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Sunset in the Mists - The Dark Draws the Curtain
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Evynsford was a nearly forgotten hamlet on the coast of the Irish Sea when the troubles began. First the dead ship rolled into the dock, then fog swallowed the community and then the disappearances occurred. One child vanished from her bed before sunrise. Then twin brothers did not return from their chores. As the cries for the local watchmen to do something – anything – grew, so did the number of abducted children. By the time the local watchmen called to Preston for professional constables, there were more children missing than accounted for in the panicked township.
When Inspector Arthur Eldermann arrives in the mist-choked community, not a single child under the age of thirteen but older than three remains, and there are no witnesses, no bodies and no clues as to why. The Inspector, a lapsed clergyman of cold demeanor and sneering wit, has his work cut out for him among the surly and insular townsfolk. His one ray of hope lies in Miss Regina Hollferd, governess of the rural schoolhouse, whose dedication and knowledge may hold the key to the disappearance of so many of her students. Her zeal and diligence begin to touch something in Inspector Eldermann long left to the dark, and he finds himself enthralled and repelled in equal measure by the soft-spoken yet potent woman.
He will need all the help he can get, as things are moving in the mists around Evynsford, and the great wheels of a dark, terrible engine have already been set in motion. Can daring, wit and rekindled faith find the stolen children and perhaps even forestall the shadow looming ever closer?
- GenresMysteryMystery Thriller
86 pages, Kindle Edition
Published April 6, 2018
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Displaying 1 - 14 of 14 reviews
February 13, 2025
This book was well written and has an intriguing plot. However, I was sorely disappointed that nothing got resolved. Everything was left hanging. Who put out the eyes of the ship’s captain? He alluded to a collar and chains, but surely it wasn’t one of the children. Who were the kidnappers working for or with, and what had they planned to do with the children? Arthur kisses Regina, then tells her he’ll return for her, but the next book is apparently set one year later. That seems absurd. I fully understand that reading a series gives the reader the full picture of the overall story, but I don’t think one should have to read every book to piece it together. Each book should stand on its own, with questions answered and issues resolved.
March 23, 2020
This was a spur of the moment download for me, and I'm so glad I came across it! The story was so intriguing and captivating...and I don't think we're done with it yet... Being a short story, the pace was quick and might leave readers feeling like we skipped some things, but that is the nature of a short story so it didn't bother me. There were a few small errors here and there, but I was too wrapped up in the story to do more than notice on my way by. My rating did lose a star due to language (one word used twice), but I still look forward to reading more of the series.
April 19, 2021
This was a depressing book as the story was set in a dull unforeboding place, with characters of little empathy or interest. The shipwreck which I thought had some baring on the story seemed to not feature in the story. Then a small dip into the occult which came to naught, The rescue of the children came so suddenly like the story out of the Mists, and then the end, there will surely be a follow up, but I will not be a reader.
August 24, 2018
A mystery as deep as your soul
As light as an angel's wings, dark as the waters of the moor, cold as the night warm as a well built peat fire. A village faces the fears any parent fears most, left reeling with no answers. The one who gives them their lives back had no answers to give.
As light as an angel's wings, dark as the waters of the moor, cold as the night warm as a well built peat fire. A village faces the fears any parent fears most, left reeling with no answers. The one who gives them their lives back had no answers to give.
April 30, 2018
Well written, almost poetic in its utterances!
What a marvelous fresh approach to fictional writing! This author is reminiscent of Canterbury Tales or some such archaic literature but with a twist to relevant issues of even today!
What a marvelous fresh approach to fictional writing! This author is reminiscent of Canterbury Tales or some such archaic literature but with a twist to relevant issues of even today!
March 7, 2019
I felt that the story was lacking something.
I do not know exactly why, but when I finished the book I felt like I have missed huge chunks of the story somewhere along the way. It left me totally unsatisfied.
I do not know exactly why, but when I finished the book I felt like I have missed huge chunks of the story somewhere along the way. It left me totally unsatisfied.
May 8, 2018
Interrsting
I was unable to interpret the meaning of some of the words in the story which made it difficult to follow.
I was unable to interpret the meaning of some of the words in the story which made it difficult to follow.
August 26, 2019
Good read
I love characters that metaphors into someone much better after going thru a horrific time in their life. It’s worth the time.
I love characters that metaphors into someone much better after going thru a horrific time in their life. It’s worth the time.
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March 23, 2020Sunset In The Mist
I want to read more. It was a great read, I teally enjoyed the book. It was very well writen.
I want to read more. It was a great read, I teally enjoyed the book. It was very well writen.
October 28, 2020
Sunset in the mists
I thought the book was pretty good but I think it could be better. I'm not a novella writer but that is just my opinion. Kathleen Ryan
I thought the book was pretty good but I think it could be better. I'm not a novella writer but that is just my opinion. Kathleen Ryan
April 29, 2022
A very interesting novella.
Covered alot of ground in a short time.
Loved the connection between the two primaries
Covered alot of ground in a short time.
Loved the connection between the two primaries
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July 1, 2023Sunset in the Mist
Not bad. A few errors, but not excessive. I enjoyed this book & will probably read the next one in the series.
Not bad. A few errors, but not excessive. I enjoyed this book & will probably read the next one in the series.
February 15, 2024
I found it really hard to get into the story. Even though there was a lot of descriptions to make you feel where you're at it did not think it accurately set in my mind.
September 27, 2024
Ominous and Puzzling
Good story but I wish the characters had revealed more details in what the symbols meant and the end left the reader hanging. Good mystery non the less.
Good story but I wish the characters had revealed more details in what the symbols meant and the end left the reader hanging. Good mystery non the less.
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