bennet. The three sisters are wonderful and have a positive influence on all those around them as they each make it through their little scrapes.

[Susan · Rating 4 out of 5]

In this Pride and Prejudice variation while playing chess with his friend, Mr Bennet wins three favours from Mr Darcy senior. He uses these to help Elizabeth, Mary and Kitty improve their education by sending them to school. With this help with their future and give them a happy ending.
An enjoyable stoty though I could have hoped for a better pairing for Mary.

[Chetana · Rating 4 out of 5]

3.75⭐️

Right after the disappointment that was the previous story, I picked up another story that focused on all the sisters(especially the middle 3) instead of just Lizzy. And in this one was well done. I felt that the stories were interconnected and the characters well developed. In the case of this story the gripe I had was that the story could have ended better. The penultimate chapter with the confrontation with Mrs. Bennet and a step towards reconciliation was undone in the last chapter. That was frustrating. But realistic in a way. In reality I felt that Mrs. Bennet suddenly apologizing was not in her character and Miss Bingley mentioning rumours prompting her to do so more in line with her actions. But the sisters getting to talk out their grievances was a nice touch..

This was an enjoyable read with the sisters being clever and friendly and with great bonds with each other.

[Zhora · Rating 3 out of 5]

2.5/5