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Young Wizards #2
Deep Wizardry
Coming to the aid of a wounded whale, Kit and Nita are plunged into deep wizardry. The whale is a wizard, and she enlists Kit and Nita in battle against the sinister Lone Power. Becoming whales themselves, Nita and Kit join in an ancient ritual performed by whales, dolphins, and a single fearsome shark. But which poses more of a danger: the Lone Power, or ed'Rashtekaresket, the enormous shark as old as the sea?
197 pages, ebook
First published March 1, 1985
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Diane Duane
164 books2,411 followersDiane Duane has been a writer of science fiction, fantasy, TV and film for more than forty years.
Besides the 1980's creation of the Young Wizards fantasy series for which she's best known, the "Middle Kingdoms" epic fantasy series, and numerous stand-alone fantasy or science fiction novels, her career has included extensive work in the Star Trek TM universe, and many scripts for live-action and animated TV series on both sides of the Atlantic, as well as work in comics and computer games. She has spent a fair amount of time on the New York Times Bestseller List, and has picked up various awards and award nominations here and there.
She lives in County Wicklow, in Ireland, with her husband of more than thirty years, the screenwriter and novelist Peter Morwood.
Her favorite color is blue, her favorite food is a weird kind of Swiss scrambled-potato dish called maluns, she was born in a Year of the Dragon, and her sign is "Runway 24 Left, Hold For Clearance."
(From her official website)
Besides the 1980's creation of the Young Wizards fantasy series for which she's best known, the "Middle Kingdoms" epic fantasy series, and numerous stand-alone fantasy or science fiction novels, her career has included extensive work in the Star Trek TM universe, and many scripts for live-action and animated TV series on both sides of the Atlantic, as well as work in comics and computer games. She has spent a fair amount of time on the New York Times Bestseller List, and has picked up various awards and award nominations here and there.
She lives in County Wicklow, in Ireland, with her husband of more than thirty years, the screenwriter and novelist Peter Morwood.
Her favorite color is blue, her favorite food is a weird kind of Swiss scrambled-potato dish called maluns, she was born in a Year of the Dragon, and her sign is "Runway 24 Left, Hold For Clearance."
(From her official website)
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August 28, 2011
If ever anyone asks you what exactly is the point of a site like Goodreads, do please direct them to this review. A few months ago, I read the first in this series, 'So You Want To Be A Wizard', and although I liked it, I had no great desire to read any more in the sequence. But when I posted this in my Goodreads review, a friend begged me to carry on, because this, the second book in the series, was one of her all time favourite books. So I took her advice, and you know what? I love it too. It's astonishing how many wonderful stories I've found through Goodreads - not just friends' recommendations, but other reviews, discussion groups or simply surfing around, following links from book to book to author to book... It's an invaluable resource for readers.
This is a children's (or perhaps more properly a young adult) book, the second of a long series, but it's also an excellent read for adults. I am several decades above the intended demographic, but I absolutely loved it. The first half of the book is a fairly straightforward tale of two kids, Nita and Kit, learning to enjoy their newfound powers of wizardry, while avoiding Nita's pesky younger sister and trying not to be caught out by her parents. There's a sprinkling of politically correct ecology (pollution is bad, children), plus some swimming with dolphins and whales and such like fluff.
But then, about half way through, the story transforms into something deeper, darker and much more interesting. Suddenly it's about love and death, and willing sacrifice, and keeping your word no matter the cost. Oh, and a little about the innateness (or not) of male aggression. Which was unexpected. Even though you know, of course, that Nita and Kit will be fine (since the series goes on and on) and even I saw what had to happen to make things come out right, it was still exciting and scary and very moving. I cried, a lot, and that's embarrassing at my age (and I was on a train, too). Not sure what teenage (or younger) readers would make of it, but I thought it was terrific. A good 4 stars.
This is a children's (or perhaps more properly a young adult) book, the second of a long series, but it's also an excellent read for adults. I am several decades above the intended demographic, but I absolutely loved it. The first half of the book is a fairly straightforward tale of two kids, Nita and Kit, learning to enjoy their newfound powers of wizardry, while avoiding Nita's pesky younger sister and trying not to be caught out by her parents. There's a sprinkling of politically correct ecology (pollution is bad, children), plus some swimming with dolphins and whales and such like fluff.
But then, about half way through, the story transforms into something deeper, darker and much more interesting. Suddenly it's about love and death, and willing sacrifice, and keeping your word no matter the cost. Oh, and a little about the innateness (or not) of male aggression. Which was unexpected. Even though you know, of course, that Nita and Kit will be fine (since the series goes on and on) and even I saw what had to happen to make things come out right, it was still exciting and scary and very moving. I cried, a lot, and that's embarrassing at my age (and I was on a train, too). Not sure what teenage (or younger) readers would make of it, but I thought it was terrific. A good 4 stars.
November 2, 2008
My favorite in the series. I love how Nita discovers that an offhand promise turns out to be very serious, and how the kids find it harder and harder to work around their families. There is a very dramatic storyline that left my in tears, too.
June 14, 2025
this marvelous adventure for middle-grade kids is a step up from its very enjoyable predecessor. So You Want to Be a Wizard was a delight that turned interestingly dark in its later chapters, so no shade thrown towards that book. but Deep Wizardry is a deeper experience in all ways- often surprisingly so. despite also being a pleasant lark that has two kids transforming into whales to save the world.
some spoilers ahead - but nothing that isn't already hinted at on the back cover!
first of all, stakes are quite high and in a very personal way: to save the world, our young heroine must die. specifically, while in whale form she must injure herself enough to draw blood, and then let the king of sharks go into killing-frenzy mode and devour her alive. the idea of pain during this process is definitely not undersold. this is all quite a lot for Nita to digest and, very realistically, it just doesn't sink in it at first. then she tries to wriggle out of the magical bargain she struck; she only semi-believes that this will be her end; she refuses to accept it. all of this felt very much like the way most kids - and most adults - would confront a terminal diagnosis. and so her eventual coming to terms with her fate felt not just dignified and graceful and quietly courageous, it felt very real. and well-earned.
second, the novel is direct when it comes to nascent teen sexuality. the key word here is "nascent" as the teens in question aren't sexualized (and yay for that). Nita is most definitely not seeing her best mate Kit or herself as sexual beings. but Mom has her suspicions, don't they all, and she lays her fears out in a very direct way about all the time Nita and Kit are spending together on their own - and what they could be doing. Nita is young enough, and naive enough, that her response is along the lines of 'Ew gross, no!' - she's still living in that world where such things don't really exist for her; Kit is her best friend, not a crush. Or so she thinks... well, could be true. I guess we'll see in future books.
third, Deep Wizardry touches lightly and subtly on the idea - the fact - that the potential for specifically male aggression and male violence is a real thing. Nita and Kita become very different sorts of whales. this surprises Nita. she's not comfortable with it; her recognition of Kit's more animalistic nature makes her feel a certain kind of way about him - protected, but also wary. and perhaps a bit repulsed.
fourth, the characterization of her ambiguous ally the Master Shark is fantastic. dead-voiced and chillingly sardonic with flat soulless eyes, the Master Shark is also unexpectedly tragic. an affecting character. both Nita and the reader eventually begin to sympathize with him and his nature. Nita recognizes a loneliness at the core of him, which felt to me like the dawning of her own adulthood.
Diane Duane is a wonderful writer, of the sort who can make magic understandable but never mundane, who can create child characters who are realistic rather than mawkish and idealized, and who makes sure the ideas she's putting on the page are explored with the depth and sensitivity that they deserve. I'm looking forward to reading more of this series.
some spoilers ahead - but nothing that isn't already hinted at on the back cover!
first of all, stakes are quite high and in a very personal way: to save the world, our young heroine must die. specifically, while in whale form she must injure herself enough to draw blood, and then let the king of sharks go into killing-frenzy mode and devour her alive. the idea of pain during this process is definitely not undersold. this is all quite a lot for Nita to digest and, very realistically, it just doesn't sink in it at first. then she tries to wriggle out of the magical bargain she struck; she only semi-believes that this will be her end; she refuses to accept it. all of this felt very much like the way most kids - and most adults - would confront a terminal diagnosis. and so her eventual coming to terms with her fate felt not just dignified and graceful and quietly courageous, it felt very real. and well-earned.
second, the novel is direct when it comes to nascent teen sexuality. the key word here is "nascent" as the teens in question aren't sexualized (and yay for that). Nita is most definitely not seeing her best mate Kit or herself as sexual beings. but Mom has her suspicions, don't they all, and she lays her fears out in a very direct way about all the time Nita and Kit are spending together on their own - and what they could be doing. Nita is young enough, and naive enough, that her response is along the lines of 'Ew gross, no!' - she's still living in that world where such things don't really exist for her; Kit is her best friend, not a crush. Or so she thinks... well, could be true. I guess we'll see in future books.
third, Deep Wizardry touches lightly and subtly on the idea - the fact - that the potential for specifically male aggression and male violence is a real thing. Nita and Kita become very different sorts of whales. this surprises Nita. she's not comfortable with it; her recognition of Kit's more animalistic nature makes her feel a certain kind of way about him - protected, but also wary. and perhaps a bit repulsed.
fourth, the characterization of her ambiguous ally the Master Shark is fantastic. dead-voiced and chillingly sardonic with flat soulless eyes, the Master Shark is also unexpectedly tragic. an affecting character. both Nita and the reader eventually begin to sympathize with him and his nature. Nita recognizes a loneliness at the core of him, which felt to me like the dawning of her own adulthood.
Diane Duane is a wonderful writer, of the sort who can make magic understandable but never mundane, who can create child characters who are realistic rather than mawkish and idealized, and who makes sure the ideas she's putting on the page are explored with the depth and sensitivity that they deserve. I'm looking forward to reading more of this series.
June 15, 2020
I'm torn about reviewing the rest of this series, as the simple truth is that I like the rest considerably less (although the original is quite good as well) and I haven't finished them all. They all have their moments and they're generally well-told works of fantasy in a carefully-drawn universe with consistent rules. They just don't really grab me as much as I'd like; I dig the "technobabble for magic" deal but sometimes it gets to be a bit much. And as is common in the Young Adult world the relationship between the main characters seems to remain static, in a place of suspended animation given that they remain more or less the same age even as the years pass for us.
Maybe the truth is that I'm just measuring them against the impossibly high standards of this book, because it guts me and it always has. I've said for years and written many times that there's a basic metaphor that YA lit is filled with: magic as a stand-in for puberty and the frightening and powerful introduction of sexual energy into our lives. Magic takes the place of these frightening and awkward aspects of our identities, giving young people a risk-free way to think and feel their way through the choppy waters of adolescent sexuality. Like magic, sex is powerful, mysterious, and a force seemingly beyond our control, connecting us to the parts of ourselves that are animal, that are the product of evolution.
Deep Wizardry plays with this dynamic masterfully. It also spells it out more or less explicitly, as the main character Nita is confronted by her mother to ask whether she and the male lead, Kit, are having sex. But even aside from that thread in the story, the connection between the physical and the magical are made real in this story. Both Nita and Kit take on the form of whales, although through different means, given that they are two different kinds of wizards, Nita naturally talented with the living world of plants and animals, Kit with the inanimate such as metals and rocks. When they take on their whale form, they find themselves in unrecognizable bodies, bodies that they struggle to understand and control. They are thrilled by the possibilities their new bodies represent even as they are disturbed by the potential consequences of that power. They exult in the freedom of life beneath the waves while craving the safety and comfort of shore. They are growing up, and they are afraid.
There is just something so bone deep in this book, so primal and real. Nit and Kit agree to an adventure without really understanding the stakes, and when they are revealed to be life or death, they are already committed to what they must do. The ancient and otherworldly shark Ed speaks to the danger and looming power of the ocean, and his weird but profound respect for Nita is a highlight. Our heroes must take part in an ancient ritual, the consequences of which are life and death itself.
Every day of their adventure they must leave their whale forms and emerge to the surface, as naked as the day they came. Safe again inside swimsuits and towels, they emerge onto cool sand beneath the summer sky, walking into a familiar world that is not familiar at all, facing not just the reality of reality but the pains of adulthood, the bittersweet remembrance of the childish things they left behind.
Maybe the truth is that I'm just measuring them against the impossibly high standards of this book, because it guts me and it always has. I've said for years and written many times that there's a basic metaphor that YA lit is filled with: magic as a stand-in for puberty and the frightening and powerful introduction of sexual energy into our lives. Magic takes the place of these frightening and awkward aspects of our identities, giving young people a risk-free way to think and feel their way through the choppy waters of adolescent sexuality. Like magic, sex is powerful, mysterious, and a force seemingly beyond our control, connecting us to the parts of ourselves that are animal, that are the product of evolution.
Deep Wizardry plays with this dynamic masterfully. It also spells it out more or less explicitly, as the main character Nita is confronted by her mother to ask whether she and the male lead, Kit, are having sex. But even aside from that thread in the story, the connection between the physical and the magical are made real in this story. Both Nita and Kit take on the form of whales, although through different means, given that they are two different kinds of wizards, Nita naturally talented with the living world of plants and animals, Kit with the inanimate such as metals and rocks. When they take on their whale form, they find themselves in unrecognizable bodies, bodies that they struggle to understand and control. They are thrilled by the possibilities their new bodies represent even as they are disturbed by the potential consequences of that power. They exult in the freedom of life beneath the waves while craving the safety and comfort of shore. They are growing up, and they are afraid.
There is just something so bone deep in this book, so primal and real. Nit and Kit agree to an adventure without really understanding the stakes, and when they are revealed to be life or death, they are already committed to what they must do. The ancient and otherworldly shark Ed speaks to the danger and looming power of the ocean, and his weird but profound respect for Nita is a highlight. Our heroes must take part in an ancient ritual, the consequences of which are life and death itself.
Every day of their adventure they must leave their whale forms and emerge to the surface, as naked as the day they came. Safe again inside swimsuits and towels, they emerge onto cool sand beneath the summer sky, walking into a familiar world that is not familiar at all, facing not just the reality of reality but the pains of adulthood, the bittersweet remembrance of the childish things they left behind.
July 13, 2013
While I regretted last time around that I had not encountered Diane Duane's Young Wizards books when I was a young'un, this time around I'm pretty glad I didn't, because if I'd come across Deep Wizardry when I was the age of its two young protagonists, I would have required extensive therapy afterward. Look, I'm not going to get into this much, but man, I could have used a trigger warning because
GIANT SQUID ATTACKS YOU GUYS.
I'm having trouble breathing after just having typed those words.*
Fortunately, I'm a grown up now, and have evolved and developed coping techniques for dealing with scenes like the
GIANT SQUID ATTACKS YOU GUYS
and am thus somewhat capable of admiring that scene for the majestic and badass bit of action writing that it is. Somewhat. I'm still very glad I put this book down to sleep last night well before the advent of the
GIANT SQUID ATTACKS YOU GUYS
or I wouldn't have slept at all and would probably have to be hauled off to a mental ward like one of H.P. Lovecraft's less strongly-constituted wus-heroes.
All that aside, Deep Wizardry is a remarkably wise, thoughtful and lovely book. We start up not long after Nita and Kit saved the world from the "Lone Power" in So You Want to be a Wizard, with Nita's family (and Kit along for good measure) vacationing on the beach and Nita and Kit exploring the delights of ocean swimming along with their budding powers and responsibilities. Soon it's those responsibilities -- as I observed last time around, Duane's version of magic has a heavy ethical/ecological bent and literally preserves the world -- that come crashing to the fore like a tidal wave when the duo meet up with a badly injured humpback whale, who turns out to be a young wizard herself, and who has just lost her mentor at the worst possible time.
Soon Nita and Kit are drawn into an awesome round of ritual and rite of passage upon which the fate of the eastern seaboard depends -- the Lone Power they defeated and sealed off last time around is always finding new and old ways to attack the fragile living cosmos these kids and their kind are sworn to defend and preserve -- and into a frame of reference that is startling in its maturity, as they have to spend much of the novel contemplating death quite seriously and personally.
Adding to the shivery archetypal dread of this story is the magnificent giant white "Master-shark" (as in the biggest Great White Shark that ever lived, so old -- possibly thousands of years old -- and vast that he is actually all white, like a deadly ghost slicing through the water), Ed** (short for Ed'Rashtekaresket), who pretty much steals the novel. Ed is a giant slab of uncanny, inhuman awesome, utterly believable as both shark and sentient, at home in his role as the "ender of distress" and full of bleak, harsh and yet still oddly compassionate wisdom in his dealings with Nita and Kit, who assume the forms of a humpback and a sperm whale, respectively, for their dealings in the deep. And while they might therefore be a little bigger than Ed, his lordly, dreadful power keeps them and us in awe through their every dealing with him.
Really, were I at all a reasonable person, I'd be much more afraid of Ed than of the
GIANT SQUID ATTACKS YOU GUYS
but anyone who knows me or even just reads my blog at all often probably already knows that if there is one thing I am not, it's a reasonable person. As it is, well, Ed versus the
GIANT SQUID ATTACKS YOU GUYS
is one of the most thrilling and seat-wetting passages I've ever encountered in literature. Holy crap, you guys?
And but so, Duane has published seven more of these Young Wizards books to date, and another one is due later this year. Could she ever possibly top this? Or even come close to hitting its (pardon me) high water mark? I dunno. But I'm ready to find out.
After some milk and cookies and soothing music to cure me of my lingering horrors from the
GIANT SQUID ATTACKS YOU GUYS
and the after-effects of some truly tragic content as well.
Deep and powerful stuff.
*My greatest childhood phobia was that a giant squid was under my bed and gonna attack me from the watery ocean depths that were also under my bed and yes I knew at the time this was quite impossible given that said bed was some 6000 feet above sea level not far from the Continental Divide but that's what phobias are, you guys. They're as powerful as they are irrational.
GIANT SQUID ATTACKS YOU GUYS.
I'm having trouble breathing after just having typed those words.*
Fortunately, I'm a grown up now, and have evolved and developed coping techniques for dealing with scenes like the
GIANT SQUID ATTACKS YOU GUYS
and am thus somewhat capable of admiring that scene for the majestic and badass bit of action writing that it is. Somewhat. I'm still very glad I put this book down to sleep last night well before the advent of the
GIANT SQUID ATTACKS YOU GUYS
or I wouldn't have slept at all and would probably have to be hauled off to a mental ward like one of H.P. Lovecraft's less strongly-constituted wus-heroes.
All that aside, Deep Wizardry is a remarkably wise, thoughtful and lovely book. We start up not long after Nita and Kit saved the world from the "Lone Power" in So You Want to be a Wizard, with Nita's family (and Kit along for good measure) vacationing on the beach and Nita and Kit exploring the delights of ocean swimming along with their budding powers and responsibilities. Soon it's those responsibilities -- as I observed last time around, Duane's version of magic has a heavy ethical/ecological bent and literally preserves the world -- that come crashing to the fore like a tidal wave when the duo meet up with a badly injured humpback whale, who turns out to be a young wizard herself, and who has just lost her mentor at the worst possible time.
Soon Nita and Kit are drawn into an awesome round of ritual and rite of passage upon which the fate of the eastern seaboard depends -- the Lone Power they defeated and sealed off last time around is always finding new and old ways to attack the fragile living cosmos these kids and their kind are sworn to defend and preserve -- and into a frame of reference that is startling in its maturity, as they have to spend much of the novel contemplating death quite seriously and personally.
Adding to the shivery archetypal dread of this story is the magnificent giant white "Master-shark" (as in the biggest Great White Shark that ever lived, so old -- possibly thousands of years old -- and vast that he is actually all white, like a deadly ghost slicing through the water), Ed** (short for Ed'Rashtekaresket), who pretty much steals the novel. Ed is a giant slab of uncanny, inhuman awesome, utterly believable as both shark and sentient, at home in his role as the "ender of distress" and full of bleak, harsh and yet still oddly compassionate wisdom in his dealings with Nita and Kit, who assume the forms of a humpback and a sperm whale, respectively, for their dealings in the deep. And while they might therefore be a little bigger than Ed, his lordly, dreadful power keeps them and us in awe through their every dealing with him.
Really, were I at all a reasonable person, I'd be much more afraid of Ed than of the
GIANT SQUID ATTACKS YOU GUYS
but anyone who knows me or even just reads my blog at all often probably already knows that if there is one thing I am not, it's a reasonable person. As it is, well, Ed versus the
GIANT SQUID ATTACKS YOU GUYS
is one of the most thrilling and seat-wetting passages I've ever encountered in literature. Holy crap, you guys?
And but so, Duane has published seven more of these Young Wizards books to date, and another one is due later this year. Could she ever possibly top this? Or even come close to hitting its (pardon me) high water mark? I dunno. But I'm ready to find out.
After some milk and cookies and soothing music to cure me of my lingering horrors from the
GIANT SQUID ATTACKS YOU GUYS
and the after-effects of some truly tragic content as well.
Deep and powerful stuff.
*My greatest childhood phobia was that a giant squid was under my bed and gonna attack me from the watery ocean depths that were also under my bed and yes I knew at the time this was quite impossible given that said bed was some 6000 feet above sea level not far from the Continental Divide but that's what phobias are, you guys. They're as powerful as they are irrational.
July 22, 2025
Passion Play
When I was five years old my mother read The Lion, the Witch and the Wardrobe to my four-year-old sister and me. On hearing the story I told my sister and my mother, "Aslan is Jesus". They thought I was just imagining it, but of course I was right C.S. Lewis fully intended The Lion, the Witch and the Wardrobe as a Christian allegory.
I mention this because I had a similar reaction while reading Diane Duane's Deep Wizardry. At the 67% mark, I made this note to myself, 'As Fook said in HHGTTG: “I think this is getting needlessly messianic.”' I will not be more specific, because I don't want to spoil. Also, it turns out that Duane is much less overbearing than Lewis -- it didn't, in the end, bother me.
Like the first Young Wizards novel, So You Want to Be a Wizard, Deep Wizardry turns out to be a much more serious work than it looks. If you look at the cover and read the publisher's blurbs you will expect both novels to be light-hearted middle-grade fantasies. They are more than that. They're very serious good-vs-evil plots with the highest of stakes. Kit and Nita have difficult choices to make, well beyond what pre-teens are usually faced with.
I enjoyed it, and will continue with book 3, High Wizardry.
Blog review.
When I was five years old my mother read The Lion, the Witch and the Wardrobe to my four-year-old sister and me. On hearing the story I told my sister and my mother, "Aslan is Jesus". They thought I was just imagining it, but of course I was right C.S. Lewis fully intended The Lion, the Witch and the Wardrobe as a Christian allegory.
I mention this because I had a similar reaction while reading Diane Duane's Deep Wizardry. At the 67% mark, I made this note to myself, 'As Fook said in HHGTTG: “I think this is getting needlessly messianic.”' I will not be more specific, because I don't want to spoil. Also, it turns out that Duane is much less overbearing than Lewis -- it didn't, in the end, bother me.
Like the first Young Wizards novel, So You Want to Be a Wizard, Deep Wizardry turns out to be a much more serious work than it looks. If you look at the cover and read the publisher's blurbs you will expect both novels to be light-hearted middle-grade fantasies. They are more than that. They're very serious good-vs-evil plots with the highest of stakes. Kit and Nita have difficult choices to make, well beyond what pre-teens are usually faced with.
I enjoyed it, and will continue with book 3, High Wizardry.
Blog review.
May 3, 2018
After reading and absolutely loving the first book in the series "So You Want to be a Wizard" I just knew I had to read the second book, "Deep Wizardry". In all honesty, this book is nowhere near as good as the first.
First, this book is not as creative and riveting as the first book. I mean not even in the same ball park which was extremely disappointing. While it is well written and very well researched (there are many marine biology terms used throughout the novel) the plot is just moves at a very slow pace. There were several times where I almost put the book down altogether because of the extremely dull story line and horrendously slow (slower than molasses) pacing. The two main characters, Kit and Nita were immature and to be honest pretty stupid and impulsive. These qualities really made me want to slap each of them on the side of the head and tell them to get their sh!t together.
Despite, some of the factors mentioned above the story was not a complete waste as it did have some interesting concepts here and there. While it ended on a relatively good note, I felt very unsatisfied with the ending, almost like a perfect bow wrapped around a little too tightly. Based on all this I'll probably hold off on the res of the series for now.
First, this book is not as creative and riveting as the first book. I mean not even in the same ball park which was extremely disappointing. While it is well written and very well researched (there are many marine biology terms used throughout the novel) the plot is just moves at a very slow pace. There were several times where I almost put the book down altogether because of the extremely dull story line and horrendously slow (slower than molasses) pacing. The two main characters, Kit and Nita were immature and to be honest pretty stupid and impulsive. These qualities really made me want to slap each of them on the side of the head and tell them to get their sh!t together.
Despite, some of the factors mentioned above the story was not a complete waste as it did have some interesting concepts here and there. While it ended on a relatively good note, I felt very unsatisfied with the ending, almost like a perfect bow wrapped around a little too tightly. Based on all this I'll probably hold off on the res of the series for now.
July 26, 2021
Always my favorite. Is it because transforming into a whale would be so cool?
Is it because of Ed?
It might just be because of Ed.
But also the parrot screaming "Listen to the night!" which, is just so darn funny when it all comes down to it.
Is it because of Ed?
It might just be because of Ed.
But also the parrot screaming "Listen to the night!" which, is just so darn funny when it all comes down to it.
March 22, 2014
Oops, I am falling absolutely in love with these little books.
First off, let me say that I have been trying a "straddling" technique in reading these; I have been alternating between listening to the (fantastically charming) audiobook for my commute to work and then switching to my paperbacks (which I hastily and excitedly purchased from Orca Books in Oly for a song on store credit) for my 15-minute work breaks in order to continue the story. I can safely say that I have been impatiently shelving books during my shifts, thinking about my next chance to read about my "leetle wixxards" and then shuffle the stories on to my friend Pietro so I will have someone to giggle and squeal with.
What I love:
-Parents in the book are treated with love and respect for their feelings. It is lovely how Nita and Kit both seem to actually care what their parents think about them and don't want to lie to them, both for personal and practical reasons of their wizardry and "speaking truth." Charming and different.
-Whalesong. Oh my gosh this is so cute. Love the way the whale speech has little hints of the actual sounds whales make. I think Nita's name came out something like "hN'iit", which, if you sort of perform it yourself, has a fair similarity to the sounds whales make underwater. Very clever little idea.
-Nita and Kit's friendship is absolutely fantastic. I love seeing stories where a boy and girl are allowed to be close friends and care about each other without it immediately nosediving into a relationship or romance. I have been informed that there will be more development of the characters on this front, but I have a feeling that since the author has seemed to demonstrate a relatively gentle hand on a lot of matters of character development, that I won't feel too shoehorned into it. (As a sidenote, Nita's mother and little sister seem to be viewing her adventures with her friend with some suspicion in the book, but other than one conversation, I didn't find myself too shocked by the direction their minds took. It is kinda nice to see that sort of thing develop over time in characters' minds, but considering their age, I suppose it is somewhat natural, if a bit extreme...)This brings me to my next point...
-HOLY CARP IN A BUCKET, THE PARENTS AND FAMILY MEMBERS AREN'T IDIOTS. This makes me terribly happy in a book for young people, because I could never stand it as a kid when books for people my age were populated with clueless, useless, helpless adults and authority figures. I found it terribly insulting on the front that a) the author seemed to think pandering to me was appropriate rather than being realistic or fair about how people actually act b)it is very diminishing of the achievements and adventures young people have if the adults don't pose any kind of threat to their options as young characters and thus it felt like "making it easy" for the kids by reducing the challenge. I never liked feeling like the only reason these kids got up to so much fun was because their parents were overgrown toddlers. Guhh. Gag me. Nita's parents are an actual concern in the story, both for practical reasons as for emotional ones. They are actually considered by her a lot, which ties into my previous point, but are also seen as individual, emotional beings rather than just the creators of her life. I particularly liked that they try to address the issues to some degree and ease their minds some in a really personal way. I want to see more of this in the books following. Let's hope.
-The way the song was figured out at the end maintained some tension while still making sense. Thank you for not condescending to readers like Meyer by promising a big fight and then dropping it because you don't want your characters to have to go through anything difficult.
-The relationship between Dairene and Nita is realistic but remarkably mature at the same time on how they deal with each other. I really look forward to them working together in the future and really enjoyed Dairene's cleverness in helping Nita.
Yep. Need more leetle wixxards.
First off, let me say that I have been trying a "straddling" technique in reading these; I have been alternating between listening to the (fantastically charming) audiobook for my commute to work and then switching to my paperbacks (which I hastily and excitedly purchased from Orca Books in Oly for a song on store credit) for my 15-minute work breaks in order to continue the story. I can safely say that I have been impatiently shelving books during my shifts, thinking about my next chance to read about my "leetle wixxards" and then shuffle the stories on to my friend Pietro so I will have someone to giggle and squeal with.
What I love:
-Parents in the book are treated with love and respect for their feelings. It is lovely how Nita and Kit both seem to actually care what their parents think about them and don't want to lie to them, both for personal and practical reasons of their wizardry and "speaking truth." Charming and different.
-Whalesong. Oh my gosh this is so cute. Love the way the whale speech has little hints of the actual sounds whales make. I think Nita's name came out something like "hN'iit", which, if you sort of perform it yourself, has a fair similarity to the sounds whales make underwater. Very clever little idea.
-Nita and Kit's friendship is absolutely fantastic. I love seeing stories where a boy and girl are allowed to be close friends and care about each other without it immediately nosediving into a relationship or romance. I have been informed that there will be more development of the characters on this front, but I have a feeling that since the author has seemed to demonstrate a relatively gentle hand on a lot of matters of character development, that I won't feel too shoehorned into it. (As a sidenote, Nita's mother and little sister seem to be viewing her adventures with her friend with some suspicion in the book, but other than one conversation, I didn't find myself too shocked by the direction their minds took. It is kinda nice to see that sort of thing develop over time in characters' minds, but considering their age, I suppose it is somewhat natural, if a bit extreme...)This brings me to my next point...
-HOLY CARP IN A BUCKET, THE PARENTS AND FAMILY MEMBERS AREN'T IDIOTS. This makes me terribly happy in a book for young people, because I could never stand it as a kid when books for people my age were populated with clueless, useless, helpless adults and authority figures. I found it terribly insulting on the front that a) the author seemed to think pandering to me was appropriate rather than being realistic or fair about how people actually act b)it is very diminishing of the achievements and adventures young people have if the adults don't pose any kind of threat to their options as young characters and thus it felt like "making it easy" for the kids by reducing the challenge. I never liked feeling like the only reason these kids got up to so much fun was because their parents were overgrown toddlers. Guhh. Gag me. Nita's parents are an actual concern in the story, both for practical reasons as for emotional ones. They are actually considered by her a lot, which ties into my previous point, but are also seen as individual, emotional beings rather than just the creators of her life. I particularly liked that they try to address the issues to some degree and ease their minds some in a really personal way. I want to see more of this in the books following. Let's hope.
-The way the song was figured out at the end maintained some tension while still making sense. Thank you for not condescending to readers like Meyer by promising a big fight and then dropping it because you don't want your characters to have to go through anything difficult.
-The relationship between Dairene and Nita is realistic but remarkably mature at the same time on how they deal with each other. I really look forward to them working together in the future and really enjoyed Dairene's cleverness in helping Nita.
Yep. Need more leetle wixxards.
April 5, 2013
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I’m finding it really interesting to read the New Millennium Editions. I’ve read all of the original editions, and the earlier ones have always felt a bit out of sync with the later books, since the nine that are currently out were written and published over 20 years. Technology has changed a great deal, and there are some details that get forgotten in between the books that Duane has fixed. For example, Nita wore glasses in the first book, but not in the rest of the series. Deep Wizardry clears it up by explaining that Nita is using wizardry to fix her eyes. A minor point, but it’s nice to tie the books more closely together, especially when you are reading them as a series and not as stand-alone novels. It also explains why Nita and Kit don’t just use cell phones (the beach is a no-signal area), which would be today’s reader’s first question when someone is looking for the pair.
This whole series really examines the idea of choice and personal responsibility. Nita is warned to read the fine print, but she agrees to participate in the Song of Twelve and to play the role of the Silent Lord without realizing that it is not a play, it is a re-enactment, and that whoever plays the Silent Lord really does die. Nita is 13–she doesn’t want to die, she is frantic to find a way to live, but if she doesn’t do what she promised she would do, millions of people will die. Is her life worth millions of other lives? Maybe she didn’t understand the promise that she made at the time, but she still promised. She was old enough to take the Oath of wizardry, to take the Oath of the Song of Twelve–she is old enough to face the consequences.
And sometimes people die. They do it all the time, as Carl points out. Dying is easy. And it’s not fair. But that’s what wizards are supposed to fight against–the death that isn’t fair, the fear and pain and anger and loneliness that the Lone Power created and forced upon the worlds. Taking his weapon and making it your own–that’s what the Silent Lord did, and it bound Him for thousands of years. Doesn’t mean you can’t be afraid.
I’m finding it really interesting to read the New Millennium Editions. I’ve read all of the original editions, and the earlier ones have always felt a bit out of sync with the later books, since the nine that are currently out were written and published over 20 years. Technology has changed a great deal, and there are some details that get forgotten in between the books that Duane has fixed. For example, Nita wore glasses in the first book, but not in the rest of the series. Deep Wizardry clears it up by explaining that Nita is using wizardry to fix her eyes. A minor point, but it’s nice to tie the books more closely together, especially when you are reading them as a series and not as stand-alone novels. It also explains why Nita and Kit don’t just use cell phones (the beach is a no-signal area), which would be today’s reader’s first question when someone is looking for the pair.
This whole series really examines the idea of choice and personal responsibility. Nita is warned to read the fine print, but she agrees to participate in the Song of Twelve and to play the role of the Silent Lord without realizing that it is not a play, it is a re-enactment, and that whoever plays the Silent Lord really does die. Nita is 13–she doesn’t want to die, she is frantic to find a way to live, but if she doesn’t do what she promised she would do, millions of people will die. Is her life worth millions of other lives? Maybe she didn’t understand the promise that she made at the time, but she still promised. She was old enough to take the Oath of wizardry, to take the Oath of the Song of Twelve–she is old enough to face the consequences.
And sometimes people die. They do it all the time, as Carl points out. Dying is easy. And it’s not fair. But that’s what wizards are supposed to fight against–the death that isn’t fair, the fear and pain and anger and loneliness that the Lone Power created and forced upon the worlds. Taking his weapon and making it your own–that’s what the Silent Lord did, and it bound Him for thousands of years. Doesn’t mean you can’t be afraid.
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January 26, 2015This is one of my favorites of Diane Duane’s ‘Young Wizards’ series – not in the least because it’s full of whales!
But what I love most about it is that it’s got the ‘noble sacrifice for the good of all’ scenario going on in it. With great white sharks! How cool is that?
But what I love most about it is that it’s got the ‘noble sacrifice for the good of all’ scenario going on in it. With great white sharks! How cool is that?
February 17, 2023
the first half of this hurt my little brain but the second half almost made me CRY
July 16, 2025
Hmm, this book. There is so much to like here, but . . .
I truly appreciate the close platonic friendship between our two tween main characters. I love that virtues like keeping your word, telling the truth, respecting your parents, acting with honor and making painful sacrifices for others are upheld. And while this isn't a Christian book, there are some beautiful biblical references, both direct and indirect. Ah, but here comes my reservation. There are also subtle allusions to other spiritual perspectives. By mixing these with the direct Bible references, I feel that muddy waters develop that I'm not altogether comfortable with. If it was all the one, or all the other, but it isn't. Now, one could counter with The Chronicles of Narnia and have a valid point. Nonetheless, personally, I'm going to have to listen to that niggling hesitation and not proceed with the series. If I've misread the author, then I apologize.
I truly appreciate the close platonic friendship between our two tween main characters. I love that virtues like keeping your word, telling the truth, respecting your parents, acting with honor and making painful sacrifices for others are upheld. And while this isn't a Christian book, there are some beautiful biblical references, both direct and indirect. Ah, but here comes my reservation. There are also subtle allusions to other spiritual perspectives. By mixing these with the direct Bible references, I feel that muddy waters develop that I'm not altogether comfortable with. If it was all the one, or all the other, but it isn't. Now, one could counter with The Chronicles of Narnia and have a valid point. Nonetheless, personally, I'm going to have to listen to that niggling hesitation and not proceed with the series. If I've misread the author, then I apologize.
January 18, 2016
Ah, Ed. He was the best part, but also Carl, and Tom, and Peach... I love that Nita and Kit are solid best friends and are a team. Their magic is very collaborative and I enjoy this so much.
April 16, 2024
Reader, I cried
February 22, 2012
I liked the first book very much, but this was in many ways a disappointment.
First, I hope you like whales. Not just like them and hope they aren't all killed by whalers, but that you're fascinated by every little detail about them. Because if not, boy you are going to be sick of them by the end of this book.
Secondly, the problems Duane had in the first book with writing the kids appropriately to their age are worse in this one. Sometimes she seems to remember they are tweens, and other times she starts writing them as if they were in their upper teens. Their maturity level jumps all over the place - especially in one painfully embarrassing scene in which Nita's mother tries to figure out if she is sexually active with a twelve year old.
Thirdly, the setup seems a bit cheap - the sacrifice asked of Nita is flagged really, really clearly and her obliviousness doesn't make sense, but at the same time it's blindingly obvious that she's never actually going to be asked to make it. And I have to ask, two books in, just what the death toll of these kids inspiring every random acquaintance to die for them is going to be by the end of the series. Of course, death is not a bad thing, in these books, but a beautiful passing. Unless it happens to Nita or Kit, of course.
Some of this is still really good - the sequence forcing Nita to confront her policy of secrecy about her own wizardry, for example, and when she appeals to a senior wizard for ethical help and is not handed the easy answers she wants. The shark character was actually quite alluring - although I kind of wish he wasn't a shark. Yeah, the whole whales and fish thing really didn't work for me.
I'm still invested enough in the series, the world-building, the arch villain, and the characters to continue reading. Overall, though, it's a very heavy-handed and didactic book which it lectures about the Evils of Pollution (pollution causes krakens!) but doesn't actually provide any practical ways for young readers to alter their own impact on the planet for the better. It's just not as good as the first one. But I have hopes that the series will improve.
After all, the next book will probably have less whales in it.
First, I hope you like whales. Not just like them and hope they aren't all killed by whalers, but that you're fascinated by every little detail about them. Because if not, boy you are going to be sick of them by the end of this book.
Secondly, the problems Duane had in the first book with writing the kids appropriately to their age are worse in this one. Sometimes she seems to remember they are tweens, and other times she starts writing them as if they were in their upper teens. Their maturity level jumps all over the place - especially in one painfully embarrassing scene in which Nita's mother tries to figure out if she is sexually active with a twelve year old.
Thirdly, the setup seems a bit cheap - the sacrifice asked of Nita is flagged really, really clearly and her obliviousness doesn't make sense, but at the same time it's blindingly obvious that she's never actually going to be asked to make it. And I have to ask, two books in, just what the death toll of these kids inspiring every random acquaintance to die for them is going to be by the end of the series. Of course, death is not a bad thing, in these books, but a beautiful passing. Unless it happens to Nita or Kit, of course.
Some of this is still really good - the sequence forcing Nita to confront her policy of secrecy about her own wizardry, for example, and when she appeals to a senior wizard for ethical help and is not handed the easy answers she wants. The shark character was actually quite alluring - although I kind of wish he wasn't a shark. Yeah, the whole whales and fish thing really didn't work for me.
I'm still invested enough in the series, the world-building, the arch villain, and the characters to continue reading. Overall, though, it's a very heavy-handed and didactic book which it lectures about the Evils of Pollution (pollution causes krakens!) but doesn't actually provide any practical ways for young readers to alter their own impact on the planet for the better. It's just not as good as the first one. But I have hopes that the series will improve.
After all, the next book will probably have less whales in it.
February 14, 2021
Edit: I do wish the app would allow me to differentiate between the original and NME versions!
Original review:
One of my favourites in the series. I feel I gained perhaps a little extra insight trying to write fanfiction about Ed (for my friends, that's my Yuletide Madness 2009/10 story "Through the Echoing Dark").
I love hearing about non-human wizards, and the Song of the Twelve is nothing short of delightful in its language, conception and execution. (I love that so much, it's the origin of one of my domain names (ed: was, as I had to close it, but joyunending.net was my writing archive for over a decade).) One of the things I enjoy most about the Young Wizards series is that the author does her best never to talk down to her readers, even though it's YA. And so it goes here.
I very much like the drawing of Nita's and Kit's families, and the teens' attempts to do wizardry in secret while still having to keep up as normal a family life as possible, so that their parents and siblings don't suspect what they're doing - whether or not they would believe it. At the same time, trying to save all their lives occasionally requires a bit of disobedience - for example, when Nita is told she can't go out and has to anyway. Her unhappiness at having to disobey her parents is clear, even while she knows their lives are all at stake.
Definitely a favourite.
Original review:
One of my favourites in the series. I feel I gained perhaps a little extra insight trying to write fanfiction about Ed (for my friends, that's my Yuletide Madness 2009/10 story "Through the Echoing Dark").
I love hearing about non-human wizards, and the Song of the Twelve is nothing short of delightful in its language, conception and execution. (I love that so much, it's the origin of one of my domain names (ed: was, as I had to close it, but joyunending.net was my writing archive for over a decade).) One of the things I enjoy most about the Young Wizards series is that the author does her best never to talk down to her readers, even though it's YA. And so it goes here.
I very much like the drawing of Nita's and Kit's families, and the teens' attempts to do wizardry in secret while still having to keep up as normal a family life as possible, so that their parents and siblings don't suspect what they're doing - whether or not they would believe it. At the same time, trying to save all their lives occasionally requires a bit of disobedience - for example, when Nita is told she can't go out and has to anyway. Her unhappiness at having to disobey her parents is clear, even while she knows their lives are all at stake.
Definitely a favourite.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
February 20, 2025
For some reason, I remember disliking this book a lot more the first time around, but... there's nothing particularly offensive here. However, nor is there anything compelling me to go back and read the first book or to continue the series.
There is a lot of expositing in the first half or so, which can get tedious. There also isn't a lot of meat to Ed and Nita's relationship. At least not enough to warrant her reaction later on, to my mind. And if you're going to imply that different types of love apply to the magic of the Song, then no one is too young to have loved (unless they are literally a baby).
I think the biggest issue is that there isn't enough closure - to Kit's darker side, to Nita's feelings about all she's been through, to the arc with the family (though it was great to see a book about magical youth take that on). Since this is a series, I can only assume there's more to all of it later on, but again, there's not enough here to keep me going.
There is a lot of expositing in the first half or so, which can get tedious. There also isn't a lot of meat to Ed and Nita's relationship. At least not enough to warrant her reaction later on, to my mind. And if you're going to imply that different types of love apply to the magic of the Song, then no one is too young to have loved (unless they are literally a baby).
I think the biggest issue is that there isn't enough closure - to Kit's darker side, to Nita's feelings about all she's been through, to the arc with the family (though it was great to see a book about magical youth take that on). Since this is a series, I can only assume there's more to all of it later on, but again, there's not enough here to keep me going.
August 15, 2020
I enjoyed the first book more but that is mostly because the concepts were so surprising and original. This also has original concepts but, as others have remarked, is a slower pace that is more in tune with the underwater setting. I liked this a lot and, as with the first book, found it didn't take off for me until about halfway through. Fair enough. I'm not a kid and it is written for kids. But when it takes off, brother it takes off and this adult was in for the ride. Themes of truth, sacrifice, what promises mean, and what one will do for the greater good are woven into a rattling good yarn.
April 5, 2018
I'm glad I didn't give up on this series after the dissapointment of the first book because this second one is really worth reading.
July 26, 2021
These are really just so macaron-sized in reading that I couldn't help but finish another one today... Deep Wizardry picks up about a few months after the events of Book #1. While there is (for me) an annoyingly large amount of exposition and "here's what you missed on book #1" at the beginning, the book soon gets into the thick of things, and with deep pleasure.
I hinted briefly at in a review of book #1 that the debut book relies on formulaic tropes. While Deep Wizardry does briefly connect on these some tropes (the biggest one being hiding wizardry from family), its execution is much defter. For one, the writing in Deep Wizardry pays much greater attention to Nita's family. More importantly, they act as smart, capable humans and aren't reduced to caricatures. Deep Wizardry pulls off complex parents very well. Nita's relationship with her parents grows strained and then complex over the course of the book, as does Nita's relationship with her younger sister, Dairine. These relationships are enjoyably distinct, particular, and real.
Particular to the New Millenium eBooks that I am reading, I also found that there were plenty of quality of life upgrades to the writing. Deep Wizardry is a book about the ocean and whale wizards, and there is a lot of attention in the editing to best evoke the strange and wonderful beauty of the depths. I found myself chewing and meditating on the passages about the sea and its inhabitants -- its sounds, its sights, its sense of touch. All of these reach out to the imagination, and there is a lovely ear and musicality to the writing.
On the topic of musicality, Deep Wizardry is a book about the Song of Twelve, a fictional epic song that recounts the Ocean's choice between good and evil. While the first book sometimes could feel a little heavy-handed in its poetry (most of it loaded towards the end), this book is sombre and joyful throughout the plot due to its source material. Diane Duane inserts just snippets of this larger tale into the writing, but in each there is music and rhyme crafted rather well. The way that the meaning of the poem's sung passages are repeated and examined throughout the book is thoughtful but not bordering on the abstract. This also recurs in the motifs given to the various whale wizards that appear in this book (and there are many!). The chitter-click of dolphins is a high fluting sound compared to the sonorous depths of a blue whale.
What I love most about this book though is just how everything comes together. There is a less jokey style to the book, as if Diane Duane has put aside her zingy action and humorous banter and is ready to tell the serious stories. This book deals with heavy themes of responsibility, honour, adolescence, and death. What does it mean to love your parents while growing up? What is the value of sacrifice? Yet there is also joy and beauty in a tale that takes a real, serious look at growing up. Yes, this is a fantasy novel for teens, but I think that Duane uses her fantasy to broaden and make that life-or-death stage of teenagerhood feel strange and relatable.
Not necessarily a comfort read, but does it need to be? There is remarkable depth to this book. 5 stars.
I hinted briefly at in a review of book #1 that the debut book relies on formulaic tropes. While Deep Wizardry does briefly connect on these some tropes (the biggest one being hiding wizardry from family), its execution is much defter. For one, the writing in Deep Wizardry pays much greater attention to Nita's family. More importantly, they act as smart, capable humans and aren't reduced to caricatures. Deep Wizardry pulls off complex parents very well. Nita's relationship with her parents grows strained and then complex over the course of the book, as does Nita's relationship with her younger sister, Dairine. These relationships are enjoyably distinct, particular, and real.
Particular to the New Millenium eBooks that I am reading, I also found that there were plenty of quality of life upgrades to the writing. Deep Wizardry is a book about the ocean and whale wizards, and there is a lot of attention in the editing to best evoke the strange and wonderful beauty of the depths. I found myself chewing and meditating on the passages about the sea and its inhabitants -- its sounds, its sights, its sense of touch. All of these reach out to the imagination, and there is a lovely ear and musicality to the writing.
On the topic of musicality, Deep Wizardry is a book about the Song of Twelve, a fictional epic song that recounts the Ocean's choice between good and evil. While the first book sometimes could feel a little heavy-handed in its poetry (most of it loaded towards the end), this book is sombre and joyful throughout the plot due to its source material. Diane Duane inserts just snippets of this larger tale into the writing, but in each there is music and rhyme crafted rather well. The way that the meaning of the poem's sung passages are repeated and examined throughout the book is thoughtful but not bordering on the abstract. This also recurs in the motifs given to the various whale wizards that appear in this book (and there are many!). The chitter-click of dolphins is a high fluting sound compared to the sonorous depths of a blue whale.
What I love most about this book though is just how everything comes together. There is a less jokey style to the book, as if Diane Duane has put aside her zingy action and humorous banter and is ready to tell the serious stories. This book deals with heavy themes of responsibility, honour, adolescence, and death. What does it mean to love your parents while growing up? What is the value of sacrifice? Yet there is also joy and beauty in a tale that takes a real, serious look at growing up. Yes, this is a fantasy novel for teens, but I think that Duane uses her fantasy to broaden and make that life-or-death stage of teenagerhood feel strange and relatable.
Not necessarily a comfort read, but does it need to be? There is remarkable depth to this book. 5 stars.
April 6, 2024
I think DEEP WIZARDRY was better than the first book. While it still had some of the confusing magical math that the first book had, it wasn't as dense. We still got to see a lot of the magic at play, especially when the kids find themselves in a dangerous ocean.
This book also gave me heavy A WRINKLE IN TIME vibes. I think if this book was on today's book cases, it would be a pretty strong seller. It has the friendship goals of two young magicians, skeptical parents, and the wild adventures that kids are somehow surviving when we know in real life, adults wouldn't survive.
This also did have some creepy moments, especially when we meet some of the characters.
Okay, will be attacking book three soon!
Happy reading!
This book also gave me heavy A WRINKLE IN TIME vibes. I think if this book was on today's book cases, it would be a pretty strong seller. It has the friendship goals of two young magicians, skeptical parents, and the wild adventures that kids are somehow surviving when we know in real life, adults wouldn't survive.
This also did have some creepy moments, especially when we meet some of the characters.
Okay, will be attacking book three soon!
Happy reading!
December 15, 2012
This is my favourite book out of the whole "Young Wizards" series. I think it gets to the core of what the series is all about, i.e. the Wizard's Choice and the consequences of that choice, particularly in terms of self-sacrifice. I also like the idea of exploring a new world beneath the waves.
I didn't notice any major differences in this new edition compared to the original; they mention mobile phones a few times, but mainly just to say that there's no coverage where they're staying. I think the most important update is that there's a new date at the start of the book, to fit the revised timeline: this one now took place in July 2008 (2 months after So You Want to Be a Wizard).
There are a few minor typos, e.g. "I'm lot sure" (rather than "I'm not sure") but I can live with them.
My only real complaint about this book is that there's a plothole regarding Kit's "warning sign"; it's a pity that this wasn't corrected in the new edition.
I didn't notice any major differences in this new edition compared to the original; they mention mobile phones a few times, but mainly just to say that there's no coverage where they're staying. I think the most important update is that there's a new date at the start of the book, to fit the revised timeline: this one now took place in July 2008 (2 months after So You Want to Be a Wizard).
There are a few minor typos, e.g. "I'm lot sure" (rather than "I'm not sure") but I can live with them.
My only real complaint about this book is that there's a plothole regarding Kit's "warning sign"; it's a pity that this wasn't corrected in the new edition.
September 9, 2019
As it was a long time since last I read So You Want To Be A Wizard, it's been an equally long time since I last read Deep Wizardry, and I'd actually forgotten quite a bit about what happens in this book. Revisiting it as an adult was a rather different experience, I'll say, because the themes, the questions raised (and answers those questions are given,) and the arguably-heavy-handed environmental awareness message are all things that have a greater impact and that I have a greater understanding of at this point in my life.
That being said, I absolutely loved the sheer imagination and research that went into this book for the time it was written, and I think Duane crafted a very real and incredible take on an underwater world and the people and wizards who live there. Seeing Nita and Kit's interactions with the other wizards and the Master Shark were unique when I was younger and still ring unique now, and the story alternates between philosophical heavy tones and lighthearted moments to make sure it isn't all somber.
Additionally, this is the book in which
Once again, I'm so glad to be returning to these books. They were a good read as a child, but I still think I am getting things from them now that I couldn't have back then.
That being said, I absolutely loved the sheer imagination and research that went into this book for the time it was written, and I think Duane crafted a very real and incredible take on an underwater world and the people and wizards who live there. Seeing Nita and Kit's interactions with the other wizards and the Master Shark were unique when I was younger and still ring unique now, and the story alternates between philosophical heavy tones and lighthearted moments to make sure it isn't all somber.
Additionally, this is the book in which
Once again, I'm so glad to be returning to these books. They were a good read as a child, but I still think I am getting things from them now that I couldn't have back then.
July 22, 2023
I love this series. That being said, of all the books in the series, this one leaves me with the most mixed feelings. The author weaves a haunting and beautiful story, most believably, of a wizardry of the whales and the sea that must occur at the deepest part of the sea floor to contain the oldest and darkest Lone Power. The Twelve Song involves real sacrifice, "real" in the darkest and most complete sense, for in no other way can the Lone Power be conquered. Every race, country, culture and story has this old and vibrant echo behind it, and it comes from the deepest eternal truth. Listening to the book as I walked my little dog, I found embarrassing tears running down my face. Although this series is marketed to teens, it might leave children confused and a little shaken with the philosophy and violent realities of sacrifice. Thus, my mixed feelings -- a little too much philosophy and description, the author's beautiful words carrying the feeling that she loves them for their own sake, and this is a little (very little) distracting. And it's a little difficult to know whether my grandchildren are ready for such a powerful story -- at what age can you be told the hardest truths?
Be sure to read "So You Want to Be a Wizard" first. This series is best read in order.
Be sure to read "So You Want to Be a Wizard" first. This series is best read in order.
February 9, 2015
A masterful sequel to the first book in the series. Got me all sentimental over a shark, too. What kept this from being a five star book was the whining of the heroine. Yes, it's definitely fair to whine over discovering that you talked yourself into a situation where you have to commit suicide, but she just does so *much* of it. And her parents. So much sneaking around, so much disbelief. I'm glad that's over with so we won't have to deal with it later in the series, but still, it was a little over the top.
This book is about the protagonists taking a vacation at the beach and discovering that the sea has major problems that require the whales to perform an ancient ritual. And that they get to be a part of it.
My favorite character in this book? Ed, the shark.
This book is about the protagonists taking a vacation at the beach and discovering that the sea has major problems that require the whales to perform an ancient ritual. And that they get to be a part of it.
My favorite character in this book? Ed, the shark.
July 7, 2017
This was my favorite book when I was 14. I read it so many times that I memorized large chunks of it. I wanted to live in it. And I haven't read it since then, because I didn't want to taint the memory - so many of our childhood favorites fail to stand the test of time.
But I've been craving literary comfort food, and I found this at the library again, and it seemed like time to reread it. And it's every single word as good as I remembered. It still made me cry, and dream, and ache inside in the best possible way.
I don't know if I'll go back and reread the rest of the series - but it feels amazing to find this piece of my heart again.
But I've been craving literary comfort food, and I found this at the library again, and it seemed like time to reread it. And it's every single word as good as I remembered. It still made me cry, and dream, and ache inside in the best possible way.
I don't know if I'll go back and reread the rest of the series - but it feels amazing to find this piece of my heart again.
July 20, 2013
Another good book. Got books 3 and 4. Read this one in one night.
April 14, 2025
I enjoyed this much more than the first one. I feel like Diane Duane really got into her writing groove here, especially in the second half, which I found very moving. The death of a companion felt like it had a lot more weight in this one than the first.
I gained a lot of respect for Nita and really appreciated getting to know her better. Kit was a little harder to read in this one, partly because he was not himself due to the whale sark, but I still enjoyed his presence. I really liked Nita's little sister and I hope she shows up more in future books.
I wasn't sure about this series after the first book, but now I'm ready to dive in and read more of Nita and Kit's adventures. And I'm really glad that Diane Duane hasn't shoved Nita and Kit together. I like them much better as friends.
I gained a lot of respect for Nita and really appreciated getting to know her better. Kit was a little harder to read in this one, partly because he was not himself due to the whale sark, but I still enjoyed his presence. I really liked Nita's little sister and I hope she shows up more in future books.
I wasn't sure about this series after the first book, but now I'm ready to dive in and read more of Nita and Kit's adventures. And I'm really glad that Diane Duane hasn't shoved Nita and Kit together. I like them much better as friends.
July 13, 2023
Fun, but dramatic, serious, and moving when it needed to be. Diane Duane isn't quite as delightful as some of my other favourite authors (such as Derek Landy), but her books are very enjoyable all the same.
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