The Dark March

Deathcreator #2

by John Domus Cruo

This is the Explicit version of Deathcreator Book Two. It is intended only for mature audiences and has graphic, descriptive sexual content. If you prefer the shorter hinted at style, then check out the normal edition. John awakens to a severed head and learns the brutal secret of the human town. He forms a motley goblin army and sets off to show the humans his version of right and wrong. But this world isn't so forgiving as to allow him to have his way so easily.

Genres: Harem, Fantasy, Magic

323 pages, Kindle Edition

Published April 9, 2018

Reviews

[Bolajide Adeyoye · Rating 5 out of 5]

It's alright

Honestly, if it weren't for how enamored I was with the world, the characters and basically everything else in this story besides the execution, I would have given this story a three. Having six different 1st person perspectives is confusing to the point of nearly being unreadable. Add to this the fact that plot wise there's been so much build up with not enough pay-off that someone who didn't enjoy the dressings and nuance of this story could call it mostly filler. All in all this novel had its downsides and wasn't quite the dark but fun gem that the first book was but the parts of the story that sparkled still sparkled so much I'm still eagerly awaiting the signal. In summary I was expecting a ten out five like last time but there was negative five points in confusing point of view transitions so we're down to a five out of five. This was a fun, entertaining story but a bit hard to read at times.

[Ryan · Rating 3 out of 5]

Chapter 19 I think could be done better you just have them ambushed by the duke's men but the duke's men should be either at or headed to the bandit camp either way they wouldn't really be setup for an ambush because john wasn't there yet. it would have required them to either scout or form up into their groups after spotting them or detecting them.

[Marc DeFranco · Rating 3 out of 5]

Good but to much perspective change.

I enjoyed the first book and liked how the author tried to add more depth and details to the other characters but was left bored without more from the main characters development. It was a fun read but I would rather have followed the main characters viewpoint more and have little switches to the harem members after.

[Karl Ben-Shachar · Rating 5 out of 5]

Oh yeah!

I good continuation of a crazy series. It had lost me a bit with the constant switching of character perspectives and the random ramblings. But It soon picked up its stride. Book 3, here I come.

[That Guy · Rating 2 out of 5]

Well that fell apart

Basically all the things that were wrong with the first book, only compounded and amplified. The smut is meh, fights are bleh, and the writing is worse. I won't be bothering with the next book.

[Donny · Rating 2 out of 5]

I do not think this is a series I will continue in. Too much stuff thrown at the wall. Too many POV shifts.

[Avery Ellison · Rating 1 out of 5]

Uninteresting at best

Poorly written, tries to hard to be shocking and hardcore so it winds up juvenile and dull. Waste of time, not even worth the time to download

[Chandra Romano · Rating 4 out of 5]

Dark Places

This second book went to some really dark places if it didn't have some funny moments I would not be waiting for volume 3. Bob best creep ever!

[Hedgeknight · Rating 2 out of 5]

Do not recommend

This felt like a stream of consciousness narrative where the writer brainstormed the book and published with no plan or thought.

[Fred Mallory · Rating 5 out of 5]

Fantastic series

This series is well written and freaky good. Can't wait to read the next book. I highly recommend this series.

[Andrew J. · Rating 5 out of 5]

Dark but good

This is a rather dark series but the MC is surprising relatable in a demented kind of way. It is an enjoyable read regardless.