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God I wanted to love this one but I just can’t. I read it all the way through just to make sure that I wasn’t missing something, but nope. I was planning to check out some more of her books, But honestly I need to to go read something with an a$$hole lead. I’d prefer an in your face guy who is honest about who he is over one that is basically skeezy and shady like the the author turned the hero in this book into. Here is my basic problem with this book. The hero met the heroine when she was around 14 and he was 20. Nothing crazy or creepy happened. When she was 16, he started to feel something for her. He kissed her and specifically asked asked her to wait for him because she was underage. He takes another assignment to avoid the temptation and she doesn’t see him for 2.5 years. During this time she doesn’t so much as kiss another guy. It’s revealed to though out the book that he wouldn’t allow that to happen. He stayed in touch with her body guards, threatened guys interested in her etc. When she asks him what would have happens if someone else had made a move on her he says that he would have broken the it hands. I could have found that to be alpha/romantic if he were showing her the same courtesy. But he obviously didn’t. It’s like tha author was just afraid to pick a side and go with it. Because every single tome he had a chance to say that he was celibate while he waited for her, he didn’t. Not one tome. Not even to show the girl
That he “loved” how committed he had been to her. And trust me there were some times she could have used that reassured. It made 0 sense! Like a guy who is in love with someone couldn’t go 2.5 years without sex. Good lord that kind of thinking is in like with the “boys will be boys” thinking that excuses rape. “Those boys are just slaves to their desires, it’s not their fault right”? . The worst part of the entire book is that she makes the illogical decisions with the entire storyline. Talking about the heroines virginity was never off the table, he even asked her several different times about if she had kissed someone touched them etc. but the heroine never once asks him when the last tome he slept with someone was.... because we all know women don’t like to ask questions and have information right? When they first go to have sex, he asks to do it without a condom. She asks if there is a reason to not to and he replies that he has had testing with the agency but hasn’t been with anyone since then. This is a high dollar security agency, they are going to text their employees at minimum probably every 6 or 12 months. Their insurance would require it. So this tells us nothing. Again, the girl doesn’t show any jealousy or ask WHEN he was with someone last (as in during the 2.5 years he made sure that he made her wait for him) it was really pathetic. Who wouldn’t ask that? When they do have sex he doesn’t even have any internal monologue saying how long it had been, or it was worth waiting for him, or anything. Then later in the book the laugh out loud ludicrous moment comes when she is threatened. The heroine is pregnant and someone left a note saying the baby should have been theirs. They are all over this one guy that she talked to (she actually thought he was gay, it was just friendship for her) but not one person (including the heroines father or all of the guys that work their and claim to love her like a niece sister etc) of this world famous security bodyguard company asks about the women he’s been with or just when the last time he was with someone else??!? Hello, they said the baby should have been theirs!! For a minute I thought that’s where they were going with it and that’s why all the hush hush. But nope. This author is just that concerned with making sure her “hero” doesn’t actually act like a guy in love, that she ruins her own book rather than address it. She didn’t have a problem beating us over the head with the heroines purity though. She’s the worst kind of female author, men can do what they want, but women have to be perfect and pure waiting on them. As soon as I finished I honestly just thought “screw this crap” I’ll go re read A BB Reid or LJ Shen book, at least they admit it when their characters are asses. They write their hero’s as who they are and don’t destroy their entire plot to avoid showing too much about them. Too bad. She lost my respect (and probably a lot of other readers) along with a good review and future sales. Returning this one and moving on.the best piece dog advice that I can give this author is to get some beta readers. If she has some, she should fire them. Someone should have prevented this cluster@$&@ unless they are more worried about kissing her butt. If that’s the case, what’s the point?