It's Okay
I give credit that it is not easy to create a finished product. However, I do not see myself reading this again, nor will I continuethe series.
Firstly, I must state it is clean as far as sexual scenes go. Any sexual scene is skipped over and has zero context, but it is gruesome and infers rape.
She doesn't shift at all after the first time in the beginning. I feel like some situations are over exaggerated in importance, and I don't get enough plot. Everything revolves around what happens right then.
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I hate Keyne's death and his coming back. Choose whether or not a character dies, and leave it at that. You cheapen the scene by bringing him back.
Honestly, I can't give more than 2.5 stars.