Malhaar – When it pours, soak yourself in poetry.
Author: Ambica Uppal
Rating: 2.5 stars.
‘Malhaar is an old melody in Indian classical music and is evocative of the rains in the monsoon season, and this book that you hold in your hands is a poetic downpour of my emotions through the seasons of life.’
Firstly, I’d like to thank Ambica Uppal herself for sending me a copy of her book in exchange for an honest review. I am incredibly grateful for the opportunity, so thank you once again! As someone who is a huge lover of poetry, and is currently studying it at university, I couldn’t wait to dive right into this collection. If you are someone who loves personal writing, contemporary/modern poetry, self-love and the likes of Milk & Honey/ The Princess saves herself in this one, then you will enjoy Uppal’s new release, Malhaar.
The collection is split into six different ‘seasons’ of life, and examines deeply personal moments that the author has experienced. These are: In Verse, Let Yourself Love and Be Loved, Lessons Learnt and Discerned, On Voyages, You an others and Flesh, Blood and Sweat.
I found this collection to be very reflective and the personal touches throughout really created an emotional complex to the pieces. Some of my favourites are, Authenticity (p.48), Happiness in what you have today (p.63) and Show me the real you (p.82).
Here is an example of Malhaar’s poetry:
Oh, darling,
Don’t let the darkness
In others
Smear black
Over your palette of colours!
Steer away from the Negative. (p.91).
When reading the pieces, I did find myself looking back on my own person, and how I am influenced by the people and things around me. Malhaar’s expression of her own downfalls and lessons learnt are truly something that connects the reader to the words on the page.
Positives:
• Inspiring and influential.
• A personal expression of experiences, the confessional aspect behind the words does make the poetry relatable and draws the reader in.
• The topics chosen are something that need to be touched upon more in society/culture.
• Her individual flare and culture influences can be seen throughout, the illustrations that accompany the piece are also nicely complimentary.
Negatives:
• There were quite a few things that I found wishing for when reading this collection. I found that perhaps the pieces were somewhat repetitive and needed more experimentation with. A majority of them were the same structure and lacked a variety of poetic techniques that other poets are daring with today.
• Most of the pieces didn’t have any punctuation, but Uppal’s interest in spoken word poetry might be the reason for this.
• I wanted more! More emotion, more experimentation with lexis, word choice, symbols, imagery. I wanted some of them to push the boundaries, to really make me think and reflect more upon my deepest emotions. Quite a few of the poems did do this, but some only scratched the surface.
• It was quite like other poetry books that are popular at the moment. Of course, this is a fantastic way to get your work published because these books are doing so well now. But, I did feel like I was reading another one and it lost a touch of personality and individual flare by the end.
I did enjoy this poetry collection nonetheless and I can’t wait to see how Uppal’s work improves over time, this is such a promising start! Don’t get me wrong and think that I am just hating upon this because I’m definitely not. The poetry is stimulating and some of the pieces really posit questions and make us think.
Rating: 2.5/5.
Katie Elizabeth Reads x :)